There are very small sections on by bookshelf and on my kindle which are dedicated to the DNF books. The reason that they are small is because I love to read and it is very rare for me not to finish the book, however trying in some cases it may be, mainly due to the respect for the author’s effort. Unfortunately, Charmeine will become the latest addition to this section as 3/4 through the book I just could not force myself to continue.
Writing a negative revue is not easy, especially for the book that have been receiving high praise from other readers. Unlike with the positive revue, you feel the need for justification, so here it is:
The reasons that this book did not work for me (and please be advised that I will not re-cap the book’s description and try to avoid any spoilers, but I Will use some direct quotations)
To start with, I found the writing style extremely choppy, like you may find in a book’s summary. With short, sometime disconnected paragraphs it felt like an extended synopsis or writer’s notes and not like a finished book. When the dialogue was introduced, there was absolutely no flow or a feel of a conversation. It was written more like stage directions for theatrical production as if an author had to insure that whenever the character supposed to open his/her mouth the reader had to be informed, so there is no mistake, of who is talking and how the lines should to be delivered or expressed, e.g.
“Dmitry furrowed his brow and said:” ….
“Tabbruis shook his head and questioned:”…..
“Dmitry laughed and replied:” ….
“Tabbruis made a questioning (?) look and said“
And it happens every time when the characters converse!!
Now, speaking of characters, I do not remember ever reading the book where the characters spend so much time with their voice volumes set on Extra Loud. It seems that they are required to yell at every opportunity, situation or location. And they don’t just yell. They:’Yell sarcastically”, “Shout with a thick undertone of spite”, “Holler” and have “Booming voice”. Unfortunately, very often, these high decibels are emitted by our heroine (“booming voice” included), who have a tendency to bang her empty glass on the table (no, she is not a drunk teamster but an almost 30yo school teacher) and use the phrases like:”Damn it to hell!” “Geez Louise!” and, my favorite, “Geez Louise, my knees!” When she is not exercising her vocal cords, she behaves like a “petulant child”. The hero, Tabbruis comes across as just a dull, sad, lonely aimless individual and the pair of these star-crossed lovers could not conjure any sympathy, warmth or interest in me.
And finally, the repetitions were killing me! I understand that they may be unavoidable, but there is a difference between trying to repeat some things for reinforcement and totally hammering it in to the ground – I realize that the hero’s name is Tabbruis, but to have it repeated 4 times in a 5-line paragraph?
I am not a writer, editor or a literary critic – I am a reader and for me the books were are and always will be a feast for soul and imagination. However and please forgive the food analogy, even at any feast we may come across something that others may joyfully consume while it does not agree with you. For the readers who enjoyed this book – I am glad that it gave you pleasure. I am; sadly, find myself “Charmeine” – intolerant.