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Finding Fionn
A Mystery Inspired by the Kidnapping of the Irish Racehorse Shergar.
The excitement felt in the Winner’s Circle vanishes when the jockey’s beloved horse disappears from his stall in the dark of night.
Patrick McCallin is a young Irish lad growing up in the 1980s when all of Ireland is groaning under the weight of The Troubles. Born to ride, he pays little mind to the political unrest going on around him. He dreams only of becoming a jockey. Patrick’s dream comes true when he is selected to ride an up-and-coming Thoroughbred, named Fionn MacCool, in the biggest races in England and Ireland. Race after race ends with Fionn and Patrick in the Winner’s Circle. The pair captures the heart of all Ireland. But the dream becomes a nightmare when Patrick’s beloved horse is kidnapped and held for ransom.
When the horse’s owner refuses to pay and the Irish Garda closes the case, Patrick and his best friends, Ronan and Maddie, have no choice but to find Fionn themselves.
The excitement felt in the Winner’s Circle vanishes when the jockey’s beloved horse disappears from his stall in the dark of night.
Patrick McCallin is a young Irish lad growing up in the 1980s when all of Ireland is groaning under the weight of The Troubles. Born to ride, he pays little mind to the political unrest going on around him. He dreams only of becoming a jockey. Patrick’s dream comes true when he is selected to ride an up-and-coming Thoroughbred, named Fionn MacCool, in the biggest races in England and Ireland. Race after race ends with Fionn and Patrick in the Winner’s Circle. The pair captures the heart of all Ireland. But the dream becomes a nightmare when Patrick’s beloved horse is kidnapped and held for ransom.
When the horse’s owner refuses to pay and the Irish Garda closes the case, Patrick and his best friends, Ronan and Maddie, have no choice but to find Fionn themselves.
298 pages, Paperback
Published October 17, 2023
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M.J. Evans
25 books142 followersI am a graduate of Oregon State University. Upon graduation, I spent five years teaching at the middle school and high school levels. My writing, at that time, was limited to curriculum. That was not fun.
While raising my children, I coached their Odyssey of the Mind and Destination Imagination teams for seventeen years. I helped them write their own stories for the competitions. During this time, I also wrote two parent handbooks for the Salem, Oregon School district on sex education.
About fifteen years ago, I was able to combine my passion for horses with my love of writing. I researched and wrote two equestrian trail guide books for the Denver area. By “research” I mean that I spent every Friday riding my horse on a new trail, be it on the plains or in the mountains. It was a tough job, but someone had to do it! The result of that work was the publication of Riding Colorado-Day Trips from Denver with Your Horse, and Riding Colorado II. Both books continue to sell very well in the Denver to Colorado Springs area and have made my horse famous.
I was able to combine my love of horses with my love of fantasy in my first Trilogy. The Mist Trilogy, comprised of Behind the Mist, Mists of Darkness and the Rising Mist received a gold medal from the Mom's Choice Awards. My next fantasy, an allegory of the Revolutionary War, but with Trolls and Leprechauns, won first place in the Purple Dragonfly Awards for fantasy. I took a brief (2 year) break from writing fantasy to complete a contemporary, coming of age novel titled "In the Heart of a Mustang." This YA novel won first place in the Literary Classics Awards for Young Adult fiction and second place in the Nautilus Awards in the same category.
On October 1, 2016, I released the first book of my new fantasy series "The Stone of Mercy: Book 1 of the Centaur Chronicles."
I have now expanded my writing interests to include Historical Fiction: "PINTO! Based Upon the True Story of the Longest Horseback Ride in History," and "The Sand Pounder - Love and Drama on Horseback in WWII."
I have also had fun working with illustrators on five picture books: "PERCY - The Racehorse Who Didn't Like to Run," and "The Skullington Family Series."
I describe myself as a “Mozart” type of writer as opposed to a “Beethoven” writer. When I sit down to write, the words just flow and I don’t have to go back and do a lot of revisions.
While raising my children, I coached their Odyssey of the Mind and Destination Imagination teams for seventeen years. I helped them write their own stories for the competitions. During this time, I also wrote two parent handbooks for the Salem, Oregon School district on sex education.
About fifteen years ago, I was able to combine my passion for horses with my love of writing. I researched and wrote two equestrian trail guide books for the Denver area. By “research” I mean that I spent every Friday riding my horse on a new trail, be it on the plains or in the mountains. It was a tough job, but someone had to do it! The result of that work was the publication of Riding Colorado-Day Trips from Denver with Your Horse, and Riding Colorado II. Both books continue to sell very well in the Denver to Colorado Springs area and have made my horse famous.
I was able to combine my love of horses with my love of fantasy in my first Trilogy. The Mist Trilogy, comprised of Behind the Mist, Mists of Darkness and the Rising Mist received a gold medal from the Mom's Choice Awards. My next fantasy, an allegory of the Revolutionary War, but with Trolls and Leprechauns, won first place in the Purple Dragonfly Awards for fantasy. I took a brief (2 year) break from writing fantasy to complete a contemporary, coming of age novel titled "In the Heart of a Mustang." This YA novel won first place in the Literary Classics Awards for Young Adult fiction and second place in the Nautilus Awards in the same category.
On October 1, 2016, I released the first book of my new fantasy series "The Stone of Mercy: Book 1 of the Centaur Chronicles."
I have now expanded my writing interests to include Historical Fiction: "PINTO! Based Upon the True Story of the Longest Horseback Ride in History," and "The Sand Pounder - Love and Drama on Horseback in WWII."
I have also had fun working with illustrators on five picture books: "PERCY - The Racehorse Who Didn't Like to Run," and "The Skullington Family Series."
I describe myself as a “Mozart” type of writer as opposed to a “Beethoven” writer. When I sit down to write, the words just flow and I don’t have to go back and do a lot of revisions.
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November 2, 2023
I love books based on true events and animals, so when I got a chance to get my hands on Finding Fionn by M J Evans, I had to have it. Finding Fionn is a mystery based on the kidnapping of Shergar, an Irish thoroughbred who had an amazing winning record.
Before I even cracked open the book, I was surfing for information on Shergar, the horse the book was based on. My biggest takeaway was how thought provoking the story was. Could there be some truth to the fiction?
M J Evans explains the IRA position in a simple to understand manner for such a complex situation. I have read other books where the IRA made an appearance and it was always hard for me to understand…why the conflict? Also, once their first kidnapping, to finance their war, was successful, why would they quit there? But a horse?
Fionn MacCool was a very successful racer and quickly put to stud. Patrick McCallin was the lucky, young jockey who got him there. It had been Patrick’s dream to be a jockey and when Fionn was taken, he was not going to stand by and watch as they closed the case.
It’s fun when a group of young people come together to solve a mystery. We have danger, betrayal and greed…the things people will do for money, never satisfied with what they have.
Finding Fionn is a wonderful story of a boy’s love for horses and his desire to be a jockey. I love the thought provoking conclusion and I think I will make my own conjecture on what really happened to the horse, Shergar, that the story was based on. I love that we have a happy ever after for Fionn MacCool, not so for Shergar.
Before I even cracked open the book, I was surfing for information on Shergar, the horse the book was based on. My biggest takeaway was how thought provoking the story was. Could there be some truth to the fiction?
M J Evans explains the IRA position in a simple to understand manner for such a complex situation. I have read other books where the IRA made an appearance and it was always hard for me to understand…why the conflict? Also, once their first kidnapping, to finance their war, was successful, why would they quit there? But a horse?
Fionn MacCool was a very successful racer and quickly put to stud. Patrick McCallin was the lucky, young jockey who got him there. It had been Patrick’s dream to be a jockey and when Fionn was taken, he was not going to stand by and watch as they closed the case.
It’s fun when a group of young people come together to solve a mystery. We have danger, betrayal and greed…the things people will do for money, never satisfied with what they have.
Finding Fionn is a wonderful story of a boy’s love for horses and his desire to be a jockey. I love the thought provoking conclusion and I think I will make my own conjecture on what really happened to the horse, Shergar, that the story was based on. I love that we have a happy ever after for Fionn MacCool, not so for Shergar.
December 14, 2023
I do not write these reviews to change anyone's mind. So many people love M.J. Evans' works, and that is fantastic. I do not entirely dislike this book, just like I haven't entirely disliked the previous two M.J. Evans' books that I've read, because there are definitely things to like about them. With Finding Fionn, the base premise was great; I love that this was based on a true story but this one had a happy ending. I can tell that the author did a lot of research about The Troubles. I loved the tiny character details throughout the story, like how on page 106 Sir Gallagher mentions to Fionn's kidnappers how Fionn loves carrots, or Ronan attempting to read a French advertisement on page 215. On pages 125 and 126, when Patrick drives through the Irish countryside, the pacing and descriptions all come together to form an excellent bit of writing. However, even with these good things, this book needed a lot of work, starting with the proofreading.
The proofreading in this book is not terrible, but it isn't great. I was crossing out commas or adding them or making uppercase letters lowercase. (On the very first page, "Eighteenth Century" should be "eighteenth century"). But once again, the proofreading issues are nothing compared to the editing problems.
The use of epithets in place of a character's name or pronouns takes me out of the story. Our main character Patrick becomes "the lad", "the young man", "the young would-be jockey", "the inexperienced jockey". Maddie is "the young girl". Sir Gallagher is "the trainer". A minor character named Albert is "the friendly stable lad". There is nothing wrong with using a character's name or pronouns. The redundant and unnecessary epithets break my immersion of the story.
There is so much filler in this book. There are so many paragraphs that could be cut down into a sentence or two. Take, for example, this part on page 87: "Approaching the gate, he got off his bike, pushed open the gate, and walked his bike through. After latching the gates back together, he hopped on his bike and headed for home." This could easily be turned into something like, "He latched the gates together, hopped on his bike and headed for home." (Not perfect, but you get the idea.) We don't need to know every single detail of what a character did; I wish the author would let readers fill in some of the blanks. We do not need a detailed walkthrough of a character putting a headstall on a horse (pages 92-93) or a character getting out of a car, opening a gate and getting back in the car (page 89). There were entire paragraphs and sometimes entire pages that I put brackets around and just wrote "filler" in the margin. I genuinely think that if the filler was cut out, this book would be at least fifty pages shorter. And better.
Speaking of filler, let's talk about redundancy and repetition, because there is a lot of it. On pages 74 and 75, we are told twice that the driver was the victim of the attack at the gate, when it had already been clearly established on page 73. The word "charming" was used four times to describe the city of Lille on page 156, 159 and 160. On page 172, we are told that Maddie and Patrick are locked in the tack room, but on the very next page we are told again. On page 208, it is established that one of the people talking was the clerk from City Hall, but on pages 210 and 211, we are reminded two more times. On page 226, the three main characters receive a threatening note, but on page 227, Maddie and Patrick reiterate that it is a threat, as if the readers couldn't figure it out for themselves from the tone of the note. These are just a few examples.
Let's talk about the Irish dialect. I am still of the opinion that dialect rarely makes a book better, and I realize that the author had help with the dialect, but it still came across as very clunky and inauthentic to me. It also really does not help that the dialect is completely dropped when a character needs to have a dramatic moment or give the audience a history lecture.
And the dialogue. If you want an example of both the dialect magically disappearing and the dialogue sounding completely unrealistic, look no further than page 113, in which Ronan says this to Patrick: "It be all set. We be meetin' me contact at Bittles Bar in downtown Belfast. The historic structure that houses the bar is known as the Flat Iron Building. It was originally called The Shakespeare due to its location in the theater district since the 1800s. It be in an area not frequented by the IRA..." This is such a perfect encapsulation of "no one talks like this". Can you imagine anyone besides a tour guide talking like this? There are other examples like this in the book. If you want to incorporate a history lesson into your book, there are better ways to do it. This could be solved by some heavy-duty editing.
Speaking of editing and dialogue, let's talk about the French dialogue. Again, I realize that the author had someone to look over the parts of the book that were in French, but that just makes the mistakes I found all the more infuriating. Why were so many people saying qui (what) at the beginning of sentences instead of oui (yes)? (See pages 208, 213 and 225 for a few examples.) On page 207, a French receptionist says, "Pardon em moi", which is not accurate. Excusez-moi or Pardonnez-moi would be better. I'm sure that there are things I missed that would become more apparent on a second read-through, but this was painful.
And that brings me to our main villain, Silas El Mari from Dubai. It is really not a good look to have (as far as I can tell) the one non-white character in your book be the big bad and hail from Saudi Arabia and be obsessed with money and say things like, "I don't answer to anyone, especially not a woman" (page 274). This leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
This book is ostensibly written for children and young adults, but it is peppered with phrases like "Baroque-style" and "Tudor chateau" and "Toile patterned linen", phrases which no one will know, unless they know a lot about architecture and interior design. How many kids would know what these phrases mean? These kinds of descriptions tell readers nothing.
I appreciate this author's passion for horses and writing, and there are definitely are things that I appreciate about this book. But, just like the other books I've read by M.J. Evans, this book needs so much work before it can be called good.
The proofreading in this book is not terrible, but it isn't great. I was crossing out commas or adding them or making uppercase letters lowercase. (On the very first page, "Eighteenth Century" should be "eighteenth century"). But once again, the proofreading issues are nothing compared to the editing problems.
The use of epithets in place of a character's name or pronouns takes me out of the story. Our main character Patrick becomes "the lad", "the young man", "the young would-be jockey", "the inexperienced jockey". Maddie is "the young girl". Sir Gallagher is "the trainer". A minor character named Albert is "the friendly stable lad". There is nothing wrong with using a character's name or pronouns. The redundant and unnecessary epithets break my immersion of the story.
There is so much filler in this book. There are so many paragraphs that could be cut down into a sentence or two. Take, for example, this part on page 87: "Approaching the gate, he got off his bike, pushed open the gate, and walked his bike through. After latching the gates back together, he hopped on his bike and headed for home." This could easily be turned into something like, "He latched the gates together, hopped on his bike and headed for home." (Not perfect, but you get the idea.) We don't need to know every single detail of what a character did; I wish the author would let readers fill in some of the blanks. We do not need a detailed walkthrough of a character putting a headstall on a horse (pages 92-93) or a character getting out of a car, opening a gate and getting back in the car (page 89). There were entire paragraphs and sometimes entire pages that I put brackets around and just wrote "filler" in the margin. I genuinely think that if the filler was cut out, this book would be at least fifty pages shorter. And better.
Speaking of filler, let's talk about redundancy and repetition, because there is a lot of it. On pages 74 and 75, we are told twice that the driver was the victim of the attack at the gate, when it had already been clearly established on page 73. The word "charming" was used four times to describe the city of Lille on page 156, 159 and 160. On page 172, we are told that Maddie and Patrick are locked in the tack room, but on the very next page we are told again. On page 208, it is established that one of the people talking was the clerk from City Hall, but on pages 210 and 211, we are reminded two more times. On page 226, the three main characters receive a threatening note, but on page 227, Maddie and Patrick reiterate that it is a threat, as if the readers couldn't figure it out for themselves from the tone of the note. These are just a few examples.
Let's talk about the Irish dialect. I am still of the opinion that dialect rarely makes a book better, and I realize that the author had help with the dialect, but it still came across as very clunky and inauthentic to me. It also really does not help that the dialect is completely dropped when a character needs to have a dramatic moment or give the audience a history lecture.
And the dialogue. If you want an example of both the dialect magically disappearing and the dialogue sounding completely unrealistic, look no further than page 113, in which Ronan says this to Patrick: "It be all set. We be meetin' me contact at Bittles Bar in downtown Belfast. The historic structure that houses the bar is known as the Flat Iron Building. It was originally called The Shakespeare due to its location in the theater district since the 1800s. It be in an area not frequented by the IRA..." This is such a perfect encapsulation of "no one talks like this". Can you imagine anyone besides a tour guide talking like this? There are other examples like this in the book. If you want to incorporate a history lesson into your book, there are better ways to do it. This could be solved by some heavy-duty editing.
Speaking of editing and dialogue, let's talk about the French dialogue. Again, I realize that the author had someone to look over the parts of the book that were in French, but that just makes the mistakes I found all the more infuriating. Why were so many people saying qui (what) at the beginning of sentences instead of oui (yes)? (See pages 208, 213 and 225 for a few examples.) On page 207, a French receptionist says, "Pardon em moi", which is not accurate. Excusez-moi or Pardonnez-moi would be better. I'm sure that there are things I missed that would become more apparent on a second read-through, but this was painful.
And that brings me to our main villain, Silas El Mari from Dubai. It is really not a good look to have (as far as I can tell) the one non-white character in your book be the big bad and hail from Saudi Arabia and be obsessed with money and say things like, "I don't answer to anyone, especially not a woman" (page 274). This leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
This book is ostensibly written for children and young adults, but it is peppered with phrases like "Baroque-style" and "Tudor chateau" and "Toile patterned linen", phrases which no one will know, unless they know a lot about architecture and interior design. How many kids would know what these phrases mean? These kinds of descriptions tell readers nothing.
I appreciate this author's passion for horses and writing, and there are definitely are things that I appreciate about this book. But, just like the other books I've read by M.J. Evans, this book needs so much work before it can be called good.
October 17, 2023
I received an advance copy from the author for review. I have read most of Evan's books and was a bit concern about her writing a mystery as this is not her genre. I am ready to announce that she did a remarkable job of creating a believable story based on a true event. The characters are likeable and realistic. The details of the theft all flow together nicely and there is a creative bit of drama to make it suspenseful. I am ready to pass the book along to my nephew, a lover of horses. I believe he will enjoy it as much as I did.
April 13, 2024
A fast-moving tale of the kidnapping and rescue of a famous racehorse.
Finding Fionn is based on the true story of Shergar, a thoroughbred horse who, after a star-studded career as a flat racer, was retired to a stud in Ireland from where he was kidnapped in 1983. After his owner refused to pay a ransom of £2 million, there was no further contact with the thieves and Shergar was never found, though it is thought he was shot four days after the theft. In 1999 an ex-IRA super grass claimed that the IRA had stolen the horse with a view to raising money for arms, but the IRA has never admitted responsibility.
In Finding Fionn, MJ Evans weaves a pacy story of the eponymous thoroughbred, a Shergar look-alike with a similar successful career. There are many echoes of the Shergar affair but thankfully — spoiler alert — the end is happier.
The main character, Patrick, is a young Irish boy with a passion for horses and racing. With his grandfather’s support he overcomes his mother’s resistance (Patrick’s father was a jockey and killed in a freak accident) and finds work as a stable lad at a local stud. From there he works his way up to train as a jockey and is taken on by the Far and Away Farm where he first meets Fionn. The two form a bond, Patrick becomes Fionn’s jockey and the pair win race after race until Fionn is retired to stud.
When Fionn is kidnapped from the stable one night in a daring raid, Patrick is heart-broken. To give more away would be too much of a spoiler — suffice to say that Patrick is determined to find out where Fionn is and bring him home. He works alone initially, following whispered leads implicating the IRA, and is then joined by Maddie and Ronan, the two close friends he made while training. The three of them work out what happened and come up with a plan, which despite setbacks and dangers brings the story to a satisfying — if tense — close.
I was a very horsy teenager (a long time ago!) and the equine elements of this novel resonated deeply. Also I’m old enough to remember the Shergar affair. For me the horse interest was obviously a big factor in Finding Fionn, but I think this book will be a good read for readers without those connections. And it’s not just about the horses — the novel is set against the Troubles in Northern Ireland and there is a convincing subtext of the skullduggery of those times.
A couple of minor downsides. First, the spelling out of the near-ubiquitous Irish accents and brogue. This is admittedly a problem for writers. Personally I find that constant repetition of local dialectics quirks and pronunciation becomes irritating and can spoil the flow, but I accept that others take a different approach.
Second, there was a major coincidence as a plot point which I always feel slightly cheats the reader, though again others may disagree.
And I suspect that sandwiches at a bistro in St Quentin and a pint of draught Guinness in Lille are anachronistic for a novel set in the 1980s, but I could be wrong.
But these are subjective or trivial criticisms, and overall this is a fast, pacy read with short chapters mostly ending on a skilled cliffhanger, cleverly plotted and with an edge-of-the-seat denouement.
Finding Fionn is based on the true story of Shergar, a thoroughbred horse who, after a star-studded career as a flat racer, was retired to a stud in Ireland from where he was kidnapped in 1983. After his owner refused to pay a ransom of £2 million, there was no further contact with the thieves and Shergar was never found, though it is thought he was shot four days after the theft. In 1999 an ex-IRA super grass claimed that the IRA had stolen the horse with a view to raising money for arms, but the IRA has never admitted responsibility.
In Finding Fionn, MJ Evans weaves a pacy story of the eponymous thoroughbred, a Shergar look-alike with a similar successful career. There are many echoes of the Shergar affair but thankfully — spoiler alert — the end is happier.
The main character, Patrick, is a young Irish boy with a passion for horses and racing. With his grandfather’s support he overcomes his mother’s resistance (Patrick’s father was a jockey and killed in a freak accident) and finds work as a stable lad at a local stud. From there he works his way up to train as a jockey and is taken on by the Far and Away Farm where he first meets Fionn. The two form a bond, Patrick becomes Fionn’s jockey and the pair win race after race until Fionn is retired to stud.
When Fionn is kidnapped from the stable one night in a daring raid, Patrick is heart-broken. To give more away would be too much of a spoiler — suffice to say that Patrick is determined to find out where Fionn is and bring him home. He works alone initially, following whispered leads implicating the IRA, and is then joined by Maddie and Ronan, the two close friends he made while training. The three of them work out what happened and come up with a plan, which despite setbacks and dangers brings the story to a satisfying — if tense — close.
I was a very horsy teenager (a long time ago!) and the equine elements of this novel resonated deeply. Also I’m old enough to remember the Shergar affair. For me the horse interest was obviously a big factor in Finding Fionn, but I think this book will be a good read for readers without those connections. And it’s not just about the horses — the novel is set against the Troubles in Northern Ireland and there is a convincing subtext of the skullduggery of those times.
A couple of minor downsides. First, the spelling out of the near-ubiquitous Irish accents and brogue. This is admittedly a problem for writers. Personally I find that constant repetition of local dialectics quirks and pronunciation becomes irritating and can spoil the flow, but I accept that others take a different approach.
Second, there was a major coincidence as a plot point which I always feel slightly cheats the reader, though again others may disagree.
And I suspect that sandwiches at a bistro in St Quentin and a pint of draught Guinness in Lille are anachronistic for a novel set in the 1980s, but I could be wrong.
But these are subjective or trivial criticisms, and overall this is a fast, pacy read with short chapters mostly ending on a skilled cliffhanger, cleverly plotted and with an edge-of-the-seat denouement.
May 8, 2024
A confession: I bought this on an impulse, based on its advertised storyline, not realising until I read the copyright page that it is intended for ages 13 upwards. I then checked on Amazon, and to be fair it does say there quite clearly that the intended reading age is 13-18 (although the book is also a best seller in one of the young adult categories). I’m primarily a fan of adult mysteries, as well of true crime, and I’d grabbed this book because it is a mystery inspired by the notorious real-life horse-napping case of Shergar.
So my first reaction on finding out that I was apparently too old to read the book was to wonder if I could return it for a refund. But then I thought I ought at least to give it a go. And I’m very glad I did. It’s a bit shorter than what I am used to, and so I rattled through it in a day, stopping only for a break over lunch. And it was a most enjoyable day. I won’t summarise the plot – Amazon can do that for you. But I will say what I liked about the book, and that was two things primarily.
The first is that it is a real page-turner. A lot of things happen, and I was always eager to see what was next in store for the three amateur detectives as they try to save the kidnapped horse. To keep things moving, the author doesn’t waste time showing off her undoubted writing ability with long descriptions, unless they are necessary for the plot or to set the scene. The second thing I really liked about the book was the portrayal of the Irish equestrian world, including a demonstration of the love that Irish people traditionally have for their horses. And yet, admirably, the author isn’t afraid to shy away from the uncomfortable fact that some people – even some people in Ireland – are prepared to harm a horse if there is a prospect of financial or other gain.
Is there anything I have reservations about? Well, yes, to some extent, but only I suspect because I’m not the age and type of reader that the book is primarily aimed at. There are more plot coincidences than I am used to in an adult mystery, and it is necessary to suspend one’s disbelief at times. English readers of a certain vintage will know what I mean if I say that the book has a bit of a ‘Famous Five’ feel about it. However, the only thing that really grated on me was what I felt was an excess of cod-Irish dialect. I would have preferred more of the dialogue to be ‘normal’, once the author had established the background of the characters. But that’s a personal preference, and I know that others will feel differently, so I wouldn’t adjust my rating on that basis.
So would I recommend the book? Well, in the case of someone who normally reads adult mysteries, I would first certainly give them a heads-up about the age of the intended readership. Some people simply won’t enjoy a book written primarily for teenagers. But for younger readers, particularly those who like horses (or Irish settings, or stories based on real-life mysteries), then yes I would definitely recommend the book: I am sure that lots of them will love it.
So my first reaction on finding out that I was apparently too old to read the book was to wonder if I could return it for a refund. But then I thought I ought at least to give it a go. And I’m very glad I did. It’s a bit shorter than what I am used to, and so I rattled through it in a day, stopping only for a break over lunch. And it was a most enjoyable day. I won’t summarise the plot – Amazon can do that for you. But I will say what I liked about the book, and that was two things primarily.
The first is that it is a real page-turner. A lot of things happen, and I was always eager to see what was next in store for the three amateur detectives as they try to save the kidnapped horse. To keep things moving, the author doesn’t waste time showing off her undoubted writing ability with long descriptions, unless they are necessary for the plot or to set the scene. The second thing I really liked about the book was the portrayal of the Irish equestrian world, including a demonstration of the love that Irish people traditionally have for their horses. And yet, admirably, the author isn’t afraid to shy away from the uncomfortable fact that some people – even some people in Ireland – are prepared to harm a horse if there is a prospect of financial or other gain.
Is there anything I have reservations about? Well, yes, to some extent, but only I suspect because I’m not the age and type of reader that the book is primarily aimed at. There are more plot coincidences than I am used to in an adult mystery, and it is necessary to suspend one’s disbelief at times. English readers of a certain vintage will know what I mean if I say that the book has a bit of a ‘Famous Five’ feel about it. However, the only thing that really grated on me was what I felt was an excess of cod-Irish dialect. I would have preferred more of the dialogue to be ‘normal’, once the author had established the background of the characters. But that’s a personal preference, and I know that others will feel differently, so I wouldn’t adjust my rating on that basis.
So would I recommend the book? Well, in the case of someone who normally reads adult mysteries, I would first certainly give them a heads-up about the age of the intended readership. Some people simply won’t enjoy a book written primarily for teenagers. But for younger readers, particularly those who like horses (or Irish settings, or stories based on real-life mysteries), then yes I would definitely recommend the book: I am sure that lots of them will love it.
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March 19, 2024Inspired by real events, M.J. Evans’
Finding Fionn
is the story of an Irish thoroughbred racehorse who gets stolen by some nasty characters, and which comes with a twist-turn ending. Our protagonist in this pleasant Irish ditty is Patrick McCallin, who starts out the novel as a young boy with dreams of becoming a jockey, like this father. Patrick succeeds at his life’s goal and, along with the legend-making thoroughbred Fionn MacCool, becomes known all across Ireland.
But this is the age of The Troubles in Ireland, a dangerous time when the IRA has taken to kidnapping people for ransom in order to fund their campaign against England, and its Loyalist supporters. And it is in this context that Fionn is kidnapped.
While the political intrigue and violence of the times does cast a shadow over the novel, there is no explicit violence in Evan’s work. This makes Finding Fionn suitable for all ages, even old horse-lovers like me.
And, yes, I must admit my bias. My family, especially my sister, has been involved with horses for over 10,000 years, back when I was a wee tyke. My sister runs a small horse ranch, which means I get to ride, brush, feed, and scritch horse manes at will, but with none of the hard work involved. I also get to wander in the barns and smell the tack and hay, so I could really appreciate Evan’s description of a life around horses. Your results may vary. But if you do get a chance to be around horses, I highly recommend. So does Evans.
Finding Fionn is a mystery thriller that runs along at a suitable pace. The characters are believable, and even make mistakes that had me talking to the book: you can’t go there now, they know the location! As people, Evan’s characters could be fleshed out a bit more, but since Finding Fionn is not a drama, this doesn’t really detract from the book.
Evan’s writing is clear and simple, and suitable for all ages, as mentioned above.
If you’re looking for a mystery thriller stuffed full of Irish charm, landscapes, and characters, and especially if you love horses, you should give Evan’s book a try. I think you’ll enjoy it.
But this is the age of The Troubles in Ireland, a dangerous time when the IRA has taken to kidnapping people for ransom in order to fund their campaign against England, and its Loyalist supporters. And it is in this context that Fionn is kidnapped.
While the political intrigue and violence of the times does cast a shadow over the novel, there is no explicit violence in Evan’s work. This makes Finding Fionn suitable for all ages, even old horse-lovers like me.
And, yes, I must admit my bias. My family, especially my sister, has been involved with horses for over 10,000 years, back when I was a wee tyke. My sister runs a small horse ranch, which means I get to ride, brush, feed, and scritch horse manes at will, but with none of the hard work involved. I also get to wander in the barns and smell the tack and hay, so I could really appreciate Evan’s description of a life around horses. Your results may vary. But if you do get a chance to be around horses, I highly recommend. So does Evans.
Finding Fionn is a mystery thriller that runs along at a suitable pace. The characters are believable, and even make mistakes that had me talking to the book: you can’t go there now, they know the location! As people, Evan’s characters could be fleshed out a bit more, but since Finding Fionn is not a drama, this doesn’t really detract from the book.
Evan’s writing is clear and simple, and suitable for all ages, as mentioned above.
If you’re looking for a mystery thriller stuffed full of Irish charm, landscapes, and characters, and especially if you love horses, you should give Evan’s book a try. I think you’ll enjoy it.
March 20, 2024
Book Review: "Finding Fionn"
by M.J. Evans 📚📚🥰
Rating:5/5
Review:
👉Dive into the spellbinding world of "Finding Fionn" by M.J. Evans, where the lush landscapes of 1980s Ireland serve as the backdrop for an enthralling mystery inspired by the infamous kidnapping of the Irish racehorse Shergar. As you turn the pages of this gripping tale, prepare to be transported on a journey filled with heart-stirring adventure, unwavering friendship, and pulse-pounding suspense.
👉At the heart of the narrative is Patrick McCallin, a young and aspiring jockey whose dreams take flight when he is chosen to ride the illustrious Fionn MacCool. Together, Patrick and Fionn become an unstoppable force, dominating the racetracks and capturing the imaginations of the Irish people. However, their idyllic partnership is shattered when Fionn is snatched away, leaving Patrick devastated and determined to bring his beloved horse home.
👉What follows is a riveting odyssey as Patrick, accompanied by his loyal friends Ronan and Maddie, embarks on a perilous quest to uncover the truth behind Fionn's disappearance. As they navigate through the shadowy underworld of horse theft and deception, the trio faces numerous challenges and dangers, testing the limits of their courage and resolve.
👉Evans' masterful storytelling skills are on full display as she intricately weaves together multiple layers of intrigue and emotion. From the breathtaking excitement of the racetrack to the quiet moments of reflection amidst Ireland's tumultuous political landscape, every scene is brought to life with vivid detail and palpable authenticity.
👉What sets "Finding Fionn" apart is its exploration of timeless themes such as loyalty, resilience, and the profound bond between humans and animals. Through Patrick's unwavering determination and the unwavering support of his friends, the novel celebrates the power of friendship and the indomitable spirit of the Irish people in the face of adversity.
👉As a reader, I was utterly captivated by the rich tapestry of characters and the intricate plot twists that kept me guessing until the very end.
Happy reading 😁😁
#bookreview
by M.J. Evans 📚📚🥰
Rating:5/5
Review:
👉Dive into the spellbinding world of "Finding Fionn" by M.J. Evans, where the lush landscapes of 1980s Ireland serve as the backdrop for an enthralling mystery inspired by the infamous kidnapping of the Irish racehorse Shergar. As you turn the pages of this gripping tale, prepare to be transported on a journey filled with heart-stirring adventure, unwavering friendship, and pulse-pounding suspense.
👉At the heart of the narrative is Patrick McCallin, a young and aspiring jockey whose dreams take flight when he is chosen to ride the illustrious Fionn MacCool. Together, Patrick and Fionn become an unstoppable force, dominating the racetracks and capturing the imaginations of the Irish people. However, their idyllic partnership is shattered when Fionn is snatched away, leaving Patrick devastated and determined to bring his beloved horse home.
👉What follows is a riveting odyssey as Patrick, accompanied by his loyal friends Ronan and Maddie, embarks on a perilous quest to uncover the truth behind Fionn's disappearance. As they navigate through the shadowy underworld of horse theft and deception, the trio faces numerous challenges and dangers, testing the limits of their courage and resolve.
👉Evans' masterful storytelling skills are on full display as she intricately weaves together multiple layers of intrigue and emotion. From the breathtaking excitement of the racetrack to the quiet moments of reflection amidst Ireland's tumultuous political landscape, every scene is brought to life with vivid detail and palpable authenticity.
👉What sets "Finding Fionn" apart is its exploration of timeless themes such as loyalty, resilience, and the profound bond between humans and animals. Through Patrick's unwavering determination and the unwavering support of his friends, the novel celebrates the power of friendship and the indomitable spirit of the Irish people in the face of adversity.
👉As a reader, I was utterly captivated by the rich tapestry of characters and the intricate plot twists that kept me guessing until the very end.
Happy reading 😁😁
#bookreview
January 4, 2024
"Finding Fionn" by M. J. Evans takes readers on a gripping journey into the heart of Ireland during the tumultuous 1980s. Against the backdrop of The Troubles, the novel introduces Fionn MacCool, a beloved thoroughbred whose abduction shakes the entire nation. At the center of this turmoil is Patrick McCallin, a young aspiring jockey whose dreams turn to dust when Fionn is stolen.
Evans skillfully weaves together the passion for horse racing, the bonds of friendship, and the quest for justice in a compelling narrative. Patrick, accompanied by his loyal friends Ronan and Maddie, embarks on a daring mission to find Fionn after official channels fail to deliver justice.
The book draws inspiration from the real-life unsolved mystery of Shergar's kidnapping, infusing the storyline with suspense and intrigue. The parallels between the novel's plot and the actual events surrounding Shergar's disappearance add an extra layer of depth to the story, leaving readers fascinated and eager to uncover the resolution.
Evans paints a vivid picture of Ireland's racing culture and landscapes, immersing readers in the vibrant world of horse racing. The book is a poignant tribute to the bond between humans and horses, filled with suspense, heartwarming moments, and a quest for justice that keeps you engrossed till the very end. M. J. Evans' narrative prowess and ability to blend history with fiction make "Finding Fionn" a captivating read, especially for those fascinated by mysteries and the equestrian world. This novel seamlessly combines elements of crime, friendship, and the love for horses, making it a compelling and memorable story worth exploring.
Evans skillfully weaves together the passion for horse racing, the bonds of friendship, and the quest for justice in a compelling narrative. Patrick, accompanied by his loyal friends Ronan and Maddie, embarks on a daring mission to find Fionn after official channels fail to deliver justice.
The book draws inspiration from the real-life unsolved mystery of Shergar's kidnapping, infusing the storyline with suspense and intrigue. The parallels between the novel's plot and the actual events surrounding Shergar's disappearance add an extra layer of depth to the story, leaving readers fascinated and eager to uncover the resolution.
Evans paints a vivid picture of Ireland's racing culture and landscapes, immersing readers in the vibrant world of horse racing. The book is a poignant tribute to the bond between humans and horses, filled with suspense, heartwarming moments, and a quest for justice that keeps you engrossed till the very end. M. J. Evans' narrative prowess and ability to blend history with fiction make "Finding Fionn" a captivating read, especially for those fascinated by mysteries and the equestrian world. This novel seamlessly combines elements of crime, friendship, and the love for horses, making it a compelling and memorable story worth exploring.
October 2, 2023
The President’s Book Award winner’s most recent book is a sweeping origin crime story of a young jockey’s search for his beloved thoroughbred who is kidnapped by a gang of machine gun-wielding men in balaclavas and held for ransom.
Through twists and turns, history is unveiled, mixed with imagination as readers are drawn back to the 1980s. It is the time of ‘The Troubles’ in Northern Ireland. The land and its citizenships are divided by politics and religious values. Conflict and violence rage in the streets as civilians are wounded and killed.
Yet despite the risks in the region, the young jockey and his friends tenaciously pursue their quest, engaging in heroic acts of courage, bound by friendship and a love for horses. The qualities of several memorable characters emerge. Readers see, feel, and sense what individual respect and empathy for others—including a beloved horse--can achieve when friends and strangers work together for a common goal.
While this story sheds light on a dark time in Ireland’s history, it also highlights the intangible bond between horse and human. Here is where M.J. Evans' equestrian background shines through. Adeptly, her words capture the feeling of riding, the power of a racehorse’s stride, contrasted by the sweet aromas of a barn, which so many equestrians come to love. In the likes of Maggie Stiefvater and Stacy Gregg, M.J. Evans, once again brings a loving and positive voice to the young-adult genre while interweaving the importance of individual character and values into memorable characters and stories.
Through twists and turns, history is unveiled, mixed with imagination as readers are drawn back to the 1980s. It is the time of ‘The Troubles’ in Northern Ireland. The land and its citizenships are divided by politics and religious values. Conflict and violence rage in the streets as civilians are wounded and killed.
Yet despite the risks in the region, the young jockey and his friends tenaciously pursue their quest, engaging in heroic acts of courage, bound by friendship and a love for horses. The qualities of several memorable characters emerge. Readers see, feel, and sense what individual respect and empathy for others—including a beloved horse--can achieve when friends and strangers work together for a common goal.
While this story sheds light on a dark time in Ireland’s history, it also highlights the intangible bond between horse and human. Here is where M.J. Evans' equestrian background shines through. Adeptly, her words capture the feeling of riding, the power of a racehorse’s stride, contrasted by the sweet aromas of a barn, which so many equestrians come to love. In the likes of Maggie Stiefvater and Stacy Gregg, M.J. Evans, once again brings a loving and positive voice to the young-adult genre while interweaving the importance of individual character and values into memorable characters and stories.
November 10, 2023
Historical Horse Story with Crime, Mystery, and Suspense. A good horse story is always going to reel me in, and “Finding Fionn” by M.J. Evans certainly did. This involving story is Inspired by an actual 1983 kidnapping of a famous Irish racehorse named Shergar. “Finding Fionn” follows the lives of Patrick McCallin and his friends Ronan and Maddie, who meet as teens in the horse academy. As young adults, they go their separate ways to pursue careers with horses. Ronan and Patrick stay in Ireland, and Maddie returns to her native France. Patrick works with racing thoroughbreds and becomes particularly attached to a stallion named Fionn. With Patrick as the jockey, Fionn breaks records in the races, and becomes a very valuable horse. Patrick’s world is shattered when Fionn is mysteriously kidnapped one night and held for ransom. Patrick teams with his former classmates Ronan and Maddie to discover what happened to Fionn. They face dangers, and both their lives, and the life of Fionn, are in peril. I found this well-researched historical novel to be fascinating and hard to put down. I particularly enjoyed the trio’s journey through the French countryside. “Finding Fionn” is Ms. Evans' second in her “Horses in History” series. I also enjoyed the first book “The Stallion and his Peculiar Boy,” a suspenseful book set in the WWII era. Though not part of this series, I also recommend Ms. Evans’ “Sand Pounder” another historical horse story set in WWII.
December 3, 2023
Evans’s Finding Fionn is tension-filled tale about a historical horse-napping. In addition to the mystery surrounding the novel, one equally enjoys the pastoral imagery and Irish dialects, although they, at times, come off as slightly caricature-esque. The writing is smart and smooth, and, partly due to the book’s short chapters, the story feels agile and gallops steadily to its conclusion. Due to the simple and highly accessible writing, this book is a perfect page-turner for younger readers who would simultaneously like to learn a bit equestrianism and the history of the IRA. Notwithstanding, this is where I would have also liked to see some more from the book. The situations are often cliché, and the characters often even more so; therefore, I felt, at times, a limited depth of connection to the book’s characters. And, although I find the IRA to be an interesting topic, to which Evans at times did justice, the historical exposition sometimes felt a trifle forced, which woke me up from the “fictional dream,” as it were. Moreover, in comparison to the beginning of the book, the ending felt weak and rushed. In any case, the passion and knowledge for both that Evans exudes for equestrianism, history, and even Ireland itself is palpable, and I would recommend this book to any youngster with an interest in any of the above.
December 28, 2023
“Finding Fionn” by M J Evans is a captivating Young Adult Crime/Mystery novel that transports readers to 1980s Ireland, a period marked by political unrest during The Troubles. The story is inspired by the real-life kidnapping of the Irish racehorse Shergar, and it weaves Irish culture and the events of that turbulent era into a thrilling narrative.
The protagonist, Patrick McCallin, is a young jockey with dreams of racing glory, and his deep connection with his beloved horse, Fionn MacCool, is beautifully portrayed throughout the book. When Fionn is kidnapped and held for ransom, Patrick, along with his loyal friends Ronan and Maddie, embarks on a perilous journey to rescue the horse themselves.
M J Evans crafts an entertaining and well-researched tale, clearly reflecting her passion for horses. The story is filled with suspense, mystery, and danger around every corner, making it a compelling read for young adults and horse enthusiasts alike. If you enjoyed the intrigue of “The Westing Game,” “Finding Fionn” is a must-read, offering a thrilling adventure with a unique backdrop inspired by a real historical event. Click the Buy Now button and embark on this unforgettable journey to bring Fionn home safely.
I received a copy of the book for the tour. This review is my honest, unbiased opinion.
The protagonist, Patrick McCallin, is a young jockey with dreams of racing glory, and his deep connection with his beloved horse, Fionn MacCool, is beautifully portrayed throughout the book. When Fionn is kidnapped and held for ransom, Patrick, along with his loyal friends Ronan and Maddie, embarks on a perilous journey to rescue the horse themselves.
M J Evans crafts an entertaining and well-researched tale, clearly reflecting her passion for horses. The story is filled with suspense, mystery, and danger around every corner, making it a compelling read for young adults and horse enthusiasts alike. If you enjoyed the intrigue of “The Westing Game,” “Finding Fionn” is a must-read, offering a thrilling adventure with a unique backdrop inspired by a real historical event. Click the Buy Now button and embark on this unforgettable journey to bring Fionn home safely.
I received a copy of the book for the tour. This review is my honest, unbiased opinion.
February 3, 2024
This novel is not just a story about the kidnapping of a racehorse; it's a heartwarming journey through the trials and triumphs of a young jockey and his beloved horse against the backdrop of 1980s Ireland. The narrative, inspired by the real-life mystery of Shergar's kidnapping, is masterfully woven with threads of suspense, emotion, and the indomitable spirit of youth.
Evans's storytelling prowess shines as she explores the deep bond between Patrick McCallin and Fionn MacCool, a bond that transcends the pages and pulls at the heartstrings. The author's rich descriptions of Ireland, its culture, and the horse-racing world are immersive, transporting readers to a time and place where the stakes are high, and the heroes are determined.
The characters are beautifully developed, from Patrick's resilience and growth to the steadfast loyalty of his friends Ronan and Maddie. Each character adds depth to the narrative, making the story not just about finding Fionn but about finding oneself in the face of adversity.
The suspense is skillfully built, with twists and turns that keep the pages turning. Evans's knowledge of horses and racing adds authenticity to the tale, making it a treasure trove for equestrian enthusiasts while remaining accessible and engaging for mystery lovers and young adults alike.
Evans's storytelling prowess shines as she explores the deep bond between Patrick McCallin and Fionn MacCool, a bond that transcends the pages and pulls at the heartstrings. The author's rich descriptions of Ireland, its culture, and the horse-racing world are immersive, transporting readers to a time and place where the stakes are high, and the heroes are determined.
The characters are beautifully developed, from Patrick's resilience and growth to the steadfast loyalty of his friends Ronan and Maddie. Each character adds depth to the narrative, making the story not just about finding Fionn but about finding oneself in the face of adversity.
The suspense is skillfully built, with twists and turns that keep the pages turning. Evans's knowledge of horses and racing adds authenticity to the tale, making it a treasure trove for equestrian enthusiasts while remaining accessible and engaging for mystery lovers and young adults alike.
September 22, 2024
A Riveting Ride of Mystery and Friendship - Don’t Miss Out!
What an incredible read! This book had me hooked from the opening scene and kept me on the edge of my seat until the very last page. If you love a fusion of mystery and the thrilling world of horse racing, you’re in for a treat.
Set against the backdrop of 1980s Ireland, where political tension and The Troubles are a constant presence, the story centers on young Patrick McCallin, a passionate jockey with dreams as vast as the racing tracks he aspires to conquer. His life takes a dramatic turn when his prized thoroughbred, Fionn MacCool, is kidnapped in the dead of night, spiraling Patrick and his best friends, Ronan and Maddie, into a dangerous yet thrilling quest.
The characters are vivid and relatable. Patrick’s determination and love for horses are palpable, and his friendships with Ronan and Maddie add a heartwarming layer to the intense plot. The camaraderie among them is one of the story’s standout features, portraying a genuine and engaging bond that propels their daring adventure.
The mystery of Fionn's kidnapping is expertly woven, and the suspense is maintained throughout the narrative. The historical context of The Troubles enriches the story, creating a compelling and authentic sense of time and place that adds depth and gravity to the unfolding events. The stakes are high, and the perils are real, making their journey both a test of courage and a race against time.
Fans of “The Westing Game” will find a kindred spirit in this book, with its intricate plot, unexpected twists, and fantastic pacing. The blend of real historical events with a fictional adventure makes it an enthralling read that will appeal to mystery fans and horse lovers alike.
In summary, this book is a thrilling adventure packed with mystery, friendship, and grit. It’s a captivating read that you won't be able to put down. Highly recommend for anyone looking for a fast-paced, edge-of-your-seat mystery!
What an incredible read! This book had me hooked from the opening scene and kept me on the edge of my seat until the very last page. If you love a fusion of mystery and the thrilling world of horse racing, you’re in for a treat.
Set against the backdrop of 1980s Ireland, where political tension and The Troubles are a constant presence, the story centers on young Patrick McCallin, a passionate jockey with dreams as vast as the racing tracks he aspires to conquer. His life takes a dramatic turn when his prized thoroughbred, Fionn MacCool, is kidnapped in the dead of night, spiraling Patrick and his best friends, Ronan and Maddie, into a dangerous yet thrilling quest.
The characters are vivid and relatable. Patrick’s determination and love for horses are palpable, and his friendships with Ronan and Maddie add a heartwarming layer to the intense plot. The camaraderie among them is one of the story’s standout features, portraying a genuine and engaging bond that propels their daring adventure.
The mystery of Fionn's kidnapping is expertly woven, and the suspense is maintained throughout the narrative. The historical context of The Troubles enriches the story, creating a compelling and authentic sense of time and place that adds depth and gravity to the unfolding events. The stakes are high, and the perils are real, making their journey both a test of courage and a race against time.
Fans of “The Westing Game” will find a kindred spirit in this book, with its intricate plot, unexpected twists, and fantastic pacing. The blend of real historical events with a fictional adventure makes it an enthralling read that will appeal to mystery fans and horse lovers alike.
In summary, this book is a thrilling adventure packed with mystery, friendship, and grit. It’s a captivating read that you won't be able to put down. Highly recommend for anyone looking for a fast-paced, edge-of-your-seat mystery!
October 21, 2023
Finding Fionn is an historical fiction for young adults set in Ireland in the 1980’s. The story was well-written and well-researched. My only “problem” with the book is Evan’s use of terminology that might not be familiar to the target age of middle school and high school without a glossary to help readers understand the terminology. Some of the terminology is related to the horseracing community. Others are United Kingdom English terms and spelling that we in the United States may not know. Having a glossary would have made this part of the story easier. There is also one incident of what is considered swearing in British English.
I love that Evans based this story on an actual event. I also appreciate how she wove Irish culture and events of the 1980’s into the story.
M.J. Evans does a great job of developing the characters and mystery in the book. The main characters are ones that readers will be able to find a connection to, especially if they are interested in horses or have a connection to Ireland. The story has enough twists and turns that the readers want to keep reading. There are also some surprises in the plot.
Finding Fionn could find a place in a K-12 Christian school library. It is appropriate for middle and high school students and possibly more advanced upper elementary students.
I received a complimentary copy of Finding Fionn. This is my honest review.
I love that Evans based this story on an actual event. I also appreciate how she wove Irish culture and events of the 1980’s into the story.
M.J. Evans does a great job of developing the characters and mystery in the book. The main characters are ones that readers will be able to find a connection to, especially if they are interested in horses or have a connection to Ireland. The story has enough twists and turns that the readers want to keep reading. There are also some surprises in the plot.
Finding Fionn could find a place in a K-12 Christian school library. It is appropriate for middle and high school students and possibly more advanced upper elementary students.
I received a complimentary copy of Finding Fionn. This is my honest review.
June 23, 2024
“Finding Fionn - A Mystery Inspired by the Kidnapping of the Irish Racehorse Shergar,” by M.J. Evans is described by the author as “a crime story inspired by this horrific and tragic cold case, but with an ending that I, as a horse-lover, wish had happened.”
Patrick is a lad growing up in Ireland. He dreams of becoming a jockey, though his mother discourages him; she believes it is too dangerous. Patrick’s grandfather steps in and reveals what had been kept hidden from him: Patrick’s father had been a successful jockey, until he died in a tragic riding accident. (We are not told what Patrick had been led to believe about his father.) With his grandfather’s support, Patrick’s mother relents, and Patrick attends a school for jockeys where he learns to ride and take care of for horses. Upon finishing his training, Patrick gets a job at a prestigious stables and is made groom to Fionn, an impressive 2-year-old. When Patrick gets the opportunity to ride Fionn in a race, they win, securing his place as Fionn’s primary jockey. But Fionn is kidnapped, and Patrick is determined to find get the horse he loves back. As a horse-lover, I enjoyed this story and appreciated the satisfying ending, even if it was a bit far-fetched!
Patrick is a lad growing up in Ireland. He dreams of becoming a jockey, though his mother discourages him; she believes it is too dangerous. Patrick’s grandfather steps in and reveals what had been kept hidden from him: Patrick’s father had been a successful jockey, until he died in a tragic riding accident. (We are not told what Patrick had been led to believe about his father.) With his grandfather’s support, Patrick’s mother relents, and Patrick attends a school for jockeys where he learns to ride and take care of for horses. Upon finishing his training, Patrick gets a job at a prestigious stables and is made groom to Fionn, an impressive 2-year-old. When Patrick gets the opportunity to ride Fionn in a race, they win, securing his place as Fionn’s primary jockey. But Fionn is kidnapped, and Patrick is determined to find get the horse he loves back. As a horse-lover, I enjoyed this story and appreciated the satisfying ending, even if it was a bit far-fetched!
June 17, 2024
Like the majority of horse-loving people, I was gripped by the shocking disappearance of the Irish racehorse Shergar in 1983. M.J. Evans has penned a mystery inspired by the kidnapping. In this version, the celebrated racehorse, Fionn, goes missing, and his jockey, Patrick McCallin, sets out to find him.
Patrick is a great protagonist, his devotion to his beloved Fionn, his devastation when he is abducted, and his determined quest to find him evokes the reader’s sympathy and admiration. The pace picks up in the second half, with amateur sleuths Patrick, Ronan, and Maddie making a great trio.
Well-written, and use of the vernacular was expertly executed and enhanced the Irish setting. One glitch for me was a major coincidence, which is central to the plot, that seems unrealistic to an older reader like myself, but this story is targeted at young adults, and maybe wouldn’t be an issue for them.
Overall, this was good crime story, with the spin off from the famous real-life equestrian kidnap greatly enhancing its appeal. I would have loved this book when I was a pony-mad teenager. A recommended YA read, particularly if you are a horse-lover!
Patrick is a great protagonist, his devotion to his beloved Fionn, his devastation when he is abducted, and his determined quest to find him evokes the reader’s sympathy and admiration. The pace picks up in the second half, with amateur sleuths Patrick, Ronan, and Maddie making a great trio.
Well-written, and use of the vernacular was expertly executed and enhanced the Irish setting. One glitch for me was a major coincidence, which is central to the plot, that seems unrealistic to an older reader like myself, but this story is targeted at young adults, and maybe wouldn’t be an issue for them.
Overall, this was good crime story, with the spin off from the famous real-life equestrian kidnap greatly enhancing its appeal. I would have loved this book when I was a pony-mad teenager. A recommended YA read, particularly if you are a horse-lover!
February 13, 2024
"Finding Fionn" masterfully weaves a tale of intrigue and courage, set against the tumultuous backdrop of 1980s Ireland. This gripping narrative draws readers into a world where the fate of a promising racehorse intertwines with the dreams of a young jockey, Patrick McCallin. The story's heart lies in its vivid portrayal of friendship, resilience, and the relentless pursuit of justice, as Patrick and his companions embark on a daring mission to recover Fionn MacCool.
Inspired by the true story of Shergar's kidnapping, the novel transcends the boundaries of a traditional mystery, offering a deep dive into the essence of determination and the spirit of a nation. The characters, rich in depth and authenticity, bring the story to life, ensuring that each twist and turn is felt deeply. "Finding Fionn" is not just a story about a horse or a boy's dream; it's a testament to the power of hope and perseverance amid adversity, making it a compelling read for anyone captivated by the essence of true grit and the allure of the equestrian world.
Inspired by the true story of Shergar's kidnapping, the novel transcends the boundaries of a traditional mystery, offering a deep dive into the essence of determination and the spirit of a nation. The characters, rich in depth and authenticity, bring the story to life, ensuring that each twist and turn is felt deeply. "Finding Fionn" is not just a story about a horse or a boy's dream; it's a testament to the power of hope and perseverance amid adversity, making it a compelling read for anyone captivated by the essence of true grit and the allure of the equestrian world.
August 26, 2024
Reviewed in the United States on August 22, 2024
I picked this book up just because it was about a horse, so I may be slightly biased. I didn't even know if it was a true story or not until I finished it. No matter, I absolutely loved this book.
The story is about a young Irish lad who wants more than anything to be a jockey. He eventually gets to go to a school that teaches kids everything they need to know about horses (more than most of us avid riders know). He falls in love with a horse that is in his care and they both become superstars.
The novel takes place in the 80's when the IRA was quite active. I found this part intriguing as well since as an American, I don't know a whole lot about the "troubles." The horse is abducted and his kid (and his two best-friends) head off on an adventure to rescue him.
Finding Fionn was well researched and well written. It has everything from mystery, excitement to a rewarding ending. I loved it so much, that I wished it was longer. Highly recommend!
I picked this book up just because it was about a horse, so I may be slightly biased. I didn't even know if it was a true story or not until I finished it. No matter, I absolutely loved this book.
The story is about a young Irish lad who wants more than anything to be a jockey. He eventually gets to go to a school that teaches kids everything they need to know about horses (more than most of us avid riders know). He falls in love with a horse that is in his care and they both become superstars.
The novel takes place in the 80's when the IRA was quite active. I found this part intriguing as well since as an American, I don't know a whole lot about the "troubles." The horse is abducted and his kid (and his two best-friends) head off on an adventure to rescue him.
Finding Fionn was well researched and well written. It has everything from mystery, excitement to a rewarding ending. I loved it so much, that I wished it was longer. Highly recommend!
May 19, 2024
This is a book that pulled me into a thrilling journey from the very first page! I absolutely loved it! The story is set in a fascinating time, the 1980s in Ireland, amidst The Troubles, adding depth and tension to the plot. Fionn MacCool, the champion racehorse, and Patrick McCallin, the aspiring jockey, stole my heart with their bond and determination. The author beautifully captures the essence of their partnership, making every race and victory feel real and exhilarating. The suspense and twists kept me eagerly turning pages, rooting for them every step of the way. What I appreciated most is how the book weaves history, friendship, and courage into a captivating tale. The characters felt like old friends, and their journey became my own adventure. Overall, this book is a must-read for anyone who loves a gripping mystery filled with heart, bravery, and the bond between humans and animals. I highly recommend it!
May 28, 2024
What an enjoyable yarn. A wonderful tale that exposes the reader to Irish horseracing, a good bit of Irish culture and also the sad situation surrounding the factions for and opposing the unification of Northern Ireland with the Irish Republic and much more. An on top of that one has the wonderful relationship, perhaps love would be a better word, between a young Irish jockey and one of the stories heroes, the racehorse Fionn.
And of course there has to be a bunch of bad guys to act as foils and there is no shortage of them. Everything from a crooked Arab from Dubai, to a traitor who takes money to place Fionn in the hands of the IRA. I won’t spoil it any further for potential readers but will just say the book kept me engrossed up until the last page.
And of course there has to be a bunch of bad guys to act as foils and there is no shortage of them. Everything from a crooked Arab from Dubai, to a traitor who takes money to place Fionn in the hands of the IRA. I won’t spoil it any further for potential readers but will just say the book kept me engrossed up until the last page.
October 16, 2023
Patrick is a young lad and he dreams of being a jockey as he has a love of horses. Though it is a tough journey he makes it and he connects with a horse called Fionn. Then Fionn is kidnapped and the mystery begins! As a animal lover I instantly connected with this story and the mystery had me hooked. The characters are likeable and down to earth. The story is a small piece of Irish history but I feel it's a big part of people's lives especially for people who have that special human to horse bond, which shines through in the telling of the book. The drama was just a added bonus that makes the book exciting.
October 17, 2023
I loved this story and had so much fun reading it. As a reader, I was engaged with the whole story and never wanted to stop reading. Evans is great at writing quick paced and easy read books. I was on the edge of my seat while reading. There are many twists that I didn’t expect that caused me to pause in my reading to consider how they happened and how the rest of the story would be affected. I enjoyed that even though there was danger and tension within the story, I was never scared. That makes it perfect for the targeted at readers of 12-18, but this is a fun and engaging story for anyone older.
December 11, 2023
I picked up this book for a little light reading on a Sunday afternoon after church. Generally, I read a little and fall asleep. Not this time. It first hooked me because it was a mystery about horses. I’m a big fan of Dick Francis, the late former jockey turned mystery writer, and this book has some of the same feeling. It also hooked me because it was based on a real-life kidnapping of an Irish racehorse. Of course, the historian in me had to look up everything I could find on the actual kidnapping. To anyone who cares for horses, this was a tragic event. And of course, a third hook was Ireland. I recently had the opportunity to visit Ireland for the first time, and it was everything I thought it would be.
The book is fast-paced with lots of surprises and well worth reading.
The book is fast-paced with lots of surprises and well worth reading.
October 8, 2023
This was a gripping novel about a young boy, Patrick McCallin, who grew up loving horses and how he became a famous jockey of a remarkable thoroughbred Irish racing horse called Fionn. The intrigue started when the famous horse was found missing and Patrick and his friends' determination to rescue him. The story was set during a time of political turmoil in Northern Ireland, which enriched the story with historical significance. It's a great read that I would recommend to anyone 12 years old and up!
May 5, 2025
An interesting read about a famous Irish racehorse that is kidnapped and held for ransom during the time known as The Troubles. Based on the actual kidnaping of Shergar in the early 1980s, it takes a lot of license in the telling. The heroes are young people, graduates of RACE (Racing Academy & Centre of Education), who eventually recover Fionn. However, there were times when I thought it would have been prudent to get the Garda (the Irish Republic State Police) involved, it most likely would not have been as interesting a tale. All in all, I enjoyed the book - it was an interesting look at what might have happened to one of the world's famous Irish racehorses.
October 17, 2023
This story has it all. Set in Ireland, young Patrick McCallin finds a path to follow his heart and become a jockey. Along the way, he forges close friendships with others who love horses and racing. When a valuable racehorse is kidnapped for ransom, Patrick vows to find him. Finding Fionn takes the reader on the rollicking twists and turns of a great mystery story. Don’t miss this adventure. You’ll enjoy the ride.
December 28, 2023
"Finding Fionn" by M.J. Evans is a captivating narrative that seamlessly intertwines the fervor of horse racing with the tumultuous backdrop of 1980s Ireland, gripped by the weight of The Troubles. Inspired by the real-life abduction of the renowned Irish racehorse Shergar, this mystery novel plunges readers into a whirlwind of suspense and determination.
July 15, 2024
The author’s passion for history and horses really comes through in this story. The writing is fluid and lovely, and the history is fascinating. I appreciated the authentic feel of conversations between the Irish characters. I also liked how a team of young friends came together to foil Fionn’s captors— Scooby Doo vibes.
October 16, 2023
Full of heart stopping imagery! M. J. Evans knows how to weave a tale that sucks you in and makes you feel the character’s emotions. I love the historical Irish setting and the moving story, and of course, horses. It's a big must read!
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