Below Skyscrapers

by aesc

The author has repeatedly written to the site asking for this to be taken down. Please stop adding it back.

Genres: Fan Fiction, Romance

97 pages

First published April 27, 2010

Reviews

[Shelby · Rating 3 out of 5]

I very much enjoyed the story of this book but I felt that it was often just on the surface. The world the author created was interetsing as were the characters, but I never felt like I got deep enough into what was going on. Sometimes things felt like they were being skimmed over or choices were made that were for superficial reason and not fully integrated. I think there is a lot of potential here, but that more development was needed to make this story as good as it could be. The premise again was phenomenal, I just wanted to see the development of the characters feelings more fleshed out. Maybe that's what bothered me, you see each characters decisions but you aren't take along on the journey of how the feel and what takes them to those decisions.

[Sandra · Rating 3 out of 5]

here is a link to story if you want to read it

My thoughts

that was a cute fic, Especially the last three lines. Though for a bit I did get confuse on what was happening. (author should clarify when someone is idk some scenes confused me alright... maybe I need to reread it. maybe it was the format??)

Overall, read if you want to but be prepare to be slightly confuse like me... or maybe you'll get it better than me.

[pan pan · Rating 3 out of 5]

All the hype and I had to fight skimming through. :/

[Maygirl7 · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 stars