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When 18 year old Krystal Waverly catches her best friend Madison having sex with her boyfriend, she wants nothing more than revenge. So she hatches a plan. A plan to have sex with Maddie’s father.
But her scheme doesn’t go accordingly, for Mr. Hendricks is nothing like any high school boy she’s ever tried to be with. He’s an older man: confident, authoritative, and with a single glance, she’s caught completely in his power.
Her revenge forgotten, Krystal delves into a new world of sex, bondage, and a slave and master dynamic she’s never experienced before with this older man. But with high school coming to an end, and college looming on the horizon, how can they keep up the exploration that Krystal so desperately wants to continue?
This is a steamy erotic romance, and recommended only for mature readers, due to multiple and graphically described sex scenes, and themes of BDSM, bondage, spanking and other abuse, and multiple instances of oral and vaginal intercourse.
But her scheme doesn’t go accordingly, for Mr. Hendricks is nothing like any high school boy she’s ever tried to be with. He’s an older man: confident, authoritative, and with a single glance, she’s caught completely in his power.
Her revenge forgotten, Krystal delves into a new world of sex, bondage, and a slave and master dynamic she’s never experienced before with this older man. But with high school coming to an end, and college looming on the horizon, how can they keep up the exploration that Krystal so desperately wants to continue?
This is a steamy erotic romance, and recommended only for mature readers, due to multiple and graphically described sex scenes, and themes of BDSM, bondage, spanking and other abuse, and multiple instances of oral and vaginal intercourse.
117 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 24, 2012
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Mallorie Griffin
39 books16 followersMallorie Griffin is a born and raised Virginia girl, where she currently resides. She went to college for art, getting a degree in the fine arts before turning to writing. As a writer, she is most interested in paranormal romance and erotica, though she also occasionally tries her hand at science fiction.
When she's not writing, Mallorie spends time with her family, and her pet birds.
When she's not writing, Mallorie spends time with her family, and her pet birds.
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January 3, 2013
I liked these books i hope she writes more I would love read more about this girl and Derrick.
August 18, 2012
2.95 stars
Story: FAIR
Intimacy Level: GOOD/ SEXUALLY SPICY
Enjoyment: FAIR
Length: 117 pages / 2329 kindle
I think this is the good, the bad and the ugly rolled into one. I'm very split with this book and even split with my rating. Lets get out the way that this relationship between Krystal and Mr. Hendricks is taboo, as Krystal is eighteen and still in high school and Mr. Hendricks is older as well as Krystal's best friend's father. That's ok for me, however, Krystal more acted as though she was sixteen. Eighteen is not mature, but her demeanor just turned me off. When Krystal and Mr. Hendricks were engaging in sexual activities, that's the only time she seems mature. When she isn't with him and she is at school or home, it felt like a YA read. So I think both issues clashes with me and my enjoyment. There are books that I have read with similar concepts but Krystal's character didn't connect with me.
The story starts with Krystal at high school. In that moment she caught her best friend and boyfriend engaged in a sexual act. Angry and hurt she plots her revenge, to have sex with her so call best friend's father. But what originally was revenge, turns in to M&S, master and submissive/ BDSM.
This was a likable story, but the female character definitely got under my skin. Yes, I know, she is eighteen and in high school, but for me personally, with my erotica, I don't want to feel like I'm reading a YA genre. I know there is a second part to this story, Her Father, My Master: Enthralled, I'm still debating whether to try it, but lets see because it's on my wish list. I still commend the author on the concept and storyline, as I did find Mr. Hendricks sexy and appealing.
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Story: FAIR
Intimacy Level: GOOD/ SEXUALLY SPICY
Enjoyment: FAIR
Length: 117 pages / 2329 kindle
I think this is the good, the bad and the ugly rolled into one. I'm very split with this book and even split with my rating. Lets get out the way that this relationship between Krystal and Mr. Hendricks is taboo, as Krystal is eighteen and still in high school and Mr. Hendricks is older as well as Krystal's best friend's father. That's ok for me, however, Krystal more acted as though she was sixteen. Eighteen is not mature, but her demeanor just turned me off. When Krystal and Mr. Hendricks were engaging in sexual activities, that's the only time she seems mature. When she isn't with him and she is at school or home, it felt like a YA read. So I think both issues clashes with me and my enjoyment. There are books that I have read with similar concepts but Krystal's character didn't connect with me.
The story starts with Krystal at high school. In that moment she caught her best friend and boyfriend engaged in a sexual act. Angry and hurt she plots her revenge, to have sex with her so call best friend's father. But what originally was revenge, turns in to M&S, master and submissive/ BDSM.
This was a likable story, but the female character definitely got under my skin. Yes, I know, she is eighteen and in high school, but for me personally, with my erotica, I don't want to feel like I'm reading a YA genre. I know there is a second part to this story, Her Father, My Master: Enthralled, I'm still debating whether to try it, but lets see because it's on my wish list. I still commend the author on the concept and storyline, as I did find Mr. Hendricks sexy and appealing.
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September 6, 2013
You know those shows that you secretly hide because they are your guilty pleasure? Yeah, well this is my guilty pleasure read. It is hot and incredibly sexy, but it also makes you uncomfortable as hell and the title alone freaks me out a bit.
Krystal is having a complete shit week. She walks in on her boyfriend nailing her best friend Maddie. We find out that Prom is right around the corner and Joey, her boyfriend, and her had a plan to take each other's virginity that night. Sadly that isn't how things go. In fact the whole Prom thing even made my blood boil. You will need to read it to find out what happened.
Krystal's brilliant idea is to get back at Maddie by screwing around with her father. Here is that emotional cringe I had when I read her scheme. First, older men are not as easily manipulated as younger men. Krystal learns this first hand as she makes her play and finds that Mr. Hendricks is on to her little game, even if he doesn't know the motif.
Mr. Hendricks, seriously we get no name other than that and Sir, has a pretty hot kinky side to him. And we watch as he takes Krys on all sorts of naughty and sexy adventures. This being my guilty pleasure I will say that you should pick it up. It's a sexy and fast read, sometimes a bit immature, definitely not a cliffy although there are two more books in the series.
I give it 3.75 lipsticks!
Krystal is having a complete shit week. She walks in on her boyfriend nailing her best friend Maddie. We find out that Prom is right around the corner and Joey, her boyfriend, and her had a plan to take each other's virginity that night. Sadly that isn't how things go. In fact the whole Prom thing even made my blood boil. You will need to read it to find out what happened.
Krystal's brilliant idea is to get back at Maddie by screwing around with her father. Here is that emotional cringe I had when I read her scheme. First, older men are not as easily manipulated as younger men. Krystal learns this first hand as she makes her play and finds that Mr. Hendricks is on to her little game, even if he doesn't know the motif.
Mr. Hendricks, seriously we get no name other than that and Sir, has a pretty hot kinky side to him. And we watch as he takes Krys on all sorts of naughty and sexy adventures. This being my guilty pleasure I will say that you should pick it up. It's a sexy and fast read, sometimes a bit immature, definitely not a cliffy although there are two more books in the series.
I give it 3.75 lipsticks!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 31, 2012
HER FATHER, MY MASTER is a story of revenge turned erotic journey.
What happens when a plan to get back at your best friend for sleeping with your boyfriend by sleeping with her father? The best laid plans can backfire and that is exactly what happens.
I picked up this book for free on Amazon and it is definitely worth checking out!
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What happens when a plan to get back at your best friend for sleeping with your boyfriend by sleeping with her father? The best laid plans can backfire and that is exactly what happens.
I picked up this book for free on Amazon and it is definitely worth checking out!
✳✳ Reviewed on I ♥ Bookie Nookie Reviews
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August 15, 2014
I read this as part of a challenge otherwise I never would have picked this one up. It's just not my type of storyline plus I'm not a huge YA fan. I thought the whole concept of teenage girl seduces best friends father in an act of revenge would be squishy but there is this little scene right at the beginning when she's studying at the friends house that seems to make it sexy.
But the writing doesn't lose the fact she's a teenager. The growing obsession between Krystal and Mr Hendriks was believable with her first taste of sex and power. However, I couldn't decide if the use of the word 'spastically' was a testament to her age or just a terrible word choice. It was used multiple times in a couple of pages and I gotta say...please find another word!
The book also in need of another edit. Still found it a hawt read and I reckon I might keep going with it.
But the writing doesn't lose the fact she's a teenager. The growing obsession between Krystal and Mr Hendriks was believable with her first taste of sex and power. However, I couldn't decide if the use of the word 'spastically' was a testament to her age or just a terrible word choice. It was used multiple times in a couple of pages and I gotta say...please find another word!
The book also in need of another edit. Still found it a hawt read and I reckon I might keep going with it.
April 8, 2013
When 18 year old Krystal Waverly catches her best friend Madison having sex with her boyfriend, she wants nothing more than revenge. So she hatches a plan. A plan to have sex with Maddie’s father.
But her scheme doesn’t go accordingly, for Mr. Hendricks is nothing like any high school boy she’s ever tried to be with. He’s an older man: confident, authoritative, and with a single glance, she’s caught completely in his power.
Her revenge forgotten, Krystal delves into a new world of sex, bondage, and a slave and master dynamic she’s never experienced before with this older man. But with high school coming to an end, and college looming on the horizon, how can they keep up the exploration that Krystal so desperately wants to continue?
June 15, 2013
So...this is sorta babysitter porn -- young (but 18!) girl falls hard for older experienced man..who's her ex-friend's father.
It's not too bad, so I went with 3 stars. Krystal and 'Mr. Hendricks' have some fairly kinky sex while Kyrstal figures out if she wants to go to UVA or stay with Mr. Hendricks and go to community college....Tough choice, I guess...
Krystal has a lot of teen angst and there's tons of emotional hand-wringing -- I really wanted to slap her hard a couple of times, but never mind -- Mr. Hendricks already did!
Short, silly, but better than just OK.
It's not too bad, so I went with 3 stars. Krystal and 'Mr. Hendricks' have some fairly kinky sex while Kyrstal figures out if she wants to go to UVA or stay with Mr. Hendricks and go to community college....Tough choice, I guess...
Krystal has a lot of teen angst and there's tons of emotional hand-wringing -- I really wanted to slap her hard a couple of times, but never mind -- Mr. Hendricks already did!
Short, silly, but better than just OK.
January 7, 2013
A story about an 18 year old Krystal, who finds that her boyfriend cheated on her with her best friend, and as a revenge she decides to seduce her best friend's father, though things dont go exactly as she planned, as Mr Hendricks is nothing like the boys she ever been before. A very thrilling and sexy story, unique one! i liked their age difference, and it was interesting! i also liked Mr. Hendricks and his dominant side! I hope she will write more books!
June 22, 2022
Rage becomes lust and submission
An interesting story. One that you would not think likely if the title didn't give it away.
Girl has boyfriend, boyfriend f***s her best friend, girl ditches both and becomes slave of her best friend's father in revenge for her deceit.
That makes it sound like I didn't enjoy the book, but I did. It was a different start to a master/slave relationship that proved very enjoyable.
An interesting story. One that you would not think likely if the title didn't give it away.
Girl has boyfriend, boyfriend f***s her best friend, girl ditches both and becomes slave of her best friend's father in revenge for her deceit.
That makes it sound like I didn't enjoy the book, but I did. It was a different start to a master/slave relationship that proved very enjoyable.
May 14, 2013
As far as story line goes it starts out pretty good. The plot of the story kind of fizzles and just goes to mainly kinky sex. I wished there was more of a history on the master told so his feelings and just what he is thinking would of been nice. I'm starting #2 Enthralled so I hope more gets explained.
September 2, 2012
Colour me pervy but I thought it was hot ^_^
September 4, 2012
This wasnt a bad story. I got a little annoyed with Krys cause she had maturity with him but acted like a silly teen when she wasnt.
December 4, 2012
Wish there was more storyline. Evs.
June 15, 2013
Pretty good read. I feel like the story shouldn't have been rushed seeing its part of a series, but I plan on reading the next book to find out what happens with Krys and Mr. Hendricks.
June 24, 2013
Short yet story line is good....
August 17, 2014
2.5 - 3 stars. Not the best editing and the story and writing were somewhat simplified yet it was still relatable and I connected to the h more than I expected. It kept me engaged and it was hot.
September 27, 2012
too intense. good story though.
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