Once I got about four chapters in, I couldn’t wait to finish this book — not because it’s good, but so I could move on to another I’d like better. It’s starts off with a girl named Shayna in the prologue, who I’m assuming is the “Hostage” from the title, but it never comes back to her at all, which makes the title lose meaning, because I didn’t see a hostage situation anywhere in the actual text (just the prologue).
Then we have two pairs of agents, each pair is a psychic woman and a man who is gaining his psychic abilities, in two separate locations, that the book toggles back and forth between in each chapter several times, and the author uses their first and last names interchangeably, which is super confusing because of their similarities. There are two other male agents that are in another location that Hooper refers to by both first and last names, but again, this is confusing too because she never introduces them with their first and last names together. You have to figure it out. They all drive Jeeps too. I mean, there are so many options in our world to differentiate characters and things that make them unique that it seemed really odd and confusing.
The middle of the book is wrought with tons of dialogue with agents speculating about “dark energy” constantly and creating this strange piecemeal of a plot line that’s supposed to solve a crime without any hard evidence. There’s barely any narration in some parts, which makes the text pretty dry, especially with the way the agents speak in fragmented sentences. There were several conversations without dialogue tags, and during the climax, there were italicized thoughts from at least three people/animals, also without tags, which made it super confusing. I just kind of sped through without even trying to decipher who was thinking or saying what though because of the lame plot line and my desire to just want to finish the book as quickly as possible.
This book was just really strange, disjointed, and poorly written, to be honest. It’s supposed to be a crime novel, but the majority is just these weird, speculative conversations about energy, not examining evidence like most detectives solving crimes would do. Apparently, this book is part of a series, but I doubt I’ll read anything by this author again. I also won’t save this book for my classroom or personal bookshelves; it’ll be donated. I’m quite surprised the ratings here are as high as they are. I was not a fan of this book at all.