Ammons' final book, and very much an old man's book it is, at its best effortlessly conveying the melancholy that must accompany the latter stages of life. Witness passages such as:
"...we never
thought we would live forever (although we did)
and now it looks like we won't"
(from "In View of the Fact")
Or the heartbreaking opening lines of "Between Each Song"
"I once would have said my sister Vida but now
I can just say my sister because the other
sister is gone: you didn't know Mona, lovely
and marvelous Mona"
But at other times it degenerates into complaints about the degeneration of the body, and while I understand that, too, must be a pressing concern for an older man (Ammons was only 70 when he wrote it, incidentally), I cannot say it's a subject I want to read poetry about.
Ammons is a master of the sudden switch from one subject to the next, sliding without warning, sometimes in the middle of a couplet or line, from the concrete to the profound or back again. The technique is effective at times, jarring at others, confusing or enlightening in turn.
There are at least half a dozen poems in this book that I know I will come back to many times over the years, including "Surprising Elements" and his final poem, "Way Down Upon the Woodsy Roads," both of which contain statements of his influences and philosophy:
The Ammons women (nine of them, my father's
sisters) were jovial women: well, I guess you
could say that: for them, the distance between
fun tears and tears was a flash of seconds
And:
Don't you think poetry should be succinct:
not now: I think it should be distinct: it
should wander off and lose its way back and
then bump into a sign and have to walk home