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276 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 5, 2023
The Auction 2/5 stars
The Consequence 2/5 stars
The Unexpected 3/5 stars
The Temptation 2/5 stars
The Enemy 3/5 stars
Page 23
It definitely has loads of telling instead of showing. I hope that changes later on because it feels pretty much like the characters are telling me what is happening rather than me reading about what’s happening.
Page 56
I just don’t see the chemistry. They say they want to f*** each other’s brain out, and they are half in love with the other but like they haven’t had one conversation since chapter 1 that wasn’t about work or had any entertainment to it, like jokes or banter. They are absolutely dull so it’s hard to believe that they are attracted to each other.
Page 145
Another MMC who is a genius but still dumb af. If you have the email that answers all your questions, but you ignore it, then when it blows up in your face, you can only blame yourself. I was excited for Ryker’s story and sure he is kind, but the chemistry and romance are lukewarm, and the characters are dull and illogical. I’m bored as h3ll and this e-mail thing irritates me. Play stupid games, win stupid prizes.
Page 150
So he reads the email, and he keeps it a secret from Eden even though he promised Eden he would never lie to her, which will then lead to a third act break-up and then Ryker will grovel and Eden will forgive and they will live happily ever after. Did I guess it right? Why do authors feel the need to use the miscommunication/ secrecy trope in such ways? Every single time it’s the very same dull/ irritating formula.
Page 165
Man I am so p!ssed off. Can this book just end? I am sorry but the conflict between the brothers makes me so angry. Ryker is so damn illogical and the whole plot is just unnecessary and irritating. He is so gonna f up his relationship with Eden and he deserves it. Top 5 worse plot points. I don’t want this to end in happy ending. Not a chance.
Page 226
God I’m so tired of this story. Ryke lied even though he promised not to. He deserved Eden’s cold shoulder and anger. But at the same time, Eden ran as fast as she could just as Ryke predicted. Ryke should grovel for his lie but not for what Beau did so Eden’s logic doesn’t make any sense. God, I’m so tired of these characters. Just let it end.
Page 242
Well, this was disappointing. I expected more from Ryker because I liked him in the previous books but my god he was dull and then illogical. Eden just was. Like she just existed. She bored me to d3ath too and then she was illogical too. The whole plot was predictable from like page 20 and I don’t mean to be rude, but the way the secrecy trope was executed held nothing special. It was generic and then frustrating.