At the end of 'But She is My Student', i felt like someone abruptly pulled out my lifeline. I called the ending too abrupt. Basically, i just needed more of these characters and the world that Kiki Archer created for us. If you felt like that too, you will love this book and the chance to pick up where we left off.
It took me longer to read than normal. I frequently found myself looking away from the text and staring off to digest what i had just read. I felt the need to savor this book and didn't want to rush to the end. You get into the heart and soul of these people in the first book, and this chance to rejoin and watch on as they grow as people and couples, and tackle personal issues, is a treasure that brought out emotion with ease. Many books seek to bring out emotion by just being depressing, this story is a well balanced combination of joy, love, worry, fear, etc. (and lucy and her sayings are just as hilarious) you will ride the roller coaster along with the characters. In that sense, along with the introduction of 'Renee', it reminded me of one of my favorite books, Fortune Is a Woman, but on a younger level. It has you questioning one of the protagonists, and questioning what you want for her.
It seemed like there was more 'local' terminology used in this sequel, or i just noticed it more. I was often looking up words that were listed as (informal BRIT) in kindle dictionary, but that don't exist in american english at all. But i loved that touch. Kiki's telling of the story in that fashion made it very genuine. I felt like i was right there in the kitchen with freya's mom, in a not-so-posh section of england.
The characters as you learned in the first book, are very down to earth and realistic. and diverse! this isn't one of those books where every character is surprisingly a wine drinking rich and beautiful lesbian. that was just another aspect that made it more real. (so if you are one of those people offended by having heterosexual characters in your lesfic, then don't read this book). Another thing i was very happy with, was the way the author brought this book to a close. i'm a big fan of epilogs, and while there wasn't an epilog per-say, there was a chapter at the end that brought everything together and left you with the closure that was missing from the first book. This one has mastered the truly balanced book.
Really i don't need to say as much as i have. if you loved But She Is My Student, you will want to get this. definitely read that one first if you haven't already.
writing: 5 stars
editing: 5 stars
character development: 5 stars
ending that doesn't suck: 5 stars
and of course, a moderate dose of hot and steamy that you dont have to wait until the end for.