This is my The Shadow Builder review for week three of the Bram Stoker read-along on The bookish Report YouTube channel.
Synopsis
The Shadow Builder dwells in the gloomy nether regions of the universe, lonely and haunting in his realm. He dwells in the area beyond the Gate of Dread, where the great procession meets its final end. The Shadow Builder sees all from his gloom, happiness and sadness, hope and despair. He focuses intently on the relationship between a mother and son, watching everything unfold from his Threshold. It is from these two that he learns the truth about his power, the power of death.
Plot
The story starts off with a few pages of info-dumping so we have will understand the story. We don't meet the mother and son mentioned in the synopsis until nearly halfway in.
We have a few concepts from the opening pages that we need to understand. The Procession of the Dead Past, which is a series of scenes from peoples lives that come and go, which the Shadow Builder sees projected on the walls of his home.
We have the Gates of Dread which is a blackness where the scenes fro the Procession pass on to.
There is the Threshold which is a place somewhere near the Shadow Builder and the other two places mentioned.
The Shadow Builder himself takes a special interest in a mother and son. We see the son as a child, then as a sailor, then stranded on an island after a storm. This is shown to us as a series of vignettes that the Shadow Builder is seeing as they pass through the Procession of the Dead Past.
The mother is summoned by the Shadow Builder to see one of the scenes of her son looking out at sea for a passing ship that might save him. She manages to get a crew and a ship and goes out looking for him. This is done as a series of vignettes as well.
Character Work
In the character work, Stoker explores the maternal relationship of a mother towards her child.
The story is my first Bram Stoker Story told in the third-person and I didn't like it. I felt distanced from the characters because of this viewpoint and because of the nature of the in and out style as the scenes came and went along the Procession.
Setting
The setting didn't give me any satisfaction because it wasn't a real place that I could imagine. It was described as spectral and dark and cloudy. I would have liked something tangible to anchor the descriptions in, but what we got was more ambiguous. I'm not saying that is a bad thing, or that you shouldn't do it. I didn't like it though.
This is a story that didn't work for me and I'm keen to put it behind me. Immediately after reading it, I watched the 1998 adaptation. I wouldn't bother with that either. The only thing it has in common with the short story is the title. The Shadow Builder in the movie doesn't even do the same things as in the story.