04/13/2013 --
Overall Rating = 2.5 Stars
Book Cover / Book Blurb = 5 / 4 = 4.5 Stars
Writer’s Voice = 2.5 Stars
Character Development = 3.5 Stars
Story Appreciation = 2 Stars
Worth the Chili = 2 Stars [$3.99 on Amazon]
I read this because I've been reading or wanting to read some inter-racial romances and this one was read and given a 5 Star review by one of my new favorite authors; Nia Forrester. It also had a music theme mentioned in the blurb. All good, right?
I've been in a reading slump lately and I was at about 50% through this book thinking this may break my slump, then the story took a hard turn into some things that just didn't ring true for me and this blew it for my enjoyment.
A few things I really liked about this one:
1 -- I liked Brian, until close to the end. Then the author turned on the gushy cheesy dialogue for this guy. Up to that point, he was a great character. Another case of a great character trapped in a bad story. Imagine a cartoon of a hunky, blonde haired, blue eyed man with a bass guitar, trying to break out of a bubble. This is Brian ... poor guy.
2 -- Love Ebony's name. Loved the book cover, the blurb the premise of this story. All gave me great promise. Ebony, for a smart girl, made really poor decisions. The blurb mentions a bass player - this would be Brian, but really didn't get much of the music component, so not a huge character in the story. The cover is amazing. Really pretty. However, this whole butterfly thing was the end for me...
3 -- ?? Not much else really.
So much didn't work and I'm not sure why the author took the story down this path. Spoiler WARNING!
1 -- Okay, I was cruising along with a decent story until the butterfly. Let me set the stage. Ebony was worrying about being able to afford the next/last semester of a seven [7] year education. Her part-time jobs were in jeopardy and some of her books were very expensive. All of a sudden she shows up with a blue tattoo of a butterfly on her ass. We find this out during sex with Brian. Okay, do you have any idea how much a tattoo -- a good, multi-colored tattoo costs? Seriously, this girl who was worried about being able to buy toilet paper [being facetious now] is going to go to the expense of getting a tattoo? And then the butterfly thing was just outside of the story up to this point. At this point, I almost stopped reading, but decided to finish it. I won't read the next one.
2 -- The author seemed to run out of story and start throwing various plot lines in to make it longer and to make it "more interesting." She should have stopped while she was ahead. After the butterfly, nothing worked for me. It came across as immature plot development and bordered on stupid.
3 -- I think I've ripped enough, but need to say this -- I will not read the second in this series and won't try this author again. Pulling me to the 50% mark but not able to keep the story together for remainder, is just a tease and no one likes a tease. Not going to fall for it again.
This book held some real promise. Unfortunately it didn't work out. I know I'm a rather tough critic, but when you give me a character, you paint a background and provide a storyline, then you deviate from it in a manner that just doesn't logically fit, I just can't hang. If she had told me on the outset that Ebony was just a poor decision maker and leaned to the side of stupid, I might have been able to buy the goods. But, then again, I probably wouldn't have read [know I wouldn't have read] this book.
Maybe this stuff doesn't bother you. If it doesn't, you'll like this book.
Happy Reading!