Team Yaoi!

by Yamila Abraham

Explicit Adult Content! Enjoy a supremely smutty broadcast of the Tri-University Sex Wars. Senior Red will never forgive his exboyfriend Tai for transferring over to the school of their greatest rivals. Unfortunately for Red the two now have to compete against each other in the most intimate event of the meet! Meanwhile, one college fights a curse that’s plagued them all they always get too many DQs to compete in the final event! This is particularly tragic for Duke, who’s been saving his first time for the field. Will his school finally make it to the Beds event? Or has another teammate been conspiring to keep him a virgin forever? Three colleges strive for victory through some creative and diabolical events. Team Yaoi is a sexy/funny adventure sure to please!

Genres: Yaoi, Manga

39 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 3, 2011

About the author

Yamila Abraham founded the publishing company Yaoi Press in 2004 and published over 50 graphic novels, many she wrote herself.

Abraham is a prolific writer of male/male romance, yaoi, yaoi graphic novels, science fiction romance, and erotica. She's known for explicitly detailed love scenes and dynamic premises. She wrote two of Yaoi Press' best selling series: Winter Demon and Dark Prince. Her best known ebooks include Maelstrom, UnPrison, Alien's Bride, and the Vanquished series.

Abraham has been a speaker or guest of honor at 150 anime fan conventions.

Reviews

[Myka · Rating 3 out of 5]

Really 2.5, but conceded the extra half point because I could not stop reading this train wreck until it was over. This is the definition of PWP with WTF and it would have been a great great smutty manga, but as prose it leans more towards ridiculous with random moments of 'that actually made me laugh'.

[Adara · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was really short and not all that satisfying, so I'm giving it 2.5 stars. It actually would have been better as a yaoi (art and all) than as a written story, in my opinion. It's not that I didn't like it for what it was, it just wasn't all that substantive. The characters had no depth because there wasn't enough time to give them such. The whole of the story is two young women color commentating on a Sexual Tetrathalon (one event for each year of university) between 3 schools, with the slightest of backstory for a few of the competitors, and a completely useless 'intro' with one of the female commentators on the phone with her grandmother just before heading to the games.

There were a couple of good points. The names of the universities were fun. (For example, I know the intent was to read "Henty University" as "hentai" and not "hen-tee".) The images of some of the competitors were nice, and it was a fun read for what it was. It just wasn't anything deeper than surface level, and not even titillating as a read.

The last 25% of the mobi file was a preview for a different story, too. That was ridiculous. Not many typos, but for a story that short, there shouldn't have been any.

[Elaine White · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a great little read. No non-con despite the tendency for Yaoi to head that way (there is one instance where it's implied, but actually turns out not to be)

Team Yaoi is an original, clever concept, told well. While it might have been great as a comic, there were just way too many characters, intricacies and scenes that I think it might have felt messy as a graphic novel. Instead, this is a great story, told like a sports commentary, through the POV of two "official commentators" who are girls. They kind of represent the huge female readership of Yaoi, IMO. Cheering on their favourite ships and ogling the men. ;)

The story itself was both clever, sexy and intriguing. There was A LOT of team drama, which was fun and gave a lot of character development, despite only seeing them through the eyes of the two girls. It's a solid 5* for me, for being able to deliver an entertaining read, a great new sport, and an original plot, while still giving each player a personality, despite the challenging POV. I would definitely read another Sex War story with the same or new players.

[J Alm · Rating 5 out of 5]

Tri university sex games


Unusual concept but is creatively done in this yaoi male and male love but this book has mainly several.

The story is too good to give away too much. 3 colleges take part in current round of events.

Love has no place in the sex wars, but several dramas and hot sex scenes make it a fun read.

[Josh Randell · Rating 3 out of 5]

Like others have said: no time in the short read to give depth to any characters, but for a sexual marathon it did what it was supposed to.

[Rhemjahn Miranda]

Ok

[Shiane · Rating 5 out of 5]

wow

[Roxy K · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.8* Stars

[PaintingFiction · Rating 5 out of 5]

This short erotica comes across as a crack fic. It is a futuristic espn style brodcast of a college level sex olympics... it's honestly a great laugh.

[Jeanne 'Divinae' · Rating 1 out of 5]

Read, as in I didn't finish it. It was a the Olympic sex version. The premise was a world where all the guys from different schools participated in these smutty sex driven competitions. I just couldn't finish it. It was just an excuse to write about sex. And it wasn't even that interesting on top of that. Plus, it involved some non-con. Total. Waste. of. Money. I don't see myself going back and finishing this.

[Sandra · Rating 4 out of 5]

I like my yaoi smutty, and this is just as smutty as I expected, yet it does have a good storyline behind all of the sport, sex and kink that's thrown into it. What can I say, I'm a sucker for most of what Yamila Abraham writes, and think there's still a whole bunch of stuff of hers I want to catch up with.

[charlotte rose · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ok

Team Yaoi! Short but good Yamila Abraham you are the best in the world at what you do five stars

[yaoi hunter]

its cool