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Dark Days of Promise
While Vicki’s children grapple with the death of their father -- a man whom she’s successfully fabricated as loving, a lie her rebellious teenager recognizes -- she must find a way to support her family and find a role model for her boys. She never intends to fall for Staff Sergeant Chase, her best friend’s son, who suffers from Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD). She’d much rather choose a safer man to love, but her children have a voice in the decision she makes. With two deaths to deal with, a suitor after her money, a rebellious son, and Sergeant Chase’s repeated attacks, she can only hope to survive the danger she faces. If she doesn’t, her children will be left without either parent.
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EXCERPT
Was he telling me the truth about Carter calling? Why had I decided to accept a ride from such a dangerous man? Would I survive the night? In the light of morning, could I say I’d made the right choice? Although grateful for the ride, and the warmth of his Jeep, a cold shudder of terror slithered up my spine every time he glanced in my direction. The locked door added to my apprehension. Cold overwhelmed me again.
He exercised a considerable amount of care in adjusting the army blanket higher across my chest with one hand. His warm hand brushed against my skin. I flinched, wanting to scream, but managed to keep it in check, in all honesty because I couldn't... The phantom pressure of his hands lingered at my throat.
It seemed incomprehensible. I'd once thought him in need of my comfort, only to have him turn on me, becoming a killer. Never, if I lived forever, would I forget the coldness in his eyes at the moment I knew I'd die. The memory of his eyes, the cold purposeful reflection of them, caused me to shudder. I couldn't bring myself to look at him. Would his seeming gentleness be absent, replaced instead by the killer I knew existed behind the veil of concern for my well-being? Though good-looking, he'd proved beyond dangerous -- he'd proven deadly. He'd held my life in his hands. The option of my continued breathing his choice and his alone. Why did I continue to breathe? Could it be a calculated move on his part to heighten my terror? I wasn't sure.
It required a firm determination on my part to remain calm. I couldn't help but consider myself his prisoner. Distrust replaced my calm acceptance of his explanation of finding me with emphatic surety. I tried in vain to calm my instincts to run should the opportunity present itself.
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EXCERPT
Was he telling me the truth about Carter calling? Why had I decided to accept a ride from such a dangerous man? Would I survive the night? In the light of morning, could I say I’d made the right choice? Although grateful for the ride, and the warmth of his Jeep, a cold shudder of terror slithered up my spine every time he glanced in my direction. The locked door added to my apprehension. Cold overwhelmed me again.
He exercised a considerable amount of care in adjusting the army blanket higher across my chest with one hand. His warm hand brushed against my skin. I flinched, wanting to scream, but managed to keep it in check, in all honesty because I couldn't... The phantom pressure of his hands lingered at my throat.
It seemed incomprehensible. I'd once thought him in need of my comfort, only to have him turn on me, becoming a killer. Never, if I lived forever, would I forget the coldness in his eyes at the moment I knew I'd die. The memory of his eyes, the cold purposeful reflection of them, caused me to shudder. I couldn't bring myself to look at him. Would his seeming gentleness be absent, replaced instead by the killer I knew existed behind the veil of concern for my well-being? Though good-looking, he'd proved beyond dangerous -- he'd proven deadly. He'd held my life in his hands. The option of my continued breathing his choice and his alone. Why did I continue to breathe? Could it be a calculated move on his part to heighten my terror? I wasn't sure.
It required a firm determination on my part to remain calm. I couldn't help but consider myself his prisoner. Distrust replaced my calm acceptance of his explanation of finding me with emphatic surety. I tried in vain to calm my instincts to run should the opportunity present itself.
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First published September 20, 2012
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Shaunna Gonzales
14 books27 followersMy writing journey began the day my chiropractor asked, “Have you considered you might have multiple sclerosis?” Those few words changed everything.
Before MS, I was a dancer, a horseback rider, and a creator who filled her world with music and art. When illness slowly took those joys away, I turned to writing a new way to express beauty, emotion, and strength. That was the beginning of my path as a storyteller and, eventually, as an inspirational fiction author.
Living with multiple sclerosis has given me a deeper connection to resilience, gratitude, and hope. Through my books, I explore the power of courage, healing, and self-discovery, blending fantasy, time-travel romance, emotional adventure, and women’s fiction. My stories often follow women who rise from adversity, discover their inner strength, and find love and meaning in unexpected places.
My debut time-travel fantasy series invites readers into a world where the past and present intertwine where magic meets destiny, and where even in the face of challenges, the human spirit always finds a way to rise. One of my most meaningful inspirations came from real events, such as when the Oso landslide hit in Western Washington, a powerful reminder of life’s fragility, strength, and the hope that follows tragedy.
Today, writing is my constant companion, my creative escape and my way of turning struggle into inspiration. Through every page, I aim to uplift and connect with readers who believe in hope, resilience, second chances, and the extraordinary within the ordinary.
If ever my words come close to real events, I hope readers will forgive me any misrepresentation of the real Oso landslide, as my intention is always to honor courage, compassion, and the beauty of human endurance.
Join me on this journey and discover stories that celebrate courage, imagination, and transformation tales that remind us that no matter how far we fall, there’s always a way to begin again.
Before MS, I was a dancer, a horseback rider, and a creator who filled her world with music and art. When illness slowly took those joys away, I turned to writing a new way to express beauty, emotion, and strength. That was the beginning of my path as a storyteller and, eventually, as an inspirational fiction author.
Living with multiple sclerosis has given me a deeper connection to resilience, gratitude, and hope. Through my books, I explore the power of courage, healing, and self-discovery, blending fantasy, time-travel romance, emotional adventure, and women’s fiction. My stories often follow women who rise from adversity, discover their inner strength, and find love and meaning in unexpected places.
My debut time-travel fantasy series invites readers into a world where the past and present intertwine where magic meets destiny, and where even in the face of challenges, the human spirit always finds a way to rise. One of my most meaningful inspirations came from real events, such as when the Oso landslide hit in Western Washington, a powerful reminder of life’s fragility, strength, and the hope that follows tragedy.
Today, writing is my constant companion, my creative escape and my way of turning struggle into inspiration. Through every page, I aim to uplift and connect with readers who believe in hope, resilience, second chances, and the extraordinary within the ordinary.
If ever my words come close to real events, I hope readers will forgive me any misrepresentation of the real Oso landslide, as my intention is always to honor courage, compassion, and the beauty of human endurance.
Join me on this journey and discover stories that celebrate courage, imagination, and transformation tales that remind us that no matter how far we fall, there’s always a way to begin again.
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February 27, 2017
Vicki is a single mom, living with her three children. Her ex-husband is in the military, fighting in some faraway war, and thanks to some help from the closest neighbour Janine, they're doing okay on their own. One day, four men in uniform knock on Vicki's door. She has to tell her children their father is dead, and such words never come easy.
Her ex-husbands death emphasizes the word "single" in a way the divorce never could, and as she tries to cope with a rebellious teenage son and make plans for the future, a handsome banker asks her for a date. Vicki accepts, thinking she's truly alone and that her children need a father figure. These might not be the right reasons for entering a relationship, but it seems logical. At about the same time, Janine's son returns home from the war. He is handsome, strong, and PTSD makes him unpredictably violent.
Gonzales has a knack for creating believable characters. They not only come alive on the pages, but I expect them to appear in real life at any moment. Their thoughts, intentions, and problems are believable. It's hard to describe the story conveying how exciting it really is; it contains just the right amount of danger and adventure to keep you turning the pages, and just when you think you know what'll happen, everything takes an unexpected turn.
The book is classified in cryptic categories such as "Christian books and bibles." I normally don't read Christian books: in my opinion the authors usually overdo it, and the material comes across as a few hundred pages of trying to convert people. Gonzales doesn't fall into that trap. There is religion in the book, but the mentions of faith come naturally, as a part of life for the people involved. She handles religion in an elegant, non-threatening and non-coercive way that makes this book stand out as something that can be appreciated both by people looking for a Christian read, and by people wanting to be entertained by an enthralling romantic suspense.
I warmly recommend the book and I will keep my eyes open for new releases from Shaunna Gonzales. If you buy it, be prepared to shut out the world for a while - I just HAD to know what would happen, so I read it all in one day.
Her ex-husbands death emphasizes the word "single" in a way the divorce never could, and as she tries to cope with a rebellious teenage son and make plans for the future, a handsome banker asks her for a date. Vicki accepts, thinking she's truly alone and that her children need a father figure. These might not be the right reasons for entering a relationship, but it seems logical. At about the same time, Janine's son returns home from the war. He is handsome, strong, and PTSD makes him unpredictably violent.
Gonzales has a knack for creating believable characters. They not only come alive on the pages, but I expect them to appear in real life at any moment. Their thoughts, intentions, and problems are believable. It's hard to describe the story conveying how exciting it really is; it contains just the right amount of danger and adventure to keep you turning the pages, and just when you think you know what'll happen, everything takes an unexpected turn.
The book is classified in cryptic categories such as "Christian books and bibles." I normally don't read Christian books: in my opinion the authors usually overdo it, and the material comes across as a few hundred pages of trying to convert people. Gonzales doesn't fall into that trap. There is religion in the book, but the mentions of faith come naturally, as a part of life for the people involved. She handles religion in an elegant, non-threatening and non-coercive way that makes this book stand out as something that can be appreciated both by people looking for a Christian read, and by people wanting to be entertained by an enthralling romantic suspense.
I warmly recommend the book and I will keep my eyes open for new releases from Shaunna Gonzales. If you buy it, be prepared to shut out the world for a while - I just HAD to know what would happen, so I read it all in one day.
September 19, 2012
As I read Mrs. Gonzales novel, I felt as IF she was writing it about me and my life. I can relate to all three main characters. I found myself wondering when she had been able to glean so much information and bring it all together in such a way as it riveted me until I finished reading her novel. Shaunna had me falling in love right along with her characters, stirring up emotions ... and an eyeopener.
This is a very good read!
This is a very good read!
October 3, 2012
What my stars mean:
5 Stars--the book had a profound impact on me. It touched me on some special level and lingered with me long after I'd finished reading it.
4 Stars--I loved this book. If I don't own it, I will buy it so I can read it again and again.
3 Stars--I enjoyed the book but may have had an issue or two with it.
2 Stars--I had more than a few issues with it.
1 Stars--I hated it.
Book Description
Thirty-four year old Vicki Laramie must learn to trust before she can love, but she might die trying.
While Vicki’s children grapple with the death of their father -- a man whom she’s successfully fabricated as loving, a lie her rebellious teenager recognizes -- she must find a way to support her family and find a role model for her boys. She never intends to fall for Staff Sergeant Chase, her best friend’s son, who suffers from Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD). She’d much rather choose a safer man to love, but her children have a voice in the decision she makes. With two deaths to deal with, a suitor after her money, a rebellious son, and Sergeant Chase’s repeated attacks, she can only hope to survive the danger she faces. If she doesn’t, her children will be left without either parent.
Excerpt
"Do you trust me?"
"Do I have a choice?" I whispered.
With the mistletoe still in hand, he placed it at the back of my head. His fingers entwined in my hair. My heart accelerated its beating dance, knowing a much more euphoric rush would accompany his kiss. More than his first visit, more than his peck on my cheek, more...A warm quiver of anticipation settled over me, fixing me to the spot. The music from the movie in the next room swelled, intensifying the moment. His lips brushed mine, hinting of gingerbread and milk. I wondered if I'd ever experienced such a kiss. The gentle, warm, sweet pressure, invited me to live in the moment. An experience I'd never known in all my years with another...I couldn't even remember his name. My adrenalin roller coaster revved its engine in my stomach before climbing with massive force in an upward motion before dropping to my deepest core. Yet it didn't last long enough. He no sooner released me than I had the distinct feeling of his reclaiming every intimate emotion he'd shared with me.
"I shouldn't stay. It's not safe for you." He withheld his smile, his eyes hinting at something I didn't understand.
My take
I could relate to Vicki's circumstances. While my two oldest children were younger than hers when my first husband died, I can relate to the loneliness of being a single parent ever responsible for the children. I remember too well my concerns for my son, knowing that try as I might I could not teach him some things. I could tell him stuff, but I could never understand what it is to be a guy. I don't care how many babies a male obstetrician delivers, he still doesn't really get what it's like--from the woman's view--to give birth.
Sometimes I wanted to smack Vicki, though. lol But we all do stupid things when we're trying to do what we think is best for our children. I can forgive her for being human. One thing I appreciated about her was that she never quite gave up on Kelly who needed a chance to heal. And he needed help to do it.
Trust is a big issue in Dark Days of Promise. My husband is a Vietnam vet, and when we first married, I learned very early not to stand within the reach of his fist if I had to wake him up. He never hit me, but he scared both of us a couple of times. Fortunately, it's rare for the PTSD to show itself now, but it seems still to lurk in that stage between sleeping and waking.
Of course, I'm a black belt now. I think I can take him. ;)
5 Stars--the book had a profound impact on me. It touched me on some special level and lingered with me long after I'd finished reading it.
4 Stars--I loved this book. If I don't own it, I will buy it so I can read it again and again.
3 Stars--I enjoyed the book but may have had an issue or two with it.
2 Stars--I had more than a few issues with it.
1 Stars--I hated it.
Book Description
Thirty-four year old Vicki Laramie must learn to trust before she can love, but she might die trying.
While Vicki’s children grapple with the death of their father -- a man whom she’s successfully fabricated as loving, a lie her rebellious teenager recognizes -- she must find a way to support her family and find a role model for her boys. She never intends to fall for Staff Sergeant Chase, her best friend’s son, who suffers from Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD). She’d much rather choose a safer man to love, but her children have a voice in the decision she makes. With two deaths to deal with, a suitor after her money, a rebellious son, and Sergeant Chase’s repeated attacks, she can only hope to survive the danger she faces. If she doesn’t, her children will be left without either parent.
Excerpt
"Do you trust me?"
"Do I have a choice?" I whispered.
With the mistletoe still in hand, he placed it at the back of my head. His fingers entwined in my hair. My heart accelerated its beating dance, knowing a much more euphoric rush would accompany his kiss. More than his first visit, more than his peck on my cheek, more...A warm quiver of anticipation settled over me, fixing me to the spot. The music from the movie in the next room swelled, intensifying the moment. His lips brushed mine, hinting of gingerbread and milk. I wondered if I'd ever experienced such a kiss. The gentle, warm, sweet pressure, invited me to live in the moment. An experience I'd never known in all my years with another...I couldn't even remember his name. My adrenalin roller coaster revved its engine in my stomach before climbing with massive force in an upward motion before dropping to my deepest core. Yet it didn't last long enough. He no sooner released me than I had the distinct feeling of his reclaiming every intimate emotion he'd shared with me.
"I shouldn't stay. It's not safe for you." He withheld his smile, his eyes hinting at something I didn't understand.
My take
I could relate to Vicki's circumstances. While my two oldest children were younger than hers when my first husband died, I can relate to the loneliness of being a single parent ever responsible for the children. I remember too well my concerns for my son, knowing that try as I might I could not teach him some things. I could tell him stuff, but I could never understand what it is to be a guy. I don't care how many babies a male obstetrician delivers, he still doesn't really get what it's like--from the woman's view--to give birth.
Sometimes I wanted to smack Vicki, though. lol But we all do stupid things when we're trying to do what we think is best for our children. I can forgive her for being human. One thing I appreciated about her was that she never quite gave up on Kelly who needed a chance to heal. And he needed help to do it.
Trust is a big issue in Dark Days of Promise. My husband is a Vietnam vet, and when we first married, I learned very early not to stand within the reach of his fist if I had to wake him up. He never hit me, but he scared both of us a couple of times. Fortunately, it's rare for the PTSD to show itself now, but it seems still to lurk in that stage between sleeping and waking.
Of course, I'm a black belt now. I think I can take him. ;)
January 9, 2013
Author Shaunna Gonzales dives into some very deep and often neglected topics in her contemporary military family novel, Dark Days of Promise. Having come from a military family myself, and seeing the effects of PTSD, I felt the author handled the issues with both respect and realism.
When Vicki finds out her ex-husband has been killed in action in the Middle East, she struggles with raising three children, especially two boys, on her own. Without even the occasional visits of a father, she fears they will not know how to become men. She never expects her best friend's son to have served with her ex-husband, and certainly never expected to be drawn to such a dangerous man. Her children adore him, but Vicki knows he has a dark side. Kelly can be fun and caring, but he also has killer instincts he can't always control.
I enjoyed this story for its depth and genuine feel. The romance is warm, with a few stirrings of heat, but the relationship progresses nicely. Despite a few slow sections, I give it four stars for being a great read and an excellent story of the honor and sacrifice of our military.
When Vicki finds out her ex-husband has been killed in action in the Middle East, she struggles with raising three children, especially two boys, on her own. Without even the occasional visits of a father, she fears they will not know how to become men. She never expects her best friend's son to have served with her ex-husband, and certainly never expected to be drawn to such a dangerous man. Her children adore him, but Vicki knows he has a dark side. Kelly can be fun and caring, but he also has killer instincts he can't always control.
I enjoyed this story for its depth and genuine feel. The romance is warm, with a few stirrings of heat, but the relationship progresses nicely. Despite a few slow sections, I give it four stars for being a great read and an excellent story of the honor and sacrifice of our military.
December 1, 2017
I really enjoyed this book, even more than I thought I would. I was already prepared to like it already - I'm a big believer in romance and all the obstacles that come with it. Plus, throw in a bit of danger and some tragedy, and I was sold. I was completely pulled in from the start, eating up the story and finding myself wanting to know what would happen next. I wondered and hesitated with the main character, feeling her situation as she dealt with the situations placed before her, and wanting so much for everything to work out. This was a great story, it really did envelope the reality of a family struggling and the ache of loss, the struggles of PTSD and it's affect not only on the individual but all persons in his/her life, and the desire of a woman who wants to have something that makes her happy while recognizing that her children had a say in her choices. I loved it! I will absolutely read this again and I highly recommend it. It's clean, captivating, and wonderfully written!
I volunteered to review this book and all opinions are my own - they are in no way influenced by the author or a 3rd party
I volunteered to review this book and all opinions are my own - they are in no way influenced by the author or a 3rd party
May 30, 2013
Dark Days of Promise pulls the reader into Vicki's life and doesn't let them go until the very end. The suspense is real, the romance is touching, the family life is genuine, and the patriotism is moving. Readers will appreciate the tender thoughtfulness Shaunna Gonzales has used in penning this story.
August 15, 2014
Written in the first person, this is an engaging romance, a story of family, and of life involving military personnel.
Read full review in the 2012 October issue of InD’tale Magazine.
Read full review in the 2012 October issue of InD’tale Magazine.
May 12, 2019
I think I am in the minority here scanning through the other reviews. I won this book in a Goodreads giveaway and was asked to read it and give my honest opinion, so I ask that you please respect that my opinion may differ from yours and there's no need to leave ugly comments. I am sure I have loved some books you would hate and I am fine with that. I was going to give this a one star because it is rare that I can't even finish a book, which is the case here. However, after giving it some thought, I decided to be generous and give it two stars, only because if you have come here to get EXACTLY what the back of the book says, then you'll get it. I was just hoping it would evolve into something deeper and it didn't for me.
I did not enjoy this read at all. I felt it read as if I was watching a Lifetime movie.
I am going to be totally upfront and say I couldn't even finish this book so I DON'T actually know the ending, but if it is as predictable as the first half, I am sure I can guess what happens. I do like reading romance novels at times, but this one is just so incredibly predictable in the half that I read and follows an overly done romance scenario. It is as if someone transcribed a Hallmark movie into a novel. With this plot line and story theme I was hoping to get some deeper character development and emotion, but it just scratched the surface of what I think it could have been. Vicki the main character continuously acts like a high school girl fretting over her love life and has some of the most dense thoughts that are totally laughable because no one in real life could possible have those kind of thoughts and be a real person. Like when she thinks of why doesn't Kelley bend his knee to collect snowballs... REALLY? Anyone in the real world could probably make the connection of oh he is a soldier suddenly home and is very awkwardly leaning without bending his knee. Hmm maybe something has happened to him. And her notion of her ex husband is odd. All she talks about is how she is going to be a single parent now and grapples with how do it... but haven't they been divorced and subsequently already a single parent due to him cheating? Her feelings about this and about her ex are very confusing and contradictory. I may have missed what era this story is taking place in (due to the story line trying to move at hyper speed) but it feels that Vicki has the ideals of a 1950s house wife. If it is meant to take place in that time, then her character is a little more acceptable for me, but if not I can't stand how all she is worried about is how her family will make it without a strong male head of house. I get this is smack out of the sappy love story handbook, but Vicki beats it to death and with this subject matter and plot I was hoping for something a little deeper. I want to see a strong independent lead female that wants a man to stand beside her not lead her. Right now she seems absolutely helpless to the point where it is nauseating. I hope as the novel continues, she will evolve into that.
Also, the writing style is really taking me out of the story and just not allowing me to get hooked.
First, the concept of time within the writing baffles me. One minute she is hanging laundry, the next in the car, and then at church. Actions that should take up a page at least take two sentences while meaningless conversations or thoughts go on forever. It is so unclear to me how much time has actually passed since her ex-husbands death in the first chapter to when they are at church or her son is shoplifting. It feels like the author had a thought and jotted it down and didn't think to clearly join them together with a nice flow between paragraphs. She just seems to be speeding through and taking it way too fast.
She gave us no time to get to know the characters and feel an emotional connection with them before killing off the ex. A scene where the military comes to tell someone that their soldier is gone can be a huge emotional, sad, chilling moment and when it happened in literally the first sentence. It just didn't hit home for me the way it could have. I would have loved some back story first so we are hit in the feels a little harder and care for this family a little more.
Literally it was like pulling teeth for me to even flip through as many pages as I did. Just not my cup of tea unfortunately. Perhaps, if I ever get time to come back to it, I can give it another go. My hope is it gets better and doesn't stay so incredibly predictable. If I do get through it I will come back and update my review here.
I did not enjoy this read at all. I felt it read as if I was watching a Lifetime movie.
I am going to be totally upfront and say I couldn't even finish this book so I DON'T actually know the ending, but if it is as predictable as the first half, I am sure I can guess what happens. I do like reading romance novels at times, but this one is just so incredibly predictable in the half that I read and follows an overly done romance scenario. It is as if someone transcribed a Hallmark movie into a novel. With this plot line and story theme I was hoping to get some deeper character development and emotion, but it just scratched the surface of what I think it could have been. Vicki the main character continuously acts like a high school girl fretting over her love life and has some of the most dense thoughts that are totally laughable because no one in real life could possible have those kind of thoughts and be a real person. Like when she thinks of why doesn't Kelley bend his knee to collect snowballs... REALLY? Anyone in the real world could probably make the connection of oh he is a soldier suddenly home and is very awkwardly leaning without bending his knee. Hmm maybe something has happened to him. And her notion of her ex husband is odd. All she talks about is how she is going to be a single parent now and grapples with how do it... but haven't they been divorced and subsequently already a single parent due to him cheating? Her feelings about this and about her ex are very confusing and contradictory. I may have missed what era this story is taking place in (due to the story line trying to move at hyper speed) but it feels that Vicki has the ideals of a 1950s house wife. If it is meant to take place in that time, then her character is a little more acceptable for me, but if not I can't stand how all she is worried about is how her family will make it without a strong male head of house. I get this is smack out of the sappy love story handbook, but Vicki beats it to death and with this subject matter and plot I was hoping for something a little deeper. I want to see a strong independent lead female that wants a man to stand beside her not lead her. Right now she seems absolutely helpless to the point where it is nauseating. I hope as the novel continues, she will evolve into that.
Also, the writing style is really taking me out of the story and just not allowing me to get hooked.
First, the concept of time within the writing baffles me. One minute she is hanging laundry, the next in the car, and then at church. Actions that should take up a page at least take two sentences while meaningless conversations or thoughts go on forever. It is so unclear to me how much time has actually passed since her ex-husbands death in the first chapter to when they are at church or her son is shoplifting. It feels like the author had a thought and jotted it down and didn't think to clearly join them together with a nice flow between paragraphs. She just seems to be speeding through and taking it way too fast.
She gave us no time to get to know the characters and feel an emotional connection with them before killing off the ex. A scene where the military comes to tell someone that their soldier is gone can be a huge emotional, sad, chilling moment and when it happened in literally the first sentence. It just didn't hit home for me the way it could have. I would have loved some back story first so we are hit in the feels a little harder and care for this family a little more.
Literally it was like pulling teeth for me to even flip through as many pages as I did. Just not my cup of tea unfortunately. Perhaps, if I ever get time to come back to it, I can give it another go. My hope is it gets better and doesn't stay so incredibly predictable. If I do get through it I will come back and update my review here.
May 12, 2019
I think I am in the minority here scanning through the other reviews. I won this book in a Goodreads giveaway and was asked to read it and give my honest opinion, so I ask that you please respect that my opinion may differ from yours and there's no need to leave ugly comments. I am sure I have loved some books you would hate and I am fine with that. I was going to give this a one star because it is rare that I can't even finish a book, which is the case here. However, after giving it some thought, I decided to be generous and give it two stars, only because if you have come here to get EXACTLY what the back of the book says, then you'll get it. I was just hoping it would evolve into something deeper and it didn't for me.
I did not enjoy this read at all. I felt it read as if I was watching a Lifetime movie.
I am going to be totally upfront and say I couldn't even finish this book so I DON'T actually know the ending, but if it is as predictable as the first half, I am sure I can guess what happens. I do like reading romance novels at times, but this one is just so incredibly predictable in the half that I read and follows an overly done romance scenario. It is as if someone transcribed a Hallmark movie into a novel. With this plot line and story theme I was hoping to get some deeper character development and emotion, but it just scratched the surface of what I think it could have been. Vicki the main character continuously acts like a high school girl fretting over her love life and has some of the most dense thoughts that are totally laughable because no one in real life could possible have those kind of thoughts and be a real person. Like when she thinks of why doesn't Kelley bend his knee to collect snowballs... REALLY? Anyone in the real world could probably make the connection of oh he is a soldier suddenly home and is very awkwardly leaning without bending his knee. Hmm maybe something has happened to him. And her notion of her ex husband is odd. All she talks about is how she is going to be a single parent now and grapples with how do it... but haven't they been divorced and subsequently already a single parent due to him cheating? Her feelings about this and about her ex are very confusing and contradictory. I may have missed what era this story is taking place in (due to the story line trying to move at hyper speed) but it feels that Vicki has the ideals of a 1950s house wife. If it is meant to take place in that time, then her character is a little more acceptable for me, but if not I can't stand how all she is worried about is how her family will make it without a strong male head of house. I get this is smack out of the sappy love story handbook, but Vicki beats it to death and with this subject matter and plot I was hoping for something a little deeper. I want to see a strong independent lead female that wants a man to stand beside her not lead her. Right now she seems absolutely helpless to the point where it is nauseating. I hope as the novel continues, she will evolve into that.
Also, the writing style is really taking me out of the story and just not allowing me to get hooked.
First, the concept of time within the writing baffles me. One minute she is hanging laundry, the next in the car, and then at church. Actions that should take up a page at least take two sentences while meaningless conversations or thoughts go on forever. It is so unclear to me how much time has actually passed since her ex-husbands death in the first chapter to when they are at church or her son is shoplifting. It feels like the author had a thought and jotted it down and didn't think to clearly join them together with a nice flow between paragraphs. She just seems to be speeding through and taking it way too fast.
She gave us no time to get to know the characters and feel an emotional connection with them before killing off the ex. A scene where the military comes to tell someone that their soldier is gone can be a huge emotional, sad, chilling moment and when it happened in literally the first sentence. It just didn't hit home for me the way it could have. I would have loved some back story first so we are hit in the feels a little harder and care for this family a little more.
Literally it was like pulling teeth for me to even flip through as many pages as I did. Just not my cup of tea unfortunately. Perhaps, if I ever get time to come back to it, I can give it another go. My hope is it gets better and doesn't stay so incredibly predictable. If I do get through it I will come back and update my review here.
I did not enjoy this read at all. I felt it read as if I was watching a Lifetime movie.
I am going to be totally upfront and say I couldn't even finish this book so I DON'T actually know the ending, but if it is as predictable as the first half, I am sure I can guess what happens. I do like reading romance novels at times, but this one is just so incredibly predictable in the half that I read and follows an overly done romance scenario. It is as if someone transcribed a Hallmark movie into a novel. With this plot line and story theme I was hoping to get some deeper character development and emotion, but it just scratched the surface of what I think it could have been. Vicki the main character continuously acts like a high school girl fretting over her love life and has some of the most dense thoughts that are totally laughable because no one in real life could possible have those kind of thoughts and be a real person. Like when she thinks of why doesn't Kelley bend his knee to collect snowballs... REALLY? Anyone in the real world could probably make the connection of oh he is a soldier suddenly home and is very awkwardly leaning without bending his knee. Hmm maybe something has happened to him. And her notion of her ex husband is odd. All she talks about is how she is going to be a single parent now and grapples with how do it... but haven't they been divorced and subsequently already a single parent due to him cheating? Her feelings about this and about her ex are very confusing and contradictory. I may have missed what era this story is taking place in (due to the story line trying to move at hyper speed) but it feels that Vicki has the ideals of a 1950s house wife. If it is meant to take place in that time, then her character is a little more acceptable for me, but if not I can't stand how all she is worried about is how her family will make it without a strong male head of house. I get this is smack out of the sappy love story handbook, but Vicki beats it to death and with this subject matter and plot I was hoping for something a little deeper. I want to see a strong independent lead female that wants a man to stand beside her not lead her. Right now she seems absolutely helpless to the point where it is nauseating. I hope as the novel continues, she will evolve into that.
Also, the writing style is really taking me out of the story and just not allowing me to get hooked.
First, the concept of time within the writing baffles me. One minute she is hanging laundry, the next in the car, and then at church. Actions that should take up a page at least take two sentences while meaningless conversations or thoughts go on forever. It is so unclear to me how much time has actually passed since her ex-husbands death in the first chapter to when they are at church or her son is shoplifting. It feels like the author had a thought and jotted it down and didn't think to clearly join them together with a nice flow between paragraphs. She just seems to be speeding through and taking it way too fast.
She gave us no time to get to know the characters and feel an emotional connection with them before killing off the ex. A scene where the military comes to tell someone that their soldier is gone can be a huge emotional, sad, chilling moment and when it happened in literally the first sentence. It just didn't hit home for me the way it could have. I would have loved some back story first so we are hit in the feels a little harder and care for this family a little more.
Literally it was like pulling teeth for me to even flip through as many pages as I did. Just not my cup of tea unfortunately. Perhaps, if I ever get time to come back to it, I can give it another go. My hope is it gets better and doesn't stay so incredibly predictable. If I do get through it I will come back and update my review here.
November 20, 2017
War is never easy to talk about it, much less explain to loved ones what happened over there to make you act the way that you do. War destroys lives, war changes lives, and war stays with you even when you have come away with your battle scars. Soldiers who suffer from Post Traumatic Stress Disorder, simply cannot turn off their trigger zones, nor do they expect those around them to understand the affects from the experiences that they’ve lived through. But still there is hope. Gonzales asserts an impossible situation upon a family of four, to show her readers that these things really do happen. Death and loss happen on an everyday basis, to those who do not deserve it and to those who are already gravely suffering from other burdens in life. This author encompasses a sensitive subject and combines it with a second chance at happiness.
Vicki Laramie has three children, and receives the horrendous news that her ex-husband and the father of her children, has died in combat. She looks to her best friend and neighbor, Janine Chase, for her wisdom and guidance on how to break the news to her children and live with the sudden loss of a parent, income, and companionship. When Janine’s son Kelly comes home from his tour, he promises his mother that he would never go back. He has a lot of problems, which make themselves known after he begins feeling an emotional and intimate connection to his friend’s wife, the friend who gave his life during the war, his only request to protect his family after he is gone. Vicki learns that the war has done something to Kelly, making it hard to trust him and it is not his fault, nor can she fault him for not being able to control it. Touching him sometimes triggers a war zone survival mentality, making him potentially dangerous to not only her, but her children as well. Can Vicki learn to trust Kelly enough to make a relationship work for her children’s sake? They need a father, but what are the lengths that she is willing to go to protect them when her happiness may be on the line as well?
Gonzales has a superb story-line and exceptional character development. All of her characters have such depth that will intrigue the reader and allow them to feel emotions like sympathy, hope, and determination. The pace is absolutely terrific; it is fast-paced, inspirational and the content is credible. The oldest child acting out, another child concerned for his mother’s safety, and Vicki’s reliance on religious faith are all credible factors after suffering from the loss of a parent. There are little to no errors in the context, which make it that much more enjoyable for the reader. If you are a reader of contemporary romance, this story will not disappoint.
A copy of this book was provided to Turning Another Page by Loving the Book, but this in no way affects our honest opinion of the book or the review that has been written. We provide a five-star rating for Dark Days of Promise by Shaunna Gonzales.
Vicki Laramie has three children, and receives the horrendous news that her ex-husband and the father of her children, has died in combat. She looks to her best friend and neighbor, Janine Chase, for her wisdom and guidance on how to break the news to her children and live with the sudden loss of a parent, income, and companionship. When Janine’s son Kelly comes home from his tour, he promises his mother that he would never go back. He has a lot of problems, which make themselves known after he begins feeling an emotional and intimate connection to his friend’s wife, the friend who gave his life during the war, his only request to protect his family after he is gone. Vicki learns that the war has done something to Kelly, making it hard to trust him and it is not his fault, nor can she fault him for not being able to control it. Touching him sometimes triggers a war zone survival mentality, making him potentially dangerous to not only her, but her children as well. Can Vicki learn to trust Kelly enough to make a relationship work for her children’s sake? They need a father, but what are the lengths that she is willing to go to protect them when her happiness may be on the line as well?
Gonzales has a superb story-line and exceptional character development. All of her characters have such depth that will intrigue the reader and allow them to feel emotions like sympathy, hope, and determination. The pace is absolutely terrific; it is fast-paced, inspirational and the content is credible. The oldest child acting out, another child concerned for his mother’s safety, and Vicki’s reliance on religious faith are all credible factors after suffering from the loss of a parent. There are little to no errors in the context, which make it that much more enjoyable for the reader. If you are a reader of contemporary romance, this story will not disappoint.
A copy of this book was provided to Turning Another Page by Loving the Book, but this in no way affects our honest opinion of the book or the review that has been written. We provide a five-star rating for Dark Days of Promise by Shaunna Gonzales.
November 16, 2017
Intense
This story grabbed me from the start . The author created realistic, believable characters. The three children each responded differently to the news of their father's death, but all three responses how different children at different ages react to a tragedy such as those Philip, Carter and Krista experienced. Then there is the guilt their mother, Vicki, feels over not loving, yet mourning, her ex-husband while trying to help her children cope.
I love the older neighbor, . It turns out her son, Kelly, and Vicki's ex-husband, Marshall, served with each other. That is a connection when Kelly returns home from the Army and meets Vicki's family. Then there is the man at the bank who shows an interest in Vicki. The relationships grow more complicated from there, turning into quite an intense romance situation. Like many single women with children at home, Vicki must make some serious decisions about what will make her happy and what is best for her and her children.
The emotional impact of the situations made the story. It was one I could empathize with since I know in spite of the positive front military families often show the public, many have challenges--physical and emotional--with which they struggle. This is such a story, and one that is a must-read.
This story grabbed me from the start . The author created realistic, believable characters. The three children each responded differently to the news of their father's death, but all three responses how different children at different ages react to a tragedy such as those Philip, Carter and Krista experienced. Then there is the guilt their mother, Vicki, feels over not loving, yet mourning, her ex-husband while trying to help her children cope.
I love the older neighbor, . It turns out her son, Kelly, and Vicki's ex-husband, Marshall, served with each other. That is a connection when Kelly returns home from the Army and meets Vicki's family. Then there is the man at the bank who shows an interest in Vicki. The relationships grow more complicated from there, turning into quite an intense romance situation. Like many single women with children at home, Vicki must make some serious decisions about what will make her happy and what is best for her and her children.
The emotional impact of the situations made the story. It was one I could empathize with since I know in spite of the positive front military families often show the public, many have challenges--physical and emotional--with which they struggle. This is such a story, and one that is a must-read.
June 6, 2018
Format: Kindle Edition
This is my first book to read by this amazing author . I love military romance novels . This book has tragedy , love , redemption. , and new beginnings. Vicki’s x husband is killed in the line of duty and now she has three sweet children to raise alone . Her life and her children’s lives have been turned upside down . Vicki wants to take the money the military gives her and put it way for their college funds . She meets a handsome banker while making a deposit and decides to date him but she is drawn to her neighbor’s son Kelley . Farley is safe but She is has chemistry with Kelley . Kelley has a dark side and he can be dangerous . Can Vicki trust Kelley , the one her kids really like or go with Farley because she is not afraid of him . Lots of twist and turns and plenty of suspense . A modern day Jakel and Hyde . Can the light calm the dark . It is always the darkest before the dawn . Shaunna takes the bitter and makes it sweet . This is an easy read and it keeps the reader guessing till the very end . The book covers a PTSD and many military men and women experience this illness everyday . Shaunna did a great job through her story telling about how PTSD can take a toll on a relationship and a family . Will be reading more books from this amazing author .
April 2, 2019
Goodreads Kindle Copy Win
Ex husband dies as a single mom learn to cope with the guilt and lies that she portrayed to her children about her ex. Throw in a rebellious son who does not take the news easily. She did not intend to fall in love with someone suffering from PTSD and a suitor after her money.
In the end she must battle various demons as she struggle to survive. Will she be able to make the right decisions? An interesting plot.
Ex husband dies as a single mom learn to cope with the guilt and lies that she portrayed to her children about her ex. Throw in a rebellious son who does not take the news easily. She did not intend to fall in love with someone suffering from PTSD and a suitor after her money.
In the end she must battle various demons as she struggle to survive. Will she be able to make the right decisions? An interesting plot.
April 13, 2019
Great Book
I enjoyed reading this good. It has a good storyline and shows the struggles of a war veteran and a widow to make a life for herself and her children.
I enjoyed reading this good. It has a good storyline and shows the struggles of a war veteran and a widow to make a life for herself and her children.
July 18, 2013
Gonzales pens a story that will tug on your heartstrings with "Dark Days of Promise." Vicki Laramie is struggling to raise three children when she learns her ex-husband is killed in Iraq. Kelly Chase has just left the Army and suffers from PTSD. Can they help each other through their dark days to find happiness?
The story opens with a realistic look at Vicki's struggles. Thankfully, her neighbor, Janine, gives her the emotional and steadfast support Vicki needs to get by. Enter Janine's son, Kelly. He's just left military service, but finds adjustment to civilian life a challenge. Despite their attraction, Vicki and Kelly are challenged at every turn. When something traumatic happens to both of them, will it prove to be the turning point both of them need to move on with their lives?
Gonzales' writing style is easy to read and she handles the first person narrative well. The plot moves at a nice clip.
The best part of the novel is how Gonzales taps into emotions. Phillip is the teenager you want to ground for life, yet he's sympathetic as well, searching for the one person to help "ground" him. Vicki is honest and real and raw. Kelly struggles with issues many do upon returning from war. The supporting cast is just as endearing. Gonzales isn't afraid to show us their strengths, vulnerabilities, and weaknesses.
The story has a spiritual element, but doesn't come off as "preachy." In fact, Gonzales does an excellent job showing the power of faith in a very natural way. The story is sweet for romance readers, with the main characters holding hands and kissing. In fact, it was nice to read a "sweet" romance that didn't feel forced. Overall, "Dark Days of Promise" offers hope in the face of adversity and is a heartwarming story. I highly recommend it.
The story opens with a realistic look at Vicki's struggles. Thankfully, her neighbor, Janine, gives her the emotional and steadfast support Vicki needs to get by. Enter Janine's son, Kelly. He's just left military service, but finds adjustment to civilian life a challenge. Despite their attraction, Vicki and Kelly are challenged at every turn. When something traumatic happens to both of them, will it prove to be the turning point both of them need to move on with their lives?
Gonzales' writing style is easy to read and she handles the first person narrative well. The plot moves at a nice clip.
The best part of the novel is how Gonzales taps into emotions. Phillip is the teenager you want to ground for life, yet he's sympathetic as well, searching for the one person to help "ground" him. Vicki is honest and real and raw. Kelly struggles with issues many do upon returning from war. The supporting cast is just as endearing. Gonzales isn't afraid to show us their strengths, vulnerabilities, and weaknesses.
The story has a spiritual element, but doesn't come off as "preachy." In fact, Gonzales does an excellent job showing the power of faith in a very natural way. The story is sweet for romance readers, with the main characters holding hands and kissing. In fact, it was nice to read a "sweet" romance that didn't feel forced. Overall, "Dark Days of Promise" offers hope in the face of adversity and is a heartwarming story. I highly recommend it.
January 6, 2023
I received DARK DAYS OF PROMISE through a Goodreads giveaway in return for an honest review. I found this story interesting. Vicki's ex-husband dies in combat and Vicki must learn how to keep her family together. She has 3 children and struggles with parenting as a single mom. There are some bumps in the story but all in all, I enjoyed the book.
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