Premise/Pre-read Appeal: 4/5 - an innovative cover that immediately catches your attention, a plot that anyone who's worked with targets can relate to and an intriguing blurb. Plus, it's a book on an Indian corporate by an Indian author, and it's guaranteed a certain minimum audience.
Writing/Language: 1.5 - By far, the millstone around the narrative. As another review had also mentioned, I found the writing repetitive and monotonous. All the characters speak the same way; if the editor had been tougher (as he/she needed it to be), a lot of the repetitive, self-pitying woe-is-me-what-can-I-do statements would have been thrown out and the book would have been noticeably (and thankfully) thinner. If you like clean grammar and attention to punctuation, this book is definitely not for you.
Narrative/Plot: 2 - Marginally better than the writing, but only just. You'd imagine that a book that tries to cram thirty, hectic days of wheeling and dealing at a bank (in trouble) would make for compelling, event-filled drama. Namburi manages to reduce it to a round-and-round mix of the same few elements. There's even a sex angle thrown in for muddling up the already-muddled Ravi Shastry's life, and (spoiler alert!) it's never resolved in any way. Believe me, if you are going to read the book, knowing that little nugget isn't going to ruin your experience.
Characters: 1.75 - The Ravi-Savi connection (Savitri's his wife) is missing. Conspicuously. They rarely talk, and the author's style means that even the rare conversation that does happen is a staccato burst of corporatish. For instance, Ravi signs off on a conversation with his wife, telling her "Catch you later." And as a further consequence of the homogeneous conversations (between any pair of characters in the book), you kind of see the suits but never a human character anywhere. If the author intended to humanize any of the characters whatsoever, he's clearly left it for a later draft that was never undertaken.
Climax: I am not even going to rate this. The climax was unpredictable solely because I assumed the author (especially one who was allowed to publish more books) would have steered clear of the usual cliches and give us a closing that would make the tedium (of the writing style) worthwhile. Suffice to say I no longer assume this.
All criticisms aside, credit has to be given where it is due, and I found myself flipping page after page waiting to see what happens. I could relate to many of the shenanigans as I've seen 'em firsthand, or heard through friends; what was missing was that x-factor that takes real life and turns it into an unputdownable book. That the ending was a let-down shouldn't detract from the fact that you do want to find out what happens in Imperial (the bank in the story) at the end...
PS: I started by giving this book an overall score of 3; as I penned my thoughts, however, I realized that even 2 was a stretch. However, 2 it would have to be because it's definitely better than 1.