I think I should start off by stating that I'm not a huge fan of short stories. I thought it was a novella, since reviews were stating such. Novella's are at least 100 pages, 67 pages does not equal a novella. End of rant. Anyways, I find short stories too short (go figure). I like plots, scenes and characters to be completely fleshed out and developed, and rarely (not saying never) but rarely do I feel that it happens in short stories.
Bailey was pretty well developed, character-wise. She's in grad school to get a nursing certificate (?) to become a midwife and is failing chemistry. Kinda odd that chemistry would be something she would take in graduate school, I feel like you'd try to kick that out of the way in undergrad...but then again, I'm not a nurse. And when I say failing, I mean she's getting a 7 percent on a major test despite tutoring, getting help from the professor and studying for hours. I have failed tests after studying, I'm an AWFUL test taker. I can't quite emphasize how awful of a test taker I am. But 7 percent? Considering there are only 2 tests through out the semester and that's their main grade, I'm assuming that is one long-ass-test. So she got maybe half a question correct? After all the help she got? I find that incredibly far-fetched. Yes, I totally know and experienced failing tests after hard work (especially in Chemistry, that subject and I did NOT get along). But 7 percent?
After Bailey finds out she failed her test and the reader is given a few details about how hot her professor is and how all the girls (Bailey included) wears short skirts and tight sweaters to class to maybe get his attention,
The story suddenly ends. Very abrupt, it felt like it should have been a novella (a real one, folks), maybe a novel, but the author was like, "Eh...nah, sick of this story. Done."
The sex scene, the one sex scene (I was expecting more), is lackluster and a bit boring. Nothing special. I don't remember it much (it's the morning after I read it). I remember wondering if the hotter sex scenes were coming in later...but nope.
So, long review short, pretty good writing (better than I expected), shorter than I expected, abrupt ending and average-run-of-the-mill sex scene. Pass.