I don’t believe I’ve ever read this author before, and she has a slightly juvenile writing style.
The Hero came off as a predator when they first meet, which was icky, but ultimately was revealed as a nice guy. I certainly loved his dedication to his nieces and nephew.
The heroine, Harriet, was tolerable until she made a ridiculous assumption. The “I KNOW your secret” trope, when in reality they know nothing drives me bananas. You have suspicions... you don’t have any facts. And in this case, she was wildly off base! Her imagination spiraled so far so fast that she came across as an overly dramatic high school girl. I should point out that her character was meant to be intelligent, no-nonsense and pragmatic, which is why her spiraling was so jarringly out of character.
I used to love the governess-lord set up in romance, but it really hasn’t aged well. The power dynamic is off, and it’s beyond inappropriate to root for a man making sexual advances towards a woman in his employ and living in his home. I’m not saying it can never be done under the right circumstances, but this definitely wasn’t it. The one saving grace was that Harriet didn’t really have to be a governess, and could go home to her rich and kind brother whenever she chose. Also, Harriet was often the aggressor, which I guess was supposed to help with those power dynamic issues, but she came across as someone with a split personality. There was a jerkiness to the storytelling and the pacing was off.
I will give props to the author for the beginning of the book, in that I really wasn’t sure where she was going with the story. Overall, though, I wished for a better written book.