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Elemental #2.5
Breathless
Too many secrets. Not enough time.
Nick Merrick is supposed to be the level-headed one. The peacemaker. Since it’s just him and his three hotheaded brothers against the world, that’s a survival tactic.
But now he’s got problems even his brothers can’t help him survive.
His so-called girlfriend, Quinn, is going quick as mercury from daring to crazy. Meanwhile, Quinn’s dancer friend Adam is throwing Nick off balance, forcing him to recognize a truth he’d rather shove back into the dark.
He can feel it—the atmosphere is sizzling. Danger is on the way. But whatever happens next, Nick is starting to find out that sometimes nothing you do can keep the peace.
Nick Merrick is supposed to be the level-headed one. The peacemaker. Since it’s just him and his three hotheaded brothers against the world, that’s a survival tactic.
But now he’s got problems even his brothers can’t help him survive.
His so-called girlfriend, Quinn, is going quick as mercury from daring to crazy. Meanwhile, Quinn’s dancer friend Adam is throwing Nick off balance, forcing him to recognize a truth he’d rather shove back into the dark.
He can feel it—the atmosphere is sizzling. Danger is on the way. But whatever happens next, Nick is starting to find out that sometimes nothing you do can keep the peace.
65 pages, Kindle Edition
First published April 30, 2013
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Brigid Kemmerer
30 books18k followersBrigid Kemmerer is the New York Times bestselling author of dark and alluring romantic fantasy like Warrior Princess Assassin, A Curse So Dark and Lonely, and Defy the Night, and compelling contemporary romance like Letters to the Lost. Her books have sold over one million copies and been translated into more than 20 languages, finding readers all over the world. A full time writer, Brigid lives in the Baltimore area with her family.
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April 29, 2013Guess what, guys! I'm having a contest on my blog for people who have pre-ordered Breathless! Go check it out at http://www.brigidkemmerer.com/2013/04...
April 2, 2013
If you are not reading the Elementals series, you are missing out. I can't think of many other series which are quite as fun as this one.
I also can't think of many other series featuring a household of hot brothers.
Just a heads up : I'm writing this review based on the assumption that you've all read the book's description first. If you've at least read that, then you won't be getting any spoilers from me.
So who here guessed that Nick might be looking twice at guys? Anyone? Anyone? I know that I wasn't the only one who had no clue until the book description for Breathless came out.
Well, isn't this an interesting twist? So there's one less Merrick for the females to fight over. I have the feeling that Nick's journey will be an emotional one to watch. How is Gabe going to take the news about his twin?
Btw, I'm just going to say that I called it. I knew Nick's story was not going to be a dull one like so many people were afraid of. Yep. I just knew. I think I'm going to open up a fortune-telling business.
There wasn't much element-y stuff going on in this short, but the smokin' hot scene kind of made up for the lack of magical goodness.
Although, I really do hope that we get to see more of what Nick's power can do in his own book. I'm ready to see him kick butt.
My only complaint is that I think Adam took a few too many liberties at times. He came across as pushy without meaning to, I think. But ah well...nothing can be perfect.
How long is the wait now for his full-length story? It can't come soon enough, imo. :(
This book provided from the publisher through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
I also can't think of many other series featuring a household of hot brothers.
Just a heads up : I'm writing this review based on the assumption that you've all read the book's description first. If you've at least read that, then you won't be getting any spoilers from me.
So who here guessed that Nick might be looking twice at guys? Anyone? Anyone? I know that I wasn't the only one who had no clue until the book description for Breathless came out.
Well, isn't this an interesting twist? So there's one less Merrick for the females to fight over. I have the feeling that Nick's journey will be an emotional one to watch. How is Gabe going to take the news about his twin?
Btw, I'm just going to say that I called it. I knew Nick's story was not going to be a dull one like so many people were afraid of. Yep. I just knew. I think I'm going to open up a fortune-telling business.
There wasn't much element-y stuff going on in this short, but the smokin' hot scene kind of made up for the lack of magical goodness.
Although, I really do hope that we get to see more of what Nick's power can do in his own book. I'm ready to see him kick butt.
My only complaint is that I think Adam took a few too many liberties at times. He came across as pushy without meaning to, I think. But ah well...nothing can be perfect.
How long is the wait now for his full-length story? It can't come soon enough, imo. :(
This book provided from the publisher through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
July 23, 2016
I've thought and thought about what to write about this novella, but all you really need to know is that after some teases in the previous Elementals books including Spark, we finally get to know what Nick Merrick's been hiding from everyone, including himself. This is a must-read for any fan of the series, and after you've finished you'll be beating down the author's door trying to get your hands on Nick's full-length novel Siege, which comes out next year.
If you haven't tried this series yet, by the way, now is a good time to start! I was skeptical when I first read about the premise of four hot guys who could harness the power of the earth elements, but the stories are wickedly fun, with moments of surprising substance and emotion.
As part of the tour we're hosting for the new book Spirit, you can download the Elemental novella for free. Use the promo code VCARD to get your free book (though that link only!), which is good through May 31.
My pals Jen and Steph are also hosting an Elementals Readalong. Sign up here or here if you're interested.
This review also appears in The Midnight Garden. An advance copy was provided by the publisher.
If you haven't tried this series yet, by the way, now is a good time to start! I was skeptical when I first read about the premise of four hot guys who could harness the power of the earth elements, but the stories are wickedly fun, with moments of surprising substance and emotion.
As part of the tour we're hosting for the new book Spirit, you can download the Elemental novella for free. Use the promo code VCARD to get your free book (though that link only!), which is good through May 31.
My pals Jen and Steph are also hosting an Elementals Readalong. Sign up here or here if you're interested.
This review also appears in The Midnight Garden. An advance copy was provided by the publisher.
April 7, 2013
For being a short novella, Breathless still had much story to tell. I'm always amazed by Brigid Kemmerer whenever I read her novels because she never gives us the short end of the stick, even if it's a small story like this one.
Anyway, it is quite the known fact that Nick is my favorite Merrick brother and this novella made him even more so. He is extremely caring and sacrifices his own happiness for his brothers. He may even sacrifice his dreams. What I loved about this novella was the fact that we were able to finally get to know Nick. Being in his head showed what kind of character he is and he truly is a genuine guy. It just made me even more excited for when he gets his own novel when we'll be in his head for a longer time!
As for Quinn's side of this little story, well...everyone also knows that I can't stand her. She's just not a character that I can look up to because I find her weak. While I did start to empathize her once we got a glimpse of what her home life is like, I lost that empathy by the way she reacted to everything. I wanted to shake her to make her realize how irresponsible she was being. She just irritates me to no end.
I wouldn't say anyone has to read this story in order to go on with the series, but why wouldn't you? It's a super quick, super fun read, and IT'S WRITTEN BY BRIGID KEMMERER. That's reason enough ;)
Anyway, it is quite the known fact that Nick is my favorite Merrick brother and this novella made him even more so. He is extremely caring and sacrifices his own happiness for his brothers. He may even sacrifice his dreams. What I loved about this novella was the fact that we were able to finally get to know Nick. Being in his head showed what kind of character he is and he truly is a genuine guy. It just made me even more excited for when he gets his own novel when we'll be in his head for a longer time!
As for Quinn's side of this little story, well...everyone also knows that I can't stand her. She's just not a character that I can look up to because I find her weak. While I did start to empathize her once we got a glimpse of what her home life is like, I lost that empathy by the way she reacted to everything. I wanted to shake her to make her realize how irresponsible she was being. She just irritates me to no end.
I wouldn't say anyone has to read this story in order to go on with the series, but why wouldn't you? It's a super quick, super fun read, and IT'S WRITTEN BY BRIGID KEMMERER. That's reason enough ;)
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August 28, 2012Have I mentioned I effing LOVE Brigid Kemmerer? Maybe? Once or twice? And, uh, another novella? Hell YES I am all over that. Nick's my favorite brother (good name he has there), and a story between Nick and Quinn? Bring the swoon! The excitement! The action!
Is it 2013 yet?
Is it 2013 yet?
April 11, 2013
Everyone knows that Michael is my favorite Merrick (if you have any illusions that you’ll be able to take him from me, please keep in mind that I have mad ninja skills I’ve been keeping under wraps all this time and that I won’t hesitate to use them), but what you might not know is that smart, calm, level-headed Nick is a close second. There was always something especially vulnerable about him that made me want to hide him and protect him.
I must admit that I love the direction Nick’s story is taking. What lies ahead of him is sure to be painful and extremely difficult, but I hope he’ll find the courage to go where his heart leads him, despite what his brothers might think. In the end, it probably won’t be nearly as terrible as he’s imagining it.
Ever since Spark, I’ve been uneasy when I thought of Nick (and I do think about the Merricks more often than I care to admit). I didn’t like Quinn for him, she is too unpredictable, too wild and self-centered. But Breathless showed a different side of her, and a different side of Nick, too, and I can’t wait to see where it will all lead them in Nick’s full-length novel, scheduled for January 2014. I liked Adam the second he showed up. I think he might be exactly what Nick needs – gentle and wise beyond his age, but also a bit pushy and determined not to let anyone dictate his life. I don’t doubt Nick’s happy ending at all, I just hope neither of them will get too hurt in the meanwhile.
January 2014, huh? Where’s that darn pre-order button?
I must admit that I love the direction Nick’s story is taking. What lies ahead of him is sure to be painful and extremely difficult, but I hope he’ll find the courage to go where his heart leads him, despite what his brothers might think. In the end, it probably won’t be nearly as terrible as he’s imagining it.
Ever since Spark, I’ve been uneasy when I thought of Nick (and I do think about the Merricks more often than I care to admit). I didn’t like Quinn for him, she is too unpredictable, too wild and self-centered. But Breathless showed a different side of her, and a different side of Nick, too, and I can’t wait to see where it will all lead them in Nick’s full-length novel, scheduled for January 2014. I liked Adam the second he showed up. I think he might be exactly what Nick needs – gentle and wise beyond his age, but also a bit pushy and determined not to let anyone dictate his life. I don’t doubt Nick’s happy ending at all, I just hope neither of them will get too hurt in the meanwhile.
January 2014, huh? Where’s that darn pre-order button?
April 30, 2013
I received this novella as an ARC through NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. I do solemnly swear that this is my honest, and unbiased opinion, and was not influenced by anything but my own feelings and impressions.
I have to say I had no idea what I was in for when I requested this book. I had never heard of the series, but it looked interesting, so I thought I'd take a chance and request it. I am so happy I did.
This novella has such strong, and well developed characters. Even knowing nothing about the series, and I do mean nothing. I found myself quickly drawn in, and caring about ALL of our principal characters. I really, really liked Nick. I liked his vulnerability, and insecurity, his intelligence, and most of all his kindness. He seemed like such an innately good person that it was impossible for me not to like him. Not impossibly, angelically good, but caring in a simple, and honest way. I like that he wasn't the big gay stereotype, and that his sexuality is not the sole source of his anxiety or insecurity. It feels like that when he does get his own volume it won't be a single issue book, and that he will receive the same treatment as his straight brothers.
Quinn was also nice developed and complex as well. I've read a lot of adult m/m romance where they have to have the token "evil" female, and I'm so glad these book didn't take that route. Quinn has her own fears, and insecurities, and they are treated with the same respect and understanding as Nick's. I like that being heavy didn't make her sexless, just as being gay didn't for Nick. It was interesting to see the different ways they both dealt with their fears. I really enjoyed their conversation at the end. It really gave me a lot of respect for her, and showed just how much these two care about each other. Having her point of view in the story added a lot, and I wouldn’t have understood so much about all of the characters had it not been there.
Adam was another great character. As a dancer other books would have made him weaker, or at least more effeminate, and I was glad to see that this book didn't go that way. He is lithe, and graceful, but masculine as well. He is a strong character secure in who he is, and what he wants, and I appreciate that. His apartment sounds like something someone his age living on his own could afford which was a nice touch, and added to the realism of the story. Let me just say that I've read sex scenes with less chemistry and heat than that one kiss.
The plot was interesting, and the outcome of the scene on the beach made me happy. It was nice to see an author not use the same old plot device to end that scene, and it was nice to see a drunk male character act in such an honorable fashion. It was refreshing especially considering the times we live in. The paranormal aspects were interesting, but they in no way overshadowed the real strength of this book: the human experience, and the joys and pains of growing up. An amazingly good read. I have to read the rest of this series. If it’s only half as good as this novella they will still be better than many books I’ve read.
I have to say I had no idea what I was in for when I requested this book. I had never heard of the series, but it looked interesting, so I thought I'd take a chance and request it. I am so happy I did.
This novella has such strong, and well developed characters. Even knowing nothing about the series, and I do mean nothing. I found myself quickly drawn in, and caring about ALL of our principal characters. I really, really liked Nick. I liked his vulnerability, and insecurity, his intelligence, and most of all his kindness. He seemed like such an innately good person that it was impossible for me not to like him. Not impossibly, angelically good, but caring in a simple, and honest way. I like that he wasn't the big gay stereotype, and that his sexuality is not the sole source of his anxiety or insecurity. It feels like that when he does get his own volume it won't be a single issue book, and that he will receive the same treatment as his straight brothers.
Quinn was also nice developed and complex as well. I've read a lot of adult m/m romance where they have to have the token "evil" female, and I'm so glad these book didn't take that route. Quinn has her own fears, and insecurities, and they are treated with the same respect and understanding as Nick's. I like that being heavy didn't make her sexless, just as being gay didn't for Nick. It was interesting to see the different ways they both dealt with their fears. I really enjoyed their conversation at the end. It really gave me a lot of respect for her, and showed just how much these two care about each other. Having her point of view in the story added a lot, and I wouldn’t have understood so much about all of the characters had it not been there.
Adam was another great character. As a dancer other books would have made him weaker, or at least more effeminate, and I was glad to see that this book didn't go that way. He is lithe, and graceful, but masculine as well. He is a strong character secure in who he is, and what he wants, and I appreciate that. His apartment sounds like something someone his age living on his own could afford which was a nice touch, and added to the realism of the story. Let me just say that I've read sex scenes with less chemistry and heat than that one kiss.
The plot was interesting, and the outcome of the scene on the beach made me happy. It was nice to see an author not use the same old plot device to end that scene, and it was nice to see a drunk male character act in such an honorable fashion. It was refreshing especially considering the times we live in. The paranormal aspects were interesting, but they in no way overshadowed the real strength of this book: the human experience, and the joys and pains of growing up. An amazingly good read. I have to read the rest of this series. If it’s only half as good as this novella they will still be better than many books I’ve read.
October 5, 2015
Final rating: 3/5 stars
This was adorable. Just like any other book from this series. Such a sweet romance and so cute and fluffy that it's unbearable.
This is a story about Nick Merrick. And......he has a girlfriend. Quinn. But....it's not her that is the problem...He think he is. He is trying to figure out what to do....he wants to go out of town...he doesn't want to be compared to his twin brother anymore and he needs escape. Only to find it's not that easy.
Quinn on the other hand...escapes from reality. Her family is taking her down, it's becoming horrifying for her...She has complex about her legs...she wants to be noticed and to be loved...trully loved. I must say i hated her family as much as she did, and i didn't mind her around.
Adam on the other hand, is the dancer guy. And the one Nick set his eyes on. You heard me. He understood why he felt no particular attraction with girls. He understood when he met Adam.
And so.....he struggles to understand what he had gotten himself into...
And it was so fluffy i could melt and die.
+ it was just adorable.
The end.
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REVIEW(S) RELATED TO THIS BOOK:
◈ Breathless (Elemental, #2.5)
◈ Spirit (Elemental, #3)
This review can be found on my blog: infinity-of-time.blogspot.com also known as...
"With girls, he could smile back. Flirt. A glance here, a touch there, a teasing word. It cost him nothing, and it was what everyone expected.
Right now, it left him breathless and uncertain. Because what everyone expected was in direct contradiction with what he wanted."
This was adorable. Just like any other book from this series. Such a sweet romance and so cute and fluffy that it's unbearable.
This is a story about Nick Merrick. And......he has a girlfriend. Quinn. But....it's not her that is the problem...He think he is. He is trying to figure out what to do....he wants to go out of town...he doesn't want to be compared to his twin brother anymore and he needs escape. Only to find it's not that easy.
“On the outside, you’re absolutely identical, but on the inside, it’s like you’re polar opposites.”
Quinn on the other hand...escapes from reality. Her family is taking her down, it's becoming horrifying for her...She has complex about her legs...she wants to be noticed and to be loved...trully loved. I must say i hated her family as much as she did, and i didn't mind her around.
Adam on the other hand, is the dancer guy. And the one Nick set his eyes on. You heard me. He understood why he felt no particular attraction with girls. He understood when he met Adam.
Adam was fiddling with the music player. “It’s driving me crazy,” he said, almost to himself. “It’s missing something, but I can’t figure out what.”
“A partner,” said Nick without thinking.
“Sorry. Just thinking out loud.”
Adam smiled again, that slow smile that pulled a little crooked because of the scar. His dark eyes shined in the overhead lights, and his voice was just a touch suggestive. “You volunteering?”
The breath rushed out of Nick’s chest.
Shit. Now he was blushing.
And so.....he struggles to understand what he had gotten himself into...
And it was so fluffy i could melt and die.
+ it was just adorable.
The end.
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REVIEW(S) RELATED TO THIS BOOK:
◈ Breathless (Elemental, #2.5)
◈ Spirit (Elemental, #3)
This review can be found on my blog: infinity-of-time.blogspot.com also known as...
April 30, 2013
Damn. That kissing scene at the end was pretty HOWT.
March 5, 2018
YASSS! Now that’s a novella worth reading. Ooh boy, can’t wait to read the next one. Their chemistry is just intense!
May 1, 2013
love love love love
Update: I commented on Brigid's FB update about people telling her that an LGBTQ relationship in a YA romance novel was "inappropriate" and this is what I wrote. In a way, it's a review of Breathless and, since she was kind of surprised by it, I think that I should share it with readers/ potential readers because it might make the difference between reading or not reading this book, and/or accepting or not accepting this slight turn in Nick's narrative.
Nick has always been a character that is likable and good and sexy and all that. By allowing YA readers to get to know him and like him for WHO HE IS, Kemmerer allowed them to understand his feelings, be empathetic and, in a way, have no choice but to accept him because, well, if they don't, they're kind of jerks and hypocrites. That's a shameful realization to make. Rather than introducing him as the token "gay best friend" the author let him be identified as someone other than just an LGBTQ character. ALSO, through Breathless, Nick expresses his insecurity, his guilt, and his conflict of identity and that is important because we all go through that - straight, gay, unidentified, transgender...it's a universal feeling. His romance story is totally worthy and compelling.
I seriously hope we get a little more of Nick's conflict in the following installments of Elementals. I'd like to see if he comes out and how he does. Just the idea of the Merricks being Elementals is enough that they should be empathetic to what Nick's going through and that is alluded to in Breathless. Maybe it's my undying affection for Gabriel, but I'd like to see how he reacts and if/how he accepts that Nick, his twin/ his other half, has a secret that, in a way, defines his sexuality in direct opposition to Gabriel. Even if it's only subtext, it's pretty true to the way that teens operate when they're trying to learn who they are and accept themselves for who they find themselves being or want to be. I also liked that we got to see a little of Quinn that earned her a bit of sympathy from me because, seriously, I dislike her...or did...until I realized that, for a lot of my adolescence, I was just like her. It's hard to not feel comfortable in your own body and not because it's not right, but because other people don't let you. The way she behaves is so real. Kemmerer has created - in Nick and Quinn - something very startling authentic. I know they're characters and that they're fake, but they're important to kids like them. I wish there were more Nicks and Quinns in the books my friends and I read when we were teens.
Update: I commented on Brigid's FB update about people telling her that an LGBTQ relationship in a YA romance novel was "inappropriate" and this is what I wrote. In a way, it's a review of Breathless and, since she was kind of surprised by it, I think that I should share it with readers/ potential readers because it might make the difference between reading or not reading this book, and/or accepting or not accepting this slight turn in Nick's narrative.
Nick has always been a character that is likable and good and sexy and all that. By allowing YA readers to get to know him and like him for WHO HE IS, Kemmerer allowed them to understand his feelings, be empathetic and, in a way, have no choice but to accept him because, well, if they don't, they're kind of jerks and hypocrites. That's a shameful realization to make. Rather than introducing him as the token "gay best friend" the author let him be identified as someone other than just an LGBTQ character. ALSO, through Breathless, Nick expresses his insecurity, his guilt, and his conflict of identity and that is important because we all go through that - straight, gay, unidentified, transgender...it's a universal feeling. His romance story is totally worthy and compelling.
I seriously hope we get a little more of Nick's conflict in the following installments of Elementals. I'd like to see if he comes out and how he does. Just the idea of the Merricks being Elementals is enough that they should be empathetic to what Nick's going through and that is alluded to in Breathless. Maybe it's my undying affection for Gabriel, but I'd like to see how he reacts and if/how he accepts that Nick, his twin/ his other half, has a secret that, in a way, defines his sexuality in direct opposition to Gabriel. Even if it's only subtext, it's pretty true to the way that teens operate when they're trying to learn who they are and accept themselves for who they find themselves being or want to be. I also liked that we got to see a little of Quinn that earned her a bit of sympathy from me because, seriously, I dislike her...or did...until I realized that, for a lot of my adolescence, I was just like her. It's hard to not feel comfortable in your own body and not because it's not right, but because other people don't let you. The way she behaves is so real. Kemmerer has created - in Nick and Quinn - something very startling authentic. I know they're characters and that they're fake, but they're important to kids like them. I wish there were more Nicks and Quinns in the books my friends and I read when we were teens.
May 10, 2013
The description is totally insinuating that Nick is gay and I love it.
May 12, 2013
4 Stars - So far, So Very Good!
(Emotional Rating: 4.5 stars)
The Merrick family has strong abilities that target them for termination. Their parents died trying to protect them, causing a shift in family roles. Each brother also carries the burden of guilt, which manifest in various ways. Michael, the oldest, is the struggling caregiver trying to keep his family together. Gabriel is the problem child, lashing out and struggling to control his fire element. Chris, the little brother and quiet one, misses the closeness he felt to his oldest brother and feels left out of the twin’s bond. Nick’s role as peacekeeper plays throughout the novels. Balancing his brothers tempestuousness with his control; mediating Michael and Gabriel’s skirmishes. Nick has his own issues. This short story reveals his secret thoughts and feelings.
Breathless, another well-written story, proves critical to the series. Nick’s secrets will impact his family, especially his twin. In previous books, his character seemed the least interesting of the bunch. Not anymore! Nick’s private struggles are absolutely gripping! Of all the brothers, his character has been the most contained, except for one episode in Spark. Boy, do his passions run deep! Being the rock of the family makes his ‘issues’ all the more riveting. There’s so much on the horizon for the Merricks and Elementals. Another positive of Breathless is Quinn, Nick’s girlfriend and best friend to Chris’s girlfriend Becca, finally demonstrates depth of character.
The intensity is amped up in this young adult paranormal romance series. I want more!
(Emotional Rating: 4.5 stars)
And then she recognized the uncertainty in his eyes, the mixture of worry and fear and panicand need. She struggled with acceptance every day--she'd never considered that someone like Nick Merrick would be struggling with the same thing. He's seemed like such a rock, such a steady, put-together guy, and she'd latched on to him, hoping to find some security.
He was really just as screwed up as she was.
The Merrick family has strong abilities that target them for termination. Their parents died trying to protect them, causing a shift in family roles. Each brother also carries the burden of guilt, which manifest in various ways. Michael, the oldest, is the struggling caregiver trying to keep his family together. Gabriel is the problem child, lashing out and struggling to control his fire element. Chris, the little brother and quiet one, misses the closeness he felt to his oldest brother and feels left out of the twin’s bond. Nick’s role as peacekeeper plays throughout the novels. Balancing his brothers tempestuousness with his control; mediating Michael and Gabriel’s skirmishes. Nick has his own issues. This short story reveals his secret thoughts and feelings.
Breathless, another well-written story, proves critical to the series. Nick’s secrets will impact his family, especially his twin. In previous books, his character seemed the least interesting of the bunch. Not anymore! Nick’s private struggles are absolutely gripping! Of all the brothers, his character has been the most contained, except for one episode in Spark. Boy, do his passions run deep! Being the rock of the family makes his ‘issues’ all the more riveting. There’s so much on the horizon for the Merricks and Elementals. Another positive of Breathless is Quinn, Nick’s girlfriend and best friend to Chris’s girlfriend Becca, finally demonstrates depth of character.
The intensity is amped up in this young adult paranormal romance series. I want more!
November 28, 2014
Copy received from publisher in exchange for an honest review.
This series so far has been exciting and not so exciting for me. I loved Storm (Chris' story) and Elemental (Michael's novella) but I wasn't too thrilled about Spark (Gabriel's story). So when this book was accepted on NetGalley for me I was really curious to see what way this one would go. And wow! This was a great novella. I loved every single page of it and I just need more. I'm over the top thrilled for Nick's book coming in 2014. The wait is way too long!
Nick has always seem like the most stable of the Merrick brothers. He also was my least favorite brother but I'm really coming back from that. I love him now! Anyway, with this novella we see that Nick also struggled with a whole lot. His girlfriend Quinn, helping Michael with the family business, college and feelings he doesn't really want to admit to himself let alone everyone else. Yeah, Nick isn't the most stable one at all. Even he has a lot of problems.
There really isn't anything negative to say at all, except that I wished this novella was longer and we didn't have to wait so long for Nick's book.
Breathless was an amazing novella that I enjoyed immensely. Any fan of The Elemental series or just of the Merrick brothers needs to read this. The series will feel so much more with what you know from these novellas. I love Brigid Kemmerer's writing. She really did an amazing job with this one and I want more!
This series so far has been exciting and not so exciting for me. I loved Storm (Chris' story) and Elemental (Michael's novella) but I wasn't too thrilled about Spark (Gabriel's story). So when this book was accepted on NetGalley for me I was really curious to see what way this one would go. And wow! This was a great novella. I loved every single page of it and I just need more. I'm over the top thrilled for Nick's book coming in 2014. The wait is way too long!
Nick has always seem like the most stable of the Merrick brothers. He also was my least favorite brother but I'm really coming back from that. I love him now! Anyway, with this novella we see that Nick also struggled with a whole lot. His girlfriend Quinn, helping Michael with the family business, college and feelings he doesn't really want to admit to himself let alone everyone else. Yeah, Nick isn't the most stable one at all. Even he has a lot of problems.
There really isn't anything negative to say at all, except that I wished this novella was longer and we didn't have to wait so long for Nick's book.
Breathless was an amazing novella that I enjoyed immensely. Any fan of The Elemental series or just of the Merrick brothers needs to read this. The series will feel so much more with what you know from these novellas. I love Brigid Kemmerer's writing. She really did an amazing job with this one and I want more!
April 18, 2013
3.5 stars
Breathless was yet again another charming instalment in what has quickly become one of my hottest favourite series yet. I have discovered that anything with the name Merrick on I will read and anything with the name Brigid Kemmerer the same goes.
As my love for these brothers has been established numerous times I was quick to snatch up a copy of Breathless, I needed a Merrick fix and I needed it now! Nick in my eyes has always been the quietest Merrick brother, well if you have a twin like Gabriel around it's kind of hard to find your own light to shine in. But this novella made me love Nick even more, (I know I say this with every single Merrick brother, but that is beside the point), he already has tons of pressure; with helping Michael with the family business, thinking about whether he wanted to leave his family and go to college or not and then this new revelation happened, which I so did not see coming. Having brothers like the Merrick’s I could see why Nick would always quash these feelings down, but I suppose at one point it just became a little too much for him.
I always adored Nick in the previous books and my reasons for doing so are easily justified with this thrilling novella. Nick in my eyes is always the gentleman, always one to put others before himself, the way he went out to help girlfriend Quinn, when she was in a tight situation I admired. I hope over the upcoming books Nick finds the confidence and support that he needs to get the happy ending he truly deserves.
Breathless gives us a nice little teaser into Nick’s personal life and leaves me with the biggest dilemma; I have no clear favourite Merrick brother anymore, it’s just so hard to choose between them. I’m pretty sure when Spirit is released in May, I will probably be adding Hunter to my list too!
Breathless was yet again another charming instalment in what has quickly become one of my hottest favourite series yet. I have discovered that anything with the name Merrick on I will read and anything with the name Brigid Kemmerer the same goes.
As my love for these brothers has been established numerous times I was quick to snatch up a copy of Breathless, I needed a Merrick fix and I needed it now! Nick in my eyes has always been the quietest Merrick brother, well if you have a twin like Gabriel around it's kind of hard to find your own light to shine in. But this novella made me love Nick even more, (I know I say this with every single Merrick brother, but that is beside the point), he already has tons of pressure; with helping Michael with the family business, thinking about whether he wanted to leave his family and go to college or not and then this new revelation happened, which I so did not see coming. Having brothers like the Merrick’s I could see why Nick would always quash these feelings down, but I suppose at one point it just became a little too much for him.
I always adored Nick in the previous books and my reasons for doing so are easily justified with this thrilling novella. Nick in my eyes is always the gentleman, always one to put others before himself, the way he went out to help girlfriend Quinn, when she was in a tight situation I admired. I hope over the upcoming books Nick finds the confidence and support that he needs to get the happy ending he truly deserves.
Breathless gives us a nice little teaser into Nick’s personal life and leaves me with the biggest dilemma; I have no clear favourite Merrick brother anymore, it’s just so hard to choose between them. I’m pretty sure when Spirit is released in May, I will probably be adding Hunter to my list too!
May 4, 2015
That was so much better than I expected. I always liked Chris, but he wasn't the most fascinating of the brothers. He was kind and intelligent, but he didn't get my heart racing. This novella definitely changed my perspective of him.
I loved how there was so much inner turmoil going on, not just with him but with Quinn too, but it wasn't just going in circles. It was understandable without becoming annoying. Well that's not entirely true, Quinn acting like a psycho did have me losing my mind a bit, but I still can't help but love her.
The only thing stopping me from giving this five stars, is that I thought Adam was a little unrealistic in his pushiness. Still a great story though!
September 1, 2016
Aaaaand another one for my non-existent favourites shelf.
This is the first part of Nick's story, but also Quinn's, and Adam's too, a little bit.
And I wanted to just wrap them all up in a group hug.
As happened with the other Merrick brothers in the previous books in the series, this time we get to see Nick's vulnerable, doubtful, insecure side, what's hiding under a rock of confidence and calmness - and all of this just makes him that much more lovable. I don't mean that as in "OMG I would so do him"; I'm talking about sheer affection - and that's the hardest thing to accomplish for an author, imo.
Then there's Quinn - and I loved her too, so much. Brash, strong, in your face and fun, but still so small and scared inside. But she has someone, now, and gosh, if it doesn't get better for her too, I don't know what I'm going to do.
And then... Adam. We know so little about him, but he's perfect. That's all.
I want a happy ending for everyone here. I demand it.
...Please?
This is the first part of Nick's story, but also Quinn's, and Adam's too, a little bit.
And I wanted to just wrap them all up in a group hug.
As happened with the other Merrick brothers in the previous books in the series, this time we get to see Nick's vulnerable, doubtful, insecure side, what's hiding under a rock of confidence and calmness - and all of this just makes him that much more lovable. I don't mean that as in "OMG I would so do him"; I'm talking about sheer affection - and that's the hardest thing to accomplish for an author, imo.
Then there's Quinn - and I loved her too, so much. Brash, strong, in your face and fun, but still so small and scared inside. But she has someone, now, and gosh, if it doesn't get better for her too, I don't know what I'm going to do.
And then... Adam. We know so little about him, but he's perfect. That's all.
I want a happy ending for everyone here. I demand it.
...Please?
December 28, 2013
How does an author get me even MORE interested in a series I'm already addicted to???
Anyone???
She adds in some
Damn Brigid, did you read my mind?!?!?!
This was the perfect teaser for Nick's story. I am now foaming at the mouth to read his full book. I kind of want to skip Hunter's book but I'll try to resist. I'll try.
Anyone???
She adds in some
Damn Brigid, did you read my mind?!?!?!
This was the perfect teaser for Nick's story. I am now foaming at the mouth to read his full book. I kind of want to skip Hunter's book but I'll try to resist. I'll try.
Want to read
January 18, 2013Oh boy. So... The blurb sounds like it. Or maybe not. Am I the only one thinking like this? This feels like the time when I finally realized I'd never ever be able to get Matt Bomer turned on, even in my dreams. *sigh*
June 29, 2014
I think I found myself a new fictional crush!!!
If it's not obvious by my exclamation point, I really enjoyed this Novella. I'm halfway through reading the first book of the series but the only thing I care about why I picked it the first place was because of Nick. So yeah, I abandoned ship and never regretted any minute of it.
This a perfect teaser to introduce Nick. Made me all excited reading his book!
If it's not obvious by my exclamation point, I really enjoyed this Novella. I'm halfway through reading the first book of the series but the only thing I care about why I picked it the first place was because of Nick. So yeah, I abandoned ship and never regretted any minute of it.
This a perfect teaser to introduce Nick. Made me all excited reading his book!
Want to read
November 29, 2012For me, that summary just made me think that the big twist to Nick's story is that... Do Not Click Unless You Want To Be POSSIBLY Spoiled!
September 11, 2016
I just knew that Nick's story was going to be my favourite! I can't wait for his book!
March 9, 2013
BOOK REVIEW by Michelle 8th March 2013:
RATING: 5 BRING ON NICK'S BOOK STARS!!
“Well,” said Adam, a slight smile on his lips.
“That was unexpected.”
I second that Adam. Ms Brigid, that was rather unexpected, lol!
I absolutely adored this novella.
What Brigid Kemmerer can do with a novella!
I really do believe she writes the best novellas, she wastes no words and you just simply want to keep reading. This is why I try, if they are accessible to Australia, to read novella’s that get sandwiched between books.
This was Brigid’s best novella in the Elemental series to date in my personal opinion. I wanted Nick’s novella to be a full blown book.
After tweeting Brigid, she said she was working on it now. Woot!
Awwwww Nick. I gotta say I did not see that coming until I started reading Breathless and I loved what I read.
I have to say the title is apt as I felt breathless watching Nick discover himself , and oh myyyyYYyyyy how Brigid wrote Nick’s story. It was a mixture of beautiful and nervousness for him.
I really liked how dance was used in this novella. Quinn is a bit of a mixed up cookie who has a bigger story to tell us I think. I liked where Brigid was taking us with a new character. He sounds like he will be rather yummy for Quinn and made quite the entrance.
I am loving Adam. I connected with him in this short novella. He has a kind heart.
I must say there was some sizzle in this wee little novella!
I always love the way Brigid uses the elements in her writing. She did it again in this novella bringing Nick’s Air element in beautifully.
I know there is more to come from Nick’s story as the brothers will be in the know at some stage. I feel a bit nervous for Nick with Gabriel.
“On the outside, you’re absolutely identical, but on the inside, it’s like you’re polar opposites.”
He sighed and ran his hand through his hair again. “Trust me, I know exactly what you mean.”
I am looking forward to more of Nick’s story. I am actually rather breathless for it.
Bring . It. On.
FAVE QUOTE:
“He’s not a dancer, Adam, this is Nick.” Adam. The name fit him like a chord strummed on a guitar.
Michelle
Beautiful Ms Brigid!! Loved this!! Awwwwwww just loved this!!
RATING: 5 BRING ON NICK'S BOOK STARS!!
“Well,” said Adam, a slight smile on his lips.
“That was unexpected.”
I second that Adam. Ms Brigid, that was rather unexpected, lol!
I absolutely adored this novella.
What Brigid Kemmerer can do with a novella!
I really do believe she writes the best novellas, she wastes no words and you just simply want to keep reading. This is why I try, if they are accessible to Australia, to read novella’s that get sandwiched between books.
This was Brigid’s best novella in the Elemental series to date in my personal opinion. I wanted Nick’s novella to be a full blown book.
After tweeting Brigid, she said she was working on it now. Woot!
Awwwww Nick. I gotta say I did not see that coming until I started reading Breathless and I loved what I read.
I have to say the title is apt as I felt breathless watching Nick discover himself , and oh myyyyYYyyyy how Brigid wrote Nick’s story. It was a mixture of beautiful and nervousness for him.
I really liked how dance was used in this novella. Quinn is a bit of a mixed up cookie who has a bigger story to tell us I think. I liked where Brigid was taking us with a new character. He sounds like he will be rather yummy for Quinn and made quite the entrance.
I am loving Adam. I connected with him in this short novella. He has a kind heart.
I must say there was some sizzle in this wee little novella!
I always love the way Brigid uses the elements in her writing. She did it again in this novella bringing Nick’s Air element in beautifully.
I know there is more to come from Nick’s story as the brothers will be in the know at some stage. I feel a bit nervous for Nick with Gabriel.
“On the outside, you’re absolutely identical, but on the inside, it’s like you’re polar opposites.”
He sighed and ran his hand through his hair again. “Trust me, I know exactly what you mean.”
I am looking forward to more of Nick’s story. I am actually rather breathless for it.
Bring . It. On.
FAVE QUOTE:
“He’s not a dancer, Adam, this is Nick.” Adam. The name fit him like a chord strummed on a guitar.
Michelle
Beautiful Ms Brigid!! Loved this!! Awwwwwww just loved this!!
July 28, 2013
RATING: 4.5 Hearts
When an author, like Brigid Kemmerer, can capture your attention with only 65 pages, there’s a lot to say about her work. Breathless to simply put it left me craving for more Nick Merrick. Kemmerer didn’t hold back in this novella, and delivered the angst, romance, and dose of hot boys – all the elements that make her Elemental series so addicting.
Although, it is a novella and readers know exactly what they are going into, there is never a moment where anything gets boring. We get a very satisfying glimpse into Nick Merrick’s world, and – dare I say – its even better than Gabriel’s (his twin brother and my hubby! ;p). His character, with all his insecurities and confused feelings, is easy to appreciate and even relate too. However, that is expected (it is Brigid’s boys we are talking about after all.), the real surprise comes from Quinn. Previously, I made my distaste for Quinn quite clear, yet, I found myself sympathizing with her. I understood her feelings for once, and she is growing on me, albeit slowly. Her relationship with Nick isn’t exactly “normal”, for lack of a better word, and I for one am very interested to see how they will continue.
Then we have Adam. I am so excited to fully meet him and get inside his head in Nick’s full book, Secret. His character’s introduction here is not nearly enough to satisfy, rather leaves readers yearning for more. I predict some very pleasing and some very hot moments in the future with Adam, and (is it weird I want more?) I can’t wait.
Overall, a very fun and light novella! And can I just say I’m completely in love with Nick Merrick and am dying to get my hands on his full book.
This Review is also posted on my blog: Literary Love Affair
April 14, 2015
How unexpected! But just like the other Elemental books, it’s fun exciting and fast… but also not the typical Merrick drama I’ve come to expect. I confess: I’m not up to date on whether Nick gets his own novel, but if like Hunter this novella is but a peek into the trouble he’s going to get into, then that book needs to get here now.
There’s not much to say though, and I always find it difficult to lay down what I liked/disliked, considering this is novella, you know? They’re always almost too short for the effort, but what’s here’s got me excited for the full lengths to follow. I didn’t think Nick had it in him to be different. Recall that his the good guy in a family of too hot too handle brothers all with a special speshulness that’s not based on them being hotties (OK, not just based on the being hotties).
Nick’s drama veers away from the earlier ‘What would momma say/ poppa do/ I miss them oh so much’ or the headaches of boys getting into it over girls with mysterious circumstance. And I liked it… even particularly as it’s made clear that the Merrick boys aren’t the only hot heads to contend with because if the Merrick boys already have sucky circumstances to get over, there’s still others worse off… i.e. Quinn, who’s interesting in her own way. Sucky family contest, we have a winner!
Then Adam… hmmm… interesting.
Thank you Netgalley!
There’s not much to say though, and I always find it difficult to lay down what I liked/disliked, considering this is novella, you know? They’re always almost too short for the effort, but what’s here’s got me excited for the full lengths to follow. I didn’t think Nick had it in him to be different. Recall that his the good guy in a family of too hot too handle brothers all with a special speshulness that’s not based on them being hotties (OK, not just based on the being hotties).
Nick’s drama veers away from the earlier ‘What would momma say/ poppa do/ I miss them oh so much’ or the headaches of boys getting into it over girls with mysterious circumstance. And I liked it… even particularly as it’s made clear that the Merrick boys aren’t the only hot heads to contend with because if the Merrick boys already have sucky circumstances to get over, there’s still others worse off… i.e. Quinn, who’s interesting in her own way. Sucky family contest, we have a winner!
Then Adam… hmmm… interesting.
Thank you Netgalley!
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November 12, 2015
Well, that was sure unexpected! I honestly didn't anticipate going that direction! This novella is about Nick. Nick, who is the quiet one, the one that gets the good grades, the one that wants to go to college. Nick is dating Quinn but Quinn is having a hard time of things. Her mother and brother treat her horribly. She doesn't seem to fit in with the cheer squad. Her only escape is when she dances. So she asks Nick to pick her up at the Y where she is rehearsing and Nick meets her new dance partner, Adam for the first time. And Nick feels something he never felt with Quinn or any girl for that matter. He tries to deny it, could never tell his brothers about this, but the feelings won't go away. Isn't being an elemental enough to have to deal with? Now this? As I said, I was truly shocked that the author was adding this direction to the series. I mean, poor Nick, with all he has to deal with. And, I enjoyed learning a little more about what Quinn is going through, why she stays with Becca so much. It broke my heart the way they treat her. These little novellas add so much to the series in helping us to know and understand the characters better. So I'll have to wait for Secret to find out more about where this goes with Nick.
February 28, 2015
Этот рассказ словно подарок на Рождество. Я все время удивлялась, почему Кеммерер не дала волю своей фантазии раньше? Ведь я прекрасно знаю ее вкусы, они у нас с ней совпадают во многом. Думала, что ничего такого в серии Стихии не будет. Ан-нет, меня удивили. Приятно удивили. Да еще кто, Ник! Вот уж от кого не ожидала так не ожидала. Впрочем, я тему эту люблю, и думаю что Бриджид не подкачает. Фишка таких книг зачастую в чувствах, а не в физических отношениях, которые пестрят везде куда не сунься. За это я подобное и люблю. Не пошло, заставляет сопереживать и сердце биться чаще.
В общей сложности, с нетерпением жду 4-ю книгу. Правда еще нужно добить книгу про Хантера, прежде чем браться за Ника. И Хантера я как-то не сильно люблю. Впрочем, с учетом того, какая ему досталась девушка, мне его реально жаль. И даже немного любопытно будет почитать, как он выпутается из этой передряги.
Итог: 10 из 10
В общей сложности, с нетерпением жду 4-ю книгу. Правда еще нужно добить книгу про Хантера, прежде чем браться за Ника. И Хантера я как-то не сильно люблю. Впрочем, с учетом того, какая ему досталась девушка, мне его реально жаль. И даже немного любопытно будет почитать, как он выпутается из этой передряги.
Итог: 10 из 10
January 31, 2019
Uuuuuuu boy, this novella was awesome. Making me love Nick more than I already did, helping us understand him more and
I've never liked Quinn, I mean, I guess she's alright, but I don't really care for her. This book made me appreciate her and made me feel very grateful that Brigid Kemmerer decided to make a character who is filled with insecurities of being 'fat' or 'not good enough'; it was very refreshening!
All in all, this novella was great, probably my favorite out of the three, and I can't wait to read more from Nick's point of view!
I've never liked Quinn, I mean, I guess she's alright, but I don't really care for her. This book made me appreciate her and made me feel very grateful that Brigid Kemmerer decided to make a character who is filled with insecurities of being 'fat' or 'not good enough'; it was very refreshening!
All in all, this novella was great, probably my favorite out of the three, and I can't wait to read more from Nick's point of view!
August 28, 2013
Rating: 5/5
For a short story this one was a huge shock. I didn't see this coming at all. Nick has a huge secret which only makes me love him more. He was my favourite character in the beginning but then he started going out with Quinn, who I hate and he kind of lost his charm, but after this short story he is back on the top. I honestly can't wait to read his book, book #4. If only I had the third one and the fourth one was out.
For a short story this one was a huge shock. I didn't see this coming at all. Nick has a huge secret which only makes me love him more. He was my favourite character in the beginning but then he started going out with Quinn, who I hate and he kind of lost his charm, but after this short story he is back on the top. I honestly can't wait to read his book, book #4. If only I had the third one and the fourth one was out.
May 1, 2013
To Nickquinnemmeradam!
“His thoughts felt stuck on a spinning roulette wheel, bouncing along, never settling where he expected, leaving him half-hoping it would keep spinning — and half hoping it would stop.” Pg. 22 of my ARC of Breathless.
Gosh, Breathless comprised of 53 or so pages that left me in awe.
The writing was phenomenal. The writing was full of many amazing similes like the one above and splendid prose.
The story delightful since it was full of self-discovery and even had a little action with Matt’s creepy friend. While reading, I felt so many moments of exited laughter as I admired the language, the characters, and the incorporation of elements. Everything.
Really, the only complaint I’m left with is the classical it is too short.
For the first time in my re-reading history, I wanted to experience this wonderful story again as soon as I finished it the first time. Usually I wait at least a day to re-read anything. I did not re-read it because it was novella, but because it was wonderful. Reading it supplies the same feeling I receive as I eat a hot fudge sundae, loving every bite of bittersweet chocolate colliding with cool ice cream, never wanting the sweet taste to leave my mouth.
What was it that caused this novella to be rereadable and special to me the most? Well, it was the three main characters. Quinn, Adam, and Nick, are characters that leave so much room open up for exploring. Room to explore their feelings, mistakes, and histories, basically everything that makes a character real.
Character Explorations:
Quinn
Quinn was my favorite character in Storm. I completely adored Quinn as she constantly revealed how much she cared for her best friend Becca through standing by her side and her no-nonsense personality. I love how she was blunt. Sweet when desired.
Quinn was different in some ways in Breathless. She was still blunt, but seeing her home life revealed the insecure nature that she hid in Storm. She battle’s loneliness that I understand since I feel it sometimes. Quinn has a dismal home life and the way she reacted to it was not admirable. But it did show that she was a real person, as she was affected by others opinions of her.
I love her fierce nature, her open-mindedness, her caring nature that she tries to hide, her humor, and her ability to adapt quickly to surprise.
Adam
Breathless is the first appearance of Adam. Adam has potential to be as interesting a character as Quinn and Nick. Quinn shared his interesting back-story where he could have reacted with vengeance. Instead, he moved forward, to work on accomplishing his dancing dream. This short story introduces a funny guy, who is proud of his identity, exuberant in nature, and understands the importance of letting others make their own choices.
I am eager to understand him further in Siege. (The full Nick/Quinn book)
Nick
When I read Spark, I found Nick as the best and greatest character. My favorite scene in Spark was when he and Gabriel fought because of every line spoken by Nick.
I feel that I have not truly understood Nick as fully as I do now.
His appearance is one of perfection. His interior is compassion rising with confusion. From the first moment in Breathless, Nick mind is in disarray. It unfolds in discovery. Stiffens with indecision.
I am hooked to Nick’s mind with wonderment. A point of view I will never forget. Like water in a sea, I am bubbling with energy to lean more into his mind.
What makes Nick unique among his brothers is that he is the one who is suppose to have everything together. He is the one the others go to when they have a problem. This situation results with how Nick is keeping his worries in his head, is hiding his hidden fire, and is pushing others to reach their calming point, while not being a saint. Yes, Nick encompasses how you do not have to be self-sacrificing to be empathetic. Yes, Nick tries to controls his feelings and usually he does that well. Yes, Nick's empathetic nature is what I love most about him.
Will Nick loosen his control and take a chance in Breathless?
Find out in a moment of being Breathless.
Originally Posted at Unforgettable Books
Along with a delightful interview I did with Brigid!)
“His thoughts felt stuck on a spinning roulette wheel, bouncing along, never settling where he expected, leaving him half-hoping it would keep spinning — and half hoping it would stop.” Pg. 22 of my ARC of Breathless.
Gosh, Breathless comprised of 53 or so pages that left me in awe.
The writing was phenomenal. The writing was full of many amazing similes like the one above and splendid prose.
The story delightful since it was full of self-discovery and even had a little action with Matt’s creepy friend. While reading, I felt so many moments of exited laughter as I admired the language, the characters, and the incorporation of elements. Everything.
Really, the only complaint I’m left with is the classical it is too short.
For the first time in my re-reading history, I wanted to experience this wonderful story again as soon as I finished it the first time. Usually I wait at least a day to re-read anything. I did not re-read it because it was novella, but because it was wonderful. Reading it supplies the same feeling I receive as I eat a hot fudge sundae, loving every bite of bittersweet chocolate colliding with cool ice cream, never wanting the sweet taste to leave my mouth.
What was it that caused this novella to be rereadable and special to me the most? Well, it was the three main characters. Quinn, Adam, and Nick, are characters that leave so much room open up for exploring. Room to explore their feelings, mistakes, and histories, basically everything that makes a character real.
Character Explorations:
Quinn
Quinn was my favorite character in Storm. I completely adored Quinn as she constantly revealed how much she cared for her best friend Becca through standing by her side and her no-nonsense personality. I love how she was blunt. Sweet when desired.
Quinn was different in some ways in Breathless. She was still blunt, but seeing her home life revealed the insecure nature that she hid in Storm. She battle’s loneliness that I understand since I feel it sometimes. Quinn has a dismal home life and the way she reacted to it was not admirable. But it did show that she was a real person, as she was affected by others opinions of her.
I love her fierce nature, her open-mindedness, her caring nature that she tries to hide, her humor, and her ability to adapt quickly to surprise.
Adam
Breathless is the first appearance of Adam. Adam has potential to be as interesting a character as Quinn and Nick. Quinn shared his interesting back-story where he could have reacted with vengeance. Instead, he moved forward, to work on accomplishing his dancing dream. This short story introduces a funny guy, who is proud of his identity, exuberant in nature, and understands the importance of letting others make their own choices.
I am eager to understand him further in Siege. (The full Nick/Quinn book)
Nick
When I read Spark, I found Nick as the best and greatest character. My favorite scene in Spark was when he and Gabriel fought because of every line spoken by Nick.
I feel that I have not truly understood Nick as fully as I do now.
His appearance is one of perfection. His interior is compassion rising with confusion. From the first moment in Breathless, Nick mind is in disarray. It unfolds in discovery. Stiffens with indecision.
I am hooked to Nick’s mind with wonderment. A point of view I will never forget. Like water in a sea, I am bubbling with energy to lean more into his mind.
What makes Nick unique among his brothers is that he is the one who is suppose to have everything together. He is the one the others go to when they have a problem. This situation results with how Nick is keeping his worries in his head, is hiding his hidden fire, and is pushing others to reach their calming point, while not being a saint. Yes, Nick encompasses how you do not have to be self-sacrificing to be empathetic. Yes, Nick tries to controls his feelings and usually he does that well. Yes, Nick's empathetic nature is what I love most about him.
Will Nick loosen his control and take a chance in Breathless?
Find out in a moment of being Breathless.
Originally Posted at Unforgettable Books
Along with a delightful interview I did with Brigid!)
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