Awful..
There were times when I felt like a teenager might have written it, it was so silly. Everything seemed so forced between Rafe and Claire, too. And the stupidest part of the whole book was when Rafe had to get everyone out of the building because the bad guy told him they only had 6 minutes before bombs blew and Rafe, who could barely stand the pain in his injured knee, had to pick up the secretary and try to hurry down the stairs with her because her HIGH HEELS WERE TOO HIGH, FOR HER TO RUN? Really? He couldn’t tell her to take them off and start running? I almost stopped reading right then, that was so stupid. And then he just transferred her to someone else’s arms and the other guy continued to run. WTH was this author thinking? And their thoughts were simply stupid.
As far as I remember there wasn’t one swearword in this book. Cops and military men and no swearing? Not likely. That made this book totally unbelievable. So, for all of you who don’t want sex or swearing in your book then this one’s for you. But not for me.
And our hero wasn’t much of a hero. He was injured during an op and was home to recuperate, then he was taken hostage and was hurt when a bomb went off, then he was burned when his house blew up, then he was beat up by Bez and his henchman and thrown into a deep dark hole. He did jump on a bad guy’s back in order to save Claire, at 91%, so there was that.
Anyway, when it was over I was so glad. Had it been 3 or 4 hundred pages I never would have finished it but since it was only 218 pages I muddled through it. I have no idea how this got so many 4 and 5 star reviews since it was so teenager-ish and quite silly most of the time. I have a headache I rolled my eyes so many times.
As to the narration: He was pretty bad. He read so fast, it was like he was racing to see how fast he could read this. And, he did not have an ounce of feeling either. He just read the book, that’s it. I would not intentionally look for books read by Simon Pringle-Wallace. He made a funny sound with his mouth too when he read. Maybe constant swallowing, I’m not sure. Mr. Wallace only has 3 books he’s done so far but he definitely needs more practice. I mean, at one point Rafe found his brother in a hole beaten so badly he was almost unrecognizable but when Vince spoke his tone was almost yelling, like there wasn’t a thing wrong with him. Does that warrant 4 or 5 stars? I don’t think so.