I didn't like this book at all. It seems that I've always been able to find some redeeming quality in any book that I read. In that spirit, I finished this one, but it was painful. To start with, the main character fell in love with the guy pretty much instantly; the author expects the reader to buy into this when there's really no journey there. I mean, she meets him, then she loves him.
The whole premise of the book is that 18-year-old Adie has dreams that are premonitions of the future. Understandably this ability is driving her a little crazy, especially reading about the incidents a few days later in the newspaper & wondering if she could've stopped these crimes. Then, voila, Jeff, who's been posing as a student teacher in her class, reveals himself as a recruiter for this company that's funded by the government to utilize these Visionaries' dreams to be able to intervene before these crimes happen.
So, at this point I'm thinking that although this is completely fantastical, that's what I love about many of the books that I read. I was still intrigued, but keep in mind I was only a few chapters in. From very early on, the book plummets downhill. I can't say that the author isn't detailed in her descriptions, but it seems like her details are used on the wrong things, like the scenery in the wilderness of this underground world in which this agency resides. I really needed more details about these pre-cognitive abilities & how they worked, I needed to be convinced to care about these characters...and I wasn't.
Adie's friendship with Dannika is another example of the non-existent relationship building in this book. One minute they're saying "nice to meet you" (and honestly, Dannika doesn't even really like Adie at first; she feels threatened by her) and only a few details and events later they're the best of besties.
The plot becomes completely convoluted, there are secondary characters that I felt were so irrelevant that there was no real need to even introduce them to the story. There was the plot and there were a couple of additional sub-plots that she attempts to intertwine with the main plot until it turns into a confusing mess.
Even after the book's climax when everything is supposed to start falling into place (maybe not completely & that's ok too!), I had difficulty deciphering who the bad guys were versus the good guys. It was just frustrating. I'm all for solving puzzles along with twists and turns in a novel, but these were just so pointless, I didn't even care if I ever knew what happened at the end. But, for some reason I just kept plowing through, I HAD to finish, lol, don't know what that's about!
And lastly, I'm all for cool character names, but there's such a thing as trying TOO hard. This was waaaaay over the top. Just sayin'. Anyway, I'm no book critic, that's for sure; and I've never said anything so absolutely negative about anything that I've read before, I feel kind of gross doing it actually! But I also need to be honest if I'm going to share my reading experiences with anyone. Otherwise, the fantastic "reviews" that I give won't hold as much weight, at least I don't believe they will. :)