I don’t usually write reviews, especially not bad ones, but I need to vent.
I do not understand how this book has a 4+ star rating.
Let me save you reading it by telling you literally everything important that happens:
10 years into a zombie apocalypse and you follow the story of 19 year old Emma who has been living alone (with the exception of her pet wolf, Leo who in my opinion is the only character worth caring about.. except maybe Sarah who comes into it later) in a hidden-away cabin since the age of 9. Her father was conveniently a survivalist/doomsday prepper who trained her to survive in apocalyptic conditions since birth basically, but who himself died on like day one of the apocalypse…
Emma has survived this long by not getting involved. In anything. Or anyone. That is basically her mantra in life. Don’t get involved! Until one day she does. She helps out a brother/sister team and overnight they become best buddies. Random minor suspenseful things happen that Emma conveniently manages to problem solve her way of that lead to the trio getting split up and Emma makes it her life mission to find her new friends. Along the way she and a sassy 15 year old named Meg get ?kidnapped by what you assume are a group of thugs who take them to their camp where they are actually welcomed with open arms and kisses on the lips by perfect strangers who do not care about the safety of their children given how they allow them to freely climb over a fully grown wolf without batting an eyelid despite the wolf’s owner and the wolf making it very clear he doesn’t like it…
Amazingly the leader, Will, is the older brother of Emma’s sibling friends (Anna and Jake). He comes along with Emma on her quest to find them, taking her to another of his conveniently located camps with seemingly no walls or borders, though which he guarantees are 100% safe with zero risk of noise being heard by the zombies or the camps being infiltrated by bad guys..?
Will is accosted by a blonde in short-shorts who passionately kisses him, making Emma enraged despite having only met Will less than 24 hours prior and having admitted to having feelings for his brother, Jake, a couple of chapters earlier.
Also, guess who is at this gloriously safe camp? Little brother, Jakey-boy.
Happy reunion between the brothers who haven’t seen each other for like 5 years. Turns out that Anna was taken to a breeder farm which are government-run facilities where they take young girls and women of healthy, white stock (because racist, sexist, bigoted men run the world and decided to eliminate diversity) and artificially impregnate them multiple times with the promise that one day they will be allowed to retire to a house in the city that is protected and has electricity and running water (spoiler alert - they actually kill them when their sentence is up). So Emma, Jake and Will concoct this not-so-thought-out plan where Emma will act as bait to be taken to a breeder farm where she plans to break Anna out with absolutely zero plan on how to do so. Success, she’s in. She breaks her one and only rule of not making friends for the thousandth time and befriends a scared little 10 year old named Sarah. Science-y intake stuff happens and she’s admitted into the breeder farm without a hitch, and gets to keep her little buddy, Sarah, despite the rule about kids and adults being segregated. Oh and conveniently (again) an old friend of her Dads is one of the labourers who brings new girls in to the farm and he promises to help her get out. He turns out to be perve but dies pretty much immediately after this revelation later in the book. After two weeks of hot showers, decedent food and comfy beds they pretty much decide they don’t want to leave until a nurse warns them that they’ll be killed after they pop out their third kid, and she gives them a map and a plan and distracts all the other girls. They (Emma, Anna and Sarah) escape in a garbage truck without a hitch and head back to camp. From here on out Will becomes super needy and possessive of Emma and acts like he owns her and that he’s desperately in love despite only knowing her for a day before she entered the breeder farm. We finally get to see some zombies in action. They make more not-so-elaborate plans to break the other women out of the breeder farm. Things don’t go as planned at absolutely no fault of Emma’s, yet she is blamed by the group so sneaks off to liberate the women herself with her trusty sidekick Leo. She and her wolf enter the facility with zero complication (apparently in a high-tech government facility the back door is always unlocked and doesn’t need a swipe key or a guard of any kind). The first person she encounters is a friend of the rebellion and gives her all the info she needs to take the place down, and a swipe card. She blows up the building using a built-in fail-safe, amazingly killing the majority of the staff and very few of the captives. Yadah-yadah-yadah. Emma is a hero. Will is borderline rapey. She and the gang become vigilantes who break into multiple breeder farms freeing women until the book ends on a cliffhanger with one of the good guys possibly betraying her as she is about to take down another facility.
Ok, now for my review:
This book had so much potential. It started out quite well. Admittedly I was drawn in very quickly and was excited about where this book would go. About halfway through I started to lose interest and by the end I had to force myself to finish and was so thoroughly disappointed.
I feel as though the first and second halves of this book were written by different people.
I’ll start with the good things:
1. First and foremost, this is a zombie novel that, refreshingly, does not revolve around or focus on the zombies too much. That’s so great. 10 years into an apocalypse I think people would be pretty much used to them by now. Emma does seem absurdly afraid of them though for someone who has survived 10 years, but hey. I do wish they had a little more description or back story but I actually don’t mind that the focus was not on the zombies at all.
2. The premise is great. This story was great. It was just so poorly executed.
Ok, now the bad:
1. Why was everything so damned convenient? There was almost no build up to events that should have been huge. There was no planning. Nothing was thought out, and yet everything just seemed to work out. Also, the “big” events in the book were over in less than a chapter. There should have been build up.
2. It seemed as though these chapters were written out of order and then pieced together to make the final story, and that there wasn’t as much editing as there should have been to fix the mistakes that were left behind. For example, in one chapter early on, Jake and Anna tell Emma the story about how they lost their brother, then in the next chapter she’s asking about him as if she’s never heard of him, and they’re retelling the story.
3. The sentences, particularly in the 2nd part of the book were so choppy and short. The story didn’t flow. I was hyper aware of the writing style which really took me out of the story.
Example (not actual lines but hopefully you get the drift): Emma sat down. Leo nudged her with his nose. She pet Leo on the nose. She stood up and walked to Will. Will turned to face her.
4. WTF is with Will? Does the author think this is what a woman wants? Is this what her relationship is like? So many things to take issue with:
- he is abusive. He literally manhandles her constantly. The amount of times he grabbed her arm and forced her to turn around and face him. He left bruises on her!!!
- He does not take no for an answer. She needs to get changed and asks him to leave and he refuses. She needs rest after a huge day and she asks him to leave and he refuses. She is injured and has been instructed to sleep and Will will not let her until she has had a discussion with him about their relationship despite her making it clear about 500 times that there is no relationship. HE GETS INTO BED WITH HER, WRAPS AN ARM AROUND HER AND KISSES HER CHEEK WITHOUT HER PERMISSION!
- He is so controlling and it is meant to come across as endearing and protective. She lived alone for 10 years. She learnt to hunt. She trained a wolf. She learned to strategise, and gather food, and get herself out of sticky situations, and yet Will thinks he can ban her from doing anything at all that may put her in danger. Like it’s week one of the apocalypse and she is his daughter and he wants to protect her. It’s so creepy.
5. It doesn’t matter what the circumstances are, Tara Brown, aka AE Watson. I don’t care if it is 10 years post-apocalypse. I don’t care if Emma didn’t learn social-skills. I don’t care that you’re a woman and that this was said by a woman. You cannot say “dressed like that she’s asking for it”. Emma, on multiple occasions, says this about a character named Star. Not only does she say this but she also accuses Star of being effed up because she doesn’t act like any other rape victim she’s ever met. I.e Star is a happy and bubbly and likes to dress in short shorts and tank tops and kiss boys. This was pretty f** up. Everyone is different and everyone copes in their own way. This part should not have made past editing.
6. I know that people are supposed to have a character arc in stories. But Emma didn’t so much arc as spiral. She was described as being completely solitary, quiet, serious etc. she never, not once went out of her way to help people as it meant she would put herself in danger and her father taught her against that. But as soon as she meets Anna and Jake it’s like her whole personality changes. People with 10 years of fear-conditioning do not just change their entire way of thinking and acting overnight. The character development needed to be slower.
I could literally go on and on about all the flaws. Like how she lived in complete solitary confinement in the middle of nowhere for 10 years and was never ever discovered, yet she had 3 or more other properties within walking distance that were all conveniently untouched for 10 years as well. Or how the whole story of 15 year old Meg and her 30 year old boyfriend just didn’t need to happen as it added absolutely nothing to the story other than to show the uncharacteristic lengths that Emma was willing to go to protect this perfect stranger she barely knew. Or how she blew up the entire facility killing 90% of the staff but managed to get 90% of the women and children out alive and unharmed. Or how they decided to take this literal horde of women to their safe camp with absolutely zero discussion about how to cover their tracks or hide the trail so they aren’t tracked (which they conveniently aren’t).
I just can’t with this book. I’m so angry that it turned out this way because it started out so well.