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358 pages, Paperback
First published June 21, 2023
I was really looking forward to this book, and so I cannot overstate how disappointed I was to discover how much I didn't like it. Personal opinions aside, this is just objectively not a well-crafted book. I've never written a review before, so I don't even know where to start. That's how mad this book made me. I am actually putting in the effort to write a review.
I hate how harsh this review will probably come across, but I don't want anyone to make the same mistakes I did. I was so hyped, seeing a pirate low-fantasy with an asexual main character -- I will ALWAYS dive in for a book with ace rep, and it's burned me more than once with an absolutely awful reading experience -- and my disappointment was immeasurable when this turned into a spite-read before I was even three chapters in.
I'll do my best to keep at least the first part of this review spoiler-free, maybe I'll do a spoilery bit after.
This book needed several more editing passes, of every kind. Developmental, structural, line, etc., etc. Even just another round of proofreading could have really improved this book, to fix all the weird punctuation mistakes (half the time -- or more -- there would be a forgotten space between a piece of punctuation and the next word. It was extremely distracting) or the weird wording mistakes (there is a difference between "ruckus" and "raucous," which I know the author and editor have to know, because the word "raucous" was used correctly only pages later).
This book reads like a second draft, maybe a third draft at best. The plot is all over the place (when it's even happening, which so often it just feels like we are being dragged around a series of random events), the characters hardly have any motivations or goals for most of the book, we are almost constantly told things over being shown them, and the writing feels incredibly juvenile for what is supposed to be an adult novel. I'm not sure if it's the first-person POV (which is an incredibly difficult POV to do right in my opinion, and not one that's done right here at all) or the writing style, but it feels more like I'm in the head of a 15-16 year old girl rather than a grown woman. All the characters fall flat when you look at them for more than a few seconds at a time, even our main character, and there's very little that any of them do that I found compelling.
Also, this book calls itself "low-fantasy." It is not. There is not a single fantastical element in this novel, low-level or not. Taking place in a secondary setting does not a fantasy novel make.
Honestly, I'm not even sure how to keep going without spoilers at this point, so if you want some details on some of my above thoughts and you don't mind spoilers, feel free to keep reading.
So yeah, I was genuinely really excited for this book actually, only to have it all crash down in the most disappointing first read of the year ever. I cannot recommend this book to anyone in good conscience.
Also, sorry again for how disjointed and disorganized this whole entire review is. I have never written a review for a book in my life and also I just read 40% of this book in one sitting to get it over with and my brain is completely fried.
The author had some good ideas here, and I'm sad to see that they weren't executed well. I can only hope she improves with her future books and I do truly wish her success in her future writing career, but after my experience with Caraway of the Sea, I will not be joining in for the rest of this writing journey.