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Big Girls Don't Cry
Every woman deserves to be loved, and for over-weight, insecure, 24 yr old virgin, Gretchen Lane, it's going to come Hot & Heavy, and in the form of the ruggedly handsome, Billy Mack- her new personal trainer...
At 5'8" and 248 pounds, life is anything but easy for young, insecure, Gretchen Lane. Finding herself once again the victim of a cruel joke involving her weight- Gretchen decides to join a local gym, where she has a chance encounter with personal trainer, Billy Mack.
Billy, living in a world of hard bodies and big egos, finds himself strangely attracted to the young woman, and a relationship quickly develops pairing the most unlikely of couples.
Excerpts from book:
The crowd erupted into laughter when the first fat joke was yelled from the passing car. They fell silent when the 32 oz. soft drink hit my face with a loud smack, before splashing to the ground. I stood soaking wet, stunned, and humiliated. My embarrassment quickly turned to pain, and I wept openly. Not one person asked me if I was okay. I ran home to my apartment, where in a moment of frustration and hurt I actually contemplated suicide. And, then I felt stupid, like I always do. I mean, I guess I should be used to it by now. It's been happening since I was in the third grade. That's when I got my nickname, 'The Pillsbury dough girl.'
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"Oh, Billy," I moan, closing my eyes and entering into a state of extreme bliss. This has got to be a dream, and I know any minute I'm going to wake up.
With soft tugs, he pulls the swollen nubs, and my pussy quivers, sending me into an instant orgasm. Responding to my pleasure, Billy's hard dick presses against the middle of my back.
"Your breasts are beautiful," he exclaims, squeezing and kneading the large orbs.
"Thank you," I coo, watching his hands exploring my chest. I felt like the fourteen year old girl being felt up by the older neighbor boys, while my body shuddered through its first orgasm.
Without thinking, I pull away and turn around facing Billy, who sits with his towel opened. His enormous cock stands throbbing in front of my face, and I watch in amazement at the thick veins surrounding the long shaft. They throb and pulsate, sitting wrapped around the thumping phallus like the creeping roots of a wicked tree...and, I only want one thing.
"Can I suck on it?" I ask in a catching breath, the sheer size and girth having my heart beating uncontrollably. I feel my own wetness running from my soaked crotch as I reach out slowly with trembling hands.
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A powerfully erotic romance featuring the metamorphosis of a shy, wounded girl, into a gorgeous woman- Made possible through the love and belief of one man.
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13,223 word count
This story contains sexually explicit material meant for a mature audience only. 18
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bbw / vibrator masturbation / virgin sex / anal fingering / anal sex / oral sex / first time sex / light domination / mommy porn
At 5'8" and 248 pounds, life is anything but easy for young, insecure, Gretchen Lane. Finding herself once again the victim of a cruel joke involving her weight- Gretchen decides to join a local gym, where she has a chance encounter with personal trainer, Billy Mack.
Billy, living in a world of hard bodies and big egos, finds himself strangely attracted to the young woman, and a relationship quickly develops pairing the most unlikely of couples.
Excerpts from book:
The crowd erupted into laughter when the first fat joke was yelled from the passing car. They fell silent when the 32 oz. soft drink hit my face with a loud smack, before splashing to the ground. I stood soaking wet, stunned, and humiliated. My embarrassment quickly turned to pain, and I wept openly. Not one person asked me if I was okay. I ran home to my apartment, where in a moment of frustration and hurt I actually contemplated suicide. And, then I felt stupid, like I always do. I mean, I guess I should be used to it by now. It's been happening since I was in the third grade. That's when I got my nickname, 'The Pillsbury dough girl.'
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"Oh, Billy," I moan, closing my eyes and entering into a state of extreme bliss. This has got to be a dream, and I know any minute I'm going to wake up.
With soft tugs, he pulls the swollen nubs, and my pussy quivers, sending me into an instant orgasm. Responding to my pleasure, Billy's hard dick presses against the middle of my back.
"Your breasts are beautiful," he exclaims, squeezing and kneading the large orbs.
"Thank you," I coo, watching his hands exploring my chest. I felt like the fourteen year old girl being felt up by the older neighbor boys, while my body shuddered through its first orgasm.
Without thinking, I pull away and turn around facing Billy, who sits with his towel opened. His enormous cock stands throbbing in front of my face, and I watch in amazement at the thick veins surrounding the long shaft. They throb and pulsate, sitting wrapped around the thumping phallus like the creeping roots of a wicked tree...and, I only want one thing.
"Can I suck on it?" I ask in a catching breath, the sheer size and girth having my heart beating uncontrollably. I feel my own wetness running from my soaked crotch as I reach out slowly with trembling hands.
.
.
A powerfully erotic romance featuring the metamorphosis of a shy, wounded girl, into a gorgeous woman- Made possible through the love and belief of one man.
.
.
13,223 word count
This story contains sexually explicit material meant for a mature audience only. 18
.
bbw / vibrator masturbation / virgin sex / anal fingering / anal sex / oral sex / first time sex / light domination / mommy porn
54 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 7, 2012
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About the author
Gretchen Lane
9 books22 followersSeeing a need for more stories about natural looking women, Gretchen picked up her laptop and set about giving the world more DivaLicious Erotica.
Stories for men and women featuring big body women like herself.
"Everyone deserves to be loved" ~ Gretchen Lane
VISIT www.divaliciouserotica.com to subscribe to Gretchen's Newsletter, to be notified when new releases are available
Gretchen Lane is a pseudonym for the author : )
Stories for men and women featuring big body women like herself.
"Everyone deserves to be loved" ~ Gretchen Lane
VISIT www.divaliciouserotica.com to subscribe to Gretchen's Newsletter, to be notified when new releases are available
Gretchen Lane is a pseudonym for the author : )
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November 12, 2019
Its nice to have some representation in erotica. Most eroticas are filled with impossible super models
September 9, 2013
The only thing I don't like about this story is that it reads like a installment series and I'm not a big fan of them.. This story was only 57 pages but I can't say anything since I got it FREE but the next part of the story is also only 57 pages and the cost is $2.99 so I don't see me reading it anytime soon. I just can't see paying $2.99 for only 57 pages... Which is very sad since the first installment was so good! Oh Well, maybe I will be able to get the next story for free or they will have a sell, say at .99 cents maybe!!?? Or maybe they will have a bundle sell with all the installments together?? hint, hint...
December 25, 2013
I was a little put off by the prologue in this story but I wanted to try it out. Gretchen is very whiny and I can understand why she felt outraged by what happened to her, but if this was the worse thing that's ever happened to her, then she had a lot of growing up to do. The writing seemed elementary and the dialogue stunted and other than the sex scenes, it was a really bad story. I would not recommend this to anyone and I have no desire to read the second book.
November 10, 2013
I've read this book a couple of times before and I think I forgot to rated it. One of my favorite BBW story, mostly because the way its author described the heroine's insecurities are very close to my own.
I'm a big girl myself and I really appreciate the author that captured my thoughts. This one is. Thank you so much, I enjoyed it well. :)))
Anyway, this book is a freebie on Kobo.
I'm a big girl myself and I really appreciate the author that captured my thoughts. This one is. Thank you so much, I enjoyed it well. :)))
Anyway, this book is a freebie on Kobo.
January 5, 2013
This is one of those 'piecemeal' stories. It was all right but, of course, you're left hanging in the end with basically a 'to be continued'.
Definitely some editing issues. And so short, you really don't connect with the characters.
Definitely some editing issues. And so short, you really don't connect with the characters.
May 14, 2013
It was OK...
A bit too short - definitely a quick read.
It's part of a series and although, I was disappointed that there wasn't more to the book, it has a pretty dramatic end that leaves wanting to continue the story with book 2.
A bit too short - definitely a quick read.
It's part of a series and although, I was disappointed that there wasn't more to the book, it has a pretty dramatic end that leaves wanting to continue the story with book 2.
August 3, 2016
I love Gretchen and Billy's story. It resonates with true to life situations and, like in real life, there are people out there who love people for themselves, not their body image. This is a must read for anyone who ever has low self-esteem for any reason.
January 6, 2013
Despite quite a few editing errors (tense change mid paragraph, etc.) it was an enjoyable short read.
April 4, 2013
This was a quick read. Story about a big girl who falls for this hot guy. Turns out he actually ends up liking her...The end leaves you waiting for another book:(
October 24, 2013
This was um - it could have been so much more!
This was a very very short read but it had the potential to be a great story.
This was a very very short read but it had the potential to be a great story.
July 29, 2013
i jus
idk sumthin was off
idk sumthin was off
August 16, 2013
This was really but way too short
September 5, 2013
Very short! I felt kind of rushed through the book. I'm sure that wasn't on purpose by the author, but it is how I felt.
I won't be getting part 2.
I won't be getting part 2.
September 14, 2013
I really just didn't like this one. A lot of things just really didn't add up. And I really hated the ending, like really really really hated it. Not going to be reading part two.
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November 18, 2013
Really terrible.
November 23, 2013
a little short book but i enjoyed it!!This was my first Gretchen Lane Book.. I will be looking for others by her as well..
January 4, 2014
I am mixed. It is a good read but... I don't know.
September 1, 2015
Um anyone else get the she is being used vibe?
January 17, 2013
Wasn't horrible but wasn't the greatest.
October 1, 2013
Enjoyed story wish it didn't end on that note.
December 9, 2013
short, dumb, and no romance. just an explicate sex scene.
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