Pierced

by Natasha Knight

When Maggie walked into Chaos Tattoos, she wanted a navel piercing. But Anthony had more in mind for the pretty, submissive brunette. Much more. Detailing what he wanted to do to her, which included a bare ass spanking for beginners, he told her to think it over and return in two days time, if she were interested.

He never doubted she'd be back. Although Maggie resisted the tall, dominant Anthony at first, she did return. Giving herself over to her most basic desires, she learned how complete submission could bring her to heights of pleasure she'd never before experienced.

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Genres: BDSM, Erotica, Menage, Short Stories

33 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 15, 2012

About the author

Natasha Knight is the USA Today Bestselling author of Romantic Suspense and Dark Romance Novels. She has sold over a million books and is translated into six languages. She currently lives in The Netherlands with her husband and two daughters and when she’s not writing, she’s walking in the woods listening to a book, sitting in a corner reading or off exploring the world as often as she can get away.

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Reviews

[Renee Nicole · Rating 4 out of 5]

I'm starting to think that the shorter BDSM stories are the ones for me.

This one was short and to the point, with a fun little twist thrown in at the end. Shy little Maggie makes her way into Anthony's tattoo parlor to get her belly button pierced. She grabs his attention - well, her ass does - and he propositions her for a little spanky spanky fun time. She's a little hesitant, but decides to go for it, anyway.

Lot's of red bums in this story. Lots of big boners. I liked it!

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I won this from the Erotic Enchants Holiday party!

[Natasha Knight]

I wrote it so of course I loved it! ;)

[Not Now...Mommy's Reading · Rating 4 out of 5]

Originally published on Not Now...Mommy's Reading

I love men. Men with tattoos? Even better. Dominant men with tattoos who seductively suggest spanking my bare bottom into submission? Sign me up for that good time and call me happy!!! Anthony is my ideal of a good time!!! Really. This short story (about 37 pages) is all about a good time - there is no romance contained within these pages. None. No declarations of undying love here - it's all about uninhibited physical pleasure at the hands of an experienced and dominating male.

Steamy Sampling :

He smacked her ass hard, but his voice was soft, relaxed. "I didn't tell you to move your hand, did I?" Another slap.

"No," she said even as she lifted her ass to receive the slap. She put her hand back where he wanted it. "Please, I want to come." When he delivered another slap, she added a breathless, "Sir. Please let me touch myself, Sir. Please Sir."

Anthony smiled, fucking her hard and fast. Her breath came unevenly as she closed her eyes and turned her face away, whimpering. She was close.

"Come for me, Maggie," he said, "touch yourself and come for me."

Smokin'! I loved the sex scenes! Anthony and Maggie were the perfect Dom and Sub combination. Shy and timid at first meeting, Maggie quickly warms up to Anthony's touch and blossoms into a sexually confident woman who enjoys her arrangement with Anthony to the fullest. Highly recommended quick read!

[Daisy Sloan · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is a cute short story about a woman falling into a BDSM relationship when goes to get her belly button pierced. Soon, his brother is joining in on the fun.

It was hot and erotic. I just wish it had been longer! Great potential for this author!

[Chris · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short, steamy story featuring mostly Maggie and Antony. Antony's brother make a guest appearance towards the end, adding steam to the story. Overall, a quick smutty read with more than one happy endings.

[Crystal]

I would LOVE to read this

[BookAddict ✒ La Crimson Femme · Rating 3 out of 5]

Maggie is single and finally free of her tyrannical boyfriend. He controlled her so much that now she has a little taste of freedom, she's going to go wild. Well, not really that wild. She goes to a tattoo shop for a belly button piercing. Owner of the tattoo shop, Anthony can sent the submissive sent wafting from her.

Is this realistic? Yes. Submissives, especially women are easy for some people to spot. Anthony is one who spots a submissive with barely a blink. What follows is a bit unrealistic, yet it's smexy fun. Maggie is a sweet and obedient little girl. There is no way she is able to resist Anthony's commanding orders. His scenes with her are hot and move at a faster pace then what is believable. Since this is a short story, a sped up sexual relation is expected.

There were a couple of points which were unclear in this story. Was Maggie new to the BDSM lifestyle? At times it seemed she was completely inexperienced and at other times, it seemed as if she was in the know. This causes a bit of confusion to the reader. The ex-boyfriend was also a bit odd. Was he into the lifestyle too but a Dom gone wrong? Or was he just an abusive controlling jerk? It's hard to tell and it makes the reader question the story a bit more, given the conflicting representation of Maggie's BDSM experience.

Still, this short story is a hot sexy number. The added menage increase the heat and brings the story into a happy closure. Hopefully this is just the tasty appetizer, paving the way for a much longer story between Maggie and Anthony. This smexy story is recommended for kinky readers who enjoy a little spanking, menage and D/s.

[B.E.Love · Rating 3 out of 5]

3 1/2 stars, This is an erotic novella about Maggie and Anthony. Anthony owns Chaos a tattoo shop and he has scene Maggie walk by his shop several times then turn around and leave. One night Maggie finally makes it inside and asks for a piercing. Anthony knows she is a submissive and want to open her eyes to the experiences they can share. After he tells her he wants to spank her he knows she will come back for more. Each time Maggie comes back Anthony introduces her more to the submissive lifestyle and Maggie will have to decide if she's all in. This is a very erotic short read I would have liked it more **spoilers** if the book had a hea and there was no sharing, but thats the romantic in me**end spoilers. but overal this was a good fast short read.

[Nathalie · Rating 4 out of 5]

I liked this, short but hot and told from the male POV, which is different.

[Susan S. · Rating 5 out of 5]

A must read! Needed a cold shower after this fun, sexy story. Hoping for more from this author!!!!

[Tina · Rating 4 out of 5]

Really good despite being short. Anthony was sweet but hot! Will check out more by this author!!!

[Philomena Callan Cheekypee · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short but hot BDSM story

[Momoftwins02 · Rating 1 out of 5]

I paid $2.99 for a book that took me maybe 45 minutes to read? Seriously? What a waste of time of money!

[Selene · Rating 3 out of 5]

Short, erotic, and perfect for a reader who likes spankings and a dominant male lead. Great ending!

[Jenny · Rating 4 out of 5]

2*

[Velma · Rating 2 out of 5]

It was ok, but I wasn’t the biggest fan of it