I was going to stop reading the Kinsey Millhone books after reading the last one, which was very disappointing. The only thing stopping me was that I had already located and purchased a used copy of H is for Homicide (and I didn't have any other options near at hand when I finished my last read). I must say that this book was a significant improvement over that last one. Not really a detective story, this is very much a story of investigation (with a bit of Stockholm syndrome thrown in). Kinsey investigates some insurance fraud for California Fidelity, which has been a constant background thing in the series. This time she stumbles on a much bigger fraud ring and the police ask her to go undercover to help them since there is a leak to the fraudsters somewhere in the department. Because of a snafu, she ends up stuck in close quarters with the violent head of the gang and without contact to the outside.
I liked the fact that, although we know almost from the beginning who the crooks are, Kinsey methodically goes about gathering evidence to help convict them. Although there is a murder and a few attempted murders, this story really isn't about murder, which is also a nice change of pace. It seems that murder is the only thing that gets investigated on TV, movies and mystery novels. There are other crimes and they can be interesting.
I have some complaints about pacing and attention to detail that seem to keep happening in this series. At one point Kinsey and Bibianna are about to escape when they are stopped and a fight ensues. Kinsey has a gun in her purse and never uses it. Of course, through the whole encounter I'm saying "use your gun, use your gun, why isn't she using her gun?" Long after the confrontation Kinsey talks about the purse she dropped during the fight. When writing this kind of scenario it would be good the say, "When he came at her, I dropped the purse in order to..."
The ending was another slam-bang confrontation of the type that I have come to expect from people who used to write for television (or who hope for a sweet movie deal). I was surprised by the big reveal at the end, as I was sure Kinsey was about to get shot in the back by Raymond's lieutenant Luis. While Kinsey's firing was the kind of finish that makes you want to pick up the next book, I thought it rang false. The vice-president of CF was aware of her investigation, being informed of it by the police, and the results obviously saved the company tens of thousands of dollars (which Gordon Titus' penny-pinching would not come close to recovering). If anything, Maclin Voorhies should be firing Titus, since he obviously knows the cost of everything and the value of nothing.