High two stars. This book was. . . Really bad.
Seekers has been slowly deteriorating in quality since the first book, in my opinion, and this is just the latest in the pattern. This book was a SLOG. There is NOTHING worthwhile in this story that separates it from the 8 books that preceded it.
The writing is the same Erin style it always is, interesting and familiar, but not outstanding. The problem is the story, as usual. It was just so. Dang. Boring. Seekers is always at a disadvantage in the plot department compared to the other Erin books solely due to the fact that it centers on walking, AKA the most notoriously boring plot direction in Erin Hunter books. After 8 books, I am sick and tired of reading about these bears walking. We need something new. This book returns us to the woods, which should be a nice change of pace from the last few, except this story beat has already been done twice before in this series. A new character arrives and is taken away again before the end of the book by the magic of ‘the plot necessitates it’ (but it actually doesn’t), just like in the first book of ‘Return to the Wild,’ and whatever book Kallik’s brother attempted to join them for (book 3? I can’t remember). The only newish thing is the coyotes, but they not only stretched my suspension of disbelief but also didn’t really up the stakes at all, at least for me. We know none of these bears are going to die. The Erins are not brave enough to do that, and they clearly have a rule that there have to be four bears traveling together in these books, no more and no less, or Chenoa wouldn’t have died. Therefore no one will die, and the coyotes are just another mindless obstacle for the bears to get past.
Not to mention, none of these plot points have any lasting significance. Chenoa was forgotten after fiveish chapters of being dead, and I’m willing to bet the coyotes will come up maybe once next book, if at all. This is also a character issue, but it makes the whole story feel pointless when nothing has a lasting impact on anyone or anything. Ujurak comes back at random times for seemingly no reason, so he doesn’t even feel special anymore. All this just served to make the story completely useless in the grand scheme of things. You could delete this entire book from the series and nothing would change, except you’d have to add a paragraph explaining how Yakone lost some toes. That’s IT. It’s very disappointing, and to me it just seems to defeat the purpose of telling this story. There clearly isn’t enough content to fill six books in this series, so why did they try to drag it out so long?
The characters make it even worse.
There is nothing separating Kallik, Yakone, Lusa, and Toklo except where they will inevitably end up living.
Toklo spends the book wishing for the forest. He’s sad about Chenoa and has vague trauma for exactly two chapters before forgetting she exists. He retains his realistic attitude but has nothing new to speak of.
Kallik is a nothing character again. She has nothing new and only worries about Yakone.
Yakone is just annoying. He has nothing new and purpose except to create tension in the group, but he completely changes his personality after Chenoa dies because that’s the new source of tension. And he gets injured at the end. I can hope that the next book does something with this injury, but I have a feeling it will only be another obstacle to overcome, not an actual exploration of him as a character.
Lusa was cute with Chenoa but her arc felt like it was cut off by Chenoa’s death. It seemed like she was being set up for an arc about taking care of others and being strong despite her size (something the Erins try to tell us every book while consistently showing us the opposite), only for Chenoa to die before she could prove this. Lusa is sad for five chapters and then back to normal. I loved her passion about the bear spirits; it reminded me of arc 1 Lusa. I need more like that from her: more identifiable traits that make her stand out. And most importantly, they need to LAST. This is true for all the leads; there has to be consequences to these story beats or there is literally no point in these books.
Chenoa existed to die, which was really unfortunate because what we got of her was interesting and she had the potential to be a fun new addition to the group. But no. We have to have 4 bears only, no more and no less.
The villains are the coyotes, shiv I already talked about, and Hakan at the start. Like Chenoa, he was a means to an end (but at least we know what that end was with him). He was alright as an antagonist; I just wish, again, that he had any significance whatsoever to the broader story.
This was incredibly disappointing. I’m definitely worried for the next book, seeing as book 4 is typically the weakest in Erin Hunter series. Also I’ve technically read it before, but have literally no memory of what happens. Hopefully it will at least be more relevant than this one.
SERIES RATINGS:
Island of Shadows: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
The Melting Sea: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
River of Lost Bears: ⭐️⭐️
Forest of Wolves: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
The Burning Horizon: ⭐️⭐️⭐️
The Longest Day: ⭐️⭐️⭐️