But in his lapel,
discreetly,
he wore a sprig of asphodel
One of the surest signs of a promising future for any young artist is their willingness, unfettered by doubt, to reach for that which lies beyond certainty. All the avatars of mediocrity on the other hand betray themselves in their circumspect habits and the various timid tendencies that inevitably obstruct creative momentum. Progress is always a question of propulsion and the barrier to greatness is a kind of planetary gravity. Once past, the external is no longer the challenge; rather it’s coping with the enormity of one’s own liberty. When it comes to young artists then, and poets specifically, the crucial thing is for them to have the passion and devotion necessary to overcome the usual state of primordial inertia.
And Leonard Cohen is certainly someone who became an important poet but, to be clear, this is not a good poetry collection by any intrinsic measure. Aside from the occasional line or stanza, there’s nothing even worth a second thought here. Be that as it may, the book holds some interest as an example of precociousness since these poems were written between the ages of fifteen and twenty. Although still strictly juvenilia, the discerning reader will be able to find within its pages the seed of Cohen’s future talent. The expressions and ideas contained within in fact bear a strong similarity to the early work of other major poets. Yeats is the one that stuck out to me the most but other insightful comparisons could be made with Dylan Thomas and Rimbaud. Starting with Yeats however, the transition to his mature style can be pinpointed to around the time he wrote “The Lake Isle at Innisfree,” but even here the limitations of youth are still observable (Although at the time of its publication, Yeats would have been around twenty seven so he was actually something of a belated talent) Chief among these is affectation. A young poet full of passion for their art naturally wants to achieve excellence as soon as possible and this ambition will predictably result in inept attempts at elevated speech and various sorts of intellectual posturing. I’d say Innisfree itself works but looking at Yeats other poems at the time, while they have their moments here and there, they do tend to be overly cologned with literary pretensions.
Contrast this with Yeats’ poetry in the nineteen-twenties and the difference should be obvious. The sentiments no longer have the forced and contrived qualities of youth and instead express the confidence of a thoughtful maturity. Likewise, there’s also a diminishing reliance on abstraction and a greater utility with the concrete. Admittedly, that’s partly the influence of modernism via Ezra Pound and others but it’s also fair to say that the kind of growth being suggested here has a long established precedence. What makes Shakespeare’s writing so vivid for example is its stimulating specificity and even in a poet like Blake who was often governed by abstractions (Due to his symbolistic approach) it’s the clarity of his best work that secures him a place in the pantheon of the immortals. If we compare the poems in Cohen’s first collection with one of his best later works, “Suzanne” for instance, the same contrast is evident.
Even where a young poet’s work is entirely successful, these observations retain their merits. Dylan Thomas’ “And Death Shall Have No Dominion,” for example is fundamentally a work of fantasy, eschatological fantasy mind you, and while excellent as such, the dependence on artistic fantasization is the result of a young poet’s inexperience and immaturity (Or an older writer’s arrested development; hence the insipid plots and psychology that predominate in most of fantasy, sci-fi, and young adult novels) Obviously if you haven’t lived a meaningful adult life you can’t have much in the way of insights about the adult world. And while there are writers who are especially well-read at an early age and are able to compensate for their ignorance here to some degree, they can never compensate entirely. The themes and content of young writer’s works therefore tends to be more limited in scope. So again, even where a poem achieves the very heights of genius, the creative potential overall was still constrained by narrower parameters. And one sees the truth of this throughout Let Us Compare Mythologies. The young Leonard Cohen was obviously well read, certainly more well-read than I was at his age (Even today I haven’t gotten around to reading any Faulkner) but all the poems that make up this collection betray themselves upon even moderate scrutiny.
Admittedly, there are plenty of readers out there, and adult readers at that, who never cultivated any kind of depth within themselves and who will no doubt enjoy this book just as much as Cohen’s later works. But it’s because they lack the ability to distinguish between the shallow and the profound. Lines like “Catching winter in their carved nostrils/ the traitor birds have deserted us” can seem indistinguishable from excellence given a certain similarity of tone and rhythm but what gives away weaker poetry is its inability to weather objective scrutiny. Does ascribing treachery here convey something that’s rooted in a powerful insight? Even on the most subjective level, is the migration of birds really analogous to treachery? If the point can be made, I think I’ve made it. Of course the tendency to inflate things with false significance is not unique to the adolescent, it’s one of the hallmarks of bad writing in general, but the failure here is a normal part of the maturation process for any great talent. Art, even in its most avant-garde and contemporary forms, is always the pursuit of meaning (An artifact is inevitably a superposition of experiences and the creative process means shaping these towards some specifiable range at the very least) so the most promising artists will inevitably be those whose passion exceeds their abilities. The passion is what drives the growth in craft and personal powers of discernment. If all goes well.
But not every genius will eventually achieve maturity. A good counter example to that is provided by the career of Rimbaud. Given the quality of the work he wrote at sixteen, it’s fair to say that Rimbaud was a genius. As far as I know however, he never overcame the defects of his adolescence. What Rimbaud’s work suffers from the most maybe is a preformative orientation. Whether it’s because it strives too obviously for approval or because of a desperation to provoke some reaction in its audience, I find his poems lack the self-certainty that all the best works of literature share. There’s also a slapdash quality to them, a hedonistic indifference within the writing itself that’s prevalent among authors who are more concerned with the rewards of writing than the artistry of their own work. Which is hardly surprising in this case since we’re talking about a teenaged libertine living a life of unhampered debauchery. Fortunately the same fate didn’t befall Leonard Cohen.
Again, Dylan Thomas can be mentioned as a comparable genius whose full potential was derailed due to analogous personal problems (Although fortunately, not as completely) Aside from even the human tragedies here though, it’s worth considering the loss of a what would have no doubt been a much greater literary legacy for both of them. But Cohen did not go down the same road of debasement. And now generations of readers and music aficionados can enjoy the legacy of his discipline. In fact, one could make the argument that talent carries with it inherent moral obligations. That’s a sentiment that’s rather out of favor in our own epoch however. Today, artists are as selfish as they’ve ever been.