TREACHEROUS SKIES
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The Positive
This novel has a good pace, and the story flows fairly well. In addition, the protagonist's background is fresh for the genre (e.g.--drug lord's daughter).
The Less-So
The book contains some narrative and other (mostly) non-grammatical issues. The story is reliant upon the internal monologue and roller coaster-ing emotions of both the protagonist and the potential love interest, which burdens the story for readers who are less emotionally driven.
Overall
Being kidnapped and tracked are (we imagine) traumatic and emotional experiences. However, such emotion does not always need to be indicated through narration. For me, personally, it would have been nice to deduce some of the backstory (especially about the ex-es) and emotion instead of being told about it repetitively.