I confess that maybe I'm a bit the problem with this book, I've read many romances with similar plot, many were very good, so not comparing was impossible for me especially considering how bad this book is.
What the plot promised;
A beautiful, witty, brave Saxon lady who is forced to marry a Norman warrior, who is handsome, powerful, responsible and brave, they consider each other enemies but passion and love make them a happy marriage.
What I got instead was a silly and strange story in which a clumsy man, average warrior, unimportant, and naive, spends his time excited by his wife, of short stature and who turns out to be the stupidest heroine in the world. 😖😵💫😵
The plot: Caryn is an orphan, but she comes from an important and wealthy Saxon family, she lives in a castle with her uncle, but Caryn is a good-for-nothing who seems to come from another planet, she doesn't know how to do women's duties or want to do them, she's not interested in ladies' hobbies, she doesn't obey or respect anyone, she dreams of going hunting, doing farm work, and traveling on horseback.
Has she done any of those things? NOOOOO Does she knows how to do those things? NOOOO
And then why does she long for that? NO IDEA
I suppose to make her different and unique, well our uniquely stupid Caryn, considers that it is a good idea to leave the castle without escort and without surveillance despite the fact that thousands of Norman soldiers are devastating England killing Saxons and raping women, but Caryn does not care and spends her time walking through the forest with her sister Gwen, who is more beautiful than Caryn but has a strong mental illness that makes her like a child, one day they run into Ral a Norman warrior, who leads troops, Ral gets excited to see Gwen, while fighting with Caryn, he says goodbye to them advising the sisters to go home, but the brilliant Caryn is not going to obey any man 🙄😒 besides it is a beautiful day, so she continues through the forest until other Normans find them and savagely rape Gwen, Caryn is saved because she is not that pretty and it's thin and also Ral saves them and takes them to a convent, years pass, the Normans settle down permanently, Caryn and her sister have been in the convent, but Caryn is still the same idiot, she does not obey, she dreams of being free, and the same nonsense, until one day bad Normans come to the convent, they steal several novices including Caryn, to save her from another rape, Ral makes her his wife, what does Caryn do? Well, she gets angry 🤣 and tries to flee to the forest 🤨 but since she is an idiot even to ride Ral finds her, and they end up returning to the castle and they get married , but Caryn refuses to sleep with Ral, and he continues with his mistress Lynette, and here there is something I don't understand why she is his mistress ??? Ral tells us that she is not attractive to him, she is hateful, stupid, vain and nobody wants her, so why, having so many women, has Ral stayed with Lynette for years? NO IDEA...
But over time Caryn begins to desire her husband, buuuut it turns out that the idiot thinks that he is one of those who raped her sister, she doesn't remember anything and she has no reason to believe that he raped Gwen but Caryn is not the brightest person in the world so she acts angry while she desires Ral, which was really weird seriously, you are sure that a man raped and beat your sister but you want to have sex with him, you dream about it and you long to feel it ..... 😵🤨 Really ???
Well almost half the book later they clarify the problem, they start having sex, they fall in love, but Ral doesn't want to be the weird one in his group, you know, be faithful and be in love!!! 🤣 Because is something so so so weird sooo unique .... I mean King William was in love with his wife and was faithful, but Ral is like what the hell!!! I can't be that ridiculous!!!!
So he walks away from Caryn and cheats on
her with Lynette, Caryn cries kicks and gets angry BUT.... only like half a day, then she goes back to being the same immature person, and doesn't do much to show her anger or her dignity, Ral in matter of hours have sex with her again, he practically coaxes her because that's how he wants to show her his affection (???) Friend, you know that jewels exist, right?
And the words to say I love you or I'm sorry??? Well he never really gets around to apologizing, and before he says a single word of regret Caryn has already succumbed to his good sex and BOOM the relationship is mended, Lynette is sent away, Ral has decided that he will be faithful and blah blah blah...
There really isn't much romance between them and the story is quite simple and repetitive, ALL the misunderstandings and problems are caused by Caryn who goes through life being a stupid rebel, she doesn't want to be a medieval wife, so she refuses to obey, work at home, manage the house or listen to her husband, of course our hero Ral is a super strict and firm man, so he must punish Caryn whenever she disobeys, which is practically every 2 pages, and how our super experienced Military leader deals with someone like her? 🤨🤔Well, spanking her yes you read that right and it's not even a sexy or funny moment, it's just weird and silly.....
What's more, I have news for you is a COMPLETELY USELESS action.... Caryn spends 90% of the story doing exactly what they FORBIDDEN her to do, even the things that her friends ADVISED her NOT to do , she does them and well, rebellion is something fun, and even pleasant to read in a Medieval heroine, but for my mother Caryn is an idiot, as I already said, she always acts against common sense or human intelligence, for example if there is a cliff there and Ral tells her not to jump because she is going to kill herself , she thinks "I won't obey you, I have no reason to jump but to hell with it I'll do it"......
And she has that stupid attitude all the time, the problem is not her rebellion but how stupid she is, the things she does always bring horrible consequences like the rape of her sister, but she simply does not learn, she does not understand, it seems as if she were the one with the mental illness, she also does things that crossed the limit for me, like being friendly and nice to Stephen, her husband's enemy and the one who directed the rape of her sister , Caryn knows everything but it's still friendly and thinks that because Stephen took a bath that made him more decent... 🥴LOL Well, the last 5 pages Carys is like "Oh, I think that I like to be obedient, submissive and work at home, so that's what I'll be like" And she completely changes her attitude.
Did his change make sense? Not, it only make her look more strange and stupid...
Well the ending tries to add some drama by making Caryn reveal a secret of Ral's, but I won't be unfair, Caryn the poor thing was drugged, but well the secret is used by the enemies of Ral, many good people die, she feels bad but everything is forgiven and nothing else, she will live happily with Ral forever...... 😑😴😓
The truth is that I don't have anything positive to say, the writing is not the type I like, it's quite messy, maybe a better organization of the chapters would help, and let's not talk about the dialogues, most of the time you don't even know who's saying what thing, nor who answers to whom.
The story is very bad, historically this is a period that I love to read about, but here many times I felt that this story was not set in that time, fantastical and ridiculous things appeared, Caryn is an unpleasant character but also she is not a character of a medieval nature, and look, I understand that you want to make your heroine an independent, different and free woman, but the author failed in her attempt, and when you talk about a time like the medieval one where women were submissive, religious and had zero power, 0 opportunities 0 rights, so you must be careful how independent and rebellious you want to make your heroine because if you exaggerate it will not only be unrealistic, it is absurd, that is what happens here, it seemed as if Caryn had arrived from the future, it was so ridiculous .....😒🫠...well actually the whole plot is ridiculous, a Norman man who is at the highest point of his career, who has just received Saxon lands from King William, like Ral would never have married someone like Caryn , without dowry, without family, without any noble connection, William would never have allowed it, nor would he have congratulated him, furthermore we are talking about a time when the Norman conquest was far from being a fact, many rebellions came for decades, but Ral more than a warrior on guard, looks like a retired soldier who is at home thinking about how to make his wife obey him and asking for advice on how to have a good marriage from an elderly Saxon servant, who talks to him as if he were useless kid Ha ha ha it's like :
Ral: I'm very angry that Caryn told my enemies how to destroy me.
Old Maid: Caryn is a great girl and if she does stupid things it is by pure accident and if you don't value her you will be a big fool
Ral: You're right, I'm going to ask for forgiveness on my knees, although she is the one who made a mistake and ruined the life of the town with her recklessness.
I'm not exaggerating this ridiculously is the situation, now I accept that at least Ral, unlike Caryn, is more of a medieval man than a modern one, he is bossy, brutish, strict or at least that is what he pretends to be, although he is too good with the poor, the needy, the weak, I never saw that fearsome warrior, that the book promised.
Now as for infidelity, I will say that although many readers hate it, it seemed to me to be the only moment in which anguish and drama give some life to the story, in which the reality of the time in which the novel is set is truly reflected, it even seemed that the couple, the story, the characters would finally evolve, it didn't happen to the end and the truth is that I don't feel that Ral paid in the slightest.
The secondary characters are disgusting, really, everyone is boring, they love Caryn and Ral, the good guys are unfunny, they are saints, perfect workers, perfect soldiers..., the subplots are just as bad, the Saxon princess who faked her death and pretended to be a man (what the hell??) So illogical and so absurd that I almost laughed, then she falls in love with an employee and they get married.... which was predictable and unreal... I think the only thing that I found interesting, realistic and even moving is the past of the villain Stephen, although I think that the incestuous relationship with his sister was a bit much, even so it is still a realistic touch.
Now, finally, I will say that I did not expect this novel to be sooooo full of sex, and I am not only referring to the scenes, which are quite a few, but also to the fact that Ral gets excited all the time and thinks about sex, Caryn the same, and it's not that it's bad, but many times that falls into inappropriateness, some examples:
Ral gets excited thinking about his sister-in-law too many times for my liking, ok the first time is understandable, because he just met her, she is very beautiful, he has been away from women, but he does it throughout the entire book and If we take into account that she is mentally retarded, that she was raped and that she is his SISTER-IN-LAW, that really was too much. Then we have him thinking about how he wants to accommodate Caryn during sex, how small she is and how much that turns him on, that in itself isn't bad either, but even when bad or war things are happening like people begging him for his life, or a guy telling him that they are starving, he thinks about that, all the time...........
I'm sorry I can't say nothing good and it's just the type of book that made me decide never read anything by the same author.