Note: I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
This book has some amazing potential, but I feel that it was executed in a bland manner. I was instantly intrigued by the idea, and I was really excited to read it. There were so many parts of it that just didn't make sense to me, or seemed so fragemented that I didn't understand the purpose.
One example of this is that in the beginning of the story, we are told that Lucessa is adopted, but Guy tells Maxim that she's half demigod. Maxim seems like a smart person, I don't understand how he didn't notice this inconsistancy.
There also just seemed to be so many things that are so coincidental that it didnt' seem realistic. I mean, I've met some pretty weak men in my past, but would a man really fake his own death to avoid asking for a divorce? I mean, I suppose that's possible, but wow. That's incredibly weak. What really amazed me is that Lucessa would even let him stay with her after he's been "dead" a year before he explained where he was and why he was there. Then Lucessa kicks out Maxim for not telling her the full truth, but HELLO?! Greg's not telling you the full truth either? It just seemed odd to me.
Thoughout all that, I could look the other way really. Of course books are going to have some unrealistic character qualities, it's fiction, that's how it works. The main problem I had really was how many points of view this book was written in. It just didn't seem necessary. Personally, I saw this as a story between three people: Lucessa, Maxim, and Darius. I can understand another person's point of view here and there, but seriously? WAY too much. The majority of the information that was being told in some of the other points of view (Zues, Herod, The chick that came with Greg who's name is evading me right now, etc) could have been told in dialogue or in narrative during someone else's point of view. Greg, I can kinda see him being necessary here and there, but not as much as he had.
Honestly? I think the whole Zues, Hera and Hades thing was completely unnecessary and fragmented from the story. The only real time it was used was Hera giving the mother the ability to go into Erabos, but if Guy was able to give her the ability to go into dreams before her memory was wiped, why couldn't he just give her the ability to be there too? Just seemed like there was extra there that just didn't really need to be there.
Even though I may sound dissatisfied, I did have fun with this book, and I really think that I'd give the second book a chance. I think that there's a great solid story here and some minor tweaks could make it amazing.