I received a free copy of this book for review.
Was this tagged as historical fiction? I can't remember if I saw that somewhere.
I didn't see much of the history and the story told didn't seem like it was specific to any area. It could be anywhere that was taken over during the ice age. I would classify it as just fiction. The ice would have changed the terrain so describing valleys and hills wouldn't necessarily mean they'd still be there thousands of years later. I know the author put a lot of research into the work, he says so on the last page, but it still seemed like just a normal work of fiction.
Hmmm. Would the art of the story be that I didn't notice the history? :/
Overall, I didn't really like this book. It was boring. The characters were organized and individual and you could see they were well developed. I liked that teenager Rab was an adult but also a child depending on what was going on. I liked how a lot of drama was circumvented with communication. I didn't like how the characters were described. "here's a character, here's their definition." Like an outline for a writing project. Some scenes were described very nicely, Arwen's house near the woods next to the mountains was very clear. But the village and valley of Rab's home I had to guess at.
The chapters seemed to jump around and it was hard to find out where I was in the story. If I were an editor I'd suggest maybe a small descriptor in the chapter title. "Arwen's house: Present time", "Callan's boat trip: 1 month ago", "Rab kills a deer: 5 minutes ago". Though I suppose that last one wasn't a separate chapter.
Lots of the dialog seemed useless. I didn't care about what these people were talking about. It wasn't character building, it wasn't plot advancement and it didn't inform me of events. I found myself wishing they would shut up.
What was with all the fart and poo and sex jokes? I know there's not plumbing, and having them shit down the side of a cliff is a good way to write that ugly part out of the story, but the girls giggling over fart sounds and then running off home to tell everyone there about it so they can all laugh some more is a little over the top.
Last, there were a few grammar mistakes and missing words, but for the most part the writing was very good for not having been edited before (if that's not true, don't tell me otherwise).