While I was initially intrigued by a Christian author’s attempt to weave a novel around contemporary bioethical issues, The Offering ultimately expresses naive, not so subtle, right wing conservative propaganda: anti-immigration, anti-diversity, anti-feminist, misogynist, nationalistic, homophoebic comments are embedded throughout the characters’ dialogue. The Offering casts surrogacy in an “aura of altruism. By having someone else’s baby, I would not only be helping my family and another couple, I would be doing something positive in a world that had seen far too much darkness and despair. I would be striking a blow for freedom. I would be taking a stand for a woman’s right to control her own body in a way that celebrated motherhood and unborn life...Sometimes...it took a village to conceive a child.”
In her ad hoc attempt at integrating diversity by featuring a Cuban family and interweaving Spanish code switching, Hunt actually reinforces racial stereotyping. “Gideon would hate the thought of his wife being pregnant with some other guy’s child. You forget you married a Latin man, chica...Stereotypes exist because they are usually true.” “They lived in America--shouldn’t they adapt to us instead of the other way around?” Through her description of Gideon’s character as an American soldier, Hunt expresses nationalistic superiority. “I searched for signs of trouble around the world, though in my gut I suspected Gideon and his team were headed to Afghanistan or Iraq, maybe even Pakistan. Or anywhere in the troubled Middle East…” Associating words like “troubled” to individual countries or regions like the “Middle East” undergirds the disinformation perpetuated by Western media.
When perusing the folders of potential surrogate partners, Mandy’s husband Gideon blinks when he sees a picture of two middle-aged men. He blurts, “Where do they get the embryo?” and scowls, “They want to terminate females?” It is the gay couple who are open to selective termination and it is the gay couple who Hunt portrays as strange, evil female killers. Gideon expresses his own misogynistic views when he blatantly expresses to his wife, “I want a son...I will always love daughters, but as long as you stay healthy, I want a son or two to carry on the family name. It’s important to me.”
The protagonist Mandy underscores the traditional stereotypical expectations of a female as submissive wife and mother, “I felt sorry for her when they had to resort to an egg donor...I know every woman wants to have her own biological child, if it’s at all possible.” “A woman, my mom always told me, should play at least a little hard to get...Maybe my mom was right--maybe Gideon was too wrapped around my finger. Maybe a good wife should be more inclined to follow her husband’s opinions, and maybe a good husband should be less vulnerable to his wife’s persuasive powers.”
In her interview with the author, Hunt reveals her naivety and lack of research when she expresses, “I have no problem with IVF or surrogacy as long as everyone involved fully understands the bioethical issues and resolves to preserve all human life: that would mean no freezing of embryos (because half of those embryos probably won’t survive the thawing procedure).” Research suggests that a frozen embryo can be kept viable for an extremely long period of time so long as freezing conditions remain favorable and consistent.
The Offering reads like a roller coaster--it begins slowly and builds interest about midway through the book. It would have been a much more compelling read had the author started with the legal trial and developed the tension, unspooling the narrative in reverse chronological order with the plotline starting at the end. Although somewhat trite, the story concludes with an unexpected twist. “I’ve been thinking about what love is, and what family means. I’m like king Solomon, I have realized that the mother who loves best may well be the one who is most willing to let go. So that’s what I want to do. So Julian is my biological son, I want to officially relinquish my right to raise him...The heart doesn’t always feel what the mind knows.” This novel is one offering that you can afford to pass.