Guess who finally finished the book?
So this book was definitely something, and I don't know how to articulate it in a fluent way so let's just go with the flow and discuss my rating of it. Honestly, a 2.5, which is more than what it was originally going to get, potentially a 2.76 as well?
I think a lot of my problems with this book are based around the fact that I'm probably not the correct audience for it. At 20 years of age, I found the book really simple and slow all the way through and struggled to read it despite starting it 11 months ago. It's definitely a book I would recommend to younger readers around the age of 12, or potentially a mature 9 year old as its themes of death and friendship are strong and would indicate important lessons in moving forward for younger readers. But the simple writing, wasn't compelling to me in a way that a lot of junior fiction books are, I still wanted to feel encouraged and maybe a little curious about what was going to happen next, but it completely lacked that.
I did however enjoy the second half of the book a lot more as the characters really peaked and the writing did improve. As we venture with the Raven and Todd into their plan of action to reveal the thief and console Mackenzie, there is more depth and action within the plot. The first half of the book just felt like a lot of talking and not a lot of doing, dramatic action wasn't a strength for me.
Another thing I did enjoy were the characters, the Raven is pompous and makes no attempt at hiding this, and Mackenzie is similar in her own way as she grieves the death of her brother. Both of these characters were fairly strong. Then there was Todd who stood as kind of a voice of reason, a voice of need, hoping for change. He seemed like a genuine kid who just wanted to protect his younger sister, understandable in all circumstances. My favourite character however, was the Weatherhen, who is present for most of the story, not speaking ever to the readers in an understandable way, but reinforcing and moving the plot forward, (do birds control the weather AND talk?). I think even more could have been done with the Weatherhen's character to make her even more omniscient, giving her more depth. But what was done did work reasonably well.
I think this book is one I should've read earlier, or with more of a purpose than to just read. With tweaks in writing style, simplicity, and dramatic action this could be a truly incredible story - it would make an interesting film I think - and despite my rating, it was a neat debut novel, much better than I was anticipating at the 30 page mark. Best of luck to Samantha-Ellen Bound for future novels. I hope her ideas keep growing.