Amy May is a talented gymnast with a drive to be the best. After a bungled kidnapping she and best friend Mia find themselves in the clutches of a ruthless criminal boss. Although he lets them live, the price is high and Amy is left having to make the hardest decision of her life.
This is another gritty plot from the same author that brought us ‘Clash’. The second novel is always difficult, especially when the first is a hard act to follow. Certainly, this follows the same urgent style that Mulhern showed in his first novel. It has high-octane action from the get-go right up to the final twist. It’s another a page-turner; the dynamic phrasing and punchy chapters drive the story through to the finale. It’s quite clearly aimed at the young adult, but unlike ‘Clash’ I don’t think it will appeal as much to an older audience.
Arabesque is another great story, well told. For me, though, it lacks the depth of Mulhern’s debut novel. Putting aside the final twist (which, while unexpected, I personally found unnecessary), the book generally left me feeling unsatisfied. Maybe my expectations were too high; this is, after all, an action story, but I couldn’t help feeling there was more to tell, some point that failed to get across. I would have liked more characterisation, particularly to get to know Amy better and some insight into her relationships and motivations but I guess this isn’t that kind of book. While Galloway, the arch-villain came across as sufficiently cold and calculating, Amy and Mia didn’t get to me emotionally, the way Alex did in ‘Clash’ and that had an impact on how I felt about their plight.
Technically, this was more of a challenge than ‘Clash’ with female protagonists, a sizeable cast of characters and multiple points of view. While the author mostly tackles this with fluency, it isn’t flawless. Some of the switches threw me momentarily and at times credibility was stretched a wee bit too thinly. Additionally, there are some fairly basic editing errors that pulled me away from the story; it really needed another read through before going to print. What is more important was that the denouement relies on a coincidence that borders on Deus ex Machina. While this makes for a satisfactory conclusion, it stretched this reader’s credibility a tad too far.
Worth a read? Definitely, particularly for the teenage target group.