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Kristen Conner Mystery #2
Every Breath You Take
Some dates are to kill for . . . some will get you killed!
When the son of a Chicago billionaire is murdered the only lead on this high-profile crime – one that has the media buzzing and politicians scrambling – is an exclusive dating service that discretely caters to the rich and famous.
Who better to go undercover in the world of personal profiles, promising matches, and questionable motives than an ace detective who is single and as attractive as she is tough? She is about to learn that some dates are to kill for – but some dates will get you killed.
Detective Kristen Conner may not be able to figure out her own love life, but she is about to get a crash course on finding Mr. Right – who is definitely Mr. Wrong - even as she finds herself in the crosshairs of a determined killer’s gun.
Conner and the fabulous cast of characters that made Cuts Like a Knife a debut sensation are back and on the case.
When the son of a Chicago billionaire is murdered the only lead on this high-profile crime – one that has the media buzzing and politicians scrambling – is an exclusive dating service that discretely caters to the rich and famous.
Who better to go undercover in the world of personal profiles, promising matches, and questionable motives than an ace detective who is single and as attractive as she is tough? She is about to learn that some dates are to kill for – but some dates will get you killed.
Detective Kristen Conner may not be able to figure out her own love life, but she is about to get a crash course on finding Mr. Right – who is definitely Mr. Wrong - even as she finds herself in the crosshairs of a determined killer’s gun.
Conner and the fabulous cast of characters that made Cuts Like a Knife a debut sensation are back and on the case.
400 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2012
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About the author
M.K. Gilroy
6 books128 followersMark "M.K." Gilroy is a veteran publishing executive who has acquired, developed, authored, and ghostwritten numerous books that have landed on various bestseller lists.
His newest novel, Cold As Ice, marks the return of Detective Kristen Conner, a character USA TODAY calls "Miss Congeniality meets Castle's Kate Beckett; a lethal, smart, and fun combo."
His first two novels in the Kristen Conner Mystery Series met with critical acclaim from national reviewers and readers. Both Cuts Like a Knife and Every Breath You Take were #1 bestsellers.
When not writing Kristen Conner novels, Mark creates and publishes book products for retailers, ministries, and businesses. He recently launched a new publishing company, Sydney Lane Press.
Gilroy holds undergraduate degrees in Speech Communications/Journalism and Biblical Literature, and two graduate degrees, the M.Div. and MBA.
The father of six adult children, he resides with his wife, Amy, in Brentwood, Tennessee.
His newest novel, Cold As Ice, marks the return of Detective Kristen Conner, a character USA TODAY calls "Miss Congeniality meets Castle's Kate Beckett; a lethal, smart, and fun combo."
His first two novels in the Kristen Conner Mystery Series met with critical acclaim from national reviewers and readers. Both Cuts Like a Knife and Every Breath You Take were #1 bestsellers.
When not writing Kristen Conner novels, Mark creates and publishes book products for retailers, ministries, and businesses. He recently launched a new publishing company, Sydney Lane Press.
Gilroy holds undergraduate degrees in Speech Communications/Journalism and Biblical Literature, and two graduate degrees, the M.Div. and MBA.
The father of six adult children, he resides with his wife, Amy, in Brentwood, Tennessee.
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April 6, 2016
This is the second book in the Christian fiction mystery series I started not long ago. I like the way the author does a few things. He doesn't water board you with the Christian aspect of it. It is very low key and in the background. I also like the way his stories aren't singular in focus. There are usually different story lines afoot. The third thing is that I like the MC. She is kind of fun to watch as she journeys through her life.
The downside to this is that the story lines aren't exactly gripping. I finished this book earlier today, and I already can't remember how one of the story lines ended. It is sad that it was forgettable. So three stars because overall, it was a light easy read and some days, that is all I have time for.
The downside to this is that the story lines aren't exactly gripping. I finished this book earlier today, and I already can't remember how one of the story lines ended. It is sad that it was forgettable. So three stars because overall, it was a light easy read and some days, that is all I have time for.
November 2, 2012
Every Breath You Take is the second book author Mark K. Gilroy has written about Kristen Conner, a 30 year-old detective with the Chicago Police Department. The first book is Cuts Like a Knife. However, I read Every Breath You Take first and it stands alone. Everything you need to know from the first book is explained without getting bogged down. Since I loved this book so much, though, I plan to read the first book, too.
I like the way the author gives the reader glimpses into the mind of the criminal without spoiling the mystery of who it is. The rest of the book is told by Kristen.
Kristen is a lovable character who often prays. She calls herself a "church girl" and so you know where she stands. She's also a hero and an excellent detective. She's a soccer coach who loves children and loves winning. She offers extra support to crime victims and families when needed. She has a wonderful family as well.
In this book, the victim is Jack Durham, the 38 year-old playboy son of a billionaire. Kristen goes undercover as a prostitute to get close to the people Durham associated with. However, her cover is blown when she's spotted by her sister Klarissa, a news reporter. When Kristen begins asking questions, another body turns up. Needless to say, Kristen solves the case even in the midst of near-death situations, and ends up receiving the award of valor, the same award her father had received.
There's a hint of more to come because Kristen still needs to solve her father's murder. Her father was a Chicago policeman killed on duty four years earlier.
I received a complimentary copy of this book for review from the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255.
I like the way the author gives the reader glimpses into the mind of the criminal without spoiling the mystery of who it is. The rest of the book is told by Kristen.
Kristen is a lovable character who often prays. She calls herself a "church girl" and so you know where she stands. She's also a hero and an excellent detective. She's a soccer coach who loves children and loves winning. She offers extra support to crime victims and families when needed. She has a wonderful family as well.
In this book, the victim is Jack Durham, the 38 year-old playboy son of a billionaire. Kristen goes undercover as a prostitute to get close to the people Durham associated with. However, her cover is blown when she's spotted by her sister Klarissa, a news reporter. When Kristen begins asking questions, another body turns up. Needless to say, Kristen solves the case even in the midst of near-death situations, and ends up receiving the award of valor, the same award her father had received.
There's a hint of more to come because Kristen still needs to solve her father's murder. Her father was a Chicago policeman killed on duty four years earlier.
I received a complimentary copy of this book for review from the publisher. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255.
August 30, 2012
A strong female lead paired with an enthralling plot
Returning to Chicago and her job as a detective with the Chicago Police department, Kristen Connor is immediately immersed in a case. A trust fund bad boy, Jack Durham, is dead. Durham wasn’t a good guy by anyone’s account; he blew his family money on drinking, parties, and women, and not just any women, but high class premium dollar escorts, but dead is dead. With a billionaire as a father- politics, money, and heat from her superiors motivate Kristen to solve this case.
Kristen Connor is a decorated detective, catching one of Chicago’s worst serial killers in Gilroy’s previous novel, Cuts Like a Knife, but her stardom is not going to help her solve this murder. Instead, Kristen must rely on her intellect, martial arts skills, and tenacity to seek out the truth when she goes undercover in the world of the rich and famous, posing as an escort herself. But not everything is as simple as it appears, and the wealthy have a unique ability to hide the truth.
Balancing a rocky romance with FBI hunk Austin, her loving but sometimes suffocating family, coaching her niece’s soccer team, the Snowflakes, attending church, and solving a few murders, Kristen is a busy woman. But she is a strong, smart, and driven female character that compliments the well written plot and twists of Every Breath You Take. Readers are in for some surprises and shocks, and an ending that will leave you waiting for Gilroy’s next novel.
Every Breath You Take is scheduled to be released October 23, 2012
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Returning to Chicago and her job as a detective with the Chicago Police department, Kristen Connor is immediately immersed in a case. A trust fund bad boy, Jack Durham, is dead. Durham wasn’t a good guy by anyone’s account; he blew his family money on drinking, parties, and women, and not just any women, but high class premium dollar escorts, but dead is dead. With a billionaire as a father- politics, money, and heat from her superiors motivate Kristen to solve this case.
Kristen Connor is a decorated detective, catching one of Chicago’s worst serial killers in Gilroy’s previous novel, Cuts Like a Knife, but her stardom is not going to help her solve this murder. Instead, Kristen must rely on her intellect, martial arts skills, and tenacity to seek out the truth when she goes undercover in the world of the rich and famous, posing as an escort herself. But not everything is as simple as it appears, and the wealthy have a unique ability to hide the truth.
Balancing a rocky romance with FBI hunk Austin, her loving but sometimes suffocating family, coaching her niece’s soccer team, the Snowflakes, attending church, and solving a few murders, Kristen is a busy woman. But she is a strong, smart, and driven female character that compliments the well written plot and twists of Every Breath You Take. Readers are in for some surprises and shocks, and an ending that will leave you waiting for Gilroy’s next novel.
Every Breath You Take is scheduled to be released October 23, 2012
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October 27, 2012
In this follow-up to Cuts Like a Knife, Kristen Conner returns to her job as homicide detective with the Chicago Police after recovering from a knee injury and training with the FBI. She is "welcomed back" with a high-profile murder of a wealthy businessman's son who regularly used an escort service which caters to the rich--Kristen soon finds herself working undercover with that service. Just when the CPD think they have their suspect a series of complications ensues including another murder with the same MO (while suspect of first murder is in the Cook County jail)!
Just like the first novel, this one has a fast-moving plot with strong characters, most notably Kristen. While single, smart, and attractive; she can't seem to get her own love life straight as she works undercover--being asked to wear clothes and makeup that's just not her! She is close to her family even though they may be overbearing at times. Kristen also coaches her niece's soccer team and attends church regularly, all the while wondering how her new love interest, FBI agent Austin Reynolds, would fit in.
Another common thread between the first two books is the death of Kristen's father, a Chicago Police Officer killed in the line of duty several years ago; Kristen hopes to see the files concerning that case but keeps hitting a brick wall with CPD! Looking forward to the next book in the series!
Just like the first novel, this one has a fast-moving plot with strong characters, most notably Kristen. While single, smart, and attractive; she can't seem to get her own love life straight as she works undercover--being asked to wear clothes and makeup that's just not her! She is close to her family even though they may be overbearing at times. Kristen also coaches her niece's soccer team and attends church regularly, all the while wondering how her new love interest, FBI agent Austin Reynolds, would fit in.
Another common thread between the first two books is the death of Kristen's father, a Chicago Police Officer killed in the line of duty several years ago; Kristen hopes to see the files concerning that case but keeps hitting a brick wall with CPD! Looking forward to the next book in the series!
January 27, 2015
I loved the chance to travel in Detective Kristin Connor's world. Mark Gilroy has done it again! Every Breath You Take is a fantastic addition to the character driven suspense genre and a worthy follow-up to Cuts Like a Knife. With subtle spiritual insights, page-turning action, and an intriguing leading lady, my only quibble is that a few scenes I really wanted to see dramatized were instead summarized after the fact. Still, Kristin is a character you'll enjoy hanging with and I for one can't wait to read more of her adventures.
March 24, 2020
I enjoyed this second installment of the Kristen Connor books; however, one of my pet peeves happened toward the end of the book. It made me groan out loud. A character's (a VERY minor character's) name got changed. Gggrrrr. I hate that. Someone should have caught it.
But, I really enjoyed the story and am looking forward to the next one. I wonder what the baby's name will be in that book? Hmmm.
But, I really enjoyed the story and am looking forward to the next one. I wonder what the baby's name will be in that book? Hmmm.
October 25, 2012
This is the second book in this series featuring Chicago Police Detective Kristen Connor, following Cuts Like a Knife. This time the victim is Jack Durham, a rich second son who spends his time living off a trust fund and ‘dating’ high-class call girls because he’s too lazy to find a real date. The evidence points his murderer being one of the call girls, one of several from the agency he and his friends always use. But the police need evidence, so Kristen goes on an undercover date with ones of Jack's friends. This means she has to work with the don’t-call-her-a-madam, who has the unenviable task of getting Kristen to wear flattering clothes and makeup.
This novel works well as a stand-alone, even though it is part of a series and there are some ongoing subplots that span the books, including Kristen’s possible stalker, her relationship with FBI Agent Austin Reynolds and her quest to find who was responsible for the death of her father. There are also a few appearances from Kristen’s sisters, and she continues to coach her niece’s soccer team, which adds a nice element.
There is a lot of information that shows Gilroy has done his research on topics like hand-to-hand fighting and firearm usage, and it certainly tells us a lot about how detail-minded the heroine is. But sometimes it does feel like it's too much. It feels foreign and (dare I say it) a bit too masculine.
In a way, Every Breath You Take reminds me of Castle and Beckett, except there’s no handsome writer working with Connor (and these books are a lot better written that Castle’s Nikki Heat novels). There are also hints of Diary of a Call Girl (which I’ve not read, but I’ve seen the adverts on TV), and I’m assuming this is accurate, but how would I know?
The early reviews quoted on Amazon suggest Every Breath You Take is even better than Cuts Like a Knife. Personally, I disagree. It’s a good mystery/thriller and will work well as part of a series, but I think the first book was stronger. In this, I didn’t understand the motivation of one of the main characters (to tell you who or why would be a spoiler) but I think that detracted from my enjoyment.
Thanks to WaterBrook and Netgalley for providing a free ebook for review.
This novel works well as a stand-alone, even though it is part of a series and there are some ongoing subplots that span the books, including Kristen’s possible stalker, her relationship with FBI Agent Austin Reynolds and her quest to find who was responsible for the death of her father. There are also a few appearances from Kristen’s sisters, and she continues to coach her niece’s soccer team, which adds a nice element.
There is a lot of information that shows Gilroy has done his research on topics like hand-to-hand fighting and firearm usage, and it certainly tells us a lot about how detail-minded the heroine is. But sometimes it does feel like it's too much. It feels foreign and (dare I say it) a bit too masculine.
In a way, Every Breath You Take reminds me of Castle and Beckett, except there’s no handsome writer working with Connor (and these books are a lot better written that Castle’s Nikki Heat novels). There are also hints of Diary of a Call Girl (which I’ve not read, but I’ve seen the adverts on TV), and I’m assuming this is accurate, but how would I know?
The early reviews quoted on Amazon suggest Every Breath You Take is even better than Cuts Like a Knife. Personally, I disagree. It’s a good mystery/thriller and will work well as part of a series, but I think the first book was stronger. In this, I didn’t understand the motivation of one of the main characters (to tell you who or why would be a spoiler) but I think that detracted from my enjoyment.
Thanks to WaterBrook and Netgalley for providing a free ebook for review.
November 4, 2012
Kristen Conner is one of the youngest detectives on the Chicago police force, and just recently returned to duty after recuperating from injuries sustained while taking down a serial killer. When a high profile murder occurs the same day she returns to the force, she steps up to the plate. Even when her duty includes her going undercover as a high priced cake girl, Kristen works the murder investigation.
This is the second M.K. Gilroy/ Kristen Conner novel that I have read and enjoyed. Kristen is a complicated character, who second guesses her actions on the job and with her family, but not enough to change her ways. In this novel, she picks up a long distance FBI love interest that broadens the storyline. Kristen and her family are Christians, and they live their faith, though Kristen stumbles enough that she definitely feels human, and her efforts to grow are enjoyable. The murder mystery keeps you guessing until almost the very end, with great descriptions of fight scenes that keep the action hopping. I stayed so involved that I lost a little sleep when I did not read the end during my normal hours. I recommend this to readers who enjoy clean detective mysteries with lots of secondary storylines that add interest.
Received Galley from NetGalley.com.
This is the second M.K. Gilroy/ Kristen Conner novel that I have read and enjoyed. Kristen is a complicated character, who second guesses her actions on the job and with her family, but not enough to change her ways. In this novel, she picks up a long distance FBI love interest that broadens the storyline. Kristen and her family are Christians, and they live their faith, though Kristen stumbles enough that she definitely feels human, and her efforts to grow are enjoyable. The murder mystery keeps you guessing until almost the very end, with great descriptions of fight scenes that keep the action hopping. I stayed so involved that I lost a little sleep when I did not read the end during my normal hours. I recommend this to readers who enjoy clean detective mysteries with lots of secondary storylines that add interest.
Received Galley from NetGalley.com.
January 17, 2020
Occasionally, I like a break from reading romance, and Every Breath You Take was the perfect break I needed.
When I read the back-cover copy, I expected this to be a nail-biter of a suspense: "Detective Kristen Conner may not be able to figure out her own love life, but she is about to get a crash course on finding Mr. Right, even as she finds herself in the crosshairs of a determined killer's gun."
Based on that, I expected to be holding my breath until the end of the book. But that wasn't the case.
According to one of the endorser's comments, the book is an "intense roller-coaster ride." But that's not the case either. I never once felt on a roller coaster.
But the same endorser said this: "Gilroy's writing feels effortless"---and that's right on point. Even though I didn't feel like it was a gripping book, I couldn't put it down.
Every Breath You Take is book 2 of the Kristen Conner series, and I'm sorry I missed the first one (got it on my wish list). Kristen is a typical tough-as-nails, never cries, lives for a workout heroine found in police procedurals, but she has a charming soft-spot for her high-volume nephew and his soccer-princess sister. In fact, Kristen coaches her niece's team, the Snow Flakes. Can you get any farther from "tough" than that?
Instead of reading like a driven, get-the-bad-guy mystery, Every Breath You Take is like reading a month in the life of a detective. There's one primary case to keep the novel in the genre and a couple of side cases that illustrates to the idea that detectives often have more than one case file open. There's an awkward romance, a family crisis, and lots of references to football. And lots of action.
In other words, the novel reads a lot like an episode of Rizzoli & Isles, Tess Gerritsen's novel series-turned-TV show. And it competes well with it.
Then, as the novel draws to a close, all the clues start falling into place, and you experience the fun part of reading mysteries: Hot dog! I guessed right! or Wow, I didn't see that coming! Followed by a gripping scene of catching the bad guys and a strong, satisfying conclusion.
Yep. I'm glad I read this one.
When I read the back-cover copy, I expected this to be a nail-biter of a suspense: "Detective Kristen Conner may not be able to figure out her own love life, but she is about to get a crash course on finding Mr. Right, even as she finds herself in the crosshairs of a determined killer's gun."
Based on that, I expected to be holding my breath until the end of the book. But that wasn't the case.
According to one of the endorser's comments, the book is an "intense roller-coaster ride." But that's not the case either. I never once felt on a roller coaster.
But the same endorser said this: "Gilroy's writing feels effortless"---and that's right on point. Even though I didn't feel like it was a gripping book, I couldn't put it down.
Every Breath You Take is book 2 of the Kristen Conner series, and I'm sorry I missed the first one (got it on my wish list). Kristen is a typical tough-as-nails, never cries, lives for a workout heroine found in police procedurals, but she has a charming soft-spot for her high-volume nephew and his soccer-princess sister. In fact, Kristen coaches her niece's team, the Snow Flakes. Can you get any farther from "tough" than that?
Instead of reading like a driven, get-the-bad-guy mystery, Every Breath You Take is like reading a month in the life of a detective. There's one primary case to keep the novel in the genre and a couple of side cases that illustrates to the idea that detectives often have more than one case file open. There's an awkward romance, a family crisis, and lots of references to football. And lots of action.
In other words, the novel reads a lot like an episode of Rizzoli & Isles, Tess Gerritsen's novel series-turned-TV show. And it competes well with it.
Then, as the novel draws to a close, all the clues start falling into place, and you experience the fun part of reading mysteries: Hot dog! I guessed right! or Wow, I didn't see that coming! Followed by a gripping scene of catching the bad guys and a strong, satisfying conclusion.
Yep. I'm glad I read this one.
July 10, 2022
I really enjoyed reading this. A few quibbles: there were reasons to suspect someone that were very clear to the reader so one wonders why the intelligent and intuitive protagonist did not catch on and a bit much physical workout details for my taste, but that is clearly a very minor point. What most surprised and interested me most is that Detective Kristen Conner has an active prayer life. Now I am not saying this novel is dominated by religion; we know she goes to church when she can, but that is mentioned less than eating pizza. It is just that as someone who tends to pray occasionally during the day I never thought about the fact that I seldom see a character in a novel who does so. I like it.
February 15, 2018
Love it
Read the first, just finished the second and getting ready to start the third in this series. Occasionally we come across a character that stands out. Susan May Warren's Josie is one I love. Now I can add Kristen. Plus the story lines have new elements so that they are not ho-hum same-o-same-o. Sometimes not being sure of who is "speaking" in the narrative requires a second read, but we pick up clues from the different perspective. So far I am liking this author, his writing style and plan to search for more of his works.
Read the first, just finished the second and getting ready to start the third in this series. Occasionally we come across a character that stands out. Susan May Warren's Josie is one I love. Now I can add Kristen. Plus the story lines have new elements so that they are not ho-hum same-o-same-o. Sometimes not being sure of who is "speaking" in the narrative requires a second read, but we pick up clues from the different perspective. So far I am liking this author, his writing style and plan to search for more of his works.
March 25, 2022
I couldn't really connect with the characters in this story. The story is very similar to Miss Congeniality but feel flat for me. I found myself drifting off as reading didn't feel like I was missing much. I don't know if that is because I didn't read the first novel, but from what I've gathered you don't have to read the first to read this study since they are stand alone. I don't think I realized this was Christian fiction, but I didn't think it really overpowered the story, which was good. It just wasn't for me.
May 24, 2025
like the character of Kristen Connor and the people she works with even her quirky family though they didn't figure in this book as much even though once again knew the end well before the end No surprises but nice read
March 26, 2019
Accidentally read book two first, don't do that!
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March 24, 2022
Enjoy this series. I know there is one more but hoping that isn't the end.
June 2, 2025
There were lots of missing commas between two independent clauses, but overall, the storytelling is good and clean, which is a nice change of pace from a lot of the stuff out there nowadays.
November 15, 2012
Chicago Police Detective Kristen Conner goes undercover in the world of online dating to try to catch a killer in a high profile murder case. Will she find true love in the process or end up as the murderer’s next victim?
I felt a little lost when first reading this book, and then I learned “Every Breath You Take” is actually the second book in this series. An abundance of background information is given about Kristen and her family, but I still feel some of the undercurrents between the characters went over my head because I hadn’t read the first book.
Kristen is a likeable main character. It’s unique to find a police procedural with a strong female character, and I was pleased to see Kristen is independent and ambitious, but is clearly devoted to her family. The main complaint I have about the book is it took too long to get to the main storyline. I had almost lost interest by the time Kristen returned to work at the Chicago Police Department and started working on the murder case. The sub-plot with Kristen trying to get access to files to investigate her father’s shooting added depth to the book and helps the reader get to know what kind of person Kristen is. Once the novel gets going, it’s good, but I would have enjoyed it much more if there hadn’t been so much set-up before getting to the heart of the story. Fans of Margaret Maron’s “Sigrid Herald” series may enjoy this new series.
I received a copy of this book from NetGalley through the courtesy of Worthy Publishing in exchange for an honest review.
I felt a little lost when first reading this book, and then I learned “Every Breath You Take” is actually the second book in this series. An abundance of background information is given about Kristen and her family, but I still feel some of the undercurrents between the characters went over my head because I hadn’t read the first book.
Kristen is a likeable main character. It’s unique to find a police procedural with a strong female character, and I was pleased to see Kristen is independent and ambitious, but is clearly devoted to her family. The main complaint I have about the book is it took too long to get to the main storyline. I had almost lost interest by the time Kristen returned to work at the Chicago Police Department and started working on the murder case. The sub-plot with Kristen trying to get access to files to investigate her father’s shooting added depth to the book and helps the reader get to know what kind of person Kristen is. Once the novel gets going, it’s good, but I would have enjoyed it much more if there hadn’t been so much set-up before getting to the heart of the story. Fans of Margaret Maron’s “Sigrid Herald” series may enjoy this new series.
I received a copy of this book from NetGalley through the courtesy of Worthy Publishing in exchange for an honest review.
February 6, 2013
I had a hard time with this book because it took place within the Chicago Police Department and the FBI. If had taken place in a small town police department, I wouldn't have blinked an eye. The story was well plotted. But this is Christian Fiction which means that Christianity plays a big role. While I have no problem with that per se, in the context of the Chicago PD, I found it slightly ludicrous. Kristen Conner is a police detective. She's so good that the FBI wants her. But she completely balks at going undercover as a very high priced escort in order to find the murderer of a very prominent Chicago businessman. She is on the job when she is "outed" by her sister, a TV anchor woman. The PD keeps talking about prayer sessions and praying and things that would cause human resource complaints in real life. Not that there aren't plenty of religious people on the police force, but they keep it to themselves because not everyone is going to share their faith in the same way. Connor also drops the assignment for a family emergency. While I get that, she has a big family and this was a major murder investigation. People who put their religion that far up their priority ladder rarely do well in the jobs that take them away from family on a regular basis. Connor didn't behave like a seasoned detective. She behaved like a cop who got really lucky and was promoted rather than someone who deserved her place. It's too bad because she has great instincts about people. The book was read well, albeit not overly memorably. But the religious aspect overwhelmed the mystery.
March 25, 2013
M.K. Gilroy follows his Christian themed debut mystery, Cuts like a Knife with Every Breath You Take. In this book Chicago Detective Kristen Conner finds herself on temporary assignment with the FBI in search of a killer who uses an online dating service to find his victims. She has no idea what’s in store for her or why the FBI is interested in her.
The story begins with Kristen and three attack team seconds away from storming a split-level home after the squad leader “slaps… three ‘Micro Concussion Bombs’ on the door surrounding the handle.” Before the smoke clears, Kristen races through the “jagged smoking entrance…her head on a swivel, weapon up, ready to fire…” with her team. One of Kristen’s last thoughts was about her mom and the bullet resistant jacket. She regretted not telling her mom she loved her and really wished her jacket was bullet proof.
Thus begins a character driven, police procedural of murder, intrigue and suspense on the order of Castle, Law and Order or The Mentalist. Similar to the first book, Gilroy uses italic type to illustrate the killer’s thoughts in the first and ensuing chapters. He adds potential romance through a charming FBI agent who’s attracted to Kristen’s good looks, vibrant personality and solid values. The plot thickens when a murdered wealthy playboy is found with clues that lead to an online dating service, former madam and unknown stalker, all of which complement a lively tale of suspense that keeps readers guessing.
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The story begins with Kristen and three attack team seconds away from storming a split-level home after the squad leader “slaps… three ‘Micro Concussion Bombs’ on the door surrounding the handle.” Before the smoke clears, Kristen races through the “jagged smoking entrance…her head on a swivel, weapon up, ready to fire…” with her team. One of Kristen’s last thoughts was about her mom and the bullet resistant jacket. She regretted not telling her mom she loved her and really wished her jacket was bullet proof.
Thus begins a character driven, police procedural of murder, intrigue and suspense on the order of Castle, Law and Order or The Mentalist. Similar to the first book, Gilroy uses italic type to illustrate the killer’s thoughts in the first and ensuing chapters. He adds potential romance through a charming FBI agent who’s attracted to Kristen’s good looks, vibrant personality and solid values. The plot thickens when a murdered wealthy playboy is found with clues that lead to an online dating service, former madam and unknown stalker, all of which complement a lively tale of suspense that keeps readers guessing.
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July 9, 2014
Chicago P.D. detective, Kristen Connor, is back in M. K. Gilroy’s second novel, Every Breath You Take. This time Kristen is working undercover as a paid date to discover who killed the son of an uber-wealthy Chicago businessman. Once again Kristen’s dedication and intuition solve the case. This book is a great read for those who like police procedurals and a tough and funny protagonist.
Kristen has just returned to Chicago after a summer of rehab and training with the FBI. Her love life is in question and she is glad to be back in Chicago where the familiarity of family and work keep her head in the game. Her first day plunges her into a new investigation where she must go undercover, this time as a high priced call girl. Kristen is not a girly-girl and her experiences in this new undercover job are hysterical. But of course Kristen will get her man.
I really love the characters created by M. K. Gilroy. Kristen Connor is by far the most fun and interesting, but her family and co-workers, including her fashionista partner, give a depth to this plot-driven series. Kristen’s love life is again a story line, but the murder investigation really takes center stage. And this book is a clean read — no worries about profanity or sex. So, if you like a quick-paced mystery, great characters and a story that keeps you guessing, then definitely check out Every Breath You Take.
Gilroy is working on book 3 in the series; I can’t wait!
Recommended.
Kristen has just returned to Chicago after a summer of rehab and training with the FBI. Her love life is in question and she is glad to be back in Chicago where the familiarity of family and work keep her head in the game. Her first day plunges her into a new investigation where she must go undercover, this time as a high priced call girl. Kristen is not a girly-girl and her experiences in this new undercover job are hysterical. But of course Kristen will get her man.
I really love the characters created by M. K. Gilroy. Kristen Connor is by far the most fun and interesting, but her family and co-workers, including her fashionista partner, give a depth to this plot-driven series. Kristen’s love life is again a story line, but the murder investigation really takes center stage. And this book is a clean read — no worries about profanity or sex. So, if you like a quick-paced mystery, great characters and a story that keeps you guessing, then definitely check out Every Breath You Take.
Gilroy is working on book 3 in the series; I can’t wait!
Recommended.
February 22, 2015
M.K. Gilroy is now in my top 20 authors. I read his debut novel, Cuts Like A Knife, and really liked it. Now that I've read the second all I can say is "When is the next Kristen Conner book coming out?"
Kristen Conner is a terrific new female law enforcement officer. A Detective with the Chicago Police, she's gutsy, she's tough, and she's very, very good at her job.
The book takes up where the first one left off. She's done with the case that led her to Washington, D.C. and is now back home on her own turf. Even though she would like a little time off to decompress with family and friends, it's not going to happen.
A very rich man is found dead with his head bashed in by a hammer. Kristen and her team find that the rich playboy used the services of an escort service ... along with 8 or 9 of his closest friends.
The owner of the escort service is coerced into prepping Kristen for going undercover as an escort so that she can get to know the friends.
There is lots of action ..... besides attracting one of the friends' attention, she also attracts a stalker. One and the same? Or is this someone from her past? And is she really developing a relationship with an FBI agent?
Very entertaining reading. Lots of action from beginning to end. 5 stars from me!
Kristen Conner is a terrific new female law enforcement officer. A Detective with the Chicago Police, she's gutsy, she's tough, and she's very, very good at her job.
The book takes up where the first one left off. She's done with the case that led her to Washington, D.C. and is now back home on her own turf. Even though she would like a little time off to decompress with family and friends, it's not going to happen.
A very rich man is found dead with his head bashed in by a hammer. Kristen and her team find that the rich playboy used the services of an escort service ... along with 8 or 9 of his closest friends.
The owner of the escort service is coerced into prepping Kristen for going undercover as an escort so that she can get to know the friends.
There is lots of action ..... besides attracting one of the friends' attention, she also attracts a stalker. One and the same? Or is this someone from her past? And is she really developing a relationship with an FBI agent?
Very entertaining reading. Lots of action from beginning to end. 5 stars from me!
April 11, 2013
I very much liked the first book in the series, (Cuts Like A Knife) and I was very excited when this book was released. Sometimes the second book in a series isn't always the best, but this book did not disappoint. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
I really like Kristin. She's a great, well rounded and likeable character. It's hard to find a police book with a strong, female lead. Too many times I've read books about some dumb female who can't hold her own and does something stupid just so the 'hero' can come rescue her. But that is not the case with Kristin! She's tough and she's smart, and that's what I really like about her.
This is an exceptional action book with great characters, fight scenes, and a mystery that keeps you guessing until the end!
I can't wait until the next book!
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I really like Kristin. She's a great, well rounded and likeable character. It's hard to find a police book with a strong, female lead. Too many times I've read books about some dumb female who can't hold her own and does something stupid just so the 'hero' can come rescue her. But that is not the case with Kristin! She's tough and she's smart, and that's what I really like about her.
This is an exceptional action book with great characters, fight scenes, and a mystery that keeps you guessing until the end!
I can't wait until the next book!
Check out my other reviews at Nicole Reviews Books!
April 27, 2014
I'd give this 4.5 if I could. I thought Chicago Police Detective Kristen Conner handled going undercover as a high paid escort the way it really would've gone down. In that nether world she sought to catch the killer of a dilettante.
That when she turned him down, the wealthy man (a suspect) who sought to date her only wanted her more shows the power women have over men if they will only say, "No."
Of course Kristen has feelings for an FBI agent who may have cold feet, but he can't hold a candle to her commitment phobia.
Well written, fast paced. But the opening was slow. But let me assure readers they should keep reading. This one is a really fine read.
That when she turned him down, the wealthy man (a suspect) who sought to date her only wanted her more shows the power women have over men if they will only say, "No."
Of course Kristen has feelings for an FBI agent who may have cold feet, but he can't hold a candle to her commitment phobia.
Well written, fast paced. But the opening was slow. But let me assure readers they should keep reading. This one is a really fine read.
November 9, 2015
Overall I liked this book. The style and point-of-view took some getting used to. It was written almost entirely in first-person but not the SAME person, so the reader was left trying to figure out who was speaking much of the time. The plot was interesting but very loosely structured; I personally think that some time spent revising and tightening the story would have been time well-spent. Some additional time also should have been spent editing. There were numerous errors resulting from words left over when cutting and pasting. There were also 8 or 10 grammatical errors that should have been edited out (verb tense or pronoun case errors mostly.)
June 15, 2020
Every Breath You Take is a solid novel by M.K. Gilroy. The main character, Kristen Conner, is tough and witty. She is a strong female lead that is not two dimensional, though at times it felt to me that she was trying a little too hard to be tough. The plot was interesting and carries out well. The ending was a little predictable, but worth the time getting there. I didn’t feel like I had missed out on much by reading the second book before the first, the author did a great job of supplying what was necessary to understand this novel and the characters motivations, without getting too bogged down in unnecessary detail. A solid novel.
March 4, 2013
I really like these characters. I'm already wondering what's going to happen next. The problem I had was that there just seemed to be so much going on--so many story lines. So many directions it could go. At times it felt like too many and I found myself wishing there was more focus on the major case. There were 330 pages and it didn't really get to the heart thumping until nearly page 300 and then it was done. But even with that I liked it enough to want to read the next chapter in Kristen's life. I will give the author credit for stumping me on who dunnit!
August 19, 2013
This is the second book that M.K. Gilroy wrote and he is quickly becoming a favorite of mine! Detective Kristen Conner is about to get immersed in the online world of dating as she goes undercover to find a serial killer they strike again. I found Kristen to be an overall very likable character and I thought the mystery aspect was quite good.I think I might of liked the first book in the series slightly better,but this one was really good too.
I would recommend this book to anyone who likes a good,clean mystery with a very memorable and likable female lead.
I would recommend this book to anyone who likes a good,clean mystery with a very memorable and likable female lead.
April 16, 2016
I like Kristen; her comedic delivery of her lines and her ability to laugh at herself are very refreshing. However, I have to remind myself that this is a novel, otherwise, I would be aggravated by some of the things she does that are totally unprofessional.
Another few murders to be solved by Kristen and her fellow CPD policemen.
A rich play boy is found dead. Kristen has to go undercover as an elite escort to find out if any of his affluent friends are involved.
An easy read, with interesting characters and some good dialogue.
Another few murders to be solved by Kristen and her fellow CPD policemen.
A rich play boy is found dead. Kristen has to go undercover as an elite escort to find out if any of his affluent friends are involved.
An easy read, with interesting characters and some good dialogue.
May 24, 2016
Every Breath You Take
This novel is told from the perspective of several characters and some of them are not identified until the very end, adding to the mystery. At times the suspense is nail biting. Other times I was tearful and even a few episodes of laughing. Great storyline presented in a very interesting and entertaining way m
This novel is told from the perspective of several characters and some of them are not identified until the very end, adding to the mystery. At times the suspense is nail biting. Other times I was tearful and even a few episodes of laughing. Great storyline presented in a very interesting and entertaining way m
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