"Third Time Lucky" by Deborah Cooke. Book 1 in The Coxwells series.
A contemporary romance written when cell phones were just starting to be invented. Yes, that's important. At the beginning of this book is a note from the author since this is a second release for this book (in fact the whole series). Ms. Cooke states that she decided not to change anything in the book or update it to make it more modern because the story stands on it's own in that time period.
Now saying all that, I would give this book 2.5 out of 5 stars. I'm kind of stuck in the middle with this book. The main characters are Nick (Nicholas) Sullivan and Philippa (Phil) Coxwell. It's written very differently than anything else I've read. I'm splitting my review into 4 sections: Dislikes, Likes, Not Sure About, and Overall Impressions.
Phil is the youngest of four and only daughter in the Coxwell family. Her father and three older brothers are all lawyers and she was expected to become one too. But Phil decided to become a gardener/landscaper. On the verge of her business becoming a success, Nick Sullivan walks back into her life. He left 15 years ago and now is back and possibly wanted for murder!
Dislikes
1 - I found some things way to descriptive. I didn't need to know so much in depth info about what kind of flowers grow where and how, the botanical names for them and such.
2 - There were quite a few grammatical errors, at least enough for me to notice. I know the author said she left the book the way it was first published but I would have liked the grammar to be fixed.
3 - I found the story kind of dragged a bit at the beginning and I found myself thinking "why am I reading this part? Is it really important to the story?" Again, to my first point, a little too descriptive.
Likes
1 - I really liked both characters of Nick and Phil. They have a history together which makes their interactions very realistic. They each seem very "real" and enough of a background was given to make me want to know what was going to happen to them.
2 - The Coxwell family drama. Excellently done! You really end up hating Phil's family but at the same time, you're intrigued to figure out why they act the way they do.
3 - The overall story line. Nick coming back from Phil's past and needing her help but things are not as they seem. The story has some good twists and a good plot.
4 - The ending of all plot lines. Everything is tied up in a "neat little bow," leaving no plot lines hanging.
Not Sure About
1 - POV (point of view) the book is written in. The book is written in more than one person's POV but when it's Phil's POV, it's first person. For example, when it's a scene describing what's happening to Nick, it's "he did this" and "Nick did that", but when it's Phil, you get "I did this" and "I did that." Changing from third person POV to first person POV was a little weird but it actually works. It was just different from what I usually read.
2 - The humour. Not laugh out loud funny like I was kind of expecting but there were moments of...I'm going to say side-smile or smirking humour. I read some reviews from this book and they made it sound a lot more funny than I thought it was.
3 - At one point, the story switches to a dream-like monologue. It works with the story and does have revealing information at the end but it's very abrupt in it's placement in the book.
Overall Impressions
This book is a very light romance. It's not a hot and heavy sex romp, if that's what you're looking for. The overall emotional story between Phil and Nick is really good. Both characters are dealing with issues from their past and you can see how their past's have affected their characters as adults. With the exception of the story dragging a bit at the beginning, the story starts to take off more quickly as the plot progresses. The Coxwell brothers are intriguing enough for me to want to find out what happens to them.
Overall, I'm saying this book was good enough for me to want to give the next book "Double Trouble" a try now that I know what to expect. NOTE: I bought all four books at the same time when I got a great sale on them, so I'm going to read the whole series anyway because I've never bought a book and not read it! I'm hoping the next ones will be as good (or better) than this one.
Thank you for reading my review!