This book was beyond horrible. And I am only giving it one star because there is nothing lower than that. What??? is the deal with the prose? Seriously? The only thing I could visualize when I read any parts involving the "ghetto" or the inner city was some white writer watching troubled youth shows and doing research on how to be "gangsta" and then interpreting that to the page. Awful.
These books, the ones with the messages centered around a Christian moral, are written, it would seem, by the preacher for the choir. If I were a non-believer, I would never have made it past the first paragraph of the first page. It is so unrealistic in its plot and contrite in other areas that concentrating on anything besides the horrendous writing was difficult. No character had their own voice. No character embodied any personality. Horribly, horribly written. But I am a believer. In God. In these books. And, above all, in the written works. So I finished the piece.
I am a sucker for these books because I believe in their cause. I did knowingly and willingly purchase this title on the off chance that it might be different than Fireproof (an equally displeasing read). And I want franchises like this to succeed. But there has to be more in it for the loyalty some of us offer. At least, at the very least, a well written piece that doesn't seem like it was conjured up by some 13yrold for his creative writing class. Take away creative and thats exactly what this is.
While the book did have a good message (one, in my opinion, directed to Christian men and only Christian men, eliminating an entire demographic of other men seeking something but not sure what.) it failed in its quest to deliver said message in a manner thats accessible to the general reading public. Hard working dads (which is exactly who the target audience is) will never take the time to read something like this. Their wives will read it and then force the highlights onto their husbands. And the husbands will vaguely look on as their wives speak because the wives were unable to grasp the core content due to such inept writing.
If this were a letter to the author, I would specifically ask him to write to his audience, not a manner that allows the reader to find commonality with the characters, but rather in a manner that allows the reader to recognize themselves in the trials and triumphs the character struggles through. I would ask the author to hold his readers to a higher esteem and assume they are intelligent and can handle a little more substance. But this isn't a letter to the author. Its a book review. So to you, fellow readers, I say good luck. Because if you've managed to stick around for my entire review and still think that this book is worth the read, you're going to need it.