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128 pages, Paperback
First published October 1, 2012
The stars are not wanted now; put out every one,Considering the concluding line of the poem, the narrators frustration is a clear warning for impending disaster but since we are so swept up in the flow of their mind that we are either willingly believing the narrator’s intentions or simply too caught up to fear what is coming.
Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun,
Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood;
For nothing now can ever come to any good.
That is all [war] is: a mass of people walking like sheep towards their own death. The whole world, I thought, full of decrepit corpses. Because war is everywhere, I thought. The war in our brains, and actual wars: over land, and by sea, and even through the air above land, I thought, because one way of killing isn’t enough, one gets bored of it…The narrator despises war and, likely, his own participation in it as well as our sick fascination as a species with violence. In a way, Oloomi is teasing the reader for their own fascination with madness and violence and how the two are staples for literature and marketing a book. This becomes another method of building empathy for the character and asking us to reflect on that to gloss over that he committed actual war crimes.
There is only the moving forward of events and the moving backwards of one’s understand over those events. To say there is a present, I thought, is to say there is a platform where events accumulate and then stop happening so one can evaluate their effect. It is what people do, I thought, feed themselves lies. Everything is a lie in the first instance. Then the lie is purified, smoothed out, turned into a truth, because the present is always cycling into the past, or transforming into a future moment…The fractured narrative becomes, in effect, an example of the narrators considerations of time and the reader must question if events are flowing correctly. Occasionally events recur or become meshed into a ball such as when the narrator is looping through a succession of phone calls interrupting each other only to break the phone which, later, has yet to have been broken. The repeated ‘I thought’ that punctuates the sentences is our constant reminder that it is a story being told in the past although the narrator seems to be reacting with befuddlement to the events in real-time.
“So what a lie it is, the present, because it doesn’t even exist. There is only the moving forward of events and the moving backward of one’s understanding over those events."
Thinking is pure misery, a job assigned to the miserable and the wretched, to think each thought to its horrible and suffocating end.
