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Surrender Your Booty
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- GenresRomanceM M Romance
10 pages, ebook
First published January 1, 2012
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October 14, 2012
Very cute short with lovable characters. I did question, who is Jared? Typo twice? Quinn and Danny, they would make a good longer story...
October 15, 2012
Wow, another author attempting to pimp their own work on Goodreads. Quite pathetic to have to resort to self-rating. And whatever happened to authors being their own worst critic - Rae, you think this work is a FIVE STAR work? Seriously?
What the hell does re-re-edited mean. You mean this was edited TWICE and still has all these mistakes? And Jared? That took me by surprise, and given how I am these days about J2 fanfic being re-branded as original...
Note to author: You better go re-re-re-edit it again before you churn this crap out.
What the hell does re-re-edited mean. You mean this was edited TWICE and still has all these mistakes? And Jared? That took me by surprise, and given how I am these days about J2 fanfic being re-branded as original...
Note to author: You better go re-re-re-edit it again before you churn this crap out.
October 16, 2012
This Halloween short was so sickly sweet that my teeth hurt just reading it. Comparing a dick to a pixie-stick? Please. Just pass this one by.
October 14, 2012
The pov is confusing me. It switches too much and isn't very clear. Danny and Quinn are too similar to be able to tell apart the way it's written.
Also a few typos like "going" when it means "gone" and Danny sometimes thinks if himself as Jarod which seems like a typo unless his name his Danny Jared?
Both of those are on the first page. I only pointed it out because they stood out to me. The story is free though so I won't hold it against it. And now I'm 69% and haven't noticed any other errors like that.
some of the phrasing is weird for me. Not sure if its foreign or just a different dialect but I keep thinking they talk/think with a weird vocabulary
This is part of a series involving this couple. I didn't know that until I'm like 70% and it just seemed like i was missing something. anyway looks like Dress Me Up In Your Fantasy is where to start so I'd recommend starting there even though I didn't read that one, yet.
i stopped and read the first one in the series but you still don't know anything about these characters really. they are sappy and use annoying pet names frequently and i was too confused about who they were to enjoy the story. a story this length should be finish-able in one sitting but i kept putting it down and it took me a day to finish. i would have just DNF but it was too short to do that
Also a few typos like "going" when it means "gone" and Danny sometimes thinks if himself as Jarod which seems like a typo unless his name his Danny Jared?
Both of those are on the first page. I only pointed it out because they stood out to me. The story is free though so I won't hold it against it. And now I'm 69% and haven't noticed any other errors like that.
some of the phrasing is weird for me. Not sure if its foreign or just a different dialect but I keep thinking they talk/think with a weird vocabulary
This is part of a series involving this couple. I didn't know that until I'm like 70% and it just seemed like i was missing something. anyway looks like Dress Me Up In Your Fantasy is where to start so I'd recommend starting there even though I didn't read that one, yet.
i stopped and read the first one in the series but you still don't know anything about these characters really. they are sappy and use annoying pet names frequently and i was too confused about who they were to enjoy the story. a story this length should be finish-able in one sitting but i kept putting it down and it took me a day to finish. i would have just DNF but it was too short to do that
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