I really enjoyed the first half of this book. I enjoyed the world building, and the fact that the characters were actively trying to avoid being turned into a vampire. I haven’t come across too many stories that have that. I like how the vampires thought differently than the humans, although after the halfway point, that difference became more and more apparent, and harder for me to wrap my head around.
Saaya grated on my nerves more and more throughout the story. She’s super powerful, but she decided to save these two humans because of mere...curiosity? She doesn’t even know why. She hints at the strength Jelani has, but won’t expound on it. At the same time, she seems attracted to him, but not. She seems like a plot device. Jelani is being attacked? No problem, she’ll swoop in and save him. It feels like she has no weaknesses, which in turn can create a weak character. Not to mention her brother, but I don’t know much about him other than the fact he’s super strong.
I believe Jelani is the main character (or meant to be), but the story gave me the impression that he and the other humans are ants compared to the vampires, and that there’s nothing they can do to better their situation. They’ll either be killed or turned to keep the vampire world a secret. The vampires are superior to the humans, and this is the way of the world.
The perspective of the book slowly shifts from a lot of Jelani, to less Jelani and more vampire perspectives the further you get in the book. I didn’t really like this. I liked seeing the underdog try to keep himself and his friends safe, and I felt like the book would have been better if it didn’t have the additional vampire perspectives (because they are superior and have no objective other than to kill Jelani and friends). Jelani could have been built up more as a character, and could have grown more, especially if he didn’t have Saaya to hold his hand and protect him through the book.
I like that Jelani is able to eventually fight back successfully and kill a vampire because it shows character progression, but it happens at the end of the book. Saaya is there as well. It just heightens the impression I have that Jelani is an ant compared to the vampires. He slowly becomes a secondary character, with the vampires transitioning to be the primary characters.
One thing that was a little annoying the more it happened was the way Saaya would prove what she was to the humans. Oh, look, I’m suddenly in front of you. Nope, now I’m behind you! Super speed for the win!
Anyway, those are my rambling thoughts about this book. I really enjoyed the first half of the book, but the second half was much harder to get through. Oh, and I don’t understand the point of the first chapter. A character named Larry was introduced, and he was hunted by vampires and killed. He died the very next chapter. In my opinion, it would have been better to not include his perspective because he only appears once in the entire book.