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Venture Untamed
Venture Delving is a bonded servant, a member of the lowest class in the world. Already fatherless, when he loses his mother, he veers from energetic to out of control. But when Venture's rage saves the life of Jade, his best friend and his master's daughter, Venture finds himself in the last place he ever expected—a center renowned for training young boys to be professional fighters.
When Venture realizes he's fallen in love with Jade, he knows that the only way he'll ever have her, the only way he'll ever be free to live the life he's meant to live, is to defy convention, common sense, the trust of those he cares about most—and sometimes the law—and become the best fighter in the world, the Champion of All Richland. Venture must battle not only rival fighters, but the ghosts of his past and the members of a privileged warrior class who stand between him and his dream.
When Venture realizes he's fallen in love with Jade, he knows that the only way he'll ever have her, the only way he'll ever be free to live the life he's meant to live, is to defy convention, common sense, the trust of those he cares about most—and sometimes the law—and become the best fighter in the world, the Champion of All Richland. Venture must battle not only rival fighters, but the ghosts of his past and the members of a privileged warrior class who stand between him and his dream.
292 pages, Unknown Binding
First published September 24, 2011
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About the author
R.H. Russell
8 books23 followersR.H. Russell has been on the mat with talented young fighters since 1993. Their ambitions, struggles, and triumphs inspired her to write the Venture books. She hopes to share the fascinating world of fighters with readers in a unique way—a way anyone can identify with, because she truly believes there’s a fighter in all of us.
She's having a great time letting Venture and his friends loose to play on the page, writing about brawls and big dreams, betrayal and camaraderie, and of course, Venture and Jade’s forbidden love.
The author also writes the Unicorns of the Mist series as R.R. Russell. Wonder Light (Sourcebooks 2013), the first of these novels for young readers, is out now. Look for The Unicorn Thief in 2014!
She's having a great time letting Venture and his friends loose to play on the page, writing about brawls and big dreams, betrayal and camaraderie, and of course, Venture and Jade’s forbidden love.
The author also writes the Unicorns of the Mist series as R.R. Russell. Wonder Light (Sourcebooks 2013), the first of these novels for young readers, is out now. Look for The Unicorn Thief in 2014!
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January 26, 2015
This is originally posted on my blog, http://bibliophilemystery.blogspot.com/
R. H. Russell is a fresh author of promise, with a first book who breaks the foolish rule of being just an introduction to the series.
Venture Untamed, in defiance of a relative old plot, is a beautiful story, told in an alert manner, with attractive and well built characters, suitable for both: boys (they’ll love the fight scenes) and girls.
In a world based on social discrimination and on written and unwritten laws that support it, some individuals dream to have more and sometimes they just need a good enough reason to engage in the fight to get what they want.
The best chance for Venture to exceed the limits imposed by others is to do that thing he excels in and likes so much – fightings. Sport, regardless of its form and especially if it is a national sport, is a flagship for its champions in every society. More difficult is when you can’t do what you want and what you are apt to do not only because of stupid rules of the conquerors but also because of your family history. But Venture has an important advantage because when he is about to give up or when he feels that is no other chance, the help comes from where neither he or you – the reader - expect. Anyway it won't be easy for him.
The romance is well kept under control. When you think the author forgot about the relationship between Venture and Jade, you get a fresh breath of oxygen, but just to enhanced you and make you want more. Do you want more? Then it's time to cool down a little bit, because probably based on "abstinence sports law", the author stops and leaves you longing more than you did before you inhaled that craving relief.
Their relationship - if we can call it like this - even if it's friendship, brotherly love or romantic love, can bring only trouble to both of them. Even graver is that Venture, like any boy or man in this world, is not always capable of understanding which one of them he's dealing with.
Sometimes you have the impression that Venture is worn by the destiny. If he doesn’t do what others impose to him (because he’s obliged to do it), then he does do what Jade cunningly makes him to do. Jade is strong and she opposes to the system in every way she can. I like to believe that she has a long term strategy and all she needs is Venture to do what he must: become a champion. Her importance is felt in every step, even if she is not present.
I said that for Venture won't be easy. Why? Because, despite the help he gets, despite the self-control that he imposes to himself, it appears that he can’t have absolutely all he wants, maybe he can't have anything at all, and all this because those written and unwritten laws are in force, because most of the people are willing to comply with those rules, because… because almost nothing is in his favor.
What are his options? How his options are influenced by his own choices and by the choices of those who have the right to decide for him? You’ll see. Anyway, nothing is solved and nothing is final at the end of the first book (and I was relieved when I saw it's just volume one). There is still hope and I want to believe Venture will catch it with both his hands.
Even the carping readers will be eager to learn further.
„[...] but Venture knew her better. Well enough to detect a trace of loneliness, a whisper of the girl who’d poured her heart out of him [...] who was increasingly left behind by Grant to find her place among the women of Society. [...] A friend who had, more often than not, delighted in being a partner in his boyhood schemes. A friend who didn’t know how not to be a part of his plans now. She wanted more for him than his place in Twin Rivers Town could offer him. Had he ever cared as much for her unhappiness with her position, for her dreams of something more, as she had for his?”
R. H. Russell is a fresh author of promise, with a first book who breaks the foolish rule of being just an introduction to the series.
Venture Untamed, in defiance of a relative old plot, is a beautiful story, told in an alert manner, with attractive and well built characters, suitable for both: boys (they’ll love the fight scenes) and girls.
In a world based on social discrimination and on written and unwritten laws that support it, some individuals dream to have more and sometimes they just need a good enough reason to engage in the fight to get what they want.
The best chance for Venture to exceed the limits imposed by others is to do that thing he excels in and likes so much – fightings. Sport, regardless of its form and especially if it is a national sport, is a flagship for its champions in every society. More difficult is when you can’t do what you want and what you are apt to do not only because of stupid rules of the conquerors but also because of your family history. But Venture has an important advantage because when he is about to give up or when he feels that is no other chance, the help comes from where neither he or you – the reader - expect. Anyway it won't be easy for him.
The romance is well kept under control. When you think the author forgot about the relationship between Venture and Jade, you get a fresh breath of oxygen, but just to enhanced you and make you want more. Do you want more? Then it's time to cool down a little bit, because probably based on "abstinence sports law", the author stops and leaves you longing more than you did before you inhaled that craving relief.
Their relationship - if we can call it like this - even if it's friendship, brotherly love or romantic love, can bring only trouble to both of them. Even graver is that Venture, like any boy or man in this world, is not always capable of understanding which one of them he's dealing with.
Sometimes you have the impression that Venture is worn by the destiny. If he doesn’t do what others impose to him (because he’s obliged to do it), then he does do what Jade cunningly makes him to do. Jade is strong and she opposes to the system in every way she can. I like to believe that she has a long term strategy and all she needs is Venture to do what he must: become a champion. Her importance is felt in every step, even if she is not present.
I said that for Venture won't be easy. Why? Because, despite the help he gets, despite the self-control that he imposes to himself, it appears that he can’t have absolutely all he wants, maybe he can't have anything at all, and all this because those written and unwritten laws are in force, because most of the people are willing to comply with those rules, because… because almost nothing is in his favor.
What are his options? How his options are influenced by his own choices and by the choices of those who have the right to decide for him? You’ll see. Anyway, nothing is solved and nothing is final at the end of the first book (and I was relieved when I saw it's just volume one). There is still hope and I want to believe Venture will catch it with both his hands.
Even the carping readers will be eager to learn further.
„[...] but Venture knew her better. Well enough to detect a trace of loneliness, a whisper of the girl who’d poured her heart out of him [...] who was increasingly left behind by Grant to find her place among the women of Society. [...] A friend who had, more often than not, delighted in being a partner in his boyhood schemes. A friend who didn’t know how not to be a part of his plans now. She wanted more for him than his place in Twin Rivers Town could offer him. Had he ever cared as much for her unhappiness with her position, for her dreams of something more, as she had for his?”
July 24, 2014
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Venture Untamed unfortunately hit quite a few personal pet peeves for me: overt christian undertones, undefined world with modernistic terminology, a complete lack of ending or story arc, and a lead character who consistently fails to make intelligent life decisions.
Lead character Venture is a servant (bondsman) with a 'God given talent' for boxing. After making several bad decisions that caused damage or hurt to others, his pious master sends him to a boxing gym so he can learn to become the boxing champion of their village. Venture trains, has to deal with jealousy and discrimination from more privileged students, and at the end of the book gets ready to set off for his competition.
About 50 pages in, I started to realize I had no idea what kind of world our character was in - was it pure fantasy, historical fantasy, or even a fantasy at all? The feel was rural 19th century England. But terms like "crestie" (those of the privileged class whose family has a crest) and bond servant, and the lack of technology, leaned more toward an historical fantasy or alternate universe. With only a few shifts in historical accuracy such as a slightly different social structure, I'm not quite sure why this is a fantasy set book. There's nothing unique or distinct in the world.
I contrast the above technology free setting with very modern terms like boxing (pugilism anyone?), an enclosed gym building, work out clothes, sophisticated training details (such as a peg board - that can't be easy to make without powerful tools), and more. It kind of felt like someone was trying to take a love for boxing and put it into a pseudo historical setting to make it work - but not really putting the effort into the world building so needed for that type of story.
The Venture characters is perhaps supposed to be approachable and human by his mistakes. But after awhile, it just felt like we were dealing with a half wit and I became tired of Venture being saved by benevolent friends and family. It made him much less of an interesting character to head a story.
Finally, I really like to keep any overt religious references out of my reading, especially for fantasy. The laziness of the world building really becomes apparent when the lead character and those around him strive so hard to be facsimilies of good Christian souls and spout a lot of the same platitudes you'll find at your local bible study. It feels like the author is pushing her values on others through her literature.
In all, this was a big disappointment. Unengaging, anachronistic, lacking world building and character depth, missing originality, and with christian-value underpinings.
Received as an ARC from the publisher.
November 13, 2014
(This was originally posted on Alexa Loves Books.)
Venture Untamed is an enthralling, captivating tale that follows the story of Venture, a boy bondsman caught between the constraints of his class, his dream of being a prize fighter and his feelings for his childhood friend Jade.
I rarely read books with male protagonists, so I was definitely surprised by this one. R.H. Russell did an incredible job with the storytelling, enticing me to care about Venture and what would become of him. The world he created for the readers, the interactions between the characters, the characters – everything was quite well done, colored with relevant details. One of the things that I absolutely must highlight is the detailed and realistic fight scenes – I thought they were interesting to read.
With a colorful cast of characters, an intense context and a male protagonist you can root for, Venture Untamed is definitely a story worth reading.
Venture Untamed is an enthralling, captivating tale that follows the story of Venture, a boy bondsman caught between the constraints of his class, his dream of being a prize fighter and his feelings for his childhood friend Jade.
I rarely read books with male protagonists, so I was definitely surprised by this one. R.H. Russell did an incredible job with the storytelling, enticing me to care about Venture and what would become of him. The world he created for the readers, the interactions between the characters, the characters – everything was quite well done, colored with relevant details. One of the things that I absolutely must highlight is the detailed and realistic fight scenes – I thought they were interesting to read.
With a colorful cast of characters, an intense context and a male protagonist you can root for, Venture Untamed is definitely a story worth reading.
March 22, 2012
Since he was young, Venture wanted to be a prize fighter. His mother was a private nurse for Jade, the daughter of Grant Fieldstone. When his mother passed away, the Fieldstone family kept him so he could have a possible future. Where there is trouble, Venture will be found. He’s been bonded at a young age and is now in training to control his fighting and learn how to fight the proper way. Venture and Jade have a close friendship and that is causing trouble for him. He has to learn that she is his mistress and can’t show the friendship they share out of respect for her and her family. He’s in training and that as well is causing problems for him. It seems no matter what he tries to do right, it isn’t. Venture is about to make a life changing decision, but would it be the right one? He knew that society would frown on him wanting Jade in his life but that was all he thought about. He wanted to be with her and no one else. What would he do to have her for him and him only?
October 8, 2021
I've seen this book classified as fantasy, but in reality the only thing really qualifying it as fantasy is the fact that it takes place in a fictional kingdom. If you come into this book expecting magic, strange creatures, or anything else fantastic -- or really, any worldbuilding whatsoever -- you're going to be disappointed. And while it does have an "underdog defies the odds to fulfill his dream" plot that makes it readable, it's fairly lackluster in writing, character development, and plot.
Venture is a bonded servant whose greatest dream is to become a champion fighter. Unfortunately, despite his master's support of his dream, other odds seem to be stacked against him -- his brother forbids him from pursuing his dream, and both Richland's nobles and other students at the training facility he frequents want to see him shut out of the sport. But Venture is undeterred, and with luck, determination, and the help of his childhood friend Jade, perhaps he can achieve the impossible...
The writing in this book is fairly bland, and worldbuilding is basically nonexistent. I got very little feel for the world of Richland itself, and it feels so utterly generic that it's hard to get a sense of place. The only attempt to flesh out the world is the concept of the Crested families who rule Richland and are descended from those who saved the kingdom centuries ago... but even then, the Cresteds barely factor into the plot. And character development is sorely lacking, with characters uniformly feeling thin and flat as paper, and only existing to serve specific roles in the story (the grizzled but helpful trainer, the opposed family member, the love interest, the rival, etc.).
The story itself feels like an alternate-universe version of "Rocky" or any other boxing film -- the underdog from an underprivileged background tries to make it big despite odds being against them. As a result, the plot feels pretty generic and predictable. Despite this, however, it remains readable, as there's something about cheering on an underdog that just seems to appeal to a lot of readers. And while Venture is a fairly flat character, it's hard not to want to root for him and see him succeed.
"Venture Untamed" isn't awful, but it's pretty mediocre and takes place in a world so utterly generic that it's uninteresting. I did enjoy cheering the main character on in his quest, but I doubt I'll be continuing his journey with him, as I'm just not invested at all in his story or in his world.
Venture is a bonded servant whose greatest dream is to become a champion fighter. Unfortunately, despite his master's support of his dream, other odds seem to be stacked against him -- his brother forbids him from pursuing his dream, and both Richland's nobles and other students at the training facility he frequents want to see him shut out of the sport. But Venture is undeterred, and with luck, determination, and the help of his childhood friend Jade, perhaps he can achieve the impossible...
The writing in this book is fairly bland, and worldbuilding is basically nonexistent. I got very little feel for the world of Richland itself, and it feels so utterly generic that it's hard to get a sense of place. The only attempt to flesh out the world is the concept of the Crested families who rule Richland and are descended from those who saved the kingdom centuries ago... but even then, the Cresteds barely factor into the plot. And character development is sorely lacking, with characters uniformly feeling thin and flat as paper, and only existing to serve specific roles in the story (the grizzled but helpful trainer, the opposed family member, the love interest, the rival, etc.).
The story itself feels like an alternate-universe version of "Rocky" or any other boxing film -- the underdog from an underprivileged background tries to make it big despite odds being against them. As a result, the plot feels pretty generic and predictable. Despite this, however, it remains readable, as there's something about cheering on an underdog that just seems to appeal to a lot of readers. And while Venture is a fairly flat character, it's hard not to want to root for him and see him succeed.
"Venture Untamed" isn't awful, but it's pretty mediocre and takes place in a world so utterly generic that it's uninteresting. I did enjoy cheering the main character on in his quest, but I doubt I'll be continuing his journey with him, as I'm just not invested at all in his story or in his world.
April 13, 2020
Venture is a bondservant with the opportunity to break those bonds. He is given the opportunity by his master to attend an elite fighting school where he trains in pursuit of a profession, and possibly more.
A coming age tale, with something of a Karate Kid spirit. Venture is a troubled young man when his mother dies, but he is natural fighter with good instincts. He has always been more than a slave to his master Grant Fieldstone, and when given his chance he takes it. It was a bit slow to start, and it was hard to get a good sense of the larger world and caste system hinted at beyond the walls of his home and the fighting school. There are some times when I felt that he was in his head alot and conversations where drawn out longer than I felt necessary.
The action and fighting scenes were well, done and there was good tension. Sometimes the plot felt predictable as much of it had been revealed in the backcover write up, so I felt that I had a good idea of where everything was heading. The characters prayed and mention God a few times, but there is also worship of multiple gods, and this was never explained in depth. I will also mention that there was an instance of a British curse word.
In the end this book had a lot going for it, but while there were some truly great moments, especially with the fight scenes near the end of the book, there was also a fair bit of predictableness and 2D-ness to many of the characters. It is a coming of age, medieval series starter, that left me wanting to like it, but just not quite there.
I received a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions are my own.
A coming age tale, with something of a Karate Kid spirit. Venture is a troubled young man when his mother dies, but he is natural fighter with good instincts. He has always been more than a slave to his master Grant Fieldstone, and when given his chance he takes it. It was a bit slow to start, and it was hard to get a good sense of the larger world and caste system hinted at beyond the walls of his home and the fighting school. There are some times when I felt that he was in his head alot and conversations where drawn out longer than I felt necessary.
The action and fighting scenes were well, done and there was good tension. Sometimes the plot felt predictable as much of it had been revealed in the backcover write up, so I felt that I had a good idea of where everything was heading. The characters prayed and mention God a few times, but there is also worship of multiple gods, and this was never explained in depth. I will also mention that there was an instance of a British curse word.
In the end this book had a lot going for it, but while there were some truly great moments, especially with the fight scenes near the end of the book, there was also a fair bit of predictableness and 2D-ness to many of the characters. It is a coming of age, medieval series starter, that left me wanting to like it, but just not quite there.
I received a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions are my own.
February 4, 2023
Venture is a bonded servant who sees his only way to have a chance at a better life is to be a professional fighter. Unfortunately, the world in which he lives doesn't allow bonded servants to fight, but that doesn't stop Venture's master, Grant Fieldstone, who is much more progressive than most, from enrolling him in a gym and basically sponsoring him. Grant's daughter, Jade, is Venture's best friend, and when they develop feelings for each other, that makes Venture even more determined to succeed in the fighting world so he can make something of himself and be worthy of Jade.
This is a story about a young man who is always getting in trouble, who grows up over the course of the book. I enjoyed the world building and character development, but would have liked to read more about the society in which Venture and Jade lived. The book kind of meandered along until the latter half when the action picked up with Venture learning to fight, but it didn't bog the story down.
All in all, I enjoyed this book and look forward to continuing with the series.
4/5 stars.
This is a story about a young man who is always getting in trouble, who grows up over the course of the book. I enjoyed the world building and character development, but would have liked to read more about the society in which Venture and Jade lived. The book kind of meandered along until the latter half when the action picked up with Venture learning to fight, but it didn't bog the story down.
All in all, I enjoyed this book and look forward to continuing with the series.
4/5 stars.
June 22, 2017
Interesting characters. Reasonable stopping point. Character growth. Would read more. Solid 3
February 11, 2018
Just too young for me.
February 10, 2020
Very easy read
Good character development and very detailed fighting.
The action scenes were well thought out. So many items that will be circled back around to.
Good character development and very detailed fighting.
The action scenes were well thought out. So many items that will be circled back around to.
May 20, 2021
While reading this book, I found myself cheering Venture on!
March 23, 2017
I'm still confused as to whether this book took place in the past or the future?
March 23, 2013
R. H. Russell is a fresh author of promise, with a first book who breaks the foolish rule of being just an introduction to the series.
Venture Untamed, in defiance of a relative old plot, is a beautiful story, told in an alert manner, with attractive and well built characters, suitable for both: boys (they’ll love the fight scenes) and girls.
In a world based on social discrimination and on written and unwritten laws that support it, some individuals dream to have more and sometimes they just need a good enough reason to engage in the fight to get what they want.
The best chance for Venture to exceed the limits imposed by others is to do that thing he excels in and likes so much – fightings. Sport, regardless of its form and especially if it is a national sport, is a flagship for its champions in every society. More difficult is when you can’t do what you want and what you are apt to do not only because of stupid rules of the conquerors but also because of your family history. But Venture has an important advantage because when he is about to give up or when he feels that there's no other chance, the help comes from where neither he or you – the reader - expect. Anyway it won't be easy for him.
The romance is well kept under control. When you think the author forgot about the relationship between Venture and Jade, you get a fresh breath of oxygen, but just to enhanced you and make you want more. Do you want more? Then it's time to cool down a little bit, because probably based on "abstinence sports law", the author stops and leaves you longing more than you did before you inhaled that craving relief.
Their relationship - if we can call it like this - even if it's friendship, brotherly love or romantic love, can bring only trouble to both of them. Even graver is that Venture, like any boy or man in this world, is not always capable of understanding which one of them he's dealing with.
Sometimes you have the impression that Venture is worn by the destiny. If he doesn’t do what others impose to him (because he’s obliged to do it), then he does do what Jade cunningly makes him to do. Jade is strong and she opposes to the system in every way she can. I like to believe that she has a long term strategy and all she needs is Venture to do what he must: become a champion. Her importance is felt in every step, even if she is not present.
I said that for Venture won't be easy. Why? Because, despite the help he gets, despite the self-control that he imposes to himself, it appears that he can’t have absolutely all he wants, maybe he can't have anything at all, and all this because those written and unwritten laws are in force, because most of the people are willing to comply with those rules, because… because almost nothing is in his favor.
What are his options? How his options are influenced by his own choices and by the choices of those who have the right to decide for him? You’ll see. Anyway, nothing is solved and nothing is final at the end of the first book (and I was relieved when I saw it's just volume one). There is still hope and I want to believe Venture will catch it with both his hands.
Even the carping readers will be eager to learn further.
„[...] but Venture knew her better. Well enough to detect a trace of loneliness, a whisper of the girl who’d poured her heart out of him [...] who was increasingly left behind by Grant to find her place among the women of Society. [...] A friend who had, more often than not, delighted in being a partner in his boyhood schemes. A friend who didn’t know how not to be a part of his plans now. She wanted more for him than his place in Twin Rivers Town could offer him. Had he ever cared as much for her unhappiness with her position, for her dreams of something more, as she had for his?”
Happy reading!
Venture Untamed, in defiance of a relative old plot, is a beautiful story, told in an alert manner, with attractive and well built characters, suitable for both: boys (they’ll love the fight scenes) and girls.
In a world based on social discrimination and on written and unwritten laws that support it, some individuals dream to have more and sometimes they just need a good enough reason to engage in the fight to get what they want.
The best chance for Venture to exceed the limits imposed by others is to do that thing he excels in and likes so much – fightings. Sport, regardless of its form and especially if it is a national sport, is a flagship for its champions in every society. More difficult is when you can’t do what you want and what you are apt to do not only because of stupid rules of the conquerors but also because of your family history. But Venture has an important advantage because when he is about to give up or when he feels that there's no other chance, the help comes from where neither he or you – the reader - expect. Anyway it won't be easy for him.
The romance is well kept under control. When you think the author forgot about the relationship between Venture and Jade, you get a fresh breath of oxygen, but just to enhanced you and make you want more. Do you want more? Then it's time to cool down a little bit, because probably based on "abstinence sports law", the author stops and leaves you longing more than you did before you inhaled that craving relief.
Their relationship - if we can call it like this - even if it's friendship, brotherly love or romantic love, can bring only trouble to both of them. Even graver is that Venture, like any boy or man in this world, is not always capable of understanding which one of them he's dealing with.
Sometimes you have the impression that Venture is worn by the destiny. If he doesn’t do what others impose to him (because he’s obliged to do it), then he does do what Jade cunningly makes him to do. Jade is strong and she opposes to the system in every way she can. I like to believe that she has a long term strategy and all she needs is Venture to do what he must: become a champion. Her importance is felt in every step, even if she is not present.
I said that for Venture won't be easy. Why? Because, despite the help he gets, despite the self-control that he imposes to himself, it appears that he can’t have absolutely all he wants, maybe he can't have anything at all, and all this because those written and unwritten laws are in force, because most of the people are willing to comply with those rules, because… because almost nothing is in his favor.
What are his options? How his options are influenced by his own choices and by the choices of those who have the right to decide for him? You’ll see. Anyway, nothing is solved and nothing is final at the end of the first book (and I was relieved when I saw it's just volume one). There is still hope and I want to believe Venture will catch it with both his hands.
Even the carping readers will be eager to learn further.
„[...] but Venture knew her better. Well enough to detect a trace of loneliness, a whisper of the girl who’d poured her heart out of him [...] who was increasingly left behind by Grant to find her place among the women of Society. [...] A friend who had, more often than not, delighted in being a partner in his boyhood schemes. A friend who didn’t know how not to be a part of his plans now. She wanted more for him than his place in Twin Rivers Town could offer him. Had he ever cared as much for her unhappiness with her position, for her dreams of something more, as she had for his?”
Happy reading!
January 27, 2012
R. H. Russell has eighteen years of training in judo and other martial arts, and that experience really shows in Venture Untamed, a fantasy set in a world where class distinctions are the rule and fighting is the sport of choice. This book is marketed as YA fantasy, probably because of Venture’s age (twelve when the story begins), but it felt like more of an adult fantasy to me, perhaps because the writing was so mature. Venture Delving, whose parents are dead and has only an older brother for family, is bonded to Grant Fieldstone, a successful land owner and farmer, and must serve his household until he turns nineteen and becomes a free man. Fieldstone is a fair man and lets Venture study with his daughter, Jade, who is his best friend, but Venture has a temper and trouble seems to follow him. After getting into a serious fight defending Jade’s honor, Venture is given one last chance to stay with Grant Fieldstone: he must train in the art of fighting at Beamer’s, the local training center for boys.
There Venture comes into his own as a fighter, making friends at the center, but enemies as well. Most of the boys there have one goal: to be allowed to participate in the Quarter Championship and earn a spot in the Champion’s Center, where a fighter can train to be Champion of All Richland. Although Venture’s dream is to acquire this title someday, something is standing in the way: his own brother, Justice, will never allow him to fight professionally because of a terrible family secret. In order to convince Justice to let him go, he argues that by leaving the Fieldstone household, he will be distancing himself from the temptation of being with Jade, whom he loves but will never be allowed to marry. Eventually Venture succeeds and is on his way to the Youth Quarter Championship.
I found one of the strengths of Venture Untamed, and there are many, to be the powerful fighting scenes. Normally I wouldn’t choose to read a book about hand-to-hand combat, but Venture is such a headstrong and earnest character that I was rooting for him from the beginning, when he was a scrawny orphan, to his teen years as a young man who is determined to rise above his station in life. The fight scenes themselves were emotionally packed, and I could almost feel the sweat and blood running down the faces of the fighters. Venture is beaten down many times, but he always gets back on his feet and tries to improve his fighting skills with every loss.
The class system Russell has created is very effective and allows for lots of tension between Venture and his best friend Jade, a delightful and scrappy girl who sticks up for Venture and thumbs her nose at the “cresteds,” the members of the elite class. While Venture is little more than a slave, Jade is expected to marry a crested someday, although she only wants to be with Venture, the boy she has known most of her life. Their relationship is heartbreaking at times, as everyone in their lives conspires to keep them apart. Although Russell sends Venture off to the Champion's Center without resolving things with Jade, the stage is nicely set for the sequel which is, luckily for us, already available. For believable characters, strong world-building, and a story with emotional impact, Venture Untamed is highly recommended.
Many thanks to R.H. Russell for supplying a review copy of Venture Untamed.
This review originally appeared on my blog Books, Bones & Buffy
There Venture comes into his own as a fighter, making friends at the center, but enemies as well. Most of the boys there have one goal: to be allowed to participate in the Quarter Championship and earn a spot in the Champion’s Center, where a fighter can train to be Champion of All Richland. Although Venture’s dream is to acquire this title someday, something is standing in the way: his own brother, Justice, will never allow him to fight professionally because of a terrible family secret. In order to convince Justice to let him go, he argues that by leaving the Fieldstone household, he will be distancing himself from the temptation of being with Jade, whom he loves but will never be allowed to marry. Eventually Venture succeeds and is on his way to the Youth Quarter Championship.
I found one of the strengths of Venture Untamed, and there are many, to be the powerful fighting scenes. Normally I wouldn’t choose to read a book about hand-to-hand combat, but Venture is such a headstrong and earnest character that I was rooting for him from the beginning, when he was a scrawny orphan, to his teen years as a young man who is determined to rise above his station in life. The fight scenes themselves were emotionally packed, and I could almost feel the sweat and blood running down the faces of the fighters. Venture is beaten down many times, but he always gets back on his feet and tries to improve his fighting skills with every loss.
The class system Russell has created is very effective and allows for lots of tension between Venture and his best friend Jade, a delightful and scrappy girl who sticks up for Venture and thumbs her nose at the “cresteds,” the members of the elite class. While Venture is little more than a slave, Jade is expected to marry a crested someday, although she only wants to be with Venture, the boy she has known most of her life. Their relationship is heartbreaking at times, as everyone in their lives conspires to keep them apart. Although Russell sends Venture off to the Champion's Center without resolving things with Jade, the stage is nicely set for the sequel which is, luckily for us, already available. For believable characters, strong world-building, and a story with emotional impact, Venture Untamed is highly recommended.
Many thanks to R.H. Russell for supplying a review copy of Venture Untamed.
This review originally appeared on my blog Books, Bones & Buffy
January 10, 2014
NOTE: I received a copy of this book via Netgalley in exchange for my honest review. Thanks!
After I finished reading this book, I sat down at the computer and contacted the author. Here's what I said:
I know it's been awhile since you've published the books about Venture Delving, but I just finished reading the first one (got it via Netgalley) and I found it quite impossible to put down. If I had to compare it to any other series, I'd gladly say Harry Potter and I won't be kidding.
You'd probably think I was exaggerating, but gosh, I was not! Venture Untamed has every single trait that a book lover wants to read about. It's got adventure, it's got romance, it's got action. It's got passion, hatred, anger. It's got devotion, uncertainty and humiliation. I'm telling you, this is a book (and author) of many talents.
So, the world of Venture Untamed is kind of like ours, only several centuries back when there were carriages and people rode horses to get from one place to another. When there were bonded servants. It's a fantasy world though, not a historical time from our world. It doesn't have magic in the convenient meaning we've all adopted or anything paranormal at all.
Yet, I could almost taste the 'magic' of life in the air. The 'magic' of the value of one's existence. The 'magic' of love and friendship and free-given bondage. I don't even know how to describe it but it grabbed me, you know? It was like a magnet pulling me in.
If you're wondering, Venture is the main male character. He starts off as an angsty boy who can't help but get in trouble. All the time. Worse though is that he's a bonded servant in a world where those like him are treated like scum. As if their life didn't matter. Try imagining holding your anger when mistreated. Try imagining holding onto your honor, to your faith, to your desire to keep your loved ones safe.
When I think of Venture, especially in this first book, I envision the broken boy, all alone, left with no parents to take care of him. I also see his courage to grow up and be a man of honor. I see his strength and determination. I also see his forbidden affection for Jade, his best friend and daughter to his master. You see how complicated this gets? It spins out of control later, but I'm not taking this review there.
Jade Fieldstone was an impressive girl. She was not girly. She wanted to learn how to fight. She wanted to be independent. And she sure didn't want to be pampered by any boy. Which is why Jade frustrated and angry with Venture on many occasions when his thick head forgot she wasn't a weak girl in need of protecting. She was smart and I really liked that about her. Her quick wit brought Venture where he belonged - to the fighters' arena.
Gosh, you have no idea how much fighting helped Venture with his anger and other issues. I'm quite sure without the mat he'd have drowned in his anger and frustration. He felt out of his element everywhere else, but on the mat he was king. Sure, he made mistakes, he lost fights, he wasn't by any means perfect. But he had passion not only to win, but to win with honor.
I'm sure that Venture Delving will capture your heart too, as long as you give him a chance.
After I finished reading this book, I sat down at the computer and contacted the author. Here's what I said:
I know it's been awhile since you've published the books about Venture Delving, but I just finished reading the first one (got it via Netgalley) and I found it quite impossible to put down. If I had to compare it to any other series, I'd gladly say Harry Potter and I won't be kidding.
You'd probably think I was exaggerating, but gosh, I was not! Venture Untamed has every single trait that a book lover wants to read about. It's got adventure, it's got romance, it's got action. It's got passion, hatred, anger. It's got devotion, uncertainty and humiliation. I'm telling you, this is a book (and author) of many talents.
So, the world of Venture Untamed is kind of like ours, only several centuries back when there were carriages and people rode horses to get from one place to another. When there were bonded servants. It's a fantasy world though, not a historical time from our world. It doesn't have magic in the convenient meaning we've all adopted or anything paranormal at all.
Yet, I could almost taste the 'magic' of life in the air. The 'magic' of the value of one's existence. The 'magic' of love and friendship and free-given bondage. I don't even know how to describe it but it grabbed me, you know? It was like a magnet pulling me in.
If you're wondering, Venture is the main male character. He starts off as an angsty boy who can't help but get in trouble. All the time. Worse though is that he's a bonded servant in a world where those like him are treated like scum. As if their life didn't matter. Try imagining holding your anger when mistreated. Try imagining holding onto your honor, to your faith, to your desire to keep your loved ones safe.
When I think of Venture, especially in this first book, I envision the broken boy, all alone, left with no parents to take care of him. I also see his courage to grow up and be a man of honor. I see his strength and determination. I also see his forbidden affection for Jade, his best friend and daughter to his master. You see how complicated this gets? It spins out of control later, but I'm not taking this review there.
Jade Fieldstone was an impressive girl. She was not girly. She wanted to learn how to fight. She wanted to be independent. And she sure didn't want to be pampered by any boy. Which is why Jade frustrated and angry with Venture on many occasions when his thick head forgot she wasn't a weak girl in need of protecting. She was smart and I really liked that about her. Her quick wit brought Venture where he belonged - to the fighters' arena.
Gosh, you have no idea how much fighting helped Venture with his anger and other issues. I'm quite sure without the mat he'd have drowned in his anger and frustration. He felt out of his element everywhere else, but on the mat he was king. Sure, he made mistakes, he lost fights, he wasn't by any means perfect. But he had passion not only to win, but to win with honor.
I'm sure that Venture Delving will capture your heart too, as long as you give him a chance.
March 7, 2014
I give this book 3 1/2 stars. This is a great book for sure. R.H. Russell's writing was beautifully done and impeccably edited as well! I loved Venture and Jade's characters for sure because the author did a fabulous job developing them and I rooted for them the entire time, but I never felt truly satisfied with their love story. This book is written in a time and place of Crested's (rulers and the highest class of their lands)& Bonded Servants who are basically the lowest of their class. They are treated like dirt on a regular basis and have no choice but to accept this. Venture is lucky enough to be a Bonded servant to Grant Fieldstone, who is by far a step above all other wealthy citizens from their town, and is a wealthy man who has a heart and shows this by treating his Bonded Servants with common decency and respect. He almost was a surrogate parent to Venture, because he had lost both his Father and Mother before the story begins. I also need to state that I tried so hard to get caught up in the love story between Grant Fieldstone's daughter Jade and Venture Delving's character.... but things moved so slowly that I never really, truly felt the connection between the two. It felt more like 2 best friends more than a romantic chemistry. I loved the devotion and toughness of Venture's character.... he was such a champion in my eyes without actually being one (as of yet)... and was tough as nails and headstrong and you had to love that with him being a Bonded Servant and coming from such an insecure upbringing. He still seems to rise above the others. He is by far my favorite character out of this story and I will be reading book 2 for sure. I was able to read a sneak peek for Book 2 and LOVED what I read! It seems to move along from the beginning quite nicely and I HAVE to know what will be in store for Venture Delving and Jades characters.I hope Jade Fieldstone surprises me and wins me over in book 2! Great for lovers of Dystopian and Young Adult genres.
Here is the synopsis from Goodreads for this book.... Check it out!
Venture Delving is a bonded servant, a member of the lowest class in the world. Already fatherless, when he loses his mother, he veers from energetic to out of control. But when Venture's rage saves the life of Jade, his best friend and his master's daughter, Venture finds himself in the last place he ever expected—a center renowned for training young boys to be professional fighters.
When Venture realizes he's fallen in love with Jade, he knows that the only way he'll ever have her, the only way he'll ever be free to live the life he's meant to live, is to defy convention, common sense, the trust of those he cares about most—and sometimes the law—and become the best fighter in the world, the Champion of All Richland. Venture must battle not only rival fighters, but the ghosts of his past and the members of a privileged warrior class who stand between him and his dream.
Here is the synopsis from Goodreads for this book.... Check it out!
Venture Delving is a bonded servant, a member of the lowest class in the world. Already fatherless, when he loses his mother, he veers from energetic to out of control. But when Venture's rage saves the life of Jade, his best friend and his master's daughter, Venture finds himself in the last place he ever expected—a center renowned for training young boys to be professional fighters.
When Venture realizes he's fallen in love with Jade, he knows that the only way he'll ever have her, the only way he'll ever be free to live the life he's meant to live, is to defy convention, common sense, the trust of those he cares about most—and sometimes the law—and become the best fighter in the world, the Champion of All Richland. Venture must battle not only rival fighters, but the ghosts of his past and the members of a privileged warrior class who stand between him and his dream.
April 6, 2012
I wasn't sure what to expect with this book; all I really knew is it was a book about young fighters written by an author with personal experience. By the end of the book, I was definitely a fan. I was very impressed by both the writing talent and the character development.
The main character of this new series is Venture Delving, a teenage boy with a heck of a lot of heart and determination. He was sure to do everything in power to make certain that his station in life did not define his destiny; that's something anybody can admire. From the beginning I wanted nothing more than to see him succeed in fighting and become champion. Luckily he had some important people in his corner, such as Grant and Jade Fieldstone, and his own brother, Justice. Grant is actually Venture's master, but he definitely didn't treat him as such. He seemed more like a father figure to the young fighter; he had such a huge heart as well and wanted nothing more than to see Venture follow his dreams. Grant's daughter, Jade, is Venture's best friend and obviously would do anything for him as well. Don't let the fact that she's a girl fool you, because she is tough and can definitely hold her own. Justice is Venture's brother and does absolutely not want him to go into fighting. Their father died doing that very thing and it makes sense that he wouldn't want to lose his brother too. Regardless, he is there for Venture no matter what.
I really enjoyed the budding relationship between Venture and Jade. It is obviously a forbidden pairing, with Jade being his master's daughter, but that just makes it more exciting. They don't get the opportunity to act much on their feelings in this first book of the series, but I definitely anticipate reading more about this romantic sub-story in the next books.
The fight scenes were well written and easy to follow even for someone who doesn't know much about the technical aspects of fighting. It was easy to visualize these young men going head to head in an attempt to better their own lives and root for them every step of the way (well, some of them at least!).
Overall this was a really good read and a fantastic start to a new series. Readers will enjoy this book even without any knowledge of fighting, so certainly don't let that scare you off! I'm definitely looking forward to reading the next book in the series, Venture Unleashed, which is available now!
The main character of this new series is Venture Delving, a teenage boy with a heck of a lot of heart and determination. He was sure to do everything in power to make certain that his station in life did not define his destiny; that's something anybody can admire. From the beginning I wanted nothing more than to see him succeed in fighting and become champion. Luckily he had some important people in his corner, such as Grant and Jade Fieldstone, and his own brother, Justice. Grant is actually Venture's master, but he definitely didn't treat him as such. He seemed more like a father figure to the young fighter; he had such a huge heart as well and wanted nothing more than to see Venture follow his dreams. Grant's daughter, Jade, is Venture's best friend and obviously would do anything for him as well. Don't let the fact that she's a girl fool you, because she is tough and can definitely hold her own. Justice is Venture's brother and does absolutely not want him to go into fighting. Their father died doing that very thing and it makes sense that he wouldn't want to lose his brother too. Regardless, he is there for Venture no matter what.
I really enjoyed the budding relationship between Venture and Jade. It is obviously a forbidden pairing, with Jade being his master's daughter, but that just makes it more exciting. They don't get the opportunity to act much on their feelings in this first book of the series, but I definitely anticipate reading more about this romantic sub-story in the next books.
The fight scenes were well written and easy to follow even for someone who doesn't know much about the technical aspects of fighting. It was easy to visualize these young men going head to head in an attempt to better their own lives and root for them every step of the way (well, some of them at least!).
Overall this was a really good read and a fantastic start to a new series. Readers will enjoy this book even without any knowledge of fighting, so certainly don't let that scare you off! I'm definitely looking forward to reading the next book in the series, Venture Unleashed, which is available now!
May 14, 2014
I received an e-copy of this from Shane of Itching For Books and the author in exchange for an honest review.
I am definitely in the minority since most of the readers loved this one. What went wrong for me? Is it the writing? Definitely not. Despite it being in the 3rd person POV, I was able to read it without stopping even once. Is it the story? Nah. I was deeply immersed into the story. The idea of such society was both interesting and quite intriguing. Being at the low class, would Venture be able to go at the top through his own efforts? I was astounded as to how their society worked. Yes, it was absolutely cruel if I must say. Is it the characters? Still no. I actually liked Venture. His determination was typical among them but what set him apart was his patience. He knew he cannot just go straight at the top. He was willing to start from the bottom. The other characters did their parts as much as they should. It was all supposed to happen. So what then gave it? PACING.
Can you even imagine how excited I was that after 50% of the book, something big was happening and then I was shocked to see that it had already ended. Turns out, the remaining last few pages in my Kindle was a preview for the sequel. I was very disappointed by then. I didn't know how to feel. The whole book for me was like world-building, introducing the characters, some mishaps happening. Nothing THAT BIG happened. To think that I was excited because there was supposed to be fighting. Or there maybe some. But not the kind I expected. For the most part, I felt that it was all about the preparations for the big thing.
Despite me not liking the pacing that much, I might or might not give the sequel a try. I'm still curious as to how Venture would work his way up and if he would be with Jane in the end. Since a lot of readers liked this one, I'm still encouraging everyone to go try this. Maybe it's just me not liking the pacing. You'll never know.
Originally posted at The Bookish Confections
I am definitely in the minority since most of the readers loved this one. What went wrong for me? Is it the writing? Definitely not. Despite it being in the 3rd person POV, I was able to read it without stopping even once. Is it the story? Nah. I was deeply immersed into the story. The idea of such society was both interesting and quite intriguing. Being at the low class, would Venture be able to go at the top through his own efforts? I was astounded as to how their society worked. Yes, it was absolutely cruel if I must say. Is it the characters? Still no. I actually liked Venture. His determination was typical among them but what set him apart was his patience. He knew he cannot just go straight at the top. He was willing to start from the bottom. The other characters did their parts as much as they should. It was all supposed to happen. So what then gave it? PACING.
Can you even imagine how excited I was that after 50% of the book, something big was happening and then I was shocked to see that it had already ended. Turns out, the remaining last few pages in my Kindle was a preview for the sequel. I was very disappointed by then. I didn't know how to feel. The whole book for me was like world-building, introducing the characters, some mishaps happening. Nothing THAT BIG happened. To think that I was excited because there was supposed to be fighting. Or there maybe some. But not the kind I expected. For the most part, I felt that it was all about the preparations for the big thing.
Despite me not liking the pacing that much, I might or might not give the sequel a try. I'm still curious as to how Venture would work his way up and if he would be with Jane in the end. Since a lot of readers liked this one, I'm still encouraging everyone to go try this. Maybe it's just me not liking the pacing. You'll never know.
Originally posted at The Bookish Confections
November 13, 2013
Venture Delving has just lost his mother and since he is already fatherless he feels as if he is alone as a bonded servant. Although there are limits to what he is allowed to do because of his status, his master wants to encourage Venture to pursue plans for after his nineteenth birthday when he will be free. Venture decides he wants to learn to fight and begins training at a center that is known for training boys to become professional fighters.
With all of the limits already given to him, Venture must find his inner strength and determination to pursue his passion. Will his love for his master’s daughter be his downfall? Does he want to be a fighter like his father? Can he do what it takes to be a freeman? Venture Untamed is the first book in The Venture series. This first book is a relatively short book and gives the reader the feel that there is a larger story on the way. When I finished reading this story, I was glad to know that the second and third books are already out since this book does not give a satisfying ending. The second book is Venture Unleased and the third book is Venture Unbroken. Russell’s writing was smooth and the world building and character development were great. Although the reader won’t be satisfied with stopping after the first book, it is not a cliff hanger. It has been a few days since I finished this story and I can’t stop thinking about Venture and the next stage in his journey.
With all of the limits already given to him, Venture must find his inner strength and determination to pursue his passion. Will his love for his master’s daughter be his downfall? Does he want to be a fighter like his father? Can he do what it takes to be a freeman? Venture Untamed is the first book in The Venture series. This first book is a relatively short book and gives the reader the feel that there is a larger story on the way. When I finished reading this story, I was glad to know that the second and third books are already out since this book does not give a satisfying ending. The second book is Venture Unleased and the third book is Venture Unbroken. Russell’s writing was smooth and the world building and character development were great. Although the reader won’t be satisfied with stopping after the first book, it is not a cliff hanger. It has been a few days since I finished this story and I can’t stop thinking about Venture and the next stage in his journey.
November 28, 2011
A splendid story about a boy fighting to be a man. As a bonded boy, he shouldn't be able to be anything more than a servant. But with some help, he will defy all the rules.
I had a lot of fun reading this story. The story has some lighthearted moments which makes the tense actiony scenes all the more satisfying. The characters are entertaining and believable. Venture gets into a lot of trouble and makes many mistakes but he is always trying to do the right thing. Jade is a tomboy stuck in a society that wants her to be a lady. Both have trouble fitting in and that creates a bond between them.
There were no flaws that I noticed. However, I do want to point out that the villains are the typical spiteful jerks. In fact, the whole story is pretty standard: boy with low status fights against the odds to rise in the ranks and become a champion to win his lady's love. What makes this book great is HOW it's told (really, you can't help but love Jade too).
Pros:interesting and believable characters, fast-paced and engaging story
Cons: standard plot
I would recommend this book to everyone who would like a short actiony read. As a book about fighting, there is violence but not that much. Another thing is that the book ends with a nice lead into the next book. You'll find yourself itching to get the next book once you're done with this one!
I had a lot of fun reading this story. The story has some lighthearted moments which makes the tense actiony scenes all the more satisfying. The characters are entertaining and believable. Venture gets into a lot of trouble and makes many mistakes but he is always trying to do the right thing. Jade is a tomboy stuck in a society that wants her to be a lady. Both have trouble fitting in and that creates a bond between them.
There were no flaws that I noticed. However, I do want to point out that the villains are the typical spiteful jerks. In fact, the whole story is pretty standard: boy with low status fights against the odds to rise in the ranks and become a champion to win his lady's love. What makes this book great is HOW it's told (really, you can't help but love Jade too).
Pros:interesting and believable characters, fast-paced and engaging story
Cons: standard plot
I would recommend this book to everyone who would like a short actiony read. As a book about fighting, there is violence but not that much. Another thing is that the book ends with a nice lead into the next book. You'll find yourself itching to get the next book once you're done with this one!
December 5, 2011
I absolutely loved this novel! It surprised me because when I first read the synopsis, I wasn't sure I would enjoy it. Boy, did I change my mind. It was a wonderful story about a boy determined to rise from his situation and become what he always dreamed of.
Although it started slow for me, I can't deny that I was drawn in by the story and it's characters. The world was incredibly well built, I honestly believed that I was there even though I don't know everything about it, the author brought it to life. The characters, even the lesser ones, are so relate able and you can't help but fall in love their stories and their struggles.
The fighting was epic! I can't even tell you how captivated I was by each move and how the author described it. Honestly, I have never been one to read books about fighting but this has completely changed my mind and my opinion.
If you think that the fighting isn't something you're into, trust me, the story is bigger than that. The love story between Jade and Venture is wonderful, the relationship between Venture and his elder brother is sadly captivating, and his relationship with fighting is different than I would've thought.
I recommend that everyone read this wonderful book! It's captivating and I loved it!
Although it started slow for me, I can't deny that I was drawn in by the story and it's characters. The world was incredibly well built, I honestly believed that I was there even though I don't know everything about it, the author brought it to life. The characters, even the lesser ones, are so relate able and you can't help but fall in love their stories and their struggles.
The fighting was epic! I can't even tell you how captivated I was by each move and how the author described it. Honestly, I have never been one to read books about fighting but this has completely changed my mind and my opinion.
If you think that the fighting isn't something you're into, trust me, the story is bigger than that. The love story between Jade and Venture is wonderful, the relationship between Venture and his elder brother is sadly captivating, and his relationship with fighting is different than I would've thought.
I recommend that everyone read this wonderful book! It's captivating and I loved it!
March 24, 2012
****I received a copy of this book and Venture Unleashed from the author. The only thing asked was for my honest review.****
Venture Delving is a bonded servant to the Grant Fieldstone household as was his mother, who had just died at the start of the story. He is helped through it by his young friend Jade, who we find out is the daughter of Grant Fieldstone. As they get older the Fieldstones try to educate Venture and while he can read, his handwriting leaves a lot to be desired and he is better known for brawling than learning and causes problems for his master. What they don't know is Venture's secret desire is to be a fighter and not only a fighter but the champion. After Venture saves Jade from being attacked by 3 punks getting badly beaten while doing so and it is decided to send him to the Beamer school for fighters. The book goes on to describe his adventures there, his relationship with Jade and his personal struggles with himself and others who thing bonded people shouldn't be in the school.
I wasn't sure about this book when I started it but as I got into it I became more and more interested in the characters and what they were going through and when the author ended the book I said what!!! What happens next? Will have to read the next book to see I guess.
Venture Delving is a bonded servant to the Grant Fieldstone household as was his mother, who had just died at the start of the story. He is helped through it by his young friend Jade, who we find out is the daughter of Grant Fieldstone. As they get older the Fieldstones try to educate Venture and while he can read, his handwriting leaves a lot to be desired and he is better known for brawling than learning and causes problems for his master. What they don't know is Venture's secret desire is to be a fighter and not only a fighter but the champion. After Venture saves Jade from being attacked by 3 punks getting badly beaten while doing so and it is decided to send him to the Beamer school for fighters. The book goes on to describe his adventures there, his relationship with Jade and his personal struggles with himself and others who thing bonded people shouldn't be in the school.
I wasn't sure about this book when I started it but as I got into it I became more and more interested in the characters and what they were going through and when the author ended the book I said what!!! What happens next? Will have to read the next book to see I guess.
May 6, 2012
I won this book from the member librarything giveaways in exchange for an honest review.
Venture Untamed is a book about Venture, who is essentially a slave for a kind master. He has undergone tragedy in his young life, but has a fast friend in his master's daughter, Jade. His penchant for getting into fights lands him first into trouble and then into training to become a prize fighter.
There are many great things about this book. I could tell that the author had a lot of experience with wrestling/fighting and the details felt very real and spot on. I thought that Jade, Earnest, Grace, and his master were wonderful characters. The book was easy to read and fast paced.
My main issue with this book is that it feels like the first episode in a series. Perhaps this was the intent of the author, but I like to feel some sense of completion after the first novel. Furthermore, the story is very predictable, and although I enjoyed reading it, because I can anticipate the ending of the whole series, it didn't seem incredibly important to continue reading.
That said, I believe that this is a very good read for young boys, especially those who don't like to read-- this is an easy to like, well written and fast paced novel with great characters and description.
Venture Untamed is a book about Venture, who is essentially a slave for a kind master. He has undergone tragedy in his young life, but has a fast friend in his master's daughter, Jade. His penchant for getting into fights lands him first into trouble and then into training to become a prize fighter.
There are many great things about this book. I could tell that the author had a lot of experience with wrestling/fighting and the details felt very real and spot on. I thought that Jade, Earnest, Grace, and his master were wonderful characters. The book was easy to read and fast paced.
My main issue with this book is that it feels like the first episode in a series. Perhaps this was the intent of the author, but I like to feel some sense of completion after the first novel. Furthermore, the story is very predictable, and although I enjoyed reading it, because I can anticipate the ending of the whole series, it didn't seem incredibly important to continue reading.
That said, I believe that this is a very good read for young boys, especially those who don't like to read-- this is an easy to like, well written and fast paced novel with great characters and description.
September 30, 2013
I absolutely loved this novel! It surprised me because when I first read the synopsis, I wasn't sure I would enjoy it. Boy, did I change my mind. It was a wonderful story about a boy determined to rise from his situation and become what he always dreamed of.
Although it started slow for me, I can't deny that I was drawn in by the story and it's characters. The world was incredibly well built, I honestly believed that I was there even though I don't know everything about it, the author brought it to life. The characters, even the lesser ones, are so relate able and you can't help but fall in love their stories and their struggles.
The fighting was epic! I can't even tell you how captivated I was by each move and how the author described it. Honestly, I have never been one to read books about fighting but this has completely changed my mind and my opinion.
If you think that the fighting isn't something you're into, trust me, the story is bigger than that. The love story between Jade and Venture is wonderful, the relationship between Venture and his elder brother is sadly captivating, and his relationship with fighting is different than I would've thought.
I recommend that everyone read this wonderful book! It's captivating and I loved it!
Although it started slow for me, I can't deny that I was drawn in by the story and it's characters. The world was incredibly well built, I honestly believed that I was there even though I don't know everything about it, the author brought it to life. The characters, even the lesser ones, are so relate able and you can't help but fall in love their stories and their struggles.
The fighting was epic! I can't even tell you how captivated I was by each move and how the author described it. Honestly, I have never been one to read books about fighting but this has completely changed my mind and my opinion.
If you think that the fighting isn't something you're into, trust me, the story is bigger than that. The love story between Jade and Venture is wonderful, the relationship between Venture and his elder brother is sadly captivating, and his relationship with fighting is different than I would've thought.
I recommend that everyone read this wonderful book! It's captivating and I loved it!
March 26, 2016
Venture is a bonded worker for the man his mother served before she died. He is treated kindly by the servants and the master, and has even been educated with the daughter Jade. Venture and Jade were inseparable as children and remain close even as they enter their teens. But fear of rumors of impropriety makes the adults around the two insist on a separation and Venture is sent to a school for fighters. His innate drive to not give in, to not succumb, causes the valiant Venture to struggle despite harsh conditions. His love for Jade is overwhelming but her mixed signals confuse the young man. He strives to become the best fighter and if successful, he’ll reap wealth and independence. Venture is a likeable character, one the reader sympathizes with; the downtrodden kid who is subjected to the contempt of those at the school and in the fight program. The fights and the abuse Venture endures are not for the faint hearted. The story is reminiscent of The False Prince by Nielsen. Both books showcase main characters putting themselves at great physical risk to reach their goal. They are smart, resilient, driven boys that one can’t help but root for. Russell has created a fast-paced plot that has an intensity that captivates and touches the heart.
January 9, 2012
What a fabulous book. The plot drew me in and the characters kept me in. What struck me the most was that even though Venture's own father died trying to win a professional fighting match, that didn't scare Venture off from the profession. Venture knows he's good but that doesn't go to his head. I can only hope that as the series continues on Venture has the opportunity to win both for himself and for his father.
The other aspect of the novel I really enjoyed was the budding romance between Venture and his master's daughter, Jade. Jade is both charming and spunky and she can definitely hold her own. She was a great character unto herself and I think she would make for a great spin-off story.
Venture Untamed has something in it to appeal to everyone. I was afraid I might not like it because of all the fighting, but there wasn't too much. The romance aspect of the novel really surprised me, too, and it's because of that that I think this book would be a great read for both boys and girls. Definitely check it out if you have the chance. The book ended in such a way that I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the sequel soon.
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The other aspect of the novel I really enjoyed was the budding romance between Venture and his master's daughter, Jade. Jade is both charming and spunky and she can definitely hold her own. She was a great character unto herself and I think she would make for a great spin-off story.
Venture Untamed has something in it to appeal to everyone. I was afraid I might not like it because of all the fighting, but there wasn't too much. The romance aspect of the novel really surprised me, too, and it's because of that that I think this book would be a great read for both boys and girls. Definitely check it out if you have the chance. The book ended in such a way that I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the sequel soon.
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March 4, 2014
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So this was something fresh and new. I couldn't believe how amazing R.H. Russell writing style is. It really made it worth the while and I couldn't put the book down. I loved it and I needed something new and interesting to read.
Venture our main character is trying to survive, trying to become someone. He has lost his family and now he is forced to be a servant in order to live. After Venture lost his mother, he just collapsed, he couldn't find the reason to survive. He is the lowest as he can be. But, after a while, the sun starts to appear on his street as well. He meets a girl, Jade and he is starting to fall in love with her. But how can their relationship work? He doesn't have anything and Jade can't be with him.
This book thought me how to set my goals, my ideas and follow them no matter how bad the situation is. I loved the story and I can't wait to read the next book. I highly recommend it! Thank you for the opportunity!
So this was something fresh and new. I couldn't believe how amazing R.H. Russell writing style is. It really made it worth the while and I couldn't put the book down. I loved it and I needed something new and interesting to read.
Venture our main character is trying to survive, trying to become someone. He has lost his family and now he is forced to be a servant in order to live. After Venture lost his mother, he just collapsed, he couldn't find the reason to survive. He is the lowest as he can be. But, after a while, the sun starts to appear on his street as well. He meets a girl, Jade and he is starting to fall in love with her. But how can their relationship work? He doesn't have anything and Jade can't be with him.
This book thought me how to set my goals, my ideas and follow them no matter how bad the situation is. I loved the story and I can't wait to read the next book. I highly recommend it! Thank you for the opportunity!
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November 8, 2024I found this book enjoyable enough. It had a story that was different from trending teen fiction (certainly a breath of fresh air!) There were no love triangles and no sensual romances that made me want to squirm and put the book down. Venture and Jade were friends first and foremost, and that was that. The story was straightforward – like the main character.
Overall, the writing could have been stronger. It had confusing moments and a few text errors, but not enough to make me stop reading. It had no language and no sexual content, definitely a bonus.
I liked the characters. Jade was sweet and Venture struggled to control his anger, but I would have liked to see them more rounded. I liked the idea and the tension of the crested and the bondsmen, but found the storyworld lacking and longed for it to be more diverse, alive, and foreign from our own world.
While I feel this book was somewhat lacking, the story had a lot of potential and the writer shows promise. I have no doubt that Vent and Jade’s adventure will grow better with time.
Overall, the writing could have been stronger. It had confusing moments and a few text errors, but not enough to make me stop reading. It had no language and no sexual content, definitely a bonus.
I liked the characters. Jade was sweet and Venture struggled to control his anger, but I would have liked to see them more rounded. I liked the idea and the tension of the crested and the bondsmen, but found the storyworld lacking and longed for it to be more diverse, alive, and foreign from our own world.
While I feel this book was somewhat lacking, the story had a lot of potential and the writer shows promise. I have no doubt that Vent and Jade’s adventure will grow better with time.
January 9, 2014
Venture has lost his parents and is a servant. Basically he is the lowest class and has no value. He looses control after the passing of his mother yet that rage saves his master’s daughter Jade. Venture starts falling in love with Jade but he knows that with his low class they will never be together. Venture then finds professional fighters. If he can win, then he can get a higher class and possibly be with Jade.
This is a great book. A classic underdog story, but don’t let that stop you from reading this book. I really felt for Venture, here he is lost, without a point or purpose until he saves Jade. I loved how he set his goals and never gave up in his pursuit to win the championship and Jade. The fight scenes were remarkable, very realistic and very descriptive.
You will get sucked into this book and not put it down until the wee hours of the morning. This is one book that you have to read. There is a little bit of everything in it.
This is a great book. A classic underdog story, but don’t let that stop you from reading this book. I really felt for Venture, here he is lost, without a point or purpose until he saves Jade. I loved how he set his goals and never gave up in his pursuit to win the championship and Jade. The fight scenes were remarkable, very realistic and very descriptive.
You will get sucked into this book and not put it down until the wee hours of the morning. This is one book that you have to read. There is a little bit of everything in it.
August 19, 2015
When the book started out with Venture at age 11, I assumed it would progress forward at least 7 years after a chapter or two set the tone. I assumed incorrectly. The characters aged to 14 years old, and then we're treated with Venture learning to box and struggling with desire for his best friend, Jade.
If the author had bumped their ages up by 4 or 5 years, I would have felt much less uncomfortable about their raging hormones and adult situations. Who cares about a 14 year old? Maybe that's callous, but I remember 14 as unremarkable and overwrought, and that's what this book is.
There's no real conflict, action, or resolution. The writing is fine, but when the plot is essentially non-existent, what's the point?
If the author had bumped their ages up by 4 or 5 years, I would have felt much less uncomfortable about their raging hormones and adult situations. Who cares about a 14 year old? Maybe that's callous, but I remember 14 as unremarkable and overwrought, and that's what this book is.
There's no real conflict, action, or resolution. The writing is fine, but when the plot is essentially non-existent, what's the point?
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