3.5⭐️ overall. [2.5, 3, 3.5, 4 ⭐️ moments] It’s a fun kinda roller coaster!
The conclusion for this, not the cliffy-next-book-ending, was definitely 4⭐️.
However, there was also moments more equal to 3⭐️’s, as well as some 2.5⭐️ moments.
So I’m rounding this up to somewhere in between.
Beautifully written, with easy to read dialogue, flowing, natural conversations, good pacing, original storyline, all up, so much to love.
While there were some minor typo issues and a few medium-ish info dumps, to be fair, any issues I had, were about personal preference.
We get dropped straight in, which on its own I have no problem with.
The problem is that bad things happen right from get go, one after another, before we’ve developed a care for the FMC.
Clearly meant to be part humorous, but we have no relationship or reason to care…
Plus, the bubblegum, cheery-ditzy personality, with no counter balance until much later, made it difficult for me to like her initially.
The humour was hit or miss for me.
When it hit, it was LOL, but when it missed, it felt a little young, and or, cringe.
A lot of slap stick, and miscommunication, or manipulation.
One scene is innocent, but potentially appears other, so is hilarious in its suspicion.
Another, also innocent, but appears curious, but not suspicious, so the rude response is just that, rude, not funny.
You have an awesome, snarky, sarcastic character. But they talk as if maybe they are a friend after all, then 2 comments later, deliver a line that is truly hurtful. Our FMC says as much, but then bounces back.
I’m not laughing here.
However, you know how you have those moments where you’re screaming it’s so obvious, or why aren’t they asking this, etc.? All plot devices intended to drive a story, just not done well enough…
Weeeell, here, our cluey FMC asks those questions, makes the observations, notices the obvious.
It’s AWESOME!
Not always right away, but close enough.
The only blatantly obvious one she misses, is the Uber baddie. An oversight the baddie notes at the end.
I love that sneaky, make fun of yourself, style of humour. If only the author had included more of this…
One of the funniest lines is when our plucky FMC makes fun of herself, talking out loud, noting how ridiculous she is.
Just once, not the overdone lines, where the author offers 5-7 different option, as she does at other sections. 😳🙄
We needed more interaction with the dogs, a better arc.
Moreover, I’m not a fan of perfect dogs through…love 🤷♀️…That kind of prefect obedience requires continuous training…or magic.
Didn’t see either, or just a hint of something, to make them more than story props.
The ending was so brilliant, fun, quirky, messy, and original [minus the soooo obvious baddie 😂🥱 which was kinda fun in its on the nose way…].
Didn’t like the cliffy, mostly cause I was just starting to like this character, and didn’t like having to question that. 😬
So, would I recommend this?
Easily!
Definitely read this. The teething problems this new series has [for me] , are just that, and easily overcome in time.
Plus, no doubt the humour as is, will suit many, as will the cutesy moments that I cringed through 😬
Give it a go and decide for yourself, it’s worth it.
p.s. this is straight up urban fantasy, the romance will obviously happen..later…much later 🤷♀️