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Merlin's Immortals #2

Fortress of Mist

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  “Full of surprising twists, shocking betrays, and baffl ing mysteries. But at it’s heart it’s about courage, wisdom, and hope…”—Robert Liparulo, author of The 13th Tribe, The Judgment Stone, and the Dreamhouse Kings seriesThe throne is redeemed, but the battle is just beginning.           In the dark corners of an ancient land, evil lurks in the shadows. Powerful druids haunt the spaces of their lost territory. Double-minded noblemen fight for domain and influence. Invaders from the north threaten the kingdom of Magnus. This land of promise and redemption is mired in deceit and corruption.  The Orphan King, once victorious in conquest, appears to be losing his grip on his seat of power. Thomas rules Magnus, but does not know whom he can trust. His enemies anticipate his every move, thwarting him at each turn. Something is not right. Under attack, both in the supernatural and natural worlds, Thomas must reach back into the secret layers of his past to find the strength and wisdom to fight his battles. When the mist clears, who will stand with him?

224 pages, Paperback

First published February 1, 2013

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834 reviews
May 17, 2013
This is my first review of a book from Waterbrook Multmonah, so thanks to them for giving me a free copy. See review and rating link here http://crossromance.blogspot.co.uk/20...

To start with the positives Fortress of Mist did seem to be well-written and engaging. For a work of YA fiction the style did not seem amateurish or over-simplistic, and with some great use of description and language. The concept and storyline seemed original, and there were some well-drawn and interesting characters. Thomas of course the hero I liked, but also to some extent his shady comrade the Earl of York. For a children’s book it handled some of the subject matter, such as the power politics quite well, in a way that younger readers could understand.

Not all of the characters seemed well developed however; some were perhaps a little one -dimensional or simplistic. Some of the plot devices too seemed a little over-used or predicable. Lots of special potions slipped into food over and over again, or characters disguising themselves as older people.
However I had a couple of major issues with this book.

I have not read the first book, and so don’t know much about the back story but it combines a real historical setting with various fantastical elements such as druids, and a group of supposedly immortal human beings who seem to be followers of Merlin. I know druids really existed- but not in 14th century England as they were all wiped out by the Romans in the 1st century (who did not try to convert them as the novel claims).

Both seem to be possessed of supernatural powers of some description (or at least are clever at making people think they are). One of the ‘good’ immortals is described as going into a trance-like state to gain knowledge. The resemblance of this to certain practices in the occult should not, I think, be overlooked.

Another was that it contained a lot of misconceptions about the medieval period, such as the claim that most people were illiterate, and associated science with magic. As a student of Medieval History, these irked me, not least because they are just plain wring (at least for the specific setting of 14th century England anyway), but also because of the way that Medieval people were depicted as superstitious fools supposedly almost entirely ignorant of science, medicine, and even military strategy.

Thomas for instance derives most of his strategic (as well as scientific and practical) knowledge from his secret books of ancient ‘wisdom’ because supposedly his Medieval English fellows were so stupid and narrow minded that they hardly knew anything about anything. I felt that the depiction of the supposed backwardness, unpleasantness and 'darkness' of this period seemed to be exaggerated. 14th century people certainly knew more than this author gave them credit for, including certain things which supposedly only the druids and Immortals knew about like astronomy.
There were a couple of plain old errors too- like the ‘Scottish’ warrior from Carlisle which is in England or the claim that nobles just allowed peasants to do most of the fighting in battle from their position of safety.

There were references to the church and clergy, which are to be expected. Generally the former was depicted as a corrupt and morally bankrupt institution, which was in many respects, true.
There is a good Christian who is s friend and mentor of Thomas the hero, and wants to teach him about Christ and true Biblical Christianity- not the false version the church represented.
A character called Katherine also makes a comeback who supposedly taught Thomas about God in the last book. Yet perhaps she and her fellow immortal Hawkwood depended too much on cunning, their ‘secret wisdom’ and dubious special powers?

Overall Fortress of Mist is not a book I would feel comfortable recommending because of the possibility of readers believing things which are historically inaccurate , and some of the spiritual implications.
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1,275 reviews33 followers
December 28, 2013
In the second book of this series, we find Thomas of Magnus going about the daily routines of a typical king. However, this king feels a gnawing in his bones that something isn’t quite right. The air around him screams of him being watched and nowhere will see him safely alone and secluded to even his own thoughts. He is a troubled king who hopes for peace but knows that it will cost him dearly in the end.

He is haunted by the loss of Isabella who he started to have feelings for before she was killed, and he hopes to see his missing friend Katherine again who helped him claim his throne without even one loss of life. While on the verge of trying to figure out a mystery involving his love Isabella, he is forcibly thrust into an unwelcomed and unexpected war with the Scots as demanded by the Earl of York. Unfortunately, he must leave his city while his reign is enshrouded in uncertainty in order to keep favor with the Earl and not invite further danger to his already shaky rule.

He is then faced with being the new kid among the battle-hardened lords of the regions that are under the Earl of York. He must prove himself to be capable of not only of fighting this war, but ultimately of turning the tide in this battle. He must face betrayal at all sides without having one friend to protect him or to give him good advice as everyone else is watching him closely to see how he will handle all of these trials and hardships. His resolve and heart is once again put to the test. He never seems to get a break as he fights one battle after another in order to stay alive not only in the battle camp but also in the real battle with the Scots.

One good thing that comes from the battle with the Scots was the fortunate opportunity to discover who the true enemy is that is he is fighting against for rule of his city of Magnus. He learns that they call themselves Druids and they are dark priests that live on the isle of the Celts. They overthrew the old rulers of Magnus and are determined to regain it back from Thomas at any cost. Thomas is now beginning to unravel the mystery behind the Druids and the ways in which they impose and keep their rule of oppression over the people in his city. He is more determined than ever to ensure that Magnus doesn’t fall to their evil ways, and that he remains king of the city that was once ruled by his parents.

Even though Thomas is ultimately left to fight this war with the Druids on his own, hope is still alive in the form of another group who is keeping a close eye on him. This other group hides themselves just as well as the Druids, but they do offer help to Thomas when he is in dire need of it. They are known as the Immortals. They will not reveal themselves until Thomas has made his choice of whether or not to join the Druids. If Thomas chooses not to join the Druids, they will show themselves to him and become his allies. He can win this battle with their help, but the choice as always lies with Thomas.

This story is very fast-paced and jammed packed with all the essential elements of a wonderful story. I got lost in the writing and found myself walking next to Thomas wishing that I could tell him not to lose heart. I sometimes forgot that these are just characters in a book and not the people that I have become friends with over the course of this story. It’s disheartening when I read the last word in these two magical books and know that this story now has a large pause until I get to find out what happens next. I find myself missing the short but meaningful time I have spent with these wonderful characters, and I long to know what will happen next. I hope with all of my heart that the story will end with Thomas finding out who his friends really are and that he is not alone. He is surrounded by hope and love, and I dream of the day that his eyes will open and he will see what I am beginning to see and understand.
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Author 46 books459 followers
May 29, 2013
Age Appropriate For: 12 and up for mild violence, murder, and thematic elements

Best for Ages: 13 - 18

I was so excited to get my hands on the second book in the Merlin's Immortals series. I had loved book one and it left me hanging. I read Fortress of Mist in a day.

I have to say the cover drew me once again to this book. As with the first book, I don’t they could have made a more awesome cover. I can’t wait to see what they do for the cover of the next book.
The story had many unexpected twists, turns and heart stopping moments. The non-stop action kept me turning pages until the very end. Sigmund Brouwer’s writing is original and refreshingly different form many authors out there.

There are a couple of things about this book that I didn’t like as much, but those things didn’t keep me from enjoying the book. To me there was a lot of confusions surrounding one of the characters. I understand that Brouwer is building up for a big reveal in a future book, but it got a little frustrating at a couple points in the book. Also, some of the scenes that had to do with the Druids were a little creepy.

I can’t wait for the next book. Not only am I eager to see the adventure turns out, but also to see how the faith element develops.

I recommend this book for those how love adventure, suspense, and a story that isn’t typical.

I received this book from WaterBrook Press through Blogging for Books in exchange for my honest review. I was under no obligation to write a positive review. The opinions in this review are entirely my own.
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Author 45 books419 followers
March 4, 2013
Fortress of Mist is Medieval fiction at its best. The setting rang true as did the emotion and fear of the people. If you enjoy stories involving castles, lords, superstition, herbalists, treachery, battles between clans, druids, and legends, you will enjoy this book. There were real players in this story such as Robert the Bruce, king of the Scots and the Earl of York. Edward II is also mentioned in this novel. I love stories containing real legends and players from the time period.

There is darkness building and brewing across the land. Secrets are brought forth that have yet to be revealed. The end of the story is pretty intense, yet leaves the door wide open for the next installment. I did not read the first book in the series, The Orphan King, but there was just enough background and history trickled into the story to give me the background I needed to understand Thomas, Lord of Magnus, and the was he came to be in charge of the castle and village. I look forward to reading the next book.
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13 reviews16 followers
March 13, 2013
I won this book thanks to goodreads first reads giveaways and the author.

This book is one of secrets and of an unknown power that Thomas won’t join or give into, he is constantly searching for answers to these secrets but it is hard for him because he can trust so few people. He does however have secrets of his own, the library of books he keeps that fills him with knowledge that helps him through a battle, however these books do not always have all the answers he needs.

The author did a great job describing the scenes in this book as well as the characters. It was a simple yet complex story of struggles, secrets, and power.

I will be looking for the author’s first book The Orphan King, as this was the second book in the series. I also look forward to reading other books from this author in the future.
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April 11, 2025
Another fun book by Sigmund Brouwer. Book two of his Merlin’s Immortals series. Thomas of Magnus has his castle but the fight is far from over. He now has to deal with keeping his castle, as well as trying to find the mystery behind the druids. Lots of twists and turns in this short novel. By the end you don’t know who to trust!
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460 reviews61 followers
April 12, 2013
After successfully (and bloodlessly) taking the city of Magnus in The Orphan King, young Thomas quickly learns that keeping a kingdom can be just as much of a challenge as acquiring one. Thomas finds himself up to his neck in political maneuvering, as the King demands his assistance in the ongoing war with the Scots, and treasonous spies try to incite the neighboring lords against him. Meanwhile, Thomas is plagued by seeming visions of the lovely (and supposedly dead) Isabelle. But it is Katherine, the kind, fire-scarred girl, who Thomas most wishes to see. Both women are drawn to Thomas, and both seek Thomas's allegiance (and his inherited collection of mystical books) for a powerful force: the Druids, who control so much of the land, and those who would oppose them. Will Thomas be able to hold Magnus in the face of these challenges? Will he align himself with the Druids, who offer limitless power and immortality? Will he side with their opponents? Or will he forge a separate path?

This installment isn't quite as chock full of fantasy goodness as the last one--there's more politicking, and lots and lots of talking. Still, there are potions and Druid 'spells' and (uneventful) battles and lots of disguises and lies and whatnot, so it's not a total loss.

The storyline here didn't feel quite as complete as The Orphan King--there, the central conflict (will Thomas be able to take Magnus?) was resolved, while still leaving plenty of fodder for future books (who are the Druids? Why do they want Thomas's books? Who are the Immortals? Are they good? What gives?). Here, the 'central conflict' is, well, I guess it's whether Thomas can keep Magnus, but it's kind of confusing. The big showdown involves Thomas's performance at the battle with the Scots, but there's all this stuff about Isabelle visiting him in the night, and secret passages, and Katherine popping up at various times in various disguises and chatting with some old guy about how Thomas had to side with them or else even though they would absolutely not tell Thomas anything about anything (including who they heck they are). It was fine to keep the Immortals and the Druids in the dark for the first volume, but we still don't know anything about the Immortals, and all we know about the Druids is that they are eeeevil. Maybe. Probably. It got kind of confusing, honestly, and the closing pages felt more like an anticlimax or an internal break than the end of a book.

I found myself feeling oddly detached from the characters this time around. The humorous relief offered by the scamp and the knight Thomas befriended in the first book is absent from Fortress of Mist. It is, for the most part, a very, very serious book, and I don't think it needs to be. Katherine is still intriguing (if rather conveniently attractive), and I liked the Earl, but I found myself losing interest in Isabelle, Thomas, Geoffrey, and the others--especially reading about Thomas Struggling with the Burdens of Leadership.

Also, the spiritual content here is rather disjointed. Gervaise, the 'real' Christian in the series, continues to chat up Thomas about God and whatnot, but Thomas doesn't seem to undergo any real change or even have much in the way of inner monologue about spiritual matters. He's far more focused on dealing with the Druids, and has no time for God. If we're going to see the eventual conversion of Thomas, I think it would make more sense to lay better groundwork and show gradual heart change in each book.

I realize this series is an expansion of Brouwer's earlier Winds of Light series, but honestly, I think this particular volume needed to be fleshed out more or something. The Orphan King was a much more enjoyable read.

I received this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for this review.
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55 reviews25 followers
May 8, 2013
A fast paced first book, The Orphan King, saw Thomas coming of age, setting off to reclaim his fortress, Magnus, and successfully recapturing the legendary keep. I expected this second book to have less action and focus instead on the two conspiracies that still remain hidden in the shadows around Thomas. While these opposing forces certainly came into play, much of the story still revolved around battles and the question of Thomas’ right to the throne.

The first thing that really struck me about the second book was the rampant magical use. All right. I jest. However, Mr. Brouwer is clearly in the “magic is science we don’t understand yet” camp. We learned a great deal more about Thomas’ hidden library and how it is the key to his claiming and holding Magnus. In a move very reminiscent of Mark Twain’s Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur’s Court, Thomas begins introducing technology to his kingdom that is centuries before it’s time. While we saw a bit of this with the powders and herbs in the first book, I had no idea that the knowledge in those books is so powerful and pivotal. You can definitely see both why the common people would perceive these things as magical and why the two societies are hell bent on obtaining them.

As for the two shadow groups, I thought they managed to be both the best and weakest part of the book. We learned a great deal about them during this entry in the series. We know that one side, presumably the bad guys, are the druids. And we know that both sides really want Thomas’ books. In many ways the sneaking and the disguises feels like a medieval Mission Impossible episode. I truly enjoyed watching them plot and pull at their various webs, trying desperately to trap Thomas. I adore this take on the druids and can’t wait to learn more about them. I genuinely felt Thomas’ frustration as he tries to learn who to trust. And that there is part of the problem. I’m literally as frustrated as the main character over the lack of information. I can see the benefit to leaving the reader somewhat in the dark, but by now I think we should have learned a lot more about the “good guys.”

Based on the little we’ve gleaned, they are in opposition to the druids, but who they are and their purpose in seeking the books is unclear. (As is, I might add, the origin of all this amazing knowledge.) If I were trying to bet on the outcome of the series simply based on these two books, I’d say that both sides are evil and playing Thomas. I don’t actually think that’s true, and I’m sure we’ll learn more about the Light Side down the road. However, that is the impression the group is giving at the moment. I admit it’s possibly a knee jerk reaction on my part to the fact that both sides are using young women to get at Thomas. It’s an element that seemed fitting for the evil druids, if still uncomfortable, but for the good guys to be using it just seems wrong. I would far rather have the Templar Knight be their lesion with Thomas.

Where does that leave me with the Fortress of Mist book and the Merlin’s Immortals series itself? Cautiously optimistic is probably the best phrase. There’s a lot of good in these books and heaps of potential for the series. But there’s enough questions needing answers right now for the jury to be out on the series as whole. If you really love tales of Arthur and alternate histories though and are willing to give an in-progress series a shot, definitely check these books out at: http://waterbrookmultnomah.com/blog/t... Even you don't end up loving the whole series these first two books do provide fun reads with lots of swords and legends.

My thanks to Waterbrook Multnomah for providing me with a copy of Fortress of Mist in return for my honest opinion of the book
256 reviews4 followers
May 21, 2013
Review (spoilers included): This book was full of mystery. It starts out with the main character Thomas being visited in his bedroom by a young lady that he thought was dead. Isabelle came to see if Thomas would be part of a mysterious alliance. Thomas had been curious about this group before Isabelle "died." He finds himself cautious now and not sure that he wants to be a part of this alliance. He is not sure that he can trust some one who was able to make him think she was dead. He suspects some type of magic or trickery. He begins to study herbs and potions and figures out how Isabelle was able to seem dead. Thomas learns that the alliance Isabelle is with is known as the Droids. They are known for witchery and are not spoken of highly. They are a group that the people in his kingdom are scared to confront.

Thomas later meets the Earl of York. The Earl wants to see where Thomas' loyalty lies. The Earl asks Thomas to join him in battle against the Scots.Thomas agrees to go to battle to show the Earl of York that he is not the enemy. Thomas and the Earl defeat the Scots and form a friendship. The friendship is threatened when the Earl's son lies to him and tells him that Thomas is not who he says.

Once Thomas has returned to his kingdom he is visited by one of the Druid leaders. This leader wants Thomas to join him but Thomas refuses. The leader then threatens Thomas and his kingdom and tells him that Thomas will not prosper. He tells Thomas that he will send a sign of bats falling from the sky to scare his kingdom and make them turn against him. Thomas is not threatened. He loves his kingdom and knows that he can prove to them that he is here to protect them from people like the Droids.

A young lady by the name of Katherine has been hiding through out the book in a disguise. She had helped Thomas take the kingdom of Magnus. She had to fake being burned and go in hiding for Thomas' sake. She is now coming back to see if Thomas is going to become part of the Droids. She hides in the secret passage ways and hears Thomas talk to the leader of the Droids. She is impressed that he does not join them but is still uncertain of his loyalty. She decides to show herself and try and learn more of Thomas' loyalty. He is glad to see her and wants to restart their friendship. He starts to put things together and realizes that Katherine has secrets and was able to trick him too. He wonders if she is part of Isabelle's plan? He has a hard time trusting her. He realizes that the mask on her face is not really hiding burns and that it was a ploy. He makes her take her mask off and tell him the truth. She refuses because a man by the name of Hartwood told her to not let her emotions get in the way. She has to wait and see if she can trust Thomas. Thomas is hurt that she will not trust him so he asks her to leave Magnus.

The book ends there. It is setting up for book three. I think that this book would be one that students would enjoy reading. It is full of mystery and keeps you guessing. (rev. S.Wall, Food Services)

DISCLOSURE: A complimentary copy of fortress of Mist was provided by Waterbrook Press on behalf of the author, Sigmund Brouwer in exchange for our honest review. Opinions expressed are solely those of the reviewer.
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255 reviews1 follower
November 5, 2013
This book was a great sequel to book one in this series. It was just as intriguing, just as gripping, and just as clean as the first book had been.

I had troubles getting into the story, just as I had in book one. I'm not sure what it is with this writer but it took me a good twelve chapters to really be interested in the storyline. (his chapters are only a few pages long each so they were pretty short.) Granted, if I had been able to read this book directly after I finished the first one, I would have probably finished it in a day. However, as it was, I wasn't able to read it until several months after reading the first one and by that time, I had read so many other books that I was struggling to remember how the first book of the series had ended.

This book was also a bit difficult to choose the star rating. It was verging on a four star rating. It was clean, it had adventure, a tad bit of romance, and there was a mystery to be solved along with the many questions that had been left unanswered in book one. I gave this book three stars because while it was as equally gripping as the first one, by the end, the questions that I had from book one were still pretty much left unanswered. This book felt more like a filler book. There was information that was shared which is important to know in order to continue the series though, so it wasn't a waste to read. It just failed to feel complete. Outside of this book, in looking at the series so far, it just feels like a dragged out story. I keep reading because I want to find out what happens and instead, I keep getting more unanswered questions added to the pile.

The storyline of this book alone was spotty. There were moments where I was captivated and moments where I was bored. I probably would have found this book series more interesting when I was younger though and it is, overall, a pretty good series.

There is one up side to this writer and that is that a lot of his ideas and writing choices feel unique and original. Sure there were secret passageways and battles like any medieval series would have, but there was also some fake sorcery, secret books, and... well other secrets that I won't mention because I don't want to give anything away. Let's just say there were some good surprises so it wasn't a waste of time to read.

There was also the sprinkling of continued Christian values in this book. It wasn't much, but it did set the series up for more delving into this subject in the later books. I'm looking forward to seeing where the characters take their faith and where the author takes the story to in this area.

In the end, after I managed to read past those twelve chapters, I enjoyed the book a lot more. I give the book three stars because, although it was pretty good, it just didn't fully meet my expectations. And I'm kind of still waiting for that WOW moment. It hasn't happened yet over the last two books.
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460 reviews59 followers
March 21, 2013
This is book two in the Merlin’s Immortals series and I honestly thought it was much better than the first book. I will say, if you haven’t read book one then don’t pick this one up as it would be really hard to follow if you didn’t know the back story. I thought there was a definite improvement in the excitement factor in this book. I’m not sure why but the first book seemed to drag at times for me. I can’t wait to see how the next book turns out!



Thomas has reclaimed the throne of Magnus but a threat rises against his new leadership—the druids. Further, a neighboring kingdom is insisting that Thomas help in England’s fight against invaders from the north and he’s obligated to help—though he fears that the Earl of York may be working with the secret sect of druids that seek his throne.

In this tale we were whisked away to a land of hidden secrets and hints of magic. Two beautiful women also crave Thomas’ attention—one who hopes in secret and another who is brazen in her attempts to seduce him into the hands of the druids.

I feel that these stories fall into the fantasy genre but they don’t really read as such and I almost crave that and wish I saw more exploration of that element but they’re still good quick reads. Also, unlike the last book I did see more of a Christian element with this book—mainly from the priest. Though this series doesn’t necessarily make it to my “to keep and reread” shelf they’re still worth the read!
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I received Fortress of Mist (Merlin's Immortals #2) as a complimentary gift in exchange for an honest review from Waterbrook Multnomah Publishers. I was not required to write a positive review. My comments and opinions are my own.
229 reviews3 followers
March 15, 2013
The throne is redeemed, but the battle is just beginning.
In the dark corners of an ancient land, evil lurks in the shadows. Powerful druids haunt the spaces of their lost territory. Double-minded noblemen fight for domain and influence. Invaders from the north threaten the kingdom of Magnus. This land of promise and redemption is mired in deceit and corruption.

The Orphan King, once victorious in conquest, appears to be losing his grip on his seat of power. Thomas rules Magnus, but does not know whom he can trust. His enemies anticipate his every move, thwarting him at each turn. Something is not right.

Under attack, both in the supernatural and natural worlds, Thomas must reach back into the secret layers of his past to find the strength and wisdom to fight his battles. When the mist clears, who will stand with him?

Fortress of Mist by Sigmund Brouwer is the second novel in his Merlin's Immortals Series. This novel picks up at the end of the first novel, The Orphan King. The plot line of Fortress of Mist is fast paced and is filled with mystery, suspense, romance, deceit, and betrayal. The narration is told primarily from the perspective of Thomas, the Orphan King, with some portions told from other characters' points of view. I thought that the first novel's storyline developed slowly and choppily with little plot development, but I found the plot of Fortress of Mist to be more well written, smoother, and had a more development since it was a continuation of the first novel. The suspense and mystery created in Fortress of Mist were excellent and surprised me multiple times as the novel continued.

The characters of Fortress of Mist were varied in their amount of development. Some of the characters, such as Thomas and Katherine, became more developed and had more dimension as the author revealed more about them than in the first book. Other characters, both new and old, remained one dimensional, were hard to identify with, and did not add much to the story because of their lack of depth. I liked learning more about Katherine in this story, but I still felt like there was too much left in the dark about both Thomas and Katherine and it made it hard for me to relate to them as the story continued. I like the mystery of the Merlin's Immortal series, but I find that there might be too much unrevealed, making it hard to properly identify with the characters.

Overall I found Fortress of Mist to be an interesting yet quick read. This novel flows directly out of The Orphan King, so I would highly recommend reading this novels in order. The plot of Fortress of Mist was slightly better than the first novel, and some of the characters did develop a little more as well. However, I think that these books could be improved significantly if they were made longer and contained more revelation and character development.

I received this novel for free from Waterbrook Multnomah Press in exchange for an honest review.
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Author 29 books162 followers
March 4, 2013
Fortress of Mist
Merlin's Immortals Book 2
By Sigmund Brouwer

Thomas of Magnus has reclaimed his kingdom, but he feels isolated and lonely. Sarah is dead, William has left, and Katherine has disappeared.

But when Isabelle comes to him during the night, he is confused because he saw her die after being clubbed by Geoffrey. But Isabelle refuses to answer Thomas's questions until he pledges his allegiance to the symbol. But Thomas is unwilling to blindly pledge his allegiance to the unknown or to give up what has been left to his care.

All too soon the Earl of York comes to Magnus and Thomas is again tested. Thomas agrees to ally himself with the Earl in battle against the Scots. But treachery follows Thomas as secret forces of opposition try to sway him to their side. But all Thomas knows is that those of the symbol are after his knowledge - the books left to his care and hidden away from Magnus.

Following Thomas' suggestions the forces under the Earl prevail against the larger Scot army. But treachery awaits Thomas' return as the Druids try to force his hand or bring about his death at the hands of the Earl of York. Following the instructions of a message Thomas is able to persuade his accusers of his innocence.

But who can Thomas trust as those around him try to manipulate him to their ends? With no one willing to answer his questions Thomas must rely on the teachings he received as a child from Sarah. Can no one fill the need in Thomas' life?

I found Katherine's struggles to be an intriguing part of the story. She has her alligences, but she wants to help Thomas. I'll be interested to see how her story develops in book 3.

I found Fortress of Mist to be an excellent sequel to The Orphan King and would highly recommend it. I received this book on the 19th the day it was released so I had to do some speed reading after I got home from work. To complicate this the new Celtic Thunder DVD Mythology was also released on the 19th so of course I had to listen to that as I read. Celtic music while reading about Druids in England is somewhat appropriate if I do say so myself and made for an enjoyable if long evening.

If anyone has heard of the One Community, One Book program I have a suggestion to make this a family activity. For your One Family, Two Books event have teens and adults read The Orphan King and Fortress of Mist and middle grade readers read Wings of an Angel and Barbarians from the Isle. You'll be able to read the same books in an age / length appropriate manner and you'll have fun sharing these books by Sigmund Brouwer!
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265 reviews18 followers
February 17, 2013
In Fortress of Mist by Sigmund Brouwer, Thomas is now ruler over Magnus. He is bereft of love and still in the dark about his enemies, but the Earl of York is seen approaching the castle.

Thomas doesn’t know if the York means war or peace. After the two convene together, Thomas pledges his loyalty to the king and the Earl of York, but the Earl of York asks for back-up as he goes to war against the Scots on behalf of the King of England. The Earl of York wears the ring with the symbol of the Druids. Is he friend or foe? Thomas has also been visited by Isabelle, a lovely and wiley woman who died in book one. Isabelle is one of the Druids and not really dead. Katherine is still around, but as far as Thomas is concerned, gone.

While peace reigns within the walls of Magnus, the people seem happy and the soldiers loyal. Thomas has changed since book one. He is less youthful and more wise, seeking a bloodless battle with the Scots, rather than a battle where more widows and fatherless daughters and sons are the result. Thomas manages to impress the other earls with his plan and defeats the Scots. However, challenges exist as the Druids begin to try to poison and attack Thomas on the way to the battle. Thomas, once again, defies their attacks. He is aware of two forces vying for his loyalty. Both meet him on the way to battle.

Katherine of the Immortals in her varied disguises follows to protect and Isabelle and the Druids attack and poison. That’s when Isabelle’s true intentions are read in the pages. She is nothing more than a spoiled nobleman’s daughter who wants Thomas as a husband, but the Druids control her future when the leader of the organization threatens the life of her father. Katherine loses Thomas near the end of the book when Thomas declares her untrustworthy and banishes her from Magnus.

That’s where the novel ended. It left me frustrated like watching a season finale when the bad guy blows up the hero and we are left hanging all summer for the first episode of the new season to see if the hero lives. While the ending was good, I don’t like to wait to see what happens. Now I am forced to wait for the third book in the series. For that, I docked it a star, rating it four stars. Again, it’s an excellent novel and now I am committed to reading this series to the end.

In conjunction with the CSFF Blog Tour, I received a free copy of this book from the publisher.
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9,342 reviews184 followers
May 5, 2013
Merlin's Immortals is a revised and updated version of Brouwer's The Winds of Light series. I haven't read the original, so I'm not exactly sure how much of this is added or revised material.

Thomas, Lord of Magnus, now that he has established his authority is turning more of his attention to the questions of who the forces are that wish to challenge him and who is trying to help him. But matters of state interrupt his research. The Earl of York calls on him to help battle the Scots who are threatening the northern borders of England, and Thomas must prove his worth as a military commander and leader to the Earl and other Lords, while managing to stay alive as mysterious others try to poison and attack him. The Druids, Thomas discovers, are behind much of the evil, but he still knows so little of who the Druids are. After the Scots are dealt with, someone is working to create horrible misunderstandings between the Earl of York and Thomas, with Magnus in the center of the ordeal. Since the Druids and the Immortals both use similar methods to sway events to their own ends, Thomas still does not know who to trust.

Another well-written fantasy by Brouwer. I feel Brouwer does an excellent job of differentiating between true Christ followers and those who say they are Christian but do not live it out. It is a good commentary on Christianity in medieval Europe and how misunderstandings have given Christians a bad name through the ages since. Again, it doesn't feel like the theological component is forced but something Thomas would realistically be dealing with.

So what kept this from being 4 or 5 stars for me? There is very little resolution in this book except for the two main events, which after finishing the book really feel like minor events in the grand scheme of the power struggles going on. Those who like things wrapped up nice and tidy in a book should skip this, or at least wait until Brouwer finishes the entire series. I couldn't help feeling like the Immortals were hurting their own cause with their extreme level of caution and wanted to tell certain characters to just risk it and get things moving!

Notes on content: No swearing. No sexual content. A couple characters get beat up and one character loses an ear, but no other violence.
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272 reviews42 followers
March 6, 2013
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Thomas is the new young ruler of a strange, slightly autonomous island in northern England. He has managed to wrest control of Magnus away from his family's enemies. But it isn't long before new troubles come in the shape of someone who should be dead, secrets withheld, and war.

I had not read the first in the series, but I felt like I had a reasonable understanding of the important events that had passed. The author makes an effort to touch on those events to ensure that the reader is on the same page as the characters. I definitely appreciated that.

Told in multiple third person points of view, the story is a quick and light read. I felt more of a connection or understanding with Katherine than with Thomas, who seemed like this kind of enigma of an intelligent and perceptive man.

To address a review I saw, I do not believe this to be 'Christian literature'. Yes, there is the presence of the Church which should really only be expected of a story taking place in medieval Europe. Expectations of anything else would be inaccurate. Additionally, while the main character is undecided on his faith and a Church worker tries to convince him otherwise, it is not preachy. It does not have the other trademarks of the Christian literature I've read in the past. Someone with anxiety over reading Christian literature should not be afraid to read this book.

I enjoyed the story, it was a pleasant read, but it felt like it was the middle of a larger novel. Aimed at a young adult audience, I understand that it is a series to make it more manageable in length, but I didn't feel a real conclusion to the story. It was like I picked up a book, opened to a random page and read for a few chapters before putting it down again.

I am intrigued by the mystery of the story and might look for its sequel in the future to get more answers.

[I received this book free to review from LibraryThing. It has not affected my review.]
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146 reviews6 followers
April 19, 2013
Originally posted in angelroman.org

After reading the first book in the Merlin's Immortals series, I really was wondering if I'd like to read and review the next one. Finally Fortress of Mist by Sigmund Brouwer was available as an ARC and I couldn't say no.

This time I knew somehow what to expect considering my past review, I really didn't have high expectations on Fortress of Mist. To my surprise I gotta say I enjoyed this book a lot more than it's predecessor.

The story continues exactly after the ending of the Orphan King. We have Thomas as the new lord of Magnus after he conquered the castle using wisdom from his old books.

This time most of the action through the book relies on Thomas. There's no more Tiny John messing around, except for a few appearances, there's no William giving advices to our young hero. And from the two ladies of the first time, Katherine takes the whole attention, appearing in disguise helping in every situation and in constant pressure for her love to Thomas and his loyalty to Hawkwood.

Our villans the Druids, even though we haven't seen any 'real' confrontation, use their servants in order to force Thomas to be one of them. But this time Thomas will start to unfold their real intentions about Magnus as he constantly discovers new information about them.

This time I was really looking forward to read how Brouwer would solve the battle without unnecesary violence or blood, and somehow this time it made more sanse to me the way the situation was treated, giving me the impression that it could really have happened.

Finally, while in the first book the "christian message" was easily detected, in Fortress of Mist it wasn't really present, nevertheless the overall topic of an orphan becoming a king and being aware of his rights and power remains.

The third installment already has a name, Martyr's Fire will be released on october 15th.

Disclosure: I received this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for an honest review.
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250 reviews26 followers
November 5, 2015
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We follow the new beginning of our young protagonist, Thomas of Magnus, who seems to meet a strange number of new, and realize the truths behind many of some old characters from the first book. When I originally read The Orphan King (the first of the series), I was bored to tears on how much length and how little I felt involved with the book, fortunately I cannot say the same for Fortress of Mist. I can definitely say I really enjoyed this “episode”, because not only were more of my mental questions being answered but I felt more of the climax. We also get to know more about our character’s long lost “lady-friend”, Katherine. A, supposed, fire-damaged, a “wrapped-her-head-in-a-bandage-and-shunned-by-society” friend. There is also the discussion of Magnus’ dirty little secret of two societies and their century old war to conquer Magnus and throughout they seem to almost take turns to convince Thomas into which group he belongs.

I can’t say much about whether the next book will be better since I didn’t feel as anxious at the end as I did the last time. But now I have questions like: “Why can’t Thomas forgive Katherine for being so deceitful?” or “Why didn’t Katherine do this?” and “Where’s Isabelle?” Do I have your attention? There is definitely a strange love triangle that nobodt is aware of except for the person who’s feeling the lust for the other. The other question has to do with whom does alliance lie for the old guy that “works” at the church, is he good or bad or just a neutral party?

Would I recommend this? Maybe. If you’ve read the first book and felt very unfulfilled, I’d definitely recommend getting your hands on the next copy since it might fill that little gap of your heart that felt so incomplete. I, for one, have decided that if Sigmund Brouwer were to publish a third and possibly a fourth book in the future I’d more than likely consider read them as well until the very end to see who officially conquers, or wins, Magnus and what becomes of Thomas and the rest of “the gang”.
1,324 reviews11 followers
March 30, 2013
Fortress of Mist is the second book in the Merlin's Immortals Series. The first is The Orphan King.

This book is geared toward young adults, I would say upper middle school through high school. These are books I would definitely be excited for my children to read. If your child enjoys Lord of the Rings, Narnia, even Harry Potter, I would be willing to guess they would enjoy this series.

Honestly, you might enjoy it as an adult. I did and these are not the types of books I would normally choose but because they were geared for young adult I wanted to see what was out there for my kids. I really did like the books and was pushed along with the mystery and intensity of the plot.

There is a bit of romance, but nothing mushy in either of these books, no kissing, just normal teenage feelings. I also think this book is appropriate for boys or girls. The main character is boy but still relatable from a women's stand point and there are female characters that I don't think would be too "girlie" for the boy reader.

Fortress of Mist takes you into the kingdom of Magnus and the evil that Thomas must still fight to prove himself and keep his kingdom that rightfully belongs to him but was taken from his family. Thomas doesn't know who to trust and I was left guessing who is being honest and who is trying to trick Thomas.

Faith is woven in beautifully in this book. Thomas has questions about God and isn't fully ready to surrender but he is searching. Again, I think great conversation for teens who themselves might be in that place in life and are trying to define their faith.

If you are looking for some new books for your teen that you don't have to worry about Merlin's Immortals might be a good option for you. Read it first so you can have a conversation with your child about it, how much more enriching will the experience be if you share it together?

I received this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah Publishing Group for this review.
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70 reviews19 followers
April 20, 2013
// Madi's Review //

My first thought after finishing this book was "Well, I'm glad that's over."

It usually takes me about a day to read a book of this length, and it took me EIGHT. This book was a hot mess. Everything good about it was totally demolished in the end! And in all honestly it didn't have a lot going for it to begin with it.

Basically Thomas is just trying to keep his castle. He makes friends and foes (mostly foes), and in the end, none of it matters. It was just a long and drawn out way of saying "these people are dangerous, but I don't care". That's about what I got from it. His two romantic interest turns out to be the same person, and, surprise surprise, the deformed girl isn't deformed. There were no plot twist, every little detail was handed to me on a silver platter.

I wish I had something nice to say about this book, but I just can't think of anything. There wasn't even a happy ending! It ended with Thomas banishing Katherine.

Now, just because I didn't like it, doesn't mean that everyone would feel that way. I get the feeling that my little brother would love this book. It doesn't require a lot of thinking or use of the imagination, and it has a few battle scenes (not well staged battle scenes, but they were there). It didn't offer a lot of suspense or intrigue, but it would make a decent children's book.

*Disclaimer*
I received this book from Waterbrook Publishers and all thoughts were one hundred percent completely my own. I was not paid to do this review.
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24 reviews
April 7, 2013
My Rating: 3.5

Fortress of Mist… It is the second novel in Brouwer’s Merlin’s Immortals Series. This book was classified as YA, though I would recommend it with younger teens. I think it would be fun to read this if you like calm, mystery and a little romance.

Honestly, these are not the type of books I would usually enjoy for I am more of a YA dystopian and paranormal reader. I’m not used to very calm sound of this book, though I liked it for it was a breath of fresh air after reading consecutive thrilling genres.

There was mystery, romance, deceit, betrayal and wisdom implied in this novel. The mystery evolved around the main character: Thomas. The events was narrated by a third person so the readers knows what’s going on, the mystery was only on the characters. The romance was nothing mushy. Deceit and betrayal, the supporting characters seem to deceit the main. Thomas seems to have a fight against the worlds. He has had those wisdoms that the reader could take time to think about. It could be a good way to connect with a book like this, though not everything was relatable for it’s mostly about warfare. Faith was also seen in this novel. Thomas has question about God that could give readers some insights.

Overall I found Fortress of Mist to be an interesting yet a quick calming read. The revelation on this book did its magic for me to keep interested on the coming events.

I received this novel for free from Waterbrook Multnomah Press in exchange for this review.

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264 reviews1 follower
May 2, 2013
Fortress of Mist is the second book in the Merlin's Immortals series . The first one was The Orphan King and it was amazing. Sigmound weaves beautiful story telling in with this epic adventure of mystery, romance, and courage and wisdom. Of course there are sword fights, blood, villains, wizardry and all the things that make up a great fantasy novel. The adventures move quickly and keep you intrigued along the way. The book is filled with cleaver and surprising twists and turns leaving you guessing who you can and cannot. Great imagery throughout and interesting use of magic for sure.

The only two thing that disappointed me in this book, was the lack of character depth (for adult readers)and the stance that wisdom only existing in the well educated. I think the book fails to leave out the wisdom of faith in believers excels the wisdom of the book educated, in my opinion. Also, I think that if someone has not read the first book, they may feel lost at times when reading the 2nd as a stand alone. They really build off each other, which I personally like, but for someone just picking up this one I feel they may be disappointed in their ability to engage the book and characters.


I would recommend this book to anyone in middle school straight through adults that love fantasy novels.

Disclaimer: I received this book from the Waterbrook Multnomah Blogging for Books Program and was not required to write a positive review.
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268 reviews10 followers
March 6, 2013
Symbols are but secrets within the confines of darkness.

Thomas through loyalty with the Earl of York longs to fulfill his destiny to conquer the well armed and manned Scottish Army but is plagued by many questions to the riddles placed before him. With time growing short by each rotation of the day, many lives and hopes depend on Thomas. Will he be able to successfully master his obstacles?

Travel back to the time of 1312, to lands of conquerors, kings and wizards through the imaginative journeys of a master storyteller.
High action and unending adventure, very descriptive storyline and scenery along with multiple twists, turns, and surprises await the reader. This journey is not too quick a read and so as to not miss details I advise the reader to take time as I did absorbing the engaging and engrossing plot. This book picks up where the Orphan King left off and though part of a series could possibly be a stand alone novel but will make more sense when read in succession with the previous one. The storyline flowed well and from the beginning of reading I found I could not put it down. The characters were well developed and interesting and I felt as if I were there witnessing history. Extremely well written and creative and I will highly recommend this book to others. 5 Stars!!! I received a free copy of this book from Waterbrook Multnomah Publishers for my review.
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Author 4 books103 followers
March 11, 2013

This is the second book of this authors that I have read, I loved the first book in this series The Orphan King when I read it last year. So I jumped at the chance to review Fortress Of Mist. 

I loved this book just as much as the first one, it has a great setting in Medieval England! It was awesome to see what had happened since the last book, I loved getting acquainted with the characters all over again, I especially loved that Katherine played a larger role in this book. As with the first book of the series Fortress Of Mist is very much an escapist read, and the pages absolutely fly, I couldn't put it down!
While some questions were answered, there are still so many more yet to be answered! I am hooked on this series, and especially after the killer cliffhanger at the end of Fortress Of Mist, I cannot wait to read the next book in the series!!!

I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys the Young Adult fantasy genre, although I would recommend that you read book one The Orphan King, first so that you know the background of the story.



I recieved this book for free from WaterBrook Multnomah in exchange for an honest review, my review was not required to be positive, the above review is my honest opinion. All thoughts and opinions are one hundred percent my own.


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87 reviews1 follower
April 22, 2013
The throne is redeemed, but the battle is just beginning.

Thomas has reclaimed the throne of Magnus but a threat rises against his new leadership--the druids. Further, a neighboring kingdom is insisting that Thomas help in England's fight against invaders from the north and he's obligated to help--though he fears that the Earl of York may be working with the secret sect of druids that seek his throne.

Thomas has fulfilled part of the destiny he was born too, but he is discovering that there is much more yet to unfold. He must tread carefully as he is unsure who to trust or where to turn to for guidance. As a young Lord of his castle he is discovering secrets that have been uncovered for ages. In his quest for truth Thomas must decide whom he will serve, but he is learning that this decision may not be based on facts, but faith.
I enjoyed the story, it was a pleasant read. Although aimed for young audiences anyone who enjoys stories involving castles, lords, superstition, herbalists, treachery, battles between clans, druids, and legends, you will enjoy this book. There were real players in this story such as Robert the Bruce, king of the Scots and the Earl of York. Edward II is also mentioned in this novel.

I received EBook from WaterBrook Multnomah Press in their blogging for books program for my review.
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Author 66 books1,620 followers
March 2, 2013
Thomas of Magnus, the Orphan King, currently holds the fortress of Magnus. But there are many who would try and take it from him. And when the Earl of York comes to demand that Thomas and Magnus support England’s stand against the invaders from the north who are led by Robert the Bruce, Thomas has no choice but to obey and try and prove his loyalty to the crown. But who is truly loyal to Thomas? What are druids? Who is trying to kill him? And what ever became of Isabelle and Katherine, two mysterious women whose absence is yet another mystery in his life.

Medieval fantasy is my favorite genre, which I think is why I like these books so much. But they don’t read like fantasy as much as they read like a subgenre of Arthurian historical fiction. Since they take place in England in the past and bring in historical elements, perhaps historical fiction is the genre in which they belong. Regardless, I enjoy them a great deal. Thomas is a fun hero to follow. He’s young, cautious, and brave, though he makes his share of mistakes. And these books have an intriguing mystery and time travel element that have me totally hooked. They’re short, though, and I sometimes feel that each story could hold more than it does. Still, I look forward to the next one.
75 reviews2 followers
May 10, 2013
“Fortress of Mist” Continues the Series Without a Decrease in the Action
When I finished the first book in Sigmund Brower’s “Merlin’s Immortals” series, I was eager for book two to arrive and it has not disappointed. “Fortress of Mist” picks up the story from “The Orphan King” and continues to run at a wonderful pace through a world laced with fantasy, intrigue and mystery. Thomas has come into his kingdom but his troubles are far from over. Now he must negotiate the murky world of politics, never knowing who to trust and who is on his side. As two opposing forces fight for his allegiance, this young king must tread carefully knowing that all he has fought for may be lost in one wrong decision.
“Fortress of Mist” delivers the second installment of Thomas’ story with deepening plot points and well-written storylines that will take you further into this ancient land and leave you, alas, waiting as I am for the next installment! I highly recommend this series for fantasy fans of middle school grades and upward to adults.
“Fortress of Mist” was provided to me by Waterbrook Press for this review as part of their Blogging for Books Program. The opinions, however, are entirely my own.
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459 reviews32 followers
June 1, 2013
The Kingdom of Magnus is once again under attack in this second book of Sigmund Brouwer's "Merlin's Immortal"series. How will Thomas fight in both his world and the supernatural? Where will he find strength? Who will stand with him?

The Druids want Magnus and Thomas stands in their way. They will use anything to displace and defeat Thomas. As Thomas prepares to defend his kingdom, too many things are out of place. There seem to be spies everywhere, even though no one has come in. Some of the dead seem to be alive again and these things have the people asking many questions. How can Thomas fight the Druids when he doesn't know what they are capable of? Romance begins to form on two fronts, but will Thomas be able to trust either woman competing for his attention? Will Magnus stand firm or fall at the hands of its enemies? The answers to these questions and so much more are found within the pages of this book. Thomas and the Kingdom of Magnus await your arrival.

I love Sigmund Brouwer's writing style and stories. He draws me in with an imagination that puts me in Magnus. While this is a book written for young adults, I encourage adults to indulge as well. It is a good idea to relax into our imaginations once in a while.
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85 reviews10 followers
May 26, 2014
This is book 2 of Sigmund Brouwer's "Merlin's Immortals' series. Magnus is a kingdom under attack by the Druids and defended by men like Thomas. The problem is that the Druids don't want Thomas to live. They want to annihilate all opposition in order to have complete control over the kingdom and carry out their own plans. There are so many times when Thomas feels alone. There are also many times when he doesn't want to involve anyone else because it is simply too dangerous. To complicate things, two women seem to be vying for Thomas' attention - Katherine and Isabelle. But, are they who they seem to be? Will anyone stand with Thomas to save Magnus, or will the kingdom fall to the evil forces of the Druids?

This is an interesting book but I wish I had read the first book, "The Orphan King" first because it would probably have made more sense from the beginning. The author writes a good story and I enjoyed the journey of the characters. I recommend this book, and the series, to those of you who enjoy Young Adult Fantasy.
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Author 4 books16 followers
May 3, 2014
I read Fortress of Mist, in exchange for review from Blogging for Books. The book was written by Sigmund Brouwer and published by WaterBrook Press. The book is part two to the Orphan King (which I need to read). I chose the book because I loved the description. The book is about Thomas, the new king of Magnus. He is orphaned. Thomas's parents died during The Orphan King. Thomas is being haunted by Isabella, who wants access to the castle's library. She also wants Thomas to show allegiance to the symbol and join the symbol's alliance. Thomas wanted no part of the alliance. (For some reason, this sounds similar to the mark of the best. Either you pledge allegiance to Christ and face death or the Anti-Christ and live).

I liked reading the book. I had to stop and start over a few times, but it is a good book. I definitely have to buy the Orphan King to fill in the missing blanks and questions I have. The book is descriptive. It is fantasy, medieval, adventure, and exciting.
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