Verity Review for GoodReads
So for my fourth venture out into the world of YA bandwagons, here's another one Kindle suggested for me, which is about werewolves. This is quite a short read, and set in the village of Dublin (seriously, the capital city of Ireland felt like random American small town #1827 in this) which is... a setting.
Now, let's get started!
THE COVER: A wolf, a forest, and a girl who's either put her finger to her lips as a shout out to Hush, Hush, or is about to pick her nose.
THE PROLOGUE: There's no pretence to mystery in here, we learn the love interest's a werewolf in the very first sentence, which takes place in Devon for no reason, and then we go to a wood in Poland for a reason that won't make sense until the epilogue, and even then, only barely.
THE MAIN CHARACTER: Perdita's an outsider and a freak—I know this because the best character, Dawn, said so. Sure, it might seem like the book goes more down Perdita's own estimation of herself—that of a non-entity—but she doesn't need a personality, she has a soul mate for that! She does have a really strict and controlling father though, which is essential so there can be an obstacle between the lovers—oh wait, no, that doesn't become an issue at all. I guess it's essential for wangsting purposes though! I will give Perdita this, she did actually do something in the second-to-last chapter, though what it was exactly I'll leave as an exciting mystery!
THE LOVE INTEREST: Nathan... sure is a werewolf! It seems like he might have some mind control powers at one point because everyone in the school immediately likes him for no reason, but it turns out they just like him because of his even more fearsome power of being a Gary-Stu.
THE BEST FRIEND: Ah, Tamera. Like most best friend characters she's used to make the supernatural creature things look good by comparison. It seemed like the author wanted to give her a personality but just couldn't quite decide what it should be, and ended up making her sort of evil? I'm sure that will be resolved in the sequel.
THE ANTAGONISTS: Has Verity ever got a treat for its readers with these antagonists! They're so mysterious we don't even learn their names until the epilogue! Now, some might say they come out of nowhere for seemingly no reason and leave barely any impact throughout the story...
Hmm? Oh no, I was done.
WORLDBUILDING: Well, werewolves exist. And they have soul mates. And there's a convoluted nonsensical gypsy-curse which makes you wonder how any of the other werewolves even exist, but it's not nothing, and with these books that's... something.
PLOT: Now, this isn't a self-contained story—kind of like Game of Thrones; the sequels continue on the same struggle rather than picking up a new chapter in their lives like the Twilight novels, so you'd expect a few plot threads to be unresolved.
However, when the plot only actually has one thread, mostly shoved in quickly at the end, it can create the illusion that nothing actually happened in the book outside of the first half of Twilight with werewolves. In Ireland. Of course, an experienced reader such as myself can see through such illusions to the true story of Verity; the life and times of Dawn Talbot. (yes, Talbot. It's an homage!)
THE REAL HERO: Ah, Dawn Talbot, the stereotypical mean American cheerleader of Ireland who's not a cheerleader, I'm afraid you have replaced Marcie Millar in my heart. Such passion for taunts worthy of one more than half your age! Such a lack of any motivation! Such dedication to making the heroine's life miserable by your very existence for no reason. We salute you, Dawn!
And that's Verity in a nutshell, the story of one girl's slow meandering fall into the passionate romance of the very... uh, hour, and some werewolves or something. A one out of five on GoodReads for lack of plot, lack of originality, and general lack of point, but a seven-point-five on the Karataratakus scale of Things that Entertained me with their Badness for the one thing it did have; Dawn.
Shine on, you crazy not-cheerleader, you!