Well, this is the second in Ms. Mallery's triplets, and while it's an improvement over the first, there are still too many flaws for me to give it more than two stars. I like the characters of Elissa and Cole better than Patrick and Kayla in book #1, but still, there were time when I could have throttled them both!
Talk about two people with a martyr complex! They were crazy in love, yet rather than work out their problems, they let their marriage go south, Cole by working too many hours, coming home late too often, taking too many business trips, etc., while Elissa grew more unresponsive in bed (where she already had her problems), then didn't want to make love at all, then finally left him. She had hoped Cole would follow her, but when that didn't happen, was convinced that he didn't care, while Cole hoped she'd come back, and when that didn't happen was convinced that she didn't care. Meanwhile, they were both still in love and trying to convince themselves they didn't care.
This goes on for five years!! Five years where neither makes a move to finalize their divorce, didn't get involved with other people (Elissa never dated anyone and Cole apparently dated a few times but did nothing physical), didn't want anyone else but each other, yet they stayed apart all that time, just concentrating on work, though neither was really fulfilled there, either.
Elissa makes the first move (finally) by showing up at the orphanage/troubled kids home that Cole was once a part of and is now running, looking for a job. She really wants to prove to Cole that she's changed, is not the insecure girl she used to be, but at the same time, she's not secure enough to tell him the anonymous donations to the home are from her, with trust fund money she doesn't want him to know about, afraid he either wouldn't accept it, or misunderstand her motives. (She's ambivalent about the money as it is, for reasons that don't really make sense.)
So many of the issues these two finally talk about should have been dealt with when they were together, especially sexual ones. Elissa wanted to wait until they were married, which made a frustrated Cole a bit too eager on his wedding night, not realizing how scared she was. This resulted in her not having a very good impression about sex, and thinking there was something wrong with her, that she'd be terrible at it, afraid to touch him, to respond to his touching her, etc. One hangup after another! This seemed like something better suited to a Victorian era melodrama! A young woman in the 1990's (when this was written) could be a virgin and still know enough about sex from books, movies, talking to someone about it, etc., but Elissa sounds like she was completely clueless! At 20-years-old??? Hard to believe!!
Cole, meanwhile, was 25 and no virgin, so he should have had sense enough to see how frightened his wife was, and take things slowly, instead of being so eager to get in her vagina! (It's called foreplay, you big jerk!!) He never seemed to catch on, to the point where she just wanted him to hurry and get it over with, making herself a martyr and him selfish.
And they don't talk about this until five years later!
The same goes for other things, like their move to New York, when Cole starts working for a law firm, and starts to get his career in full swing. Meanwhile, Elissa had to leave California, her family and friends, everything she was familiar with, as well as college, when she was halfway through. a lot of major changes, yet Cole didn't seem to think about it, and Elissa didn't tell him how she felt.
How come it never occurred to her to transfer her credits to a college in New York? The city has plenty of them! She could have gotten her degree and had something to do with her time. instead, she didn't work, didn't take classes, just shopped, walked around the city, and waited for Cole to get home, while he got more involved with his work, and spent less time with her.
But did they talk about this back then? Of course not! Five years later, Cole actually asked her what she did with her time while he was so busy at the law firm! Shouldn't that have been asked back then they were together, when it really counted? This guy may have passed the bar, but he sure flunked in the relationships department!
There are also some secondary stories, about Tiffany, a girl at the home with a drug addict mom, Millie, the older woman who runs the place with Cole and gives both him and Elissa advice, the grandfather who rejected Cole years before and wants to make amends, and once again that Sally McGuire show (which really got redundant).
The part with the grandfather could have been done so well, but Ms. Mallery goofed it up badly. It would have been better if she had left him out altogether. It also caused another ridiculous misunderstanding between Cole and Elissa that made them both look really stupid. This comes after they both admit they want to try again and start sleeping together. But what a joke that turns out to be! In an effort to get Elissa to really respond, Cole takes it slow and easy (finally thinking with the head above his neck instead of below his navel) but in doing this, the love scene comes across more like a lesson in a sex therapy class, with him describing what he's going to do, how he's going to do it, etc. Very therapeutic, but not very romantic! But at least they seem to be connecting both physically and emotionally, until Cole gets obsessed with the idea that Elissa's going to walk out on him again (he mentions it so many times you feel like punching him) and can't bring himself to trust her, which actually leads to her doing what she swore would never happen: she DID walk out again! unbelievable!!
Cole ends up getting told off by Millie, while Elissa gets the same treatment from her sister, Fallon (who'll be starring in Book #3) and of course, they both come to their senses for a HEA, but by then you feel as if you've been watching one of those three-hour movies that was just TOO LONG! It was too much unnecessary drama, too much wasted time, just too much!
One more book to go! Hopefully, it'll be an improvement on this one.