*Spoilers* Too long. Too much waffle. A man named Sweeney writes a diary to his daughter who is lying in a coma after a violent robbery. He tells her his life story, his stormy relationship with his wife and alcohol, and his plans to take revenge on one of the robbers who has escaped justice, a man named Quinn, the books only interesting character. Sweeney abducts Quinn, holds him prisoner, but is unable to follow through on his plan to kill him, but then the tables are turned and Quinn has the upper hand, and then they reconcile, of course, only for 'natural justice' to be meted out anyway by a higher power. The main failing of this book is that it fails to tell us the inner workings of Sweeney's mind during the confinement of Quinn, and how he comes to reconcile with him. This is a major flaw. Sweeney can't get out of a car or look out of a window without filling the diary with reams of detail about what he sees, hears, etc, and he's very forthcoming on his feelings and emotions too, but he never writes anything in this diary about his relationship with Quinn. By this stage of the book, the diary structure has broken down a little, there's lots of dialogue, and we forget this is all supposed to be a story bring told to Sweeney's comatose daughter, until it pops up again in a phrase addressed to her. At which point you think, what about explaining what's happening with Quinn? I found this a major flaw, together with overly long descriptive passages which should've been edited out. In short, there is far too much surface detail and not enough insight.
PS. I am not familiar with this author's work, this is the only book I've read by him.