This installment of Vampire Earth was extremely disappointing. I thought Ahn-Kha's story would be great and different than getting a story from David Valentine. But this book was awful, not only was it the worst of the Vampire Earth series, but as a book on it's own it was terrible.
The narrative was from Ahn-Kha's perspective and that was different for this series. But the story was extremely fragmented and it was very hard to follow. Even the dialogue was hard to follow, since most of the time, you didn't know who was saying what, it was just dialogue. The overall plot was very boring, there was not a lot of action or exciting parts. Most of it was just Ahn-Kha moving around the Kurian zone and working for the quislings. There was lots of descriptions and history of the area, but not a whole of action. This was very boring for a Vampire Earth book. When there were exciting parts, it was one sentence in a long paragraph and most of the time, you didn't know what was going on anyway. There was one chapter that stands out as the worst, Page 288 of the hardbacked version. Ahn-Kha has a conversation with Old Man Maynes that just starts in the middle of a paragraph about Ahn-Kha finding a gun. He starts talking to someone, who isn't introduced, you have no idea where he came from or what the heck they are talking about. It must have been extremely bad editing, like this conversation belonged in another chapter but accidentally got put in the middle of a different one. How did this get past an editor? It was very confusing for the reader. Stuff like that happened throughout the whole book.
I like Ahn-Kha, but this book was so bad that it was just about worth it to skip. In fact, when I go back and read the series again, I will be skipping this terrible book. The story was just too fragmented and jumpy. There were a lot of parts that I read and I didn't know what was going on, who was talking or I was just bored. This book felt very much like Knight needed money and just wrote some crap, stamped "Vampire Earth" on it and sent it out. This was so different than the other books in the series that it felt insulting to the fans that love these books. It was obviously a ploy to take advantage of the readers and maybe push back a publishing date. I was very disappointed and if the next book is like this one, I will have to give up on the series and that will be very sad since it's one of my favorites. But I can't rationalize paying for these books if the author isn't going to put any effort into writing them. So disappointing, 1 out of 5 stars.