The book is a mix of East and West, which will not appeal to all audiences, especially when words remain unexplained like "zafu", "kouen", "hashi", etc. The poet is often inspired by zen masters (and other poets, etc.) and includes them in his poems. Hamill is a man with a lot of knowledge tumbling around in his head, but usually doesn't sound pretentious (although at first he did, and then later on when he was, i.e. "On Being Invited").
I thought "The New York Poem" should have kicked the book off, but oh well. I liked "knowing that words can say//only so much, that/behind the words are more words behind those./What the old man understood/is that each word names, and by/naming, it divides" from Chuang Tzu and the First Noble Truth. I liked the lesson in "Weasel, Crow, and Coyote on the Dharma Trail". I thought "The Anger of Su Tung-p'o" was interesting: "Political power," he said, "is, of itself neither good or bad, but rises naturally. Like mushrooms growing in manure."
In "The New York Poem", I also want to kiss the ground when I read Rumi :)
I liked "Sisyphus" a lot and the description of old age.
"By morning, the leaves/have fallen into silence,/the wind has finally parted,/like lovers after a night,/all talked out, now broken-hearted." - on pg 43
"Love's an animal/that had no voice, a quick glance/at the right moment,/or perhaps jut a hint of/a smile - almost unnotice." - pg 50
I enjoyed "Winter Soltice, 1998" and "Praise a Fool and Make Him Useful" made me smile at the end. "Unsolicited" was brief, but brilliant.
"Sonnet on the Thirty-second Anniversary of My Internship as an Editor" blew me away. So funny, but sad, and yet hopeful. I loved it!
(I like his way of celebrating with sake and unagi. I like to celebrate with unagi, too)
"Rising" was fantastic - humor, solitude, silence are all carefully laid out.
"On Being Invited" hit and soon I felt like he was striking a pretentious vein (along with "New Math"). In fact, most of part 4 was dry and uninviting. However, "Great American Nude" pulled me back in, assuring me to stick around and that there's more fantastic things to come, and became easily one of my favorites.
"Road Hog Sutra" was funny and perfect.
I think his Bobbitt poems are interesting, even if I don't agree. "Arachnophobia" tried too hard and fell flat.
"A Woodsplitter's Meditation" was a perfect end.
Bottomline: Had it's ups and downs, but was really enjoyable.