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Vampire Slave #3

Vampire Slave #3

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Explicit Adult Content! Back in New York Dusty and Thalos have a moment to catch their breaths. Dusty faces insubordination at Vampire Poison. He goes to Thalos for comfort. A tender act cements the two as a couple. Thalos grows hopeful that Dusty may be the one to end his period of loneliness.

Thalos brings in vampire allies to help them against Johann. The noble vampires at Thalos’ academy try work with Vampire Poison, but the officers treat them like scum and promise to destroy them. They want a treaty. No one at Vampire Poison is willing to budge an inch on this, including Dusty. While they bicker Johann is able to unleash even more havoc.

42 pages, Kindle Edition

First published July 21, 2012

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Yamila Abraham

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Yamila Abraham founded the publishing company Yaoi Press in 2004 and published over 50 graphic novels, many she wrote herself.

Abraham is a prolific writer of male/male romance, yaoi, yaoi graphic novels, science fiction romance, and erotica. She's known for explicitly detailed love scenes and dynamic premises. She wrote two of Yaoi Press' best selling series: Winter Demon and Dark Prince. Her best known ebooks include Maelstrom, UnPrison, Alien's Bride, and the Vanquished series.

Abraham has been a speaker or guest of honor at 150 anime fan conventions.

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2,193 reviews112 followers
July 2, 2017
I want Dusty to be more receptive to Thalos' love...

The whole Vampire Poison group is getting on my nerves and I wish they could budge on their stupid goal of killing all vampires.
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160 reviews
August 23, 2014
This review encompasses the entire series.

The cost to read the entire 5 book series is fairly steep. For a serialization, the expected cost is always higher, but at $0.99 for the first installment and $2.99 for each addition that follows, the reader will be spending a hefty $13 for what comes out to be about 175 pages of total story related content.

While the plot for the story is intriguing, the execution is a little disappointing. The writing reads like a first draft, lacking sensory detail. While characters enter different locations, there is limited detail of what the environment looks like, smells like, feels like. The characters are mostly left shallow and ambiguous. The details are left completely up to the readers imagination, with little direction from the writer.

Dusty's character is off putting. He is supposed to be the leader of the vampire slaying organization, but is easily angered and driven to tears. He childishly demands respect, while displaying few reasons why his subordinated should trust him with their lives. His frequent bouts of tears and whining leave no confidence that he could be a realistic vampire hunter, let alone a realistic leader.

Thalos is somewhat better as a character. A self proclaimed romantic, his actions are a little more believable, even if his attachment to Dusty is unfounded. While Dusty's attachment to Thalos is expected due to being "cursed" by Thalos as a child, Thalos never says that he felt a similar absence for Dusty while they were separated for those many years.

The series receives an "it was okay" marking because it is easy to see where the story could have been awesome. If the readers' imagination is up to filling in some enormous gaps while suspending some serious disbelief, it's an okay story.
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113 reviews7 followers
September 5, 2016
This is for the whole 5 of the series. The way I feel about this serial was that it was.... Stupid!! that was my first thought, serious waste of time. I'm surprised I hated this story so much as I tend to really like most of this author's works, smh I'm very dissappointed with this thou. The MC's were frustrating in their own stupid ways, I disliked Dusty the most with his arrogant bratty immature wishy washy ( the list could go on forever) behavior & don't get me started on Thelos doormat weak pathetic clingy... ugh put up with crap behavior being the most powerful vampire creator!!! I felt like I was reading a story written by a 12 year old middle school girl!!! Staaay away from this total waste of time junk. Sorry Yamila but this was beyond dissapointing, you can do waaay better than this & I will still look to some more of your stories & chance that I'll either like, love or completely hate them like this one, because..... despite all of this I still believe in yooouuu!!!
153 reviews
March 1, 2015
Love it

Vampire slave three is so short I read two and three in a hour and I'm a slow reader. And VP leader is on crack me off got a blowing form a vampire so get off your high horse with this I hate your kind. But still good read I'm loving it.
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