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Emariya's life was nearly over before it started. Hidden under the floorboards while her mother died above her, she escaped a brutal death then—only to go racing toward it now, sixteen years later.

After learning her father has been captured, Emariya is desperate to save him, no matter who she has to turn to for help. Oblivious to her potential gifts and the secrets surrounding her dual heritage, Emariya makes a bargain with the prince of a rival land, Torian Ahlen. In exchange for her hand in marriage, he agrees to send his forces to rescue her father. With the arrangements made, Emariya embarks on a tumultuous journey through two kingdoms as different from each other as the families that rule them.

Before long, Emariya comes face to face with her mother's killers, and learns of an ominous prophecy: her and Torian's bloodlines must never be combined. Armed with this frightening new knowledge, Emariya begins to fear the handsome prince may desire more than to steal her heart, and it will take all of her newfound skills to survive.

344 pages, Paperback

First published September 30, 2012

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Kelly Walker

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Kelly Walker is a YA and NA author of several romantic titles, including the Souls of the Stones series. She has an unhealthy appreciation for chocolate, and a soft spot for rescued animals. Her best lessons on writing came from a lifetime of reading. She loves the fantastical, and the magical, and believes a captivating romance can be the most realistic magic of all. Kelly, her husband and her two children share their Virginia home with three dogs who walk her, and two cats who permit her to occasionally share their couch.

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5,002 reviews1,412 followers
June 2, 2013
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16-year-old Emariya has not been thinking about marriage, until her brother Reeve tells her that Prince Torian of the neighbouring land of Thalmas, has asked for her hand in marriage.

At first Emariya refuses, but when she then finds that her father is imprisoned somewhere in the land of Sheas, she travels to Thalmas to meet with Prince Torian, and request that he help her rescue her father in return for her hand in marriage.

There is more at stake that Emariya doesn’t know about though. It seems that the three different lands each had a family who had a special gift – seeing the future, communing with spirits, and being able to harness the earth’s energy. Emariya’s mother had one gift and her father another, making her a second stone, and Price Torian has the third gift. There is a prophecy which says that if all three gifts merge there could be catastophy.
Who is holding Emariya’s father though? Will Torian help her to free him? What of the prophecy surrounding the stones? And can Emariya bring herself to marry someone she doesn’t love for the good of her people?


This was a good YA fantasy novel, and I loved Emariya and her Prince!

Firstly I have to say that I love the name Emariya! So pretty!
Emariya was a sweet girl, and she really felt that she had the power to change things, even if that idea was a little naïve. It was nice how she tried to stand up for what she believed in, and wanted to marry for love. She also wanted to do what was best for the kingdom though, and purposefully tried to find a way to help that didn’t involve her marrying someone she had never even met.

Torian was a great character. Even though Emariya thought that it was his idea to bind the stones, she still found him charming and couldn’t help but like him. I liked him too, and I was really hoping that the two of them would end up together.

My least favourite character was Emariya’s brother Reeve, who seemed quite selfish, and didn’t seem to care who he had to hurt to get what he wanted. He really was a spiteful character, and I really wanted him to get what he deserved.

I liked the storyline in this book, and unlike a lot of fantasy books I didn’t find the plotline difficult to keep up with! I liked the way the three warring areas were described and their reasons for the strife seemed genuine. There wasn’t a lot of romance, but it was obvious the way that Emariya and Torian were drawn to each other.
I liked the ending, although it was left very open for the next book in the series.
Overall; a great first instalment in this YA fantasy series.
7.5 out of 10.
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11 reviews3 followers
July 5, 2013
2.5-3.5 stars

I'm torn about how I feel about this book. It's an easy read and only to me about 7-8 hours to finish it. This book could've easily been a 5 star book for me but somethings i just can't get over about this book:

1)I found this book predictable. As soon as Riya started her journey(almost 30% into the book) I guessed the ending. (Although, it seems many readers did not.)

2) I don't like insta-love (even when there is a valid reason). Also, I don't like characters who unrequited love makes them so single-minded.

3) I found Riya weak and sometimes a bit stupid/foolish. This might because I did figure out the direction of the book early on. I rolled my eyes on a number of decisions she made.

If you take away those three, than the story is actually quite interesting. I found the antagonist quite interesting. Not in a pure evil sort of way, but in a mentally instable kind of way. I'm actually glad I give it a chance and will most likely read the sequels sometime in the future.
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239 reviews26 followers
November 16, 2012
I didn't put too much expectations into this book when I started reading. So I dove in blind expecting a typical paranormal romance with minimum world building. Oh, I was wrong. Way wrong.
Emariya Warren is daughter of the Lord of Warren's Rest. Her father was the head of the council that rules Eltar - one of the three ruling kingdoms - before he went missing. Now, Emariya lives a normal life with her brother, Reed. But suddenly, everything comes crashing down when she is informed that her father is still alive and imprisoned in Sheas - one of the three ruling kingdoms- The only way Emariya can save him is by accepting Prince Torian Ahlen's hand in marriage, and travelling to Thalmas -one of the three ruling kingdoms- to be his wife and the kingdom's princess.
But, as Emariya gets to know; the road to Thalmas is not an easy one. And everywhere she goes, the more about her past, present, and future, she learns. Why has Sheas imprisoned her father? Why has Torian requested her hand when no one even knew that Lord Waren had children? Will Emariya ever reach the Ahlen Castle? And will she ever come to love Prince Torian? Find out much more when you read this action-packed, enchanting tale, Cornerstone...
I LOVED many aspects in the books. The first is the author's writing style. She is very... I can't find the right word ... philosophical, maybe that is it. I loved how she twists and turned the words into meaningful sentences.

“I think you owe it to them to consider the possible, as well as the definite. Should you not prepare for a storm because it is only a possibility? Should you not fear a man wielding a sword, because it is only possible that he will strike true? As leaders, it is our obligation to prepare for possibilities.”

I also loved the way the characters spoke. It was, at times, old-fashioned. But I LOVED it. Just like the quote above. Second, I LOVED the world building. I could vividly imagine every part of the magical world. Emariya experienced the new landscape and we did, too. I could almost feel the breeze and see the mountains with the raging waterfalls. Lovely, indeed.
Third, I LOVED the characters. Emariya is a friendly, but stubborn girl. Even when she is weak, she would never ask anyone for help. Which I loved about her. Although there is a love triangle, it was sweet and believable. Garith and Torian both captured my heart, and I don't think I can choose a side, yet. There was one "little" thing that I didn't like about this book. It was the connection-at-first-sight between Emariya and Torian. Which was a little unbelievable. Loved the development between them, though.
This book is full of unexpected twists and turns, that will leave you breathless. I loved it. A very promising debut. Definitely one of my favorite reads this year. If you want an exhilarating, romantic story then this is the one! I cannot wait for the sequel, Second Stone.

Favorite quotes:

"Here, the flat spacious plain met the rocky, barren mountains in a perpetual battle that the plains were fated to always lose."

“ Blood and Stones as one brings darkest night.” (you wouldn't know the meaning of this if you haven't read the novel)

"Perhaps fear stemmed from the unknown. The agony was in the need to make a choice. Weighing the options, trying to predict the outcome. Once a choice was made, all that was left was to see it through."
403 reviews56 followers
November 25, 2012
Let us start off with yet another freaking-out-OMG GIF:



Since this review might be pretty long, I will provide two versions.

The Short Version: This book was epic. Just full of awesomeness. EPIC. I loved the fantasy, the characters, the plot, the world – everything!

The Long Version:

Let’s start off with the characters. Emariya was pretty darn awesome. She’s not your typical kick-butt ninja-fighting heroine, but it’s clear that she’s a determined character and really cares about her country. The number of sacrifices she makes is extraordinary, and I admired her quick thinking and bravery throughout the novel. And even though she’s expected to be queen, there were still aspects of her character that I related to as a person, and I really connected to her (:

The love interest, Torian, is actually introduced pretty late into the novel, but I actually felt like he and Emariya had good chemistry. There was a bit of fantasy involved, but for the most part, their relationship did seem to have some depth. It also had its ups and downs, and hopefully I will see it develop more in the next book!

As for the side characters, like Jessa, Khane, Reece, and Garith, I felt like each had a pretty important role. They each had unique traits, which were shown throughout the novel. Jessa had a great friendship with Emariya, while Garith genuinely cared and loved Riya. I especially liked that Garith wasn’t too obsessive either, and there wasn’t an annoying love triangle. As for Khane and Reece, they each have pretty interesting and mysterious roles in the novel, and hopefully they will appear more later!

The general structure of the plot is actually pretty simplistic, but in the mix were a lot of magic, action, and mystery! As the first book in the series, there wasn’t as much fantasy as I might have wanted, but there seemed to be a lot more in the end. Still, the different lands enchanted me, with each custom and setting (:

However, there was one huge twist at the end that I didn’t suspect until very late in the book. It definitely shed new light onto a lot of the characters, and right now I’m probably still in shock because of it :o And of course, like most authors that I love, there’s a cliffhanger. It’s not as gaping as some, but it definitely left me hungering for more!

Overall, Cornerstone is absolutely fantastic! Full of magic, action, twists, and excitement, this is a must-read for any fantasy fan (: I will definitely be reading the next book!

*Thank you so so much to Kelly Walker for providing me a review copy of this book! The fact that I received a review copy has not affected my opinion.*
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78 reviews53 followers
March 12, 2013

By Momma on March 11, 2013
Cornerstone
Cornerstone is the epitome of one of the pleasures of having MommaSaysRead.com. When we agree to review a book, I take it very seriously. I want to give every book a chance. There are very few things that will stop me from finishing a book one of which is a poorly proofed or edited book. Cornerstone is extremely well edited and proofed which is why I kept going when the story felt as though it were dragging on–forever. Had I been reading this book purely for pleasure I would not have finished it. And WOW I would have completely missed out on what has fast become one of Momma’s Favorites!

After getting nearly three quarters of the way through the book it hit like a ton of bricks and I could not put it down. Walker really found her voice and her groove. There is a lot of set up when you are delving this deep into a world you are creating. You have to really bring the reader into that world. I wish she had found her groove sooner as I fear there may be some that don’t hang on long enough.

I fell in love with the characters and no matter how hard I tried at the beginning I just couldn’t dislike Prince Torian. I appreciated that Emariaya is a pretty smart girl. Strong, independent and responsible, rarely did I think to myself “Oh don’t do that dummy”. Nor is she is one of those “Can’t live without a man” types either. Her actions were true to her character and it’s clear they weren’t solely placed to move the story, but to tell you who this powerful young woman is.

While Walker employs a genuine fondness between characters, there is no all-to-overdone love triangle. Her characters care for one another and do not cross social lines to get their point across.

Cornerstone also stumped me, I was blown away when key parts of the plot were revealed, I had quite a few “SHUT UP” moments. Well Played!
What does Momma Think?

Because of slow pace I can’t give more than 2 cookies, but because of the redeeming end I give a full glass of milk!
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218 reviews31 followers
October 24, 2012
ORIGINAL REVIEW AT: Little Book Star

This book is full of awesomeness! A must read! Yes, it’s a fantasy with princess, princes, kings, queens and kingdoms, but the ideas within that were very well thought of. I have to admit, the first 60 pages was kind of confusing for me, maybe just because the author was still introducing us to the novel. As the story progresses it was just getting better and better and more exciting! It’s filled with action and it left me predicting. I really like the idea of having 3 kingdoms and there is a different gift for each kingdom, but only if you’re in the line (which were the princess, kings, etc.). Look at that cover, isn’t it gorgeous!? The summary basically says it. I hate it when a book’s summary is nothing like the story, but in Cornerstone, that’s what you’re going to expect. To be more straightforward, Emariya, the princess of Eltar is on a journey to Thalmas (another kingdom) with her escorts where she is to be married to my future husband (IN MY DREAMS) prince Torian. During their journey, a bunch of twisted events happened that left me at the edge of my seat!

Although it’s 3rd person point of view, I could relate to the characters which I think the author did a marvelous job! I rarely, rarely, rarely, have crushes on the hero and Torian Ahlen is definitely one of them :”> Hehee… I wish I was Emariya right now. There is sorta’ a love triangle in the book with of course Emariya (the princess), Torian (my prince!), and Emariya’s super kind and caring best friend Garith. I also love Garith because he is such an understanding and trust worthy guy. The characters are such likable and I feel like I was watching a movie! So the bad guy here is… I’m not telling you, but I’m pretty sure you won’t like him. You would suspect that he’s the bad guy, but you’ll see his worst at the end of the novel. What he did was definitely a shocking revelation!

For the writing style, it was good! It switched from different perspectives, but not most of the time. It usually switched off when the characters were in different places which was just a couple of times. The pacing wasn’t too slow or too fast which I liked. There were several typos though and I encountered some sentences that had a missing word in between words. I mean, there were sentences that if you read them, you feel like there should be a certain word to make the whole sentence much clearer and not choppy. There were also punctuation mistakes, and the commas were overused. For the plot, I would definitely give it a 5/5. If you’re up for adventure, love triangle, and excitement, then go and buy Cornerstone right now! I’m totally gonna look out for the rest of the series. The ending, oh my goodness, was a cliff hanger but that’s okay because that means there’s a whole lot more revelation to come in the next books! Overall I recommend this to each and every human being. (;

“Daughter of stone, child of two. Choose your path and the way will open to you.” – from Cornerstone

Make sure to visit Kelly’s website because she’s having a virtual book tour! The links of the blogs participating is posted on there. There’s also a picture of a map with the 3 kingdoms and it really helped me visualize of what path our protagonists were taking. I hope you guys enjoy reading this book if you are going to because I sure did!
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249 reviews317 followers
June 8, 2013
You know that groan us readers let out when we sense a book is going to conform to the standards and plot typical for YA?

That's what I expected, once I found out that the main character feels love instantly her and the love interest set eyes on each other. You'd think I'd hate this book's guts, right?

Wrong.

The author knows readers hate this, unless you're a 12-year-old. She set in place an interesting explanation for this, an explanation that actually made sense and didn't cause me to pull me hair out in frustration.

The concept of the three Stones is actually quite fascinating. The "three kingdoms on the brink of war" part of the plot is not very unusual for a fantasy, and to be honest, this book isn't very different from other fantasy stories, so I can't really bring myself to say that this book is especially unique.

With much loyalty for her kingdom, Riya, the main character, is easily likable and admirable. Not exactly a badass, but strong in her own way, willing to do whatever she can for her land.

Many may be confused by the sudden plot twist at the end. I appreciated this part. It caught me wholly off guard.

There was fantastic world-building, and coupled with the surprisingly good writing, made a well-written first novel. Admittedly, I caught myself dozing off a few times, whether it be from the lack of action at times or the overly-detailed descriptions.

While this book didn't blow me off my feet, it was still entertaining to read, and can even be considered a very fluffy read for its genre. It sets the base for future novels while leaving questions unanswered to keep our interest. I am thoroughly impressed.
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338 reviews1,283 followers
May 6, 2013
I was immediately taken with this book. The setting is fascinating, and I love the main character Emariya. Riya is strong, compassionate, and kind. I admire that she will do anything for her people. The story was fast paced. This book was fantastic! I love all of the characters. Torian is amazing and I love when he and Riya are together. There was plenty of action. I liked how the book was through Emariya's perspective and you saw her perspective change through the book as she realizes that people aren't as honest and good as she once thought they were. The writing was descriptive and elaborate. The imagery was amazing. I loved this whole fantasy world and was sad to leave it when the book ended.
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339 reviews38 followers
February 22, 2017
Good God, I just wasted a grand total of 417 pages of my life that I will never get back.

This book was SO FREAKING SLOW. If a sloth were a book, it would be this book. To be honest, I skipped over a lot of parts because reading every word was too much work. The story wasn't as engrossing as the blurb made it seem. Moreover, the writing style was quite stale with each paragraph delivered in a large chunk CONSISTENTLY. And as I approached the end of the book, behold the insta-love!

I won't be touching this series in the future, sorrynotsorry.
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Author 2 books60 followers
October 23, 2012
Five stars of epic. I thought this book was amazing. A slow burn that was weeding into my brain but the second half of the book I was addicted. I can't wait to see what happens next. For my full review check out Parajunkee tomorrow.
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334 reviews168 followers
February 11, 2015
Ho preso questo libro per due motivi: il primo è che in copertina c'è Daenerys Targaryen, e la cosa mi ha fatto lollare moltissimo. Il secondo, e fondamentale, è che era disponibile gratuitamente sul Kindle Store.
C'era un motivo se era gratuito.

Su questo libro non ho niente di positivo da dire: è stata la prima volta che mi sono trovata a pensare che non c'era neanche una frase che stessi trovando bella, da quanto è scritto male. Ogni tanto ci sono scorrettezze grammaticali di cui mi sono resa conto anche io, e a volte i personaggi parlano in dialetto.
Ora, un conto è se si tratta di una scelta per far capire provenienza ed istruzione di chi parla, ma una frase ogni tanto pronunciata da chiunque... non è una scelta, è incosistenza.
Non sono pervenute le descrizioni: dei personaggi gli unici ad avere i connotati sono Lui e Lei, mentre i luoghi hanno generici alberi, boschi, paesaggi.
A volte i burroni si manifestano dal nulla, anche se all'inizio non c'erano.
Cornerstone riesce ad essere confuso senza far succedere niente: il libro non sarà così brutto da fare il giro, ma di certo lo stile è così sbagliato da sembrare voluto.

Dove si svolge la storia? Bella domanda: in mancanza di descrizioni e difficile assegnare caratteristiche alle tre nazioni che costituiscono l'ambientazione e mancando una mappa è impossibile capire chi è dove rispetto a cosa.
Per la cronaca: ho scordato i nomi quindi li inventerò. Per prima abbiamo Perfettolandia, madre patria della protagonista. È un luogo idilliaco di stampo rurale dove tutti si vogliono bene. Il governo è responsabilità di un concilio i cui membri sono uguali, ma la famiglia Warren è più uguale degli altri. Nei momenti difficili tutti sono felici di condividere tutto e riescono a gestire guerra, raccolti e pascoli senza colpo ferire. Suppongo coltivino marijuana.
Poi abbiamo Misterolandia: di loro non si sa nulla tranne che sono coinvolti in una guerra eterna o quasi con Perfettolandia. Ad un certo punto si parla di navi, quindi potrebbe essere un paese marittimo. La madre della protagonista veniva da lì: il tentativo di un'alleanza matrimoniale è finito con la sua uccisione. Perfettolandia e Misterolandia si accusano a vicenda dell'omicidio da sedici anni, che possa essere coinvolta una terza fazione non è mai venuto in mente a nessuno.
Infine c'è Desolandia. Loro sono la Svizzera: mentre questi due si scannavano si sono fatti altamente gli affari loro. Sono un paese dall'economia strana, nel senso che hanno l'esercito ma non hanno il cibo. Come siano campati fino a quel momento è un mistero, ma nonostante tutto hanno castelli e una corte.
Che Perfettolandia e Desolandia siano confinanti è l'unico elemento geografico a disposizione del lettore.
L'elemento magico viene dai Doni: in ognuna delle famiglie portanti può manifestarsi una capacità sovrannaturale. A Misteriolandia parlare coi morti; a Desolandia visioni del futuro; a Perfettolandia ampliare il potere delle piante, ma quelli davvero abili possono controllare i quattro elementi. Che è un come dire "Sono portato per le traduzioni di latino, e se mi impegno proprio al massimo posso vincere una partita di basket": non è che ci sia un nesso logico tra le due cose.
Also, uno di questi poteri non è come gli altri.

La storia è lunga in modo inutile: Emariya parte al 30% del libro, arriva a destinazione una volta sorpassato il 70% e nel mezzo non succede nulla non riassumibile in dieci righe. Non aiuta che buona parte di quello che succede non abbia il minimo senso.
Tanto per cominciare siamo nella classica società pseudo-medioevale da YA, ossia con nazioni specializzate in un'unica cosa e manchevoli in tutto in resto che perfino io mi rendo conto che non può funzionare.
Poi c'è il punto focale della trama: il principe di Desolandia chiede la mano di Emariya perchè Desolansia può fornire aiuto al fronte, mentre Perfettolandia può aiutarli col cibo. La cosa avrebbe un suo basilare senso, non fosse che il voto finale è quello di Emariya: il matrimonio porterebbe ad una svolta significativa nel conflitto. Meno uomini della sua gente morirebbero. Potrebbe risolvere le scorribande al confine, donando un nuovo senso di sicurezza alla parte di popolo lontana dai suoi governanti.
Ma lei rifiuta perchè non lo ama: per quanto vantaggioso sia l'accordo, non vale un tale sacrificio.
Non solo la cosa non è credibile (mondo medioevale, anyone?) ma invece di far sembrare Emariya una ragazza dall'animo candido e puro la fa sembrare una bambina egoista e viziata una cretina.

Autori: un personaggio altruista non è un personaggio che pensa al sacrificio e poi se ne sbatte, ma un personaggio che sceglie il sacrificio.

Poi, dopo che viene mandata la risposta ufficiale, lei ne manda una privata per rassicurare il Torian che non c'è nulla di personale: non solo è una gaffe diplomatica assurda, ma mi ha fatto pensare che Emariya volesse semplicemente dimostrarsi la brava ragazza tutti i costi.
Però dalla quarta di copertina noi sappiamo che partirà: cosa le farà cambiare idea? Che suo padre, Oren, ha preso lezioni di politica da Eddard Stark, ovviamente! In una nazione dove governa un concilio questo genio ha deciso di andare da solo e senza avvisare nessuno a Misterolandia per intavolare trattative di pace.
Ovviamente non è mai tornato: sono anni che Reeve (fratello maggiore di Emariya) ha preso il suo posto. Le prime news su Oren arrivano circa dieci minuti dopo il rifiuto al matrimonio: Un Tizio si presenta, ferito e moribondo, per dire che è stato prigioniero a Misterolandia assieme a lui. Una volta fuggito invece di tornare a casa sua per - non so - salutare i suoi cari prima di morire, è andato a riferire il tutto.
Qui il livello intellettivo si abbassa fino quasi a sparire: nessuno si chiede se sia vero, se è credibile, si pone domande sul tempismo... tutti sono concordi che serve un'azione militare per liberarlo ed Emariya si sacrifica accettando il matrimonio.
Mi immagino l'altra corte: "No, ci dispiace, lei non vuole." "No, scusate, ha cambiato idea, ve la spediamo subito".
Emariya deve partire con tutto il guardaroba, tutti i gioielli, le erbe medicinali (è una guaritrice) ma siccome devono passare inosservati vanno lei, la sua dama di compagnia e la guida. Con tre cavalli le cui sacche, secondo l'autrice, bastano a contenere l'intero bagaglio incluso il necessario per il viaggio. In realtà sarebbero potuti partire in mille perchè Emariya dice sempre il nome vero e cosa sta andando a fare.
Usare la linea che separa l'onestà dall'idiozia come una corda per saltare è una caratteristica che condivide col suo migliore amico, Garith il Friendzonato, che insegue il gruppo per proteggerla ma si imbatte negli Uomini Sospetti a cui spiattella tutta la verità e nient'altro che la verità, più qualche informazione gratis. Nello specifico che Emariya ha un fratello.
A questo punto veniamo informati che l'esistenza di Reeve ed Emariya è stata tenuta segreta anche se tutti li conoscono, girano liberamente, lui sta sostituendo il padre e lei sta andando in sposa ad un principe che l'ha chiesta in moglie, invece di chiedersi se era la pescivendola tirata a lucido.
Gli Uomini Sospetti sono i portatori di trama e di spiegazioni: il matrimonio non s'ha da fare per via dei super poteri. Già Emariya e Reeve uniscono due poteri, se lei dovesse avere un figlio da Torian questi avrebbe tutti e tre i Doni. Troppo, e il mondo esplode.
Qui Garith perde completamente il cervello: si convince che Emariya ha sempre saputo di avere questi poteri e di averlo preso in giro per anni (?) e si unisce alla crociata anti-matrimonio. Il colpo di scena più annunciato del mondo è che questi pazzi hanno ammazzato la madre della protagonista e il loro modo per bloccare le nozze è ammazzare la protagonista. Io tifavo per loro.

Adesso mi fermo perchè mi rendo conto che Cornerstone è così idiota che basta raccontare la trama per dirlo, ma appiate che il nonesense procede spedito per tutto il resto della storia (e ce n'è ancora, o se ce n'è ancora). Vi svelerò invece qualche cosa sui personaggi: fanno schifo.
Partiamo dal presupposto che la maggior parte si limita ad essere un archetipo con la parrucca quindi è difficile dire qualcosa, ma Emariya è un'altro paio di maniche.
Emariya è la definizione di generico: è bella, è buona, è dolce, è speciale e - in sostanza - diversa dalle altre. In altre parole è la protagonista di ogni singolo YA uscito negli ultimi anni.
La Walker scrive con la convinzione che per caratterizzarla basti attribuirle caratteristiche senza farla agire di conseguenza: Emariya commenta come non le piaccia l'etichetta e come pare proprio che non riuscirà a diventare una dolce Lady... peccato che lei sia esattamente una dolce Lady.
Dice che è un maschiaccio, e una ragazza attiva, ma alla fine dei conti non fa altro che piangere, svenire ed essere salvata. La sua reazione ad ogni momento di crisi è essere inghiottita dall'oscurità.
Ci dicono che è una ribelle, ma è anche descritta la figlia modello. Due cose che non possono esistere contemporaneamente in un'ambientazione pseudo-medioevale: prendiamo Brave. A me non è piaciuto molto, ma almeno è stato onesto: Merida è una ragazzina ribelle. Merida infrange tutte le regole, e per quanto sia una figlia chiaramente amata non è una brava figlia. Disubbidisce, sfida i genitori, trasforma sua madre in un orso per sbaglio... e non vuole sposarsi perchè non vuole sposarsi, non perchè non ama lo sposo.
Merida è un personaggio con dei difetti, e per questo più credibile ed accessibile.
Emariya è una sagoma con attaccati dei post-it su cui sono scritte le sue caratteristiche.

In definitiva un pessimo libro, così noioso che tra una lettura e l'altra mi scordavo cos'era successo.
Evitatelo, c'è molto di meglio anche in ambito schifo.

Oh, ad un certo punto sparano con un fucile. La cosa non viene spiegata in nessun modo, non si ripete mai più e in nessun altro momento viene accennata l'esistenza della polvere da sparo.
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1,944 reviews56 followers
May 24, 2016
More reviews available at my blog, Beauty and the Bookworm.

Cornerstone by Kelly Walker is a young-adult fantasy novel, and it's absolutely nothing to write home about. While there's a bit of intrigue involved, it doesn't actually unravel until the very end, and the plot barely had enough to keep me going to get to that point. The writing style also isn't all that great. Walker absolutely does not have a clear grasp of how grammar works with dialogue. In her non-dialogue sentences, it's fine, but when it comes to dialogue she seems to have no idea where periods, commas, and quotation marks go in relation to each other and to line breaks. Some of this might be typos, and that's excusable to a point; even the most professionally-published books usually have a typo or two. But these grammatical slip-ups were absolutely rampant in Cornerstone. Also, within the first couple of chapters, Walker feels the need to dump absolutely everything you need to know about the Three Corners (the trio of realms in the book) right into your lap through boring political dialogue. Yawn.

In addition to the info dumping, there was a ton of completely unnecessary description and prose in this book. Honestly, I don't care if Emariya (the heroine; we'll get to her in a second) likes the feel of fur against her cheek if it doesn't have anything to do with her development as a character or the plot as a whole. I don't care what color dress she was wearing while out traipsing around the countryside; in fact, being told that she was wearing a white dress after days on the road without a bath or any hope of one just made me wonder if she was completely moronic. Like, I know it's a medieval fantasy-based world, but there were only two people around. I'm pretty sure the girl could have worn pants, or at least a simpler dress.

Okay, let's get to the plot. So, the story revolves around Emariya, who's the daughter of an important lord in the realm of Eltar. Eltar is under attack by Sheas, another realm, and doesn't really have the weapons or manpower necessary to fight off the attackers. In order to get weapons and supporting troops, she agrees to marry the prince of the third realm, the name of which I don't remember. Anyway, the prince's name is Torian, and that's the important part. Emariya doesn't actually set out to marry Torian until a good chunk into the book, and even then, not a hell of a lot happens. There's a lot of walking, and riding, and talking, and it's very Lord Of The Rings-esque in that there are tons of descriptions of scenery but not much actually going on. So, the Lord-Of-The-Rings thing isn't actually a compliment. I hated Lord of the Rings. Emariya is a completely boring heroine. Totally insipid. Absolutely no flavor to her at all. She's generic in every way, shape, and form. She's beautiful, everyone's in love with her, she has a hidden power and dead parents, she's being forced into an arranged marriage, blah blah blah. Nothing original here, folks. Also, absolutely everybody except her seems to know she's got hidden powers, but somehow she never got clued in. What? I mean, the maids who work in the kitchen and the peasants living in the countryside know she has magical abilities, but her? Noooooo. Of course not.

Torian was boring, as well. He falls in love with Emariya the moment she sees him, and the feeling's mutual. She struggles against it a bit, because she doesn't think it's real or whatever, but Walker never actually gives us a reason to doubt the sincerity of either of their feelings. There's not real struggle, no heart-rending moment when you think things might not work out. Instead, the two of them just go sailing off in their blissful little romance. It wasn't badly-written, necessarily... In fact, there were a few very good kissing scenes. But as a whole, their romance just doesn't do anything except have gushy lines like, "But no one loves the moon." "I do." So, yeah. The romance was just meh. Torian doesn't really have that much depth to him, either. He's got some cool family issues that I think had a lot of potential to make him a much more complex character, but Walker never elaborated on them. I honestly liked him better when I thought he was a complete bastard, because it would have given him a dimension other than the standard cookie-cutter hero.

And then there's Garith. Oh, Garith. Who has been friendzoned so hard and knows it but is still in love with Emariya, and actually loves her all the more for it, because "his love is all he can give her." Gag me with a spoon. I'm not a huge fan of love triangles, but at least if Garith had posed some competition to Torian, the whole Torian/Emariya thing might have been a bit more interesting.

Also, why the hell did Walker pick a name like Russell for one of the characters? The rest of the world is filled with Jessas, Emariyas, Torians, Rinks, and Gariths, and yet Russell is the name of a villain? I think not. THIS is Russell:



Anyway, at the end of the book I felt like I was where I should have been 1/3 or 1/2 of the way through. The characters are just on the verge of setting out to encounter conflict; no real conflict has actually occurred yet. The whole book is just set-up for the next one, and it shouldn't be. Books in a trilogy should all strengthen each other, and yet should be able to stand alone. This doesn't.

2 stars out of 5.
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119 reviews
January 29, 2014
2.5 stars. This book had a lot of promise but it just seemed to lack something. Personally, I think if the author had spent more time on it and maybe re-read it a few times it would have been better. To me it just seemed very rushed and not very well thought out.

The storyline - I absolutely loved the idea the author came up with. A land split into three parts on the edge of war with each other, yes it's very typical of a fantasy but that's what made it work. It drew me in, and I think that was what kept me reading.

The characters - And this is where I get very negative. The characters were just so... BLAH! They seemed to lack any sort of personality and I can say in all honesty there is not one character I liked. Our leading lady Emiriya is anything but a strong character. She rely's very heavily on everyone else around her. It seems that she can't think for herself and has no backbone, and so of course, she gets betrayed and captured all the time. Plus, she cries a lot. I hate that. I've always been one that when I'm reading a book I put myself in the characters position and think, would I cry? And the answer throughout this whole book was NO! She bawled her eyes out when a man she didn't even know died. Why?
The rest of the characters were your typical helpless best friend who wants to do nothing but talk dresses and boys, close male friend who is of course in love with Emiriya, handsome Prince who rides in to save the day and they immediately fall in love, cute young sidekick who I still don't understand his purpose in this story, and a dark mysterious stranger who betrays them. Her brother was the only interesting character in this book and even then he was very vague and it's hard to get attached to character you know nothing about.

The romance - Awkward, so very awkward. They fall in love almost immediately, and yes I do understand it's because of the stones that intensifies their feelings for one another but surely they could of tried to fight it a little. It just seemed so childish and weird.

The writing - A lot of grammar mistakes, which I have become used to with free books, but it's still annoying. I always wonder if the authors re-read it before publishing. But the thing that bugged me the most was that many characters had strong accents which is fine, but I think the author should have just explained it rather than trying to write it as dialogue. There is nothing more annoying than seeing the word "ya" written in a book.

Overall, it was a good attempt by the author. I think with professional editing and more time spent on the writing it could have been really great. But I don't think I will be buying the next book :(
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Author 34 books4,622 followers
January 19, 2014
I’m fairly certain this book was on my currently reading shelf for months. The fact is that I found it a tad slow and felt that the whole journey and traveling sequences took far too long and I was waiting for something to happen. Then I finally decided it was time to bite the bullet and just finish it already and I actually enjoyed it toward the end, so much so that I went and bought the rest of the trilogy (which I do not do lightly).

The plot:

There was actually a lot that went on through this book, I was just waiting, waiting, and waiting some more for Riya to actually meet this reportedly über-nasty prince. There were kidnappings, attacks, fights, rescues, and chases—meanwhile I was tapping my fingers, wanting to meet Prince Ahlen and see if he really was as bad as we were being led to believe. I probably should have put aside my impatience and forgotten about His Highness, but me and my idea of how the story should go got in the way.

The characters:

Riya means well, I’ll give her that. She’s willing to do whatever needs to be done for the sake of her people and was exceptionally courageous. She was a little sheltered and didn’t realize when she was being used, but became a tad wiser by the end and certainly grew over the course of the book.

Garith is the blacksmith’s son who has been in love with Riya since childhood, but has been tragically friend-zoned. He still faithfully protects her with his life and his loyalty was admirable, even if he could be misguided at times.

Jessa is Riya’s handmaiden and best friend. While a minor supporting character, she had a key part to play. I mostly thought of her as breathing baggage, but have to admit she showed pluck when it was needed.

Here is where I usually talk about the villain. But I can’t because, well, that would be breaking the book review blogger’s code of no spoilers, so I’ll just say if I hadn’t cheated and read the blurbs of the later books, I never would have seen it coming.

I really didn’t like the middle of this book, I’ll admit. But I adored the beginning and I adored the end and I dove into the sequels with a gusto and was not disappointed at all. I do recommend this series, but don’t wait for Prince Ahlen, because he doesn’t show his face until we get to the end.
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955 reviews33 followers
January 27, 2014
I got this book from the author, free of cost, in exchange of an honest review from my side.

Firstly I would like to thank the author for giving me this opportunity of reading and reviewing this book.

I loved this story!!!!

It's really great seriously. At first I was a bit worried about the content because this story has a background of magical kingdoms with Kings and Queens and normally I don't read such books but the cover and the blurb really impressed me so I picked it up and I'm so happy to say that I didn't get disappointed.

The characters are well developed and they all had their fair share of importance and role to play in this story and I really adored Emariya [Strange but Unique name!!!]. She is so tough and strong and knows how to handle your situation well and guard yourself from the worst unlike the cliche heroines who tend to bawl over everything and seek attention from boys.

She had a very tough decision to make and I was really sucked into that situation and just chomped on my nails fearing what she'll choose. The emotions were portrayed beautifully and it really touched my heart.

Torian was great and I really wanted him for myself but couldn't snatch him from Emariya, after all they are made for each other. Nice pacing though the beginning was a bit slow and over descriptive. The background info was good but a little less stress over than would have lightened the read a lot.

I would definitely recommend it to all and hope that you guys will love it. Enjoy!!!
2 reviews
May 7, 2014
In Cornerstone, the plot revolves around Lady Emariya who is forced to marry and journey to Prince Ahlen’s castle because of her brother Reeve. As she journeys to the castle she meets the separatists and their leader Russell. She then learns about the cornerstone powers and her families’ powers. Emariya then learns that her brother is using her and Ahlen to rule the three lands and bind the stones, something their father would never been able to do. Reeve is also the main antagonist in this first book of the souls of the stones series.
Emariya first starts out as being wary of this marriage proposal, she then starts to fall in love with Prince Ahlen. Emariya changes her personality around Ahlen further into the book as their love grows. Ahlen falls deeply in love with Emariya as they feel the connection of the stones strengthening their love for each other. Reeve’s personality changes from a nice and sweet caring brother to a vicious and greedy power hungry lord who will stop at nothing to get what he wants.
I really like this book and enjoy it a lot. I think that this book is for young adults and fans of supernatural books. I really hope that this book becomes a well known book because of its plot and its characters and Emariya’s and Ahlen’s love.
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627 reviews84 followers
March 7, 2014
This and my other reviews can be found at http://amethystbookwyrm.blogspot.co.uk/

When Emariya learns that an enemy country has been holding her father captive for years, she will do anything to rescue him. She travels to Thalmas to marry Prince Torian, someone she has never meet before. However, on Emariya’s journey she is confronted by her mother’s killers and discovers that if she marries the Prince she will fulfil a prophecy which could curse everyone she cares about.

Cornerstone is a likable book which is fairly quick and enjoyable YA fantasy novel. However, I felt the prequel story, Jaded Stone, was more enjoyable as I felt there was more of a plot and intrigue.

Emariya is a nice yet naïve girl, but I liked her as she wants what is best for her kingdom and those she loves. We don’t get to see much of Torian in this book but he was a good hero as he was very charming.

I would recommend Cornerstone to fans of YA fantasy books such as Fire and Thorns by Rae Carson.
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9 reviews1 follower
December 21, 2012
Normally very fond of YA lit with strong female leads, so I was anxious to read this book. I really, really enjoyed this story. Ms. Walker used enough tried-and-true devices and plotlines to keep you comfortable, but also guessing and wanting to read more. I only skimmed a few pages (unusual for me!) and will definitely be looking for the rest of the set someday. The first chapter and several short passages later on were a bit confusing. I wasn't always sure who was speaking (the author's intent mostly) but it made it difficult to create continuity and stick with the story. I was able to bookmark them on my nook, however, and return later to decipher their meaning. Only a few typos and poor grammatical choices, amazing for an ebook. I heartily recommend this book for older preteens and teens. Ms. Walker has made a good career choice.
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Author 9 books254 followers
January 5, 2014
I'm typically not a high fantasy type, but this book ended up on my Kindle somehow (I don't remember getting it, actually), so I have it a try. I really liked Riya as a main character and her supporting characters (though there were many to keep straight), we all believable.
At one point I thought about putting the book down because I was tried of reading about people wandering through the wintery wilderness, but I'm glad I struck with it because the surprise twist at the end really got me. The author did a good job of misleading the readers about who the real bad guy was so I was pleasantly surprised.
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Author 14 books312 followers
October 7, 2013
Honestly, it took nearly 70% of the book to really become interesting. But when it did, it became a mystery I can't help but want to solve. Focusing on loyalty and true friendship (that recognizes no class boundaries), one truly feels the betrayals that Emariya faces. However, either due to innocence, or sheer stupidity, a few of our leading characters have loose tongues, and it makes you want to face palm yourself. You end up mentally shouting at these people to JUST SHUT UP. Hopefully, with the next book, these ignoramuses will learn this valuable lesson.
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1,709 reviews51 followers
August 30, 2013
This one pretty good. And free! lol

From the synopsis, I assumed that there'd be more romance between Emariya and Torian. What actually happened was her traveling from Warren's Rest (her home) to Torian's castle, and finding out who the guy is that's trying to put them together, who really killed their mother, etc.

Had there been more romance than adventure, it would have been five stars for me.

13 reviews13 followers
March 19, 2015
I downloaded this on a whim because it was free. I AM SO GLAD THAT I DID. Cornerstone and the rest of the books that follow it easily go on my favorite YA fantasy books list. I loved Emariya and Torian. The relationship that developed between them felt authentic and real. It was sweet and romantic. I also liked the mythology that was aided to drive the plot and the "twist" at the end. The antagonist in the book was interesting too, especially when we find out the motivations behind his actions.
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1,314 reviews3,111 followers
May 11, 2017
To tell you the truth, the book has potential, but it was just dragged out to long.. I was taken by surprise and all, but wow, how dumb is it possible to be? Cornerstone just wasn't for me, and i'm still not sure if i'll continue with this series..

Rate: 2/3 stars.
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1,823 reviews552 followers
August 9, 2018
"He was the friend every girl needs, the one who made her feel special, and pretty. The one who made her feel safe."

Jesus Christ.

Can see where this is going a mile off. These books are everything that's wrong with this world.
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689 reviews
December 2, 2012
I enjoyed the world the author created and many parts of the story but I found myself bored a lot.
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32 reviews4 followers
May 24, 2013
This book can be a bit wordy. But otherwise it was an interesting read.
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34 reviews4 followers
July 8, 2013
Wow...the villan sooo wasn't who I thought it was!! What a good twist! Totally loved this book and highly recommend.
9 reviews1 follower
January 25, 2018
Overall good plot

This book starts out very confusing. The reader is not quite sure what is going on. If you stick with it you begin to see the plot lines and characters develop.
Every time a trouble gets figured out, another one gets solved. There is such a calamity of mix ups and mishaps that the book just grows on you. There is a VERY BIG plot twist near the end. Of course like most series’ it leaves you hanging at the end.
Looking forward to the other books in the series!
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Author 2 books11 followers
June 11, 2018
Wonderful start to a series

I wasn’t sure what I was picking up when I started Cornerstone, but I’m sure glad I did. This awesome story was backed by a cast of multi-dimensional characters and glued together by lovely bits of magic. I’ll be picking up the rest of the series. AND this is one book I’m happy to send on to my 14 year old daughter. There was nothing overtly sexual or overly violent. Highly recommend.
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