This book was so close to get getting 5 dragons! It had everything I like in a book! 1) A moody male character that wasn’t immature. He was an understandably moody guy. 2) A strong, just bad-ass female main character, who was just soft enough to be approachable, but, booooyyyyy, you’d better have your Big-Girl Panties on when you’re talking to her, or she will eat you alive! 3) A great, fast-paced, grab-you-by-your-seat-cushion kind of plot! Great, great, great!
The characters just leapt off the page. Literally and truly! I loved ‘em! That opening scene where we got to meet Rory just reeled me in! I was sunk! There wasn’t a lot of background story to bog down the pace. There was just enough information to tease! It was loooooovely!
Then when we got to meet Amber, I was hooked! She was sassy, fun and more than willing to kick Rory’s butt around the bend if that’s what he needed.
The plot was awesome! Wow! I was really sucked in by it. It felt unique. Original? No, but unique! It felt like going on a new roller coaster. I didn’t know where the twists and turns were going to be, and there wasn’t the typical foreshadowing. You know, girl drops her keys and is saved by her clumsiness because mysterious dude tried to take off her head. No. There was none of that. The characters pushed the story onto a unique path, giving me a story I haven’t read or lived a million times. It was really refreshing!
But!!!! The flashbacks! Ms. Garland’s writing is so fantasmic that I truly felt she could have done something much stronger than a flashback. I breezed right past the first one. Didn’t read it. Then the second one hit, and I was like, “Oh, wait. Maybe there’s something really important here.” Nope. Well, I mean, YES! But…could it have been conveyed in a stronger way? Integrated into the story using his vocal intonation, body language and what he didn’t say? Could the details have been left in mystery? YES! Did they detract? For me? Yes. It was after that second flashback that I started to notice info dumps.
Now, don’t freak out. The info dumps were only a paragraph long at a time, and they were nothing that you couldn’t just read the first sentence, the italicized word in the middle and the ending sentence and get the gist of it all. This is me, the writer, speaking as an author who has to look at this kind of stuff.
Ms. Garland is a high caliber author! The flashbacks and paragraph info dumps were a slight disappointment, but it wasn’t enough for me to throw the book, or get mad and stomp off. No. I still devoured her book! I think I might have mentioned that the characters were amazing as was the plot? Yeah. They really were.
Also…I’m undecided on this next note, but the sex scenes were literally a paragraph long. Not a main structural element, obviously. LOL! They were tasteful and there was some tingling, but the book obviously wasn’t centered around the romantic/sexual elements. I kinda wish there’d been a bit more. It felt like a tease. But! I’m glad that the sex didn’t detract from the plot. The plot and the characters really did carry this book!
Okay, so rambling review over, bottom line! Great characters + great plot + a few narration stumbles = a good book and a great read!