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A Matter of Prudence
He could hardly stop thinking of Elizabeth, and no longer tried to convince himself that he should.
Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy is drawn to Elizabeth Bennet from the day they met, captivated by her cleverness, her charm, and her good humour. While he initially sees only a friendship between them, his feelings for her soon grow more ardent, even while he tries to persuade himself she would be an unsuitable bride. At length, however, his pride and his prejudices must be laid aside; he knows that to be happy in marriage is more important.
ALAS JUST AS HE GROWS CERTAIN of his own heart and mind, a problem reveals itself. Mr William Collins, a cousin of the Bennets who has lived in Longbourn since his boyhood, returns to Hertfordshire. The fondness between Elizabeth and Mr Collins is clear and Darcy begins to fear there is an understanding between them. His fears are confirmed by Miss Caroline Bingley who warns him that the pair are on the brink of matrimony.
A chance encounter when he is visiting his aunt, Lady Catherine, changes everything. Deceptions are uncovered and friendships end, but is it too late for him and the woman he loves?
A Matter of Prudence is a Pride and Prejudice vagary in which mistaken identities and false assumptions complicate the road to true love for Mr Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet.
Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy is drawn to Elizabeth Bennet from the day they met, captivated by her cleverness, her charm, and her good humour. While he initially sees only a friendship between them, his feelings for her soon grow more ardent, even while he tries to persuade himself she would be an unsuitable bride. At length, however, his pride and his prejudices must be laid aside; he knows that to be happy in marriage is more important.
ALAS JUST AS HE GROWS CERTAIN of his own heart and mind, a problem reveals itself. Mr William Collins, a cousin of the Bennets who has lived in Longbourn since his boyhood, returns to Hertfordshire. The fondness between Elizabeth and Mr Collins is clear and Darcy begins to fear there is an understanding between them. His fears are confirmed by Miss Caroline Bingley who warns him that the pair are on the brink of matrimony.
A chance encounter when he is visiting his aunt, Lady Catherine, changes everything. Deceptions are uncovered and friendships end, but is it too late for him and the woman he loves?
A Matter of Prudence is a Pride and Prejudice vagary in which mistaken identities and false assumptions complicate the road to true love for Mr Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet.
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First published August 7, 2023
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Lucy Marin
26 books92 followersLucy Marin developed a love for reading at a young age and whiled away many hours imagining how stories might continue or what would happen if there was a change in the circumstances faced by the protagonists. After reading her first Austen novel, a life-long ardent admiration was borne. Lucy was introduced to the world of Austen variations after stumbling across one at a used bookstore while on holiday in London. This led to the discovery of the online world of Jane Austen Fan Fiction and, soon after, she picked up her pen and began to transfer the stories in her head to paper.
Lucy lives in Toronto, Canada surrounded by hundreds of books and a loving family. She teaches environmental studies, loves animals and trees and exploring the world around her.
Lucy lives in Toronto, Canada surrounded by hundreds of books and a loving family. She teaches environmental studies, loves animals and trees and exploring the world around her.
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August 10, 2023
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars
This is one author whose stories I immediately borrow from KU.
The main premise of this story is two-fold. First, we have a Charles Bingley who is not the man we know from canon. Although his actions in leasing Netherfield and seeming to court Jane appear the same, his goal in doing such is completely different. He is in cahoots with his sister, Caroline. Darcy's reason for being with the Bingleys is, again, to help Charles learn to manage an estate. But this Bingley is the one who is only looking to marry for connections and money. Caroline's goal is the same but here she has her brother's complete support, and they act together to bring about their goals. Caroline is much more willing to do whatever it takes to win Darcy and if that means she must lie and manipulate, so be it.
The second part of the premise is the fact that William Collins has grown up with the Bennet sisters and is like a brother to them. So "hedgerows" are not a factor. In this story he has earned his divinity degree and, at first, is away being interviewed for a living in Kent. (Yes, with Lady C.) Elizabeth has a very close relationship with him as she mentors his behavior and conversations...in a caring manner.
However, to an outsider such as Darcy, knowing that Collins plans to marry one of the sisters (unnamed throughout most of the story) it looks as if Elizabeth might be his planned bride. The author does belabor this point, over and over again as Darcy keeps planning to clarify which sister it is, but somehow keeps being put off-track and finding it not the right time or place.
Several things happen as the Bingleys suddenly decide to return to London after their ball. Darcy departs with them. And in departing Caroline, as in canon, writes that nasty little note to Jane. No fare-thee-well, or any sign that they will ever return.
Darcy has Georgiana and her summer at Ramsgate, plus his two cousins as part of his story. Lady C. beckons Darcy's help at Rosings and it is there that we, finally, learn who is Mrs. Collins.
This story has Darcy and Elizabeth falling in love but, again, each having reasons that they believe the other is not available for them. Elizabeth always seems to be meeting Darcy with a glowing smile and she welcomes his conversation. Elizabeth cannot understand how at times he seems to be acting cooler towards her. And she believes as in canon he will not offer for her hand due to those connections and her lack of dowry.
I enjoyed this story. There was no angst for me, as the reader, although ODC had their share.
This is one author whose stories I immediately borrow from KU.
The main premise of this story is two-fold. First, we have a Charles Bingley who is not the man we know from canon. Although his actions in leasing Netherfield and seeming to court Jane appear the same, his goal in doing such is completely different. He is in cahoots with his sister, Caroline. Darcy's reason for being with the Bingleys is, again, to help Charles learn to manage an estate. But this Bingley is the one who is only looking to marry for connections and money. Caroline's goal is the same but here she has her brother's complete support, and they act together to bring about their goals. Caroline is much more willing to do whatever it takes to win Darcy and if that means she must lie and manipulate, so be it.
The second part of the premise is the fact that William Collins has grown up with the Bennet sisters and is like a brother to them. So "hedgerows" are not a factor. In this story he has earned his divinity degree and, at first, is away being interviewed for a living in Kent. (Yes, with Lady C.) Elizabeth has a very close relationship with him as she mentors his behavior and conversations...in a caring manner.
However, to an outsider such as Darcy, knowing that Collins plans to marry one of the sisters (unnamed throughout most of the story) it looks as if Elizabeth might be his planned bride. The author does belabor this point, over and over again as Darcy keeps planning to clarify which sister it is, but somehow keeps being put off-track and finding it not the right time or place.
Several things happen as the Bingleys suddenly decide to return to London after their ball. Darcy departs with them. And in departing Caroline, as in canon, writes that nasty little note to Jane. No fare-thee-well, or any sign that they will ever return.
Darcy has Georgiana and her summer at Ramsgate, plus his two cousins as part of his story. Lady C. beckons Darcy's help at Rosings and it is there that we, finally, learn who is Mrs. Collins.
This story has Darcy and Elizabeth falling in love but, again, each having reasons that they believe the other is not available for them. Elizabeth always seems to be meeting Darcy with a glowing smile and she welcomes his conversation. Elizabeth cannot understand how at times he seems to be acting cooler towards her. And she believes as in canon he will not offer for her hand due to those connections and her lack of dowry.
I enjoyed this story. There was no angst for me, as the reader, although ODC had their share.
October 3, 2025
A Heinous Bingley Brother and Sister Act
Lucy Marin’s latest novel is a friends-to-lovers story, where Darcy and Elizabeth's initial meeting at the Meryton Assembly is devoid of the infamous insult, allowing them to enjoy a pleasant dance together. Unbeknownst to them, Mr. Bingley and his sister, Caroline, have come to Netherfield with nefarious schemes in mind that will bring hurtful consequences for beloved characters, showcasing this heinous brother and sister act.
As the couple’s friendship blossoms, Darcy overhears vague conversations about William Collins, who was taken in at age twelve by his Bennet family cousins after his father's death. Elizabeth often guides her cousin, leaving Darcy confused and curious about their relationship, especially when rumors circulate about Collins marrying one of the Bennet sisters.
While it is clear that Darcy and Elizabeth will eventually achieve their happily ever after, the author skillfully keeps readers and some characters guessing about the true intentions of Longbourn's heir. This clever writing choice creates anticipation and prolongs the confirmation of the expected outcome.
Despite Darcy's overly prudent nature in this variation, and his temporary rejection of his feelings for Elizabeth, his portrayal in the story resonated with me. When he uncovers the deceit of his so-called friends, he promptly takes action and transforms into an assertive and commanding Darcy and confronts them accordingly. Elizabeth, because she never experiences that insult, never gets her hackles up towards Darcy, although she never expects more from him than friendship because of his position in society. Alas, she must eventually acknowledge he captured her heart with that dance.
The remaining Bennet family members retain their familiar characteristics, although their wildness is toned down in this story. Mr. Collins, despite being somewhat dull, manages to be likable. Colonel Fitzwilliam and Lord Bramwell, in their brief appearances, provide entertaining moments. Even Lady Catherine, while remaining candid and outspoken, displays a more likable side.
I can always count on a generously satisfying read from this author, and this one fits that bill nicely. I highly recommend it.
Clean content with kisses only.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle.
November 16, 2023 - Audiobook
I’m giving this new-to-me narrator, Caius Ashburn, a four-star rating. Her pace is quite fast. Because of this, it was often difficult to distinguish which character is talking, especially for the men. I had to slow down the speed to 0.85 which helped a lot in this regard. I grew accustomed to her cadence the farther I got through the book. I do like the sound of her voice, but would like to see a little more animation in the dialogue, which sometimes felt inexpressive.
Lucy Marin’s latest novel is a friends-to-lovers story, where Darcy and Elizabeth's initial meeting at the Meryton Assembly is devoid of the infamous insult, allowing them to enjoy a pleasant dance together. Unbeknownst to them, Mr. Bingley and his sister, Caroline, have come to Netherfield with nefarious schemes in mind that will bring hurtful consequences for beloved characters, showcasing this heinous brother and sister act.
As the couple’s friendship blossoms, Darcy overhears vague conversations about William Collins, who was taken in at age twelve by his Bennet family cousins after his father's death. Elizabeth often guides her cousin, leaving Darcy confused and curious about their relationship, especially when rumors circulate about Collins marrying one of the Bennet sisters.
While it is clear that Darcy and Elizabeth will eventually achieve their happily ever after, the author skillfully keeps readers and some characters guessing about the true intentions of Longbourn's heir. This clever writing choice creates anticipation and prolongs the confirmation of the expected outcome.
Despite Darcy's overly prudent nature in this variation, and his temporary rejection of his feelings for Elizabeth, his portrayal in the story resonated with me. When he uncovers the deceit of his so-called friends, he promptly takes action and transforms into an assertive and commanding Darcy and confronts them accordingly. Elizabeth, because she never experiences that insult, never gets her hackles up towards Darcy, although she never expects more from him than friendship because of his position in society. Alas, she must eventually acknowledge he captured her heart with that dance.
The remaining Bennet family members retain their familiar characteristics, although their wildness is toned down in this story. Mr. Collins, despite being somewhat dull, manages to be likable. Colonel Fitzwilliam and Lord Bramwell, in their brief appearances, provide entertaining moments. Even Lady Catherine, while remaining candid and outspoken, displays a more likable side.
I can always count on a generously satisfying read from this author, and this one fits that bill nicely. I highly recommend it.
Clean content with kisses only.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle.
November 16, 2023 - Audiobook
I’m giving this new-to-me narrator, Caius Ashburn, a four-star rating. Her pace is quite fast. Because of this, it was often difficult to distinguish which character is talking, especially for the men. I had to slow down the speed to 0.85 which helped a lot in this regard. I grew accustomed to her cadence the farther I got through the book. I do like the sound of her voice, but would like to see a little more animation in the dialogue, which sometimes felt inexpressive.
January 6, 2025
All cruel people describe themselves as paragons of frankness. ~ Tennessee Williams
Deceitful. False. Misleading. Dishonest. Fraudulent. Spurious.
All words that could be used to describe Caroline Bingley. Unfortunately for Fitzwilliam Darcy, in this story, the same words could describe Charles Bingley.
“Charles!” Caroline impatiently waved the butler away and pulled her brother to a seat. “Well?”
His grin was full of satisfaction. “He will come.”
As in canon, Bingley invites his friend, Darcy, to his newly-leased estate in Hertfordshire. Bingley hints at a house party to arrive later. His sister, Caroline, will be hostess and the other sister, Louisa, will attend with her husband, Mr. Hurst.
Unknown to Darcy, Hurst discovered the plotting of the Bingley siblings and removed his wife from their company. The Hursts will not be part of the Netherfield party.
The manipulation is intended to create two marriages: Caroline with Fitzwilliam Darcy and Charles with Georgiana Darcy.
Just because something isn’t a lie does not mean that it isn’t deceptive. A liar knows he is a liar, but one who speaks mere portions of truth in order to deceive is a craftsman of destruction. ~ Criss Jami
All goes according to the Bingleys’ plan: Darcy does soon develop an attraction to a young lady. Unfortunately for the Bingleys, Darcy’s attention is fixed upon one Elizabeth Bennet, not upon Caroline Bingley.
William Collins is a much more attractive character than in the usual JAFF stories. He has lived with the Bennet family since childhood. Neighborhood gossip has him linked in a special way with one of the sisters.
Manipulation follows misinformation follows connivance. Soon the Bingleys have convinced Darcy to return to London, delaying his plans.
Lies are like acid, corrosive: they could dissolve trust in a heartbeat. ~ Bob Thurman
What about Bingley and Jane Bennet?
How will Darcy discover the truth?
How will he retaliate?
“A Matter of Prudence” is low-angst and an easy read. Don’t miss the Caroline comeuppance! Loved it!
I am not upset that you lied to me. I am upset that from now on I can’t believe you. ~ Friedrich Nietzsche
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Deceitful. False. Misleading. Dishonest. Fraudulent. Spurious.
All words that could be used to describe Caroline Bingley. Unfortunately for Fitzwilliam Darcy, in this story, the same words could describe Charles Bingley.
“Charles!” Caroline impatiently waved the butler away and pulled her brother to a seat. “Well?”
His grin was full of satisfaction. “He will come.”
As in canon, Bingley invites his friend, Darcy, to his newly-leased estate in Hertfordshire. Bingley hints at a house party to arrive later. His sister, Caroline, will be hostess and the other sister, Louisa, will attend with her husband, Mr. Hurst.
Unknown to Darcy, Hurst discovered the plotting of the Bingley siblings and removed his wife from their company. The Hursts will not be part of the Netherfield party.
The manipulation is intended to create two marriages: Caroline with Fitzwilliam Darcy and Charles with Georgiana Darcy.
Just because something isn’t a lie does not mean that it isn’t deceptive. A liar knows he is a liar, but one who speaks mere portions of truth in order to deceive is a craftsman of destruction. ~ Criss Jami
All goes according to the Bingleys’ plan: Darcy does soon develop an attraction to a young lady. Unfortunately for the Bingleys, Darcy’s attention is fixed upon one Elizabeth Bennet, not upon Caroline Bingley.
William Collins is a much more attractive character than in the usual JAFF stories. He has lived with the Bennet family since childhood. Neighborhood gossip has him linked in a special way with one of the sisters.
Manipulation follows misinformation follows connivance. Soon the Bingleys have convinced Darcy to return to London, delaying his plans.
Lies are like acid, corrosive: they could dissolve trust in a heartbeat. ~ Bob Thurman
What about Bingley and Jane Bennet?
How will Darcy discover the truth?
How will he retaliate?
“A Matter of Prudence” is low-angst and an easy read. Don’t miss the Caroline comeuppance! Loved it!
I am not upset that you lied to me. I am upset that from now on I can’t believe you. ~ Friedrich Nietzsche
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
June 28, 2023
Don't be fooled by the title, only Darcy fears one person's choice of prudence.
A different kind of variation in that The Bingley's are the big bad with their manipulative and single-minded plan to fulfill a vow to their father, no matter who gets used and abused along the way.
Darcy, while still somewhat proud, has a kind of blind naivete regarding those people he considers friends.
The Bennets are also- understandably- a bit different from canon, not quite as vulgar, not quite and wild, mainly, due to William Collins having grown up at Longbourn and there being no fear of hedgerows! The Bennet's personalities are slightly altered, including Elizabeth's - she had a lightness without cynicism which made her an even happier person.
I loved that this Darcy saw Elizabeth for the jewel she was from the first. She brings out such joy in him.
Of course, the path of true love is rarely smooth for ODC. Miscomprehensions and lack of communication creates a major misunderstanding, which separates them.
That is just the beginning of the Bingley fallout.
Not a high-angst, drama filled tale, but there are reflections of the foibles of humanity and the choices they can make in pursuit of happiness or consequence.
Lucy Marin is a solid writer and offers variations that both tease and make you 'feel' - this time it was for poor, deluded Mr. Darcy.
Personally, I could have done with it being a bit tighter, there seemed to be some unnecessary repetitions, which slowed down the pace of the book. However, I can see enjoying this story tremendously as an audiobook for future rereads.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
A different kind of variation in that The Bingley's are the big bad with their manipulative and single-minded plan to fulfill a vow to their father, no matter who gets used and abused along the way.
Darcy, while still somewhat proud, has a kind of blind naivete regarding those people he considers friends.
The Bennets are also- understandably- a bit different from canon, not quite as vulgar, not quite and wild, mainly, due to William Collins having grown up at Longbourn and there being no fear of hedgerows! The Bennet's personalities are slightly altered, including Elizabeth's - she had a lightness without cynicism which made her an even happier person.
I loved that this Darcy saw Elizabeth for the jewel she was from the first. She brings out such joy in him.
Of course, the path of true love is rarely smooth for ODC. Miscomprehensions and lack of communication creates a major misunderstanding, which separates them.
That is just the beginning of the Bingley fallout.
Not a high-angst, drama filled tale, but there are reflections of the foibles of humanity and the choices they can make in pursuit of happiness or consequence.
Lucy Marin is a solid writer and offers variations that both tease and make you 'feel' - this time it was for poor, deluded Mr. Darcy.
Personally, I could have done with it being a bit tighter, there seemed to be some unnecessary repetitions, which slowed down the pace of the book. However, I can see enjoying this story tremendously as an audiobook for future rereads.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 12, 2023
My Rating: 4.5* rounded up to 5*
“But disguise of every sort is my abhorrence.” (quote from Jane Austen’s Pride & Prejudice)
This was another intriguing and unique variation from Ms. Marin. It is not often one sees a story where the ever-affable Charles Bingley is in cahoots with his sister, Caroline! Unfortunately, they have set their sights on the Darcy family to raise their consequence and fulfill a promise at any cost. Mr. Darcy has no clue to their machinations and deceptions. And once he meets Miss Elizabeth Bennet at the assembly, he is completely distracted…much to the frustration and anger of Miss Bingley.
“Be careful, a quiet voice in his head warned. It would not do to become infatuated with a country lady of little standing.” (quote from the book)
Along with this twist, there are some cleverly done tweaks to the Bennet family dynamics which I quite enjoyed. Mr. Collins’ place within the Bennet family adds a different level of angst for Mr. Darcy that is exacerbated by innuendo and outright lies of Miss Bingley. I felt his frustration with this, but I loved how besotted he became over Miss Elizabeth despite his trying not to! As there had been no insult at the assembly, Miss Elizabeth looks favourably upon him but guards her heart. She knows nothing can come of it.
“He sensed heartbreak coming over him like a storm cloud, and he needed to protect himself.” (quote from the book)
Yes, storm clouds were rushing in, especially when Mr. Darcy realizes the duplicity of the Bingleys. It was an epic scene when Mr. Darcy confronts them. But we all know, Miss Bingley will not give up.
“You take great delight in the world about you. Her smile widened and he almost offered to give her Pemberley.” (quote from the book)
I thoroughly enjoyed this friends-to-lovers variation. I did feel there was a bit of repetition with Darcy’s waffling and thoughts that could have been cut and a bit more comeuppance detail on the Bingleys. Despite that, I highly recommend this intriguing novel and feel I am not doing it justice in my review.
I received a copy of this book via Booksprout but have since bought the paperback and am voluntarily leaving my review!
July 22, 2023
“Prudence is the footprint of Wisdom.” –Amos Bronson Alcott
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mild language: full of swoon-worthy scenes that will delight [grab a fan]
>>Angst Level: Marin always tears up my peace and I love it. There was angst, to be sure. Tensions flared as some scenes were pretty shocking due to the treachery, betrayal, and deceit that was rampant throughout the story. Perhaps oxygen should be on hand as the reader may lose their breath a few times. I thought my heart would stop once or twice. However, no defib was necessary. Thank goodness. I still have the shock marks from her last book. Just saying.
>>Source: I received a free copy through Booksprout [6-27-23] and volunteered to leave a review expressing my thoughts and opinions on Marin’s latest release: 61 chapters plus an epilogue.
>>Trope: [1] NSN [not-so-nice] Bingley and Caroline, of course. OMG! The Bingley siblings, including Mrs. Hurst, were horrid. I’ve never read them in this light before. It was surprisingly done and the machinations and strategies they used to snare a certain brother and sister were absolutely insidious. Brilliant, Marin, simply brilliant. [2] Not-so-bad Lady Catherine. I actually liked her. I think I bit my tongue.
“There is wisdom in always exploring the counterpoint—sometimes a silver cloud has a dark lining too.” –Gyan Nagpal
Darcy’s foray into Hertfordshire, to help his friend with his leased estate, did not turn out as he expected. He kept having this niggling feeling that something was off as his friend and his friend’s sister kept evading direct questions. And where were Mr. and Mrs. Hurst and the other guests they kept assuring him were to join them? Things were not as they should be and he couldn’t put his finger on it.
The situation at Longbourn was somewhat different than canon. William Collins had come to live with the family as a child and, therefore, grew up with the Bennet sisters. He hoped his time to inherit would be in the far-far future. In the meantime, he wanted to be independent and had completed studies to become a parson. All he needed was a living so he could support a wife. It was already decided that one of the Bennet sisters would be his wife. They would not announce the engagement until word arrived on the application he had completed for a preferment. Marin was sneaky in refusing to reveal which daughter would be his bride. It was maddening as I searched for clues. I nearly pulled my hair out and the Bennet family wasn’t saying. My beautician assures me that hair grows back.
“If your prudence stops you every time from taking an action, then you are no more prudent, you are frightened.” –Amit Kalantri, Wealth of Words
Darcy heard the gossip and was a wreck as no one would say which sister would marry Collins. Every attempt to garner the information was frustratingly interrupted. GRRR! Caroline put in her two cents worth on the happy event. Her intel sent our scion of Pemberley off on a grief tangent that nearly did us both in. I was grabbing for my oxygen tank for sure, then. Oh, Caroline, what have you done? The deception perpetrated by the Bingley siblings was so unique and creative, it was brilliant. I couldn’t turn the pages fast enough in order to read what happened next.
I loved the interplay between ODC. That sent me reaching for my fan. Yeah, swoon-worthy. I may need a new fan, Marin. Seriously!
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mild language: full of swoon-worthy scenes that will delight [grab a fan]
>>Angst Level: Marin always tears up my peace and I love it. There was angst, to be sure. Tensions flared as some scenes were pretty shocking due to the treachery, betrayal, and deceit that was rampant throughout the story. Perhaps oxygen should be on hand as the reader may lose their breath a few times. I thought my heart would stop once or twice. However, no defib was necessary. Thank goodness. I still have the shock marks from her last book. Just saying.
>>Source: I received a free copy through Booksprout [6-27-23] and volunteered to leave a review expressing my thoughts and opinions on Marin’s latest release: 61 chapters plus an epilogue.
>>Trope: [1] NSN [not-so-nice] Bingley and Caroline, of course. OMG! The Bingley siblings, including Mrs. Hurst, were horrid. I’ve never read them in this light before. It was surprisingly done and the machinations and strategies they used to snare a certain brother and sister were absolutely insidious. Brilliant, Marin, simply brilliant. [2] Not-so-bad Lady Catherine. I actually liked her. I think I bit my tongue.
“There is wisdom in always exploring the counterpoint—sometimes a silver cloud has a dark lining too.” –Gyan Nagpal
Darcy’s foray into Hertfordshire, to help his friend with his leased estate, did not turn out as he expected. He kept having this niggling feeling that something was off as his friend and his friend’s sister kept evading direct questions. And where were Mr. and Mrs. Hurst and the other guests they kept assuring him were to join them? Things were not as they should be and he couldn’t put his finger on it.
The situation at Longbourn was somewhat different than canon. William Collins had come to live with the family as a child and, therefore, grew up with the Bennet sisters. He hoped his time to inherit would be in the far-far future. In the meantime, he wanted to be independent and had completed studies to become a parson. All he needed was a living so he could support a wife. It was already decided that one of the Bennet sisters would be his wife. They would not announce the engagement until word arrived on the application he had completed for a preferment. Marin was sneaky in refusing to reveal which daughter would be his bride. It was maddening as I searched for clues. I nearly pulled my hair out and the Bennet family wasn’t saying. My beautician assures me that hair grows back.
“If your prudence stops you every time from taking an action, then you are no more prudent, you are frightened.” –Amit Kalantri, Wealth of Words
Darcy heard the gossip and was a wreck as no one would say which sister would marry Collins. Every attempt to garner the information was frustratingly interrupted. GRRR! Caroline put in her two cents worth on the happy event. Her intel sent our scion of Pemberley off on a grief tangent that nearly did us both in. I was grabbing for my oxygen tank for sure, then. Oh, Caroline, what have you done? The deception perpetrated by the Bingley siblings was so unique and creative, it was brilliant. I couldn’t turn the pages fast enough in order to read what happened next.
I loved the interplay between ODC. That sent me reaching for my fan. Yeah, swoon-worthy. I may need a new fan, Marin. Seriously!
July 8, 2025
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In this pride and prejudice variation, we
know from the outset, that both Charles and Caroline Bingley are manipulative, fortune hunters. They pretend friendship to the fabulously wealthy, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
The plan is to get Caroline married to Darcy, then Charles married to Georgiana Darcy, for her fortune of £30,000.
They are playing a long game, having met Darcy at Cambridge, some years ago. Georgiana is only 15 years old, so patience is required.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has avoided many fortune hunters and compromises since he left university. Unfortunately, he doesn’t see what the Bingley siblings are.
When Darcy joins Charles at his new estate in Hertfordshire, he meets Elizabeth Bennet. Beautiful, witty, intelligent and the daughter of an impecunious country gentleman.
Darcy is rapidly infatuated with Elizabeth, but is mindful of her lower status in society.
The return of William, beloved cousin of the Bennets, raises jealousy in Darcy and he knows his heart is committed to Elizabeth
Misunderstandings and malicious redirections threaten the path of true love.
An engaging story of love and yearning, set against a background of duplicity, avarice and misdirection.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
In this pride and prejudice variation, we
know from the outset, that both Charles and Caroline Bingley are manipulative, fortune hunters. They pretend friendship to the fabulously wealthy, Fitzwilliam Darcy.
The plan is to get Caroline married to Darcy, then Charles married to Georgiana Darcy, for her fortune of £30,000.
They are playing a long game, having met Darcy at Cambridge, some years ago. Georgiana is only 15 years old, so patience is required.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has avoided many fortune hunters and compromises since he left university. Unfortunately, he doesn’t see what the Bingley siblings are.
When Darcy joins Charles at his new estate in Hertfordshire, he meets Elizabeth Bennet. Beautiful, witty, intelligent and the daughter of an impecunious country gentleman.
Darcy is rapidly infatuated with Elizabeth, but is mindful of her lower status in society.
The return of William, beloved cousin of the Bennets, raises jealousy in Darcy and he knows his heart is committed to Elizabeth
Misunderstandings and malicious redirections threaten the path of true love.
An engaging story of love and yearning, set against a background of duplicity, avarice and misdirection.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
August 16, 2023
This one was a struggle for me to finish. The half-ish of the book I really enjoyed but then it seemed to drag on and on. Dim Darcy doesn’t see the Bingbongs for what they are. When he finally does ODC sorts their shit out pretty quickly and it’s off to London for meet & greets and shopping.
The circumstances of the family though brought up a lot of questions. Why does Collins need an occupation? He’s the heir, shouldn’t he be there helping run the place? I thought only 2nd & 3rd sons needed to get a J-O-B? Why don’t the daughters have better dowries? Mrs B isn’t all panicky and frantic so where’s the $$$? Collins has been with them for 12 years - isn’t that enough time to set funds aside?
The circumstances of the family though brought up a lot of questions. Why does Collins need an occupation? He’s the heir, shouldn’t he be there helping run the place? I thought only 2nd & 3rd sons needed to get a J-O-B? Why don’t the daughters have better dowries? Mrs B isn’t all panicky and frantic so where’s the $$$? Collins has been with them for 12 years - isn’t that enough time to set funds aside?
March 25, 2024
Loved it.
Re-read: love it
Re-read: love it
September 14, 2023
well written dark Bingley story
The author brings her very enjoyable writing skills to a very intense kind of stories. Lots of the same characters and a few new characters to fill out the storylines. Not all characters are the same as they are in most JAFF which brings unexpected twist and turns.
Quite the enjoyable read.
The author brings her very enjoyable writing skills to a very intense kind of stories. Lots of the same characters and a few new characters to fill out the storylines. Not all characters are the same as they are in most JAFF which brings unexpected twist and turns.
Quite the enjoyable read.
August 7, 2023
This was a good variation & a pleasant read. I must confess to being a bit puzzled by the title choice, as it has little to do with the plot, and I had some minor issues with the characterisation at some points. Nonetheless, this was a nice, low-angst story and I enjoyed it.
August 12, 2023
Interesting variation on Pride and Prejudice, and I enjoyed it, but it is not a favorite. If you don't like variations in which characters who were decidedly good in the original turn out to be evil, you won't like this. The romance between Darcy and Elizabeth is here, but the obstacles are different, and the villains are a bit darker.
The story begins with Charles Bingley inviting Darcy to stay at the estate he's leased in Hertfordshire. He says they expect the Hursts to join them, and later other friends. This helps decide Darcy, who prefers not to spend much time exclusively in Miss Bingley's company. Charles invites Darcy to bring his sister, but Georgiana is away with the earl and his family in Worcestershire, still recovering from her troubles in Ramsgate over the summer. Darcy plans to join Georgiana there for Christmas, if not sooner.
We learn early on that Charles and Caroline Bingley are both conspiring to persuade Darcy to marry Caroline, and planning eventually for Charles to marry Miss Darcy, solely to improve their status and connections within the ton.
From the beginning of his stay at Netherfield, it's just Darcy, Charles and Caroline, with the Hursts still absent, and Darcy keeps wondering, and asking, when the other guests are to arrive. Their first night there, Bingley insists they attend an assembly. There Bingley meets and dances with Jane Bennet, and Darcy finds himself attracted to Elizabeth Bennet. He dances with her, and Caroline Bingley sees her plans begin to unravel.
In this story, William Collins came to stay with the Bennets after his father's death, when he was quite young. He became close to the Bennet family, but has been away since his ordination looking for a placement as a clergyman. He enters the story later, but has an important role to play.
I found this different take on the romance of P&P interesting, especially how differently Mr. Collins is portrayed, and the somewhat milder version of Lady Catherine. But there were times it felt that the information held back from the reader was too obviously held back, and that annoyed me. Of course the author always knows more than the reader, but where it feels like a tease it begins to rankle. I think there are better ways of handling that.
I also found it hard to believe Darcy could have known the Bingleys for as long as he did without observing some crack in their personas, some hint of their machinations, especially in regards to his sister. He does seem to realize Miss Bingley would like to marry him, but he doesn't suspect Charles at all . Recommended with reservations.
The story begins with Charles Bingley inviting Darcy to stay at the estate he's leased in Hertfordshire. He says they expect the Hursts to join them, and later other friends. This helps decide Darcy, who prefers not to spend much time exclusively in Miss Bingley's company. Charles invites Darcy to bring his sister, but Georgiana is away with the earl and his family in Worcestershire, still recovering from her troubles in Ramsgate over the summer. Darcy plans to join Georgiana there for Christmas, if not sooner.
We learn early on that Charles and Caroline Bingley are both conspiring to persuade Darcy to marry Caroline, and planning eventually for Charles to marry Miss Darcy, solely to improve their status and connections within the ton.
From the beginning of his stay at Netherfield, it's just Darcy, Charles and Caroline, with the Hursts still absent, and Darcy keeps wondering, and asking, when the other guests are to arrive. Their first night there, Bingley insists they attend an assembly. There Bingley meets and dances with Jane Bennet, and Darcy finds himself attracted to Elizabeth Bennet. He dances with her, and Caroline Bingley sees her plans begin to unravel.
In this story, William Collins came to stay with the Bennets after his father's death, when he was quite young. He became close to the Bennet family, but has been away since his ordination looking for a placement as a clergyman. He enters the story later, but has an important role to play.
I found this different take on the romance of P&P interesting, especially how differently Mr. Collins is portrayed, and the somewhat milder version of Lady Catherine. But there were times it felt that the information held back from the reader was too obviously held back, and that annoyed me. Of course the author always knows more than the reader, but where it feels like a tease it begins to rankle. I think there are better ways of handling that.
I also found it hard to believe Darcy could have known the Bingleys for as long as he did without observing some crack in their personas, some hint of their machinations, especially in regards to his sister. He does seem to realize Miss Bingley would like to marry him, but he doesn't suspect Charles at all . Recommended with reservations.
August 2, 2023
Overall I found this P&P variation to be highly original and entertaining. The Bingleys are the bad guys here, as we see from the first chapters, and that includes the usually charming and likable Mr. Bingley. Miss Bingley does what she can to keep Darcy and Elizabeth apart but eventually the truth wins out. There is no Wickham/Lydia storyline which was refreshing. However, I was hoping for more of Jane’s story and her happy ending. Her future was briefly summed up which felt odd after so much time was spent on her feelings and her recovery. Still, it was a great story that kept me engaged to the end.
I received an advanced copy via Booksprout and voluntarily leave this review.
I received an advanced copy via Booksprout and voluntarily leave this review.
August 9, 2023
A lovely story
An interesting and emotional premise in this enjoyable variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Lucy Marin. I hope she keeps writing because her stories are so beautiful.
An interesting and emotional premise in this enjoyable variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Lucy Marin. I hope she keeps writing because her stories are so beautiful.
August 7, 2023
This is a good P & P variation book.
I enjoyed reading this creative story.
Netherfield, had been let by Mr. Bingley.
His sister is to be his hostess at the
country estate. Mr.Darcy, is their only
invited guest. Promising other guests
were to still arrive, along with their family.
The minute he met Elizabeth, he was
enchanted. After time, Mr Darcy
& Elizabeth, did not know what
to believe about certain things being said.
Keeps you wondering from the first
to the last page. Surprising twists
& turns. I loved everything about it!
A Must Read!!
I enjoyed reading this creative story.
Netherfield, had been let by Mr. Bingley.
His sister is to be his hostess at the
country estate. Mr.Darcy, is their only
invited guest. Promising other guests
were to still arrive, along with their family.
The minute he met Elizabeth, he was
enchanted. After time, Mr Darcy
& Elizabeth, did not know what
to believe about certain things being said.
Keeps you wondering from the first
to the last page. Surprising twists
& turns. I loved everything about it!
A Must Read!!
August 10, 2023
“Golf is a good walk spoiled.” (attributed to Mark Twain
Ms Marin had an original take on the Bingleys; unfortunately, she took a novella and made it a novel.
Darcy is far less judgmental in this version, but also clueless about the Bingleys’ machinations (why did the Hursts not come, why are there no other visitors, why does Caroline keep telling me about how well she keeps house, etc).
The story is completely kneecapped by the Unasked Question trope. Darcy spends well over 49% of the book trying to ask Elizabeth about one thing. At least 48% of that wasted time is dithering, and 45% of it told instead of shown.
ODC resolve their issue at the 76% mark, rendering the last quarter of the book as just more filler. The couple head to London for please, no, sOMG shopping for wedding clothes, walks, concerts—all superfluous scenes.
If I’d stopped reading at the 59% mark, I’d have given it a low three stars. The wasted chapters, especially in the last quarter, made me less generous.
Ms Marin had an original take on the Bingleys; unfortunately, she took a novella and made it a novel.
Darcy is far less judgmental in this version, but also clueless about the Bingleys’ machinations (why did the Hursts not come, why are there no other visitors, why does Caroline keep telling me about how well she keeps house, etc).
The story is completely kneecapped by the Unasked Question trope. Darcy spends well over 49% of the book trying to ask Elizabeth about one thing. At least 48% of that wasted time is dithering, and 45% of it told instead of shown.
ODC resolve their issue at the 76% mark, rendering the last quarter of the book as just more filler. The couple head to London for please, no, sOMG shopping for wedding clothes, walks, concerts—all superfluous scenes.
If I’d stopped reading at the 59% mark, I’d have given it a low three stars. The wasted chapters, especially in the last quarter, made me less generous.
October 21, 2023
Avid Reader
This was such an interesting novel and written in such a way to keep the reader constantly engaged. Caroline and Charles Bingley have the personalities of sociopaths. They made a promise to their father to improve their position in society and don't care who they hurt to achieve their goals. Unfortunately, Darcy and Jane are the injured parties. Having suffered at Wickham's hands already, Darcy is not going to let them off the hook without a confrontation. Since she can't have what she wants, Caroline thinks that she can cause further damage, especially since Elizabeth refused to listen to Bingley's "explanation" for their behavior! Those two were morally bankrupt. Darcy and Elizabeth get their happily ever after, and Jane finally heals. Caroline and Charles caused quite a bit of pain.
This was such an interesting novel and written in such a way to keep the reader constantly engaged. Caroline and Charles Bingley have the personalities of sociopaths. They made a promise to their father to improve their position in society and don't care who they hurt to achieve their goals. Unfortunately, Darcy and Jane are the injured parties. Having suffered at Wickham's hands already, Darcy is not going to let them off the hook without a confrontation. Since she can't have what she wants, Caroline thinks that she can cause further damage, especially since Elizabeth refused to listen to Bingley's "explanation" for their behavior! Those two were morally bankrupt. Darcy and Elizabeth get their happily ever after, and Jane finally heals. Caroline and Charles caused quite a bit of pain.
August 18, 2023
A Darcy/Collins dilemma
I’m torn about giving this story a lower rating because it’s decently written prose with few errors; there’s nothing overtly bad about it. But I have to say it was not a pleasant read for me.
The contrivance of assiduously omitting vital information again and again for half the book in order to cause estrangement between Elizabeth and Darcy just became tedious the longer it went on. As did Darcy being so dense as to be duped by the Bingleys for as long as he was. It’s more Bingley’s province to be that gullible. There’s only so much of Caroline gleefully tittering away about the success of her lies or Charles as the unfeeling cad one can take. The rather strange (and purposely ambiguously written) relationship between Elizabeth and Collins, where they have grown up in the same house and where she acts almost as an odd sort of caretaker to him as he is portrayed as mentally deficient on some level, only added to my aggravation. One saving grace is the decided lack of Wickham, or I suspect my kindle might have been thrown at the wall before I could finish.
I’m torn about giving this story a lower rating because it’s decently written prose with few errors; there’s nothing overtly bad about it. But I have to say it was not a pleasant read for me.
The contrivance of assiduously omitting vital information again and again for half the book in order to cause estrangement between Elizabeth and Darcy just became tedious the longer it went on. As did Darcy being so dense as to be duped by the Bingleys for as long as he was. It’s more Bingley’s province to be that gullible. There’s only so much of Caroline gleefully tittering away about the success of her lies or Charles as the unfeeling cad one can take. The rather strange (and purposely ambiguously written) relationship between Elizabeth and Collins, where they have grown up in the same house and where she acts almost as an odd sort of caretaker to him as he is portrayed as mentally deficient on some level, only added to my aggravation. One saving grace is the decided lack of Wickham, or I suspect my kindle might have been thrown at the wall before I could finish.
May 23, 2024
4,5 Rounded Up to 5
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A Matter of Prudence is a Pride and Prejudice regency variation in which Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet’s journey to true love is complicated by misleading conjectures and unexpected villains. In this novel, Mr. Darcy soon realizes he loves Elizabeth Bennet, but he is led to believe she may be betrothed to Mr. Collins, her cousin who was raised at Longbourn from a young age. This apprehension doesn’t cause much angst, but it is an obstacle these characters must face before they find happiness.
The fact that Mr. Collins was raised at Longbourn was one of my favorite aspects of this book because this small deviation altered the personalities of several secondary characters, starting in Mr. Collins himself and ending in Mrs. Bennet. I absolutely loved to see how the love of his cousins shaped Mr. Collins personality. Being raised in a loving family who cherished him made Mr. Collins a more sensible person, even if he is still very insecure and in need of a guiding hand to reassure him of the right path, he is not the buffoon we often see characterized. The relationship he establishes with his cousins was beautiful and even the effects it had on Mrs. Bennet was interesting. Knowing she would not be thrown into the hedgerows made Mrs. Bennet a much more pondered person who was not hysterical or silly, and that was wonderful. In fact, Lucy Marin’s greatest feat in this book was to alter the events so that her portrayal of these characters remained very true to the original, but more tamed as a result of the variations added, so even though these characters are still the same, and perfectly recognizable by any JAFF fan, they are also quite different and refreshing. The balance between these two points was magnificent.
The unexpected villains were also incredible! A change I absolutely loved because it changed the entire novel and made it unexpected. I don’t think it is a huge spoiler to mention them because it is quite clear from the beginning of the book, but in A Matter of Prudence all Bingley siblings are opportunistic people waiting to trap the Darcy’s into marriages of convenience. Having Mr. Bingley as a cunning young man who doesn’t care for Mr. Darcy or Jane Bennet was refreshing and I loved the impact it had on the book.
The relationship between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth is very sweet in this novel and they both take the time to know one another and fall in love, and the fact that Mr. Darcy is unsure if she is available made it even more interesting because it allowed his feelings to flourish more ardently. However, I did love the fact that he was always uncertain about the lies he was being told, and that he kept wanting to talk to Elizabeth about them, and make sure he didn’t make assumptions without hearing her out first.
A Matter of Prudence is a beautifully written book, and the author’s deviations from Pride & Prejudice were among the most intriguing I’ve seen in the past year. Instead of just repeating the same scenes and dialogues, the author was able to truly change the story while maintaining the intense romance between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth, and that was the game changer for me. After reading so many P&P variations, it may become a bit repetitive to see the same script developed with only minor changes, Lucy Marin was able to add minor changes but revamp the entire feeling of the book, making it an unforgettable story. I highly recommend this book to readers who love to see Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth find their way to HEA in romantic and uncomplicated manner.
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A Matter of Prudence is a Pride and Prejudice regency variation in which Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet’s journey to true love is complicated by misleading conjectures and unexpected villains. In this novel, Mr. Darcy soon realizes he loves Elizabeth Bennet, but he is led to believe she may be betrothed to Mr. Collins, her cousin who was raised at Longbourn from a young age. This apprehension doesn’t cause much angst, but it is an obstacle these characters must face before they find happiness.
The fact that Mr. Collins was raised at Longbourn was one of my favorite aspects of this book because this small deviation altered the personalities of several secondary characters, starting in Mr. Collins himself and ending in Mrs. Bennet. I absolutely loved to see how the love of his cousins shaped Mr. Collins personality. Being raised in a loving family who cherished him made Mr. Collins a more sensible person, even if he is still very insecure and in need of a guiding hand to reassure him of the right path, he is not the buffoon we often see characterized. The relationship he establishes with his cousins was beautiful and even the effects it had on Mrs. Bennet was interesting. Knowing she would not be thrown into the hedgerows made Mrs. Bennet a much more pondered person who was not hysterical or silly, and that was wonderful. In fact, Lucy Marin’s greatest feat in this book was to alter the events so that her portrayal of these characters remained very true to the original, but more tamed as a result of the variations added, so even though these characters are still the same, and perfectly recognizable by any JAFF fan, they are also quite different and refreshing. The balance between these two points was magnificent.
The unexpected villains were also incredible! A change I absolutely loved because it changed the entire novel and made it unexpected. I don’t think it is a huge spoiler to mention them because it is quite clear from the beginning of the book, but in A Matter of Prudence all Bingley siblings are opportunistic people waiting to trap the Darcy’s into marriages of convenience. Having Mr. Bingley as a cunning young man who doesn’t care for Mr. Darcy or Jane Bennet was refreshing and I loved the impact it had on the book.
The relationship between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth is very sweet in this novel and they both take the time to know one another and fall in love, and the fact that Mr. Darcy is unsure if she is available made it even more interesting because it allowed his feelings to flourish more ardently. However, I did love the fact that he was always uncertain about the lies he was being told, and that he kept wanting to talk to Elizabeth about them, and make sure he didn’t make assumptions without hearing her out first.
A Matter of Prudence is a beautifully written book, and the author’s deviations from Pride & Prejudice were among the most intriguing I’ve seen in the past year. Instead of just repeating the same scenes and dialogues, the author was able to truly change the story while maintaining the intense romance between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth, and that was the game changer for me. After reading so many P&P variations, it may become a bit repetitive to see the same script developed with only minor changes, Lucy Marin was able to add minor changes but revamp the entire feeling of the book, making it an unforgettable story. I highly recommend this book to readers who love to see Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth find their way to HEA in romantic and uncomplicated manner.
February 25, 2024
This book felt slightly 'undercooked'
A few weeks ago I read a terrible P&P what if about BAD Bingleys. These were con artists, frauds and murderers.
This book is also about Bad Bingleys but it felt weak.
In this story; weirdly like the other, the children made a death bed promise to their father to raise their status through good marriages [Weird right?]
So the spend years (literally) trying to convince Darcy he should marry Caroline. What's their fiendish plan? Show him what a good hostess she is. (ummm really?)
So in this version only Bingley and Caroline and Darcy go to Meryton. The Hursts are promised to come but never appear.
If Caroline was living alone with her brother shouldn't she have needed a companion?
If there was no one to properly chaperone Miss Bingley shouldn't Darcy have left?
This is a story of less Pride and no Prejudice as Lizzy and Darcy dance at the assembly and are both quickly enamored.
This is also a story where Mr. Collins has been living with the Bennet's since he was a young man and has somewhat improved.
There's a lot of misdirection in the story so of which felt really forced especially involving which sister Mr. Collins plans to wed.
Once Darcy becomes aware of the misdeeds of the Bingleys's he really over reacts. I mean they were naughty but not criminal.
A few weeks ago I read a terrible P&P what if about BAD Bingleys. These were con artists, frauds and murderers.
This book is also about Bad Bingleys but it felt weak.
In this story; weirdly like the other, the children made a death bed promise to their father to raise their status through good marriages [Weird right?]
So the spend years (literally) trying to convince Darcy he should marry Caroline. What's their fiendish plan? Show him what a good hostess she is. (ummm really?)
So in this version only Bingley and Caroline and Darcy go to Meryton. The Hursts are promised to come but never appear.
If Caroline was living alone with her brother shouldn't she have needed a companion?
If there was no one to properly chaperone Miss Bingley shouldn't Darcy have left?
This is a story of less Pride and no Prejudice as Lizzy and Darcy dance at the assembly and are both quickly enamored.
This is also a story where Mr. Collins has been living with the Bennet's since he was a young man and has somewhat improved.
There's a lot of misdirection in the story so of which felt really forced especially involving which sister Mr. Collins plans to wed.
Once Darcy becomes aware of the misdeeds of the Bingleys's he really over reacts. I mean they were naughty but not criminal.
August 20, 2023
Darcy comes to understand his feelings for Elizabeth before he leaves Netherfield. I always enjoy a story about Darcy coming to terms with his feelings before he can insult Elizabeth with a horrific proposal.
Mr. Collins had come to Longbourn as a youth and grows up with a caring family and this helps him become an upstanding gentleman and friend to the Bennet’s. I found this Collins more enjoyable. Darcy thinks Elizabeth and Collins are closer than in reality and his jealousy shows making him uncertain of losing Elizabeth before he can declare himself.
I loved the story. It made me laugh and want to find out what happened, I will admit I did stay up to finish the book but what is a little lost sleep when the book is good.
I would recommend this book.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Mr. Collins had come to Longbourn as a youth and grows up with a caring family and this helps him become an upstanding gentleman and friend to the Bennet’s. I found this Collins more enjoyable. Darcy thinks Elizabeth and Collins are closer than in reality and his jealousy shows making him uncertain of losing Elizabeth before he can declare himself.
I loved the story. It made me laugh and want to find out what happened, I will admit I did stay up to finish the book but what is a little lost sleep when the book is good.
I would recommend this book.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
February 28, 2025
Lucy Marin's variations are very inequal. Being Mrs Darcy is one of my favourite JAFF. I found A Matter of Prudence very irritating. The initial misunderstanding drags on and on and on, so much so that I felt like tearing my kindle apart. This misunderstanding felt completely unatural and very contrived. In order to try to make it work, the author had to write a very insecure and gullible Darcy who is quite unappealing to the reader. Well, at least he was to me. He is too coward or too petty to speak and voice his doubts and when he finally takes the plunge... guess what? He is of course interrupted. I hate it when authors do that. I feel let down as an intelligent reader. The fact that the whole plot is very much centered on Charles and Caroline Bingley doesn't help. As I love a good set down (promised by a handful of reviews), I kept reading but even the set down didn't work. I do not expect a teary Caroline. I expect a humbled or humiliated (when she is being really nasty) Caroline. After that I skipped through most of the story. Since the Bingleys' meanness was pretty much central, I would have liked to have more information about their fate. This was only alluded to in the end. This variation makes of Jane Bennet an even more annoying character than she usually is in most JAFF. So gullible and meek and good and sweet. Only the dullest of Darcy would want to spend the first months of his marriage with this sister in law in tow. Lucky for her, he is just the one.
August 5, 2023
🎭 A Matter of Prudence 📜
A Variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice Family Matters Series
✒️Lucy Marin
https://www.facebook.com/quillsquartos/
Release Date 08/07/2023
Publisher Quills & Quartos Publishing
➪ https://a.co/d/7gFzCsy
𝗕𝗹𝘂𝗿𝗯
He could hardly stop thinking of Elizabeth, and no longer tried to convince himself that he should.
Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy is drawn to Elizabeth Bennet from the day they met, captivated by her cleverness, her charm, and her good humour. While he initially sees only a friendship between them, his feelings for her soon grow more ardent, even while he tries to persuade himself she would be an unsuitable bride. At length, however, his pride and his prejudices must be laid aside; he knows that to be happy in marriage is more important.
ALAS JUST AS HE GROWS CERTAIN of his own heart and mind, a problem reveals itself. Mr William Collins, a cousin of the Bennets who has lived in Longbourn since his boyhood, returns to Hertfordshire. The fondness between Elizabeth and Mr Collins is clear and Darcy begins to fear there is an understanding between them. His fears are confirmed by Miss Caroline Bingley who warns him that the pair are on the brink of matrimony.
A chance encounter when he is visiting his aunt, Lady Catherine, changes everything. Deceptions are uncovered and friendships end, but is it too late for him and the woman he loves?
A Matter of Prudence is a Pride and Prejudice vagary in which mistaken identities and false assumptions complicate the road to true love for Mr Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet.
𝗥𝗲𝘃𝗶𝗲𝘄
This is what I love about these variations, an infinite possibility of the one story but never the same one.
In here, ODC are really dear, they are on the sweeter side of their canon twins, which allows them to immediately connect.
Darcy while still reserved, is not blinded by his lofty view of his birth nor prejudiced about those from different origins, cautious but not forbidding.
Lizzie is still her full of life self and less prompt to judge, more attuned to others views.
Why maybe they both fell into the Bingleys’ trap.
As what stands this story apart is to witness a scheming Bingley in motion, near as bad as his sister. Both determined to rise from their father’s upbringing whatever the means. Like using Darcy’s natural goodwill to their hooks into the siblings wealth and name.
To sort of compensate the Bingleys misdeeds, we have a tolerable Collins, one loved and welcomed in the Bennets household as part of their kin.
I enjoyed my journey as the author played some tricks with Mr Collins and his relationship with the Bennet’s daughters, but outside these vile Bingleys and their ill-game, it was more a matter of reserve and shyness that kept ODC apart for a while.
4.5 stars
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A Variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice Family Matters Series
✒️Lucy Marin
https://www.facebook.com/quillsquartos/
Release Date 08/07/2023
Publisher Quills & Quartos Publishing
➪ https://a.co/d/7gFzCsy
𝗕𝗹𝘂𝗿𝗯
He could hardly stop thinking of Elizabeth, and no longer tried to convince himself that he should.
Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy is drawn to Elizabeth Bennet from the day they met, captivated by her cleverness, her charm, and her good humour. While he initially sees only a friendship between them, his feelings for her soon grow more ardent, even while he tries to persuade himself she would be an unsuitable bride. At length, however, his pride and his prejudices must be laid aside; he knows that to be happy in marriage is more important.
ALAS JUST AS HE GROWS CERTAIN of his own heart and mind, a problem reveals itself. Mr William Collins, a cousin of the Bennets who has lived in Longbourn since his boyhood, returns to Hertfordshire. The fondness between Elizabeth and Mr Collins is clear and Darcy begins to fear there is an understanding between them. His fears are confirmed by Miss Caroline Bingley who warns him that the pair are on the brink of matrimony.
A chance encounter when he is visiting his aunt, Lady Catherine, changes everything. Deceptions are uncovered and friendships end, but is it too late for him and the woman he loves?
A Matter of Prudence is a Pride and Prejudice vagary in which mistaken identities and false assumptions complicate the road to true love for Mr Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet.
𝗥𝗲𝘃𝗶𝗲𝘄
This is what I love about these variations, an infinite possibility of the one story but never the same one.
In here, ODC are really dear, they are on the sweeter side of their canon twins, which allows them to immediately connect.
Darcy while still reserved, is not blinded by his lofty view of his birth nor prejudiced about those from different origins, cautious but not forbidding.
Lizzie is still her full of life self and less prompt to judge, more attuned to others views.
Why maybe they both fell into the Bingleys’ trap.
As what stands this story apart is to witness a scheming Bingley in motion, near as bad as his sister. Both determined to rise from their father’s upbringing whatever the means. Like using Darcy’s natural goodwill to their hooks into the siblings wealth and name.
To sort of compensate the Bingleys misdeeds, we have a tolerable Collins, one loved and welcomed in the Bennets household as part of their kin.
I enjoyed my journey as the author played some tricks with Mr Collins and his relationship with the Bennet’s daughters, but outside these vile Bingleys and their ill-game, it was more a matter of reserve and shyness that kept ODC apart for a while.
4.5 stars
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August 18, 2023
This P &P variation has some interesting twists. The first is that Mr. Collins was taken in by the Bennet family at a young age which circumstance alters his situation and his relationship with the Bennet family. The second main twist is that both Charles and Caroline Bingley are false and are not above deception to fulfill their superficial aspirations.
The deceptive duo of the Bingley’s working together to attain their mercenary goals was a fun premise that I haven’t read a lot. It was unfortunate that sweet Jane was the victim of such manipulation, but it was new and different to read about these Bingley’s. Darcy was also a victim in that he was taken in and hurt by years of false friendship with Bingley. My heart broke for both him and Jane.
The character of Mr. Collins was very different. Due to his being raised at Longbourn along side of his cousins, there was true affection between Collins and the Bennet family. He was like a brother/son and a valued member of the family. It was kind of a nice and I enjoyed that change. There was a bit of suspense as to which of the Bennet sisters he had a secret understanding with. The identity of said sister is not revealed until the end of the story, but due to his strange dependence on Elizabeth and her guidance, we the readers as well as the Netherfield party, are led to believe it is Elizabeth herself. I found the relationship between Collins and Elizabeth a little strange and thought the way he always turned to her and relied so wholly on her judgement would have realistically caused some friction between both he and his betrothed as well as between the two sisters. It also seemed a bit unrealistic that if the two were so in love that it would be so difficult for others to discern the truth. Those things are usually pretty obvious and thus I would have to say that there was a lack of chemistry between the couple, but on the other hand, there really weren't any scenes where we, as readers, are even given the opportunity to see them together. This was necessary to the plot, so I won’t be nit picky about it. I’ll just leave it as I thought they were an unlikely couple.
There were some nice scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth. They had a much better start with no insult at the assembly, but an invitation to dance instead. It is refreshing sometimes to bypass the infamous insult that lays the groundwork for so much misunderstanding and heartache down the road. Darcy and Elizabeth become fast friends and their attraction and understanding of each other grows. There are some misconceptions and misunderstandings, but never any real anger or between the two. The angst is this story comes from other sources.
I really enjoyed this book and would probably read it again in the future. It was well written and well paced. It kept my interest and I thought the premise was interesting and fun.
The deceptive duo of the Bingley’s working together to attain their mercenary goals was a fun premise that I haven’t read a lot. It was unfortunate that sweet Jane was the victim of such manipulation, but it was new and different to read about these Bingley’s. Darcy was also a victim in that he was taken in and hurt by years of false friendship with Bingley. My heart broke for both him and Jane.
The character of Mr. Collins was very different. Due to his being raised at Longbourn along side of his cousins, there was true affection between Collins and the Bennet family. He was like a brother/son and a valued member of the family. It was kind of a nice and I enjoyed that change. There was a bit of suspense as to which of the Bennet sisters he had a secret understanding with. The identity of said sister is not revealed until the end of the story, but due to his strange dependence on Elizabeth and her guidance, we the readers as well as the Netherfield party, are led to believe it is Elizabeth herself. I found the relationship between Collins and Elizabeth a little strange and thought the way he always turned to her and relied so wholly on her judgement would have realistically caused some friction between both he and his betrothed as well as between the two sisters. It also seemed a bit unrealistic that if the two were so in love that it would be so difficult for others to discern the truth. Those things are usually pretty obvious and thus I would have to say that there was a lack of chemistry between the couple, but on the other hand, there really weren't any scenes where we, as readers, are even given the opportunity to see them together. This was necessary to the plot, so I won’t be nit picky about it. I’ll just leave it as I thought they were an unlikely couple.
There were some nice scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth. They had a much better start with no insult at the assembly, but an invitation to dance instead. It is refreshing sometimes to bypass the infamous insult that lays the groundwork for so much misunderstanding and heartache down the road. Darcy and Elizabeth become fast friends and their attraction and understanding of each other grows. There are some misconceptions and misunderstandings, but never any real anger or between the two. The angst is this story comes from other sources.
I really enjoyed this book and would probably read it again in the future. It was well written and well paced. It kept my interest and I thought the premise was interesting and fun.
June 27, 2023
I am a little confused by the book title. It made me think it would be one of those prudent marriage stories but that's not the case. The story is about how Elizabeth and Darcy get together despite deceptive people. The Bingleys are false friends to Darcy and the Bennets. This is not a spoiler, it's clear from the outset that they invented the whole Netherfield lease scheme to give Miss Bingley a chance to entice Darcy to propose. The story diverges from the canon also in that William Collins has lived with the Bennets since he was a child and got a different education so his personality is a little altered. He is a dear friend but rather diffident and uncertain about himself, and frequently looks to Elizabeth for hints about what to say and how to behave. Wickham is not part of the militia as he was shipped to parts unknown after Ramsgate, and the Hursts aren't present at Netherfield. It is somewhat inappropriate for Miss Bingley and Darcy to stay under the same roof without Mrs. Hurst there, but the Bingleys come up with excuses to cover up a falling out they had with Hurst.
Darcy was attracted to Elizabeth Bennet from the start, and there was no great animosity on her part either. She doesn't think it's likely that a man like him would be tempted by the likes of her but they become good friends. However, people keep talking about Mr. Collins and his prospects and Darcy is afraid that he might be too late to secure Elizabeth Bennet's hand. ´
There's not a lot that happens, not a lot of drama. No kidnappings, forced marriages, elopements, duels. Just people meeting, talking and thinking. Sometimes it's a little slow but I enjoyed it and finished it in one sitting. The editing is flawless and the language flows well.
Steam level: Brief, vague references to a wedding night and some other activity that might result in children being born.
Miss Bingley's letter about Wickham was a bit random. How did she even know about Wickham's woe-me story? Supposing she was right and Darcy got angry when hearing Wickham's name, why would the Bennets care that he was mad at someone they never met?
I received a booksprout copy and this is a voluntary review.
Darcy was attracted to Elizabeth Bennet from the start, and there was no great animosity on her part either. She doesn't think it's likely that a man like him would be tempted by the likes of her but they become good friends. However, people keep talking about Mr. Collins and his prospects and Darcy is afraid that he might be too late to secure Elizabeth Bennet's hand. ´
There's not a lot that happens, not a lot of drama. No kidnappings, forced marriages, elopements, duels. Just people meeting, talking and thinking. Sometimes it's a little slow but I enjoyed it and finished it in one sitting. The editing is flawless and the language flows well.
Steam level: Brief, vague references to a wedding night and some other activity that might result in children being born.
Miss Bingley's letter about Wickham was a bit random. How did she even know about Wickham's woe-me story? Supposing she was right and Darcy got angry when hearing Wickham's name, why would the Bennets care that he was mad at someone they never met?
I received a booksprout copy and this is a voluntary review.
September 11, 2023
Wonderful
In this version, Mr Bingley and his sister Caroline are social climbing schemers who plan to use Darcy and Georgiana to achieve a status that their father made them promise to attain before he died. Caroline plans to wed Darcy, after which Charles Bingley will wed Georgiana. A wrench is thrown into their plans to impress Darcy while he's their guest at Netherfield, when he meets and quickly comes to esteem Elizabeth. Meanwhile, Charles has his usual flirtation with Jane Bennett, and doesn't realize until it's almost too late that he has raised expectations that he'll propose to her.
The Bennett family dynamic in this book is somewhat different in that Mr Collins has been living with the Bennetts since a young age, and is an accepted and loved part of the family. Also, Mr and Mrs Bennett are not quite so hostile to each other, and the younger daughters, although still exuberant, are not so wild. In general, everyone is less cartoonish and more reasonable than Jane Austen's exaggerated characters. Even the Bingleys, although the villains in this story, are more reasonable people.
It was difficult, but interesting, to accept a premise where Mr Bingley is a bad guy. This made the story engaging and exciting. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and an admirable Elizabeth, and it was refreshing to have their mutual attraction happen almost from the very first encounter. Although the book has plenty of drama and angst, it was pleasant to read about characters and situations that weren't over-the-top emotive and exaggerated.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for an interesting and imaginative way to pass some time.
In this version, Mr Bingley and his sister Caroline are social climbing schemers who plan to use Darcy and Georgiana to achieve a status that their father made them promise to attain before he died. Caroline plans to wed Darcy, after which Charles Bingley will wed Georgiana. A wrench is thrown into their plans to impress Darcy while he's their guest at Netherfield, when he meets and quickly comes to esteem Elizabeth. Meanwhile, Charles has his usual flirtation with Jane Bennett, and doesn't realize until it's almost too late that he has raised expectations that he'll propose to her.
The Bennett family dynamic in this book is somewhat different in that Mr Collins has been living with the Bennetts since a young age, and is an accepted and loved part of the family. Also, Mr and Mrs Bennett are not quite so hostile to each other, and the younger daughters, although still exuberant, are not so wild. In general, everyone is less cartoonish and more reasonable than Jane Austen's exaggerated characters. Even the Bingleys, although the villains in this story, are more reasonable people.
It was difficult, but interesting, to accept a premise where Mr Bingley is a bad guy. This made the story engaging and exciting. This is a swoon worthy Darcy, and an admirable Elizabeth, and it was refreshing to have their mutual attraction happen almost from the very first encounter. Although the book has plenty of drama and angst, it was pleasant to read about characters and situations that weren't over-the-top emotive and exaggerated.
The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for an interesting and imaginative way to pass some time.
August 16, 2023
I first read this book and enjoyed it then returned to it a second time for this review. A few chapters in my thought was slow burn. This is not an angst filled story. It is a sweet and clean tale.
The cast of characters are here however the focus is on Darcy, Elizabeth, Jane and the Bingleys. The Hursts are mentioned several times but do not make an appearance. Wickham is also mentioned but is not a player here. The antagonist in this story are Mr. and Miss Bingley.
The Bingleys made a promise to their father to increase their social standings and have targeted Darcy and Georgiana as their golden ticket. Deceptions and betrayals to the Darcys and a broken hearted Jane.
Mr. Collins is not the obsequious character he is normally written to be. Confusions and misunderstandings involving which Bennet daughter Collins is to marry causing Darcy to hesitate making his feelings known to Elizabeth.
The characters are toned down. Mrs. B is not as boisterous. Lydia isn't the vacuous and flirtatious 15 year old. Lady Catherine isn't horrible but she remains... Lady Catherine.
I will not provide spoilers here. This a well written book with an easy flow to it. I really enjoyed it and hope it extends to Audible.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
The cast of characters are here however the focus is on Darcy, Elizabeth, Jane and the Bingleys. The Hursts are mentioned several times but do not make an appearance. Wickham is also mentioned but is not a player here. The antagonist in this story are Mr. and Miss Bingley.
The Bingleys made a promise to their father to increase their social standings and have targeted Darcy and Georgiana as their golden ticket. Deceptions and betrayals to the Darcys and a broken hearted Jane.
Mr. Collins is not the obsequious character he is normally written to be. Confusions and misunderstandings involving which Bennet daughter Collins is to marry causing Darcy to hesitate making his feelings known to Elizabeth.
The characters are toned down. Mrs. B is not as boisterous. Lydia isn't the vacuous and flirtatious 15 year old. Lady Catherine isn't horrible but she remains... Lady Catherine.
I will not provide spoilers here. This a well written book with an easy flow to it. I really enjoyed it and hope it extends to Audible.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 18, 2024
DESPICABLE BING!!!
My my! The Bingley siblings!!
I love that they understand Darcy’s preference of being useful and being able to provide suggestions. I believe that’s true to the character of Darcy, who is confident and has his pride about him.
Low-angst, little-struggle, this is a relaxing read. The plot is quite good, and reasonable actually, considering the historical background and the importance of social status at the time. The Bingley’s behaviour is understandable, though still despicable. And no redemption whatsoever in the end which I do not mind at all.
I would suggest to condense the first 2/3 of the story by cutting some of the reminders (there are just a bit too many) of the Bingley’s ultimate goal and their promise to their father. As reader, I would like to know more of Miss Bingley’s endeavor to secure Darcy in the past three year instead of just listening to her complaint of Darcy’s lack of action. Some instances happened in the past which made Caroline hopeful of Darcy’s address, for example. And how Bingley has done to win Darcy’s trust in the first place besides the great loss of their fathers and the shared grief and sentiment towards their loved ones. All in all an interesting read. To be more compact so can be read at a faster tempo would make it more enjoyable.
My my! The Bingley siblings!!
I love that they understand Darcy’s preference of being useful and being able to provide suggestions. I believe that’s true to the character of Darcy, who is confident and has his pride about him.
Low-angst, little-struggle, this is a relaxing read. The plot is quite good, and reasonable actually, considering the historical background and the importance of social status at the time. The Bingley’s behaviour is understandable, though still despicable. And no redemption whatsoever in the end which I do not mind at all.
I would suggest to condense the first 2/3 of the story by cutting some of the reminders (there are just a bit too many) of the Bingley’s ultimate goal and their promise to their father. As reader, I would like to know more of Miss Bingley’s endeavor to secure Darcy in the past three year instead of just listening to her complaint of Darcy’s lack of action. Some instances happened in the past which made Caroline hopeful of Darcy’s address, for example. And how Bingley has done to win Darcy’s trust in the first place besides the great loss of their fathers and the shared grief and sentiment towards their loved ones. All in all an interesting read. To be more compact so can be read at a faster tempo would make it more enjoyable.
September 30, 2023
I have to admit, I wasn't sure if I was going to enjoy this book when it opened with Mr Bingley and Caroline scheming to marry into the Darcy family, but it was kind of fun watching their plans go awry.
What I didn't appreciate was the heavy handed way Mr Collins marriage into the Bennet family was handled. It was obvious to me that he wasn't betrothed to Elizabeth, and my bet was on but the way the name of his bride was talked around, and Mr Darcy's reluctance to ask about it for half the book was a little too much of the miscommunication trope to suit.
All the complications were resolved by the 75% mark of the book, and Caroline's last attempt at spite failed to add any tension, because it was quashed immediately.
I did like Lady Catherine de Bourgh in this version, and even Mr Collins was less obnoxious than in canon. I found it difficult to believe his bride falling in love with him, but I can allow that different circumstances would see the characters grow up differently.
Overall, this is one of the more original variations I've read, but I would have liked to have seen the storyline tightened up, particularly at the end.
What I didn't appreciate was the heavy handed way Mr Collins marriage into the Bennet family was handled. It was obvious to me that he wasn't betrothed to Elizabeth, and my bet was on but the way the name of his bride was talked around, and Mr Darcy's reluctance to ask about it for half the book was a little too much of the miscommunication trope to suit.
All the complications were resolved by the 75% mark of the book, and Caroline's last attempt at spite failed to add any tension, because it was quashed immediately.
I did like Lady Catherine de Bourgh in this version, and even Mr Collins was less obnoxious than in canon. I found it difficult to believe his bride falling in love with him, but I can allow that different circumstances would see the characters grow up differently.
Overall, this is one of the more original variations I've read, but I would have liked to have seen the storyline tightened up, particularly at the end.
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